Adultery KALYUG ( Antt Hi Aarambh Hai ) { Incest , Fantasy , Romance , Thriller }

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Update ... Wednesday night / Sunday morning or night...

 

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Shandar update

Thanks Bhai

 

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Awesome update bhai

Thanks Bhai

 

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timely update na ane ki wajah se logo ka bhi man nahi karta us kahani ki taraf jane ka
aur jaha tak apki kahani ka sawal hai jo theme hai aur jaise chal rahi hai kahani ko samajhne wale log hi attract honge jo kahani padhte waqt use bahut imagine karte hai
jaise is kahani ko hindi forum ke page 1 par pin bhi kiya gaya tha jaha tak mujhe yad hai aur reach bhi badhi hogi par story base line aur late updates karan ban rahe hai
sunday ka update tuesday ko mil raha hai to wednesday ka update kab milega
mante hai apki bhi life hai to kuch samay ke liye weekly update de diya karo par is decision se aur approch ghategi

Samjh Sakta Hun bhai aapki baat se sahmat hun... Yeh Do week kaafi tough rahe mere... Pehle Election fir Ghar mai ganpati time nahi mill paya uske liye maafi chahunga...

Thoda bhut aage peeche ho jata hai update mai kosish karta hun Roz thoda thoda update dene ki jisse baad mai jayada load na pade ek din mai likhne ke liye... Magar jab bhi likhne baitho koi na koi kaam aa jata hai...

Story Pin nahi hui but idea aacha hai pin krwa deta hun...

is reveiw ko ap positive view mai bhi le sakte hai aur negative bhi wo apke upar hai
agar dil se likh rahe ho to ap likhte rahoge ya bas reveiw aur like ke liye likh rahe ho to sorry kahi kisi mod par jake apko kuch aur sochna padega ya likhna chod doge 10 sal ka experience hai mera aur najane kitni haseen kahaniya lekhak ne khud adhuri chodi hai aur chand hi hoti hai jo majburiyo ki wajh se adhuri chute
baki raha samay ka sawal to har kisi ke pas plenty of time hota hai jo wo akele spend karta hai

Negetive kyun Bhai... Aapne jo kha sach hai as reader mai iss cheez se agree karta hun... And as writer koshish humesha rehti hai reader's ko khush rakhne ki but kabhi kabhi nahi ho pata yeh aap samjh hi sakte hai... Bas wohi phase abhi mere saath hua...


Mai review aur likes ke liye isliye kehta hoon aur yeh baat mai pehle bhi keh chuka hun.. isse engagement pta chalti hai story kitne log padh rahe hai... Bhale hi nice update likho but mujhe pata hai yeh reader tak meri story phunch rahi hai... Aur pasand aa rahi hai...

Agreed har kisi ke paas time hota hai spend karne ke liye but uss time chill karne ki wajah aap istori par focus karoge toh stress badhega...

Har cheez ka time hota hai writing ke time writing karni chahiye aur chill karne time fun karna chahiye... Mix ho gya toh update ki quality bhi effect hoti hai... Aagar writer aache mood mai na likhe toh iss baar se aap agree honge...

Thanks Bhai ...
Aap khaamiyan nahi btaoge toh mujhe pta kaise chalega meri story kaise chal rahi... Ab jab mujhe pta chal chuka hai surely isper kaam karunga... Thanks once again...

 

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Yashoda mar gayi to Tony nazim ko chhodega nahi. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

Thanks Bhai

 

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Tow Yashoda ka chapter yahi se khatam hota h bechari Yashoda ko kabhi sukh nahi Mila nandu Jawan ho raha tha tow shayad ab sukh bhare din aate ya fir tony Shaadi ker leta tow lekin woh bhi kuch nahi huwa
Woh aadmi aisa kyon keh raha tha ki (kia hamne sahi kia) tow in Longo ki wajah se Yashoda Mari
Baherhal sweety ki wajah se nandu k honto per thodi muskan tow aayi
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Behtareen shaandar update bhai

Thanks so much Naik bhai...

Bane rahe istori ke saath kaafi rona dhona ho chuka ab fun ke saath Romance action chaalu hoga... Hope aapko pasand aaye...

 

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Waiting for next update

Surely bruhhh... In few minutes...

 

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Nice update

Kuch time se kisi bhi story par koi review nahi diya maine, busy tha.

Nazim apne plan main kamyab to nahi ho paya, lekin sab kuch barbad kar gya.

Jo nahi chahta tha vahi hua, yashoda ki death. Dekhte hai ye incident kahani me konse mod le kar aati hai.

Kahani ke background me bahut kuch chal rha hai. Nazim ko marne vala vo ladka yaa phir yashoda ki maut ki vajah.

Pichle update me iss aadmi ki beti ki jaan khatre me thi. Aur ab yahan yashoda ki death hona. Aur uss aadmi aur aurat ki baat se lag rha hai ki shayad apni beti ko bachane ke liye unhone yashoda ke sath kuch Kiya hai. Ab kya Kiya hai ye to aage hi pta chalega. Aur dekhte hai bhavishya me iske kya parinaam honge.

Hmmm surely... Agreed ... Ab jo hua hai woh reveal filhaal toh nahi kiya jayega... Baaki update mai maja jarur aayega aapko...

Baat karu reviews yaa view kam hone ke to uske 2 reasons lag rhe hai mujhe.
1. Update ka time par naa aana aur unke bich ka badhta gap.

2. Kahani ab tak apne plot ko establish nahi kar payi. Yu to kahani me koi kami nahi hai writing style aur plot acha hai. Lekin unexplained hai.

Agree your point bruhhh... Huhhh... Bhut time lag raha hai...
First point you already know ki Election then ganpati festival ke chakkar mai poore 2 week busy raha... Wanha bhut kosish ki likhe ki magar time aur quality se compromise ho jata update kaisa hota pta nahi... Huhhh...

Kahani ka plot ready ho gaya bass... Ab kuch update aur...

Aapne hi kaha tha ki kahani me fantasy aur supernatural powers ka bhi role hai, lekin ab tak kahani puri tarah se emotional rahi hai, ab aise me thodi boriyat to hone hi lagti hai. Emotional, action, thriller sabka cocktail ho to maja aata hai, jyada vakt tak agar ek hi tarah ki tone me story chale specifically emotional tone me to ubaupan ho jata hai.

Huhhh men I know kuch jayada emotional ho gayi hai... But fact is that... Starting majburi mai kiya magar ab maza aa raha hai...
Jokes a part... Feeling dekhni padhti hai... I know boriyat ho jayegi... This is tha last emotional update... Aage change aa raha hai hope you like it... Pehle Romance Action Fantasy Teeno milega...

Don't take it wrong, sirf mujhe Aisa lagta hai. It's upto you totally ki kahani kaise likhni hai.

Nice update, eagerly waiting for update

Thanks

Mujhe maza aaya burayi sunne mai jab tak pta nahi chalega badlaav kaise aayega... Thanks so much...

For aankhein khol dene waale review..

 

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Emotional update
Abhi Yashoda ko lekar jaa raha hai wo baccha
jiski Maa usko janm dete mein marr gayi thi

Thanks Bhai Good to see you

 

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Bhai, Aap apne update ke schedule par nahi dete. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

 

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Bhaut kuch ho gaya yaha pe to......
bolna nahi chahiye par kitne ajeeb hai ye log
Yashoda roj hi aati hogi ghar pe kabhi naa kabhi....
agar uska baccha hota to wo pregnent dikhti to inn sabko

Pata nahi ab aage kya hoga.....
Nice update

Those basti ke logis men...
Akal badi ya bhains me humesha Galt choose karte h...