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Family Emergency ke chalte Delhi aaya hun... Yara isliye update nahi likh paya 60% complete ho chuka hai...bhai 3 raate bit chuki hai
be with family we can wait for thte updateFamily Emergency ke chalte Delhi aaya hun... Yara isliye update nahi likh paya 60% complete ho chuka hai...
But abhi nahi ho payega... Aage thoda time lagega Monday ko ghar phunch kar complete hoga...
Koi na, dhyan rkhoFamily Emergency ke chalte Delhi aaya hun... Yara isliye update nahi likh paya 60% complete ho chuka hai...
But abhi nahi ho payega... Aage thoda time lagega Monday ko ghar phunch kar complete hoga...
Kiya na pehle familyFamily Emergency ke chalte Delhi aaya hun... Yara isliye update nahi likh paya 60% complete ho chuka hai...
But abhi nahi ho payega... Aage thoda time lagega Monday ko ghar phunch kar complete hoga...
Pehla Update parh lia! Honestly, I was expecting a more better update from you, but it was still okay Kahani ke kirdaron ko le ker shuru me thora mixup ho gaya wo clear nahi tha, Lekin thora dhayan dene per samajh aa gye Emotions development me thori tezi thi usse aur bhi ache se dikhaya ja sakta tha aur wanhi mujhe hospital scene thora atpata laga, Lekin uss per kuch nahi keh sakta mostly sabhi ko hospital ki wohi baate pata hai jo film aur drama me dikhayi jati hai But still ju ne jitna ho saka ache se dikhaya( KALYUG... Part 1 )
( Corrupt government / corruption... )
Time... 12:39AM location unknown......
Hhhhhhhh hhhhhhhh hhhhhhhh mujhe yeh karna hi hoga maa ke liye... Maa tumhe kuch nahi hoga bas thoda time aur bass hum phunch hi gye... maa maa tum sun rahi ho na aankhen kholo maa...
Ek ** saal ka ladka Jo dikhne se greeb lag raha hai badan par fate purane kapde h... Saath uski maa jise ladke ne peeth par utha rakha hai jinki haalat kahi se theek nahi lag rahi sir par gehri chot khoon paani ki tarah beh raha hai... Aakhon se aasun beh rahe hai apne bete ko uski chinta karte dekh kar... Dard mai baar baar behosh hone ke bawajood bete ki baatain unhe hosh khone nahi de rahi hai... Uski saasain dhere dhere kamjor ho rahi hai jo pta nahi kab band ho jayen... Woh apne bete se baatein Karna chahti hai lekin uske muhh se kuch lafs bhi nikalana sambhav nahi ho paa raha hai... Aasun bahane ke alawa woh kuch aur nahi kar sakti... Saath hi woh apne betain palo ko yaad kar rahi hai...
Year **** ( past )
Location government hospital... Time 4:35AM...
....Doctor doctor jaldi chaliye 217 bed waali lady ko pain shuru ho gaya hai..... Nurse
Doctor... ( Jo gehri neend mai tha ) chilla kyun rahi hai... Yeh government hospital hai pata hai na... Chal mai aata hoon thodi mai..
Nurse.. magar doctor woh pait***
Doctor... ( Beech mai hi ) suna nahi tune maine kya kaha... Chal jaa ab yaha se aata hun mai...
Uske baad doctor gate band kar leta hai fir ek gehri neend sone ke liye let jata hai... Wohi nurse jo yeh sab sun kar jara bhi aacharya nahi hua quki jab se woh yaha kaam kar rahi roz aise kitne hi cases usko dekhne ko milte hai... Soch kar ek bund aansun ki uski nikal jaati hai fir dusre hi pal woh bhaagi bhaagi normal ward mai enter karti hai...
Lady jise dekh kar lag raha hai pet se hai... Dard mai tadap rahi magar madat karne waala koi nahi hai... Poora ward khaali pada hua hai... Jisse anumaan laga sakte hai government hospital ki kya sthiti chal rahi hai... Jaha ek doctor ek nurse aur ek hi compounder poora hospital chala rahe hai... Isliye yaha koi mareez dekhne ko nahi mill raha jiske pass thoda bhut bhi Paisa hai private hospital mai jata hai...
Lady jiske pass na ilaaj ke liye paise hai na koi rishtedar madat karne waala... Aasun bahate hue tadapte hue apne pet par hath fer apne bete se baatein kar rahi hai... Shayad usne bhi haar maan li hai nurse ko bhi gye kaafi samay ho chala hai dard mai uski aankh band ho hi rahi hai magar baar baar uske pet mai dard use aankhen band nahi karne de raha sayad uska beta uski maa ki sthiti samjh raha hai... Jo abhi duniya mai aaya hi nahi.... dard mai karahte hue woh haar maan chuki hai magar fir uske chehre par ek muskaan dikh hi jati hai jab woh pet par haath rakh bete ko 'natkhat' Nand kishore keh pukaarti hai....
Tabhi Nurse ward mai enter karti hai lady ko iss halat mai dekh uski aankhon se bandh Tut padta hai.. woh bhi gareeb thi lady ki problem samjh sakti thi... Ameer log gareeb ko kede makode se jayada nahi samjhte... Jitna jayada Ameer utna jayada dard woh gareebon ko dete hai... Jiska natija uske saamne lady ** saal pregnant hai aage peeche koi nahi... Woh bhi gareeb hai magar kam se kam uska pariwar hai... Jinki madat se woh aaj government hospital mai naukri kar rahi hai... ** Saal ki bina shaadi ke kaise apne ko bachaya hai woh khud jaanti hai... Kai ameerjade uske peeche pade hai... Raaste Mai rok kar kabhi uska haath pakd lete hai kabhi uske angon ko chu lete hai woh chatpata kar kaise bhi wanha se baag jaati hai... Rote waqt woh yahi sab soch rahi thi ki ek cheeckh ne uska dhyaan kheencha jo lady ki thi...
Bhaag kar woh ward mai jaati hai lady haath pakad check karti hai nabs dheme chal rahi thi... Use kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya kare... kya ek baar fir doctor ke paas jaya jaye yeh vichar uske man mai jise uske jatak diya.. aur khud lady ko jaise taise karke moving bed par shift kar deti hai.. aur fouran use Operation Theatre mai le jane lagti hai...
OT mai woh lady ko check karti hai saare equipment lagati hai... Lady ko hosh mai lane ki koshish karti hai... Magar baar baar woh behosh ho rahi thi dard ke maare.. woh ek injection lady ko deti hai jisse woh hosh mai aaye magar woh bhi nakamyab ho jaata hai... Iss halat mai normal delivery nahi ho sakti thi... Cesarean delivery woh bina permission ke kar nahi sakti thi... Woh kya kare kya kare kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha...
Dewaar par tangi gadhi ki taraf woh baar baar dekh rahi thi... Subh ke 6 baj chuke the doctor abhi tak nahi aaya woh gate gadhi lady teeno ko baar baar dekh rahi thi... Kya kare isi muskill mai fasi rehne ke baad woh kuch faisla karti hai... Aur OT ki light Lady ke upar kar deti hai paas mai pade gloves mask aur kenchi padke woh ek nazar lady ki taraf dekhti hai... Jiska ek hath uske pet par abhi bhi hota hai... kaapte haath se woh lady ke hath ko pakad pet se alag karti hai aur shuru ho jaati hai....
Kareeb ghante bhar ki mehnat ke baad woh operation karne mai sucessful ho jati hai... goad mai bacche lo liye woh ek tak use niharti hai... Jo gulabi rang chote chote haath pair idher udher maar kar kilkaari maar raha hai... dikhne mai kisi shehzade ki tarah behad khubsurat dikh raha tha... Woh ek tak use niharti rehti hai baccha roye jata hai woh chupp karane ki koshish karti hai magar ladka roye jaa raha tha... woh jaldi se baache ko ek kapde mai lapet kar maa ki taraf dekhti hai toh uske hosh hi udd hate hai....
Lady ka hath bed se neeche latka hua tha aakhen bhi band padi thi dekhne se lag raha tha shayad saasain bhi ruk chuki hai... Woh jaldi se baache ko apne se alag kar ek palne mai rakh deti hai... Aur lady ke paas ja use check karti hai toh dhaak se neeche gir jati hai... Woh sunya ki awastha mai phunch gayi thi... Lady aur dard na seh saki usne dum toad diya tha.... Uske chehre par jaha pehle muskaan thi wohi marte waqt chinta ki lakeeren saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi... Jo sayad apne bete ke liye thi...
Sab apni soch mai gum the magar ladka roye jaa raha tha shayad woh apni maa ka dhoondh raha tha... Jiski awaaz sun Nurse ko hosh aata hai aur bacche ko apni goad mai utha leti hai phut phut kar rone lagti hai...
Time 9:25 AM...
Nurse bacche ko haath mai liye apne ghar ki taraf jaa rahi thi... Tabhi use raaste mai dairy dikati hai jisse use yaad aata hai ladke ne subh se kuch nahi khaya aur woh uske liye kuch paise se doodh khareed leti hai.. aur saath hi rikshaw kar apne ghar ki taraf chal deti hai... Poore Raaste uski aankhon nam hi thi aasun rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the saath hi use poori raat ki kahani uske saamne dimaag Mai ghoom rahi thi.. tabhi use subh ki hui baat yaad aati hai...
Earlier 1 hour ago...
...Aahhh hhhhh hmm Yashoda kaha ho ek chai pila do jara...
Doctor ubasi lete hue ward mai enter karta hai aur Nurse jiska naam yashoda hai use chai ke liye kehta hai... jaha ward mai yashoda na pakar chaaro taraf use dhoondne ki koshish karta hai.. tabhi uska dhyaan OT ki taraf jata hai jiski light abhi tak jal rahi hoti hai... Woh ander jaake dekhta hai toh use nurse ek kone mai khadi dikhayi deti hai jiske haath mai baccha rehta hai... Tabhi ek nazar woh lady ki taraf daalta hai aur use check karta hai... jisse use pta chahta hai lady dum toad chuki hai tabhi woh nurse ko khoya hua dekh kehta hai...
Doctor... Kya hua yeh toh mar gayi tum kyun muh latka ke baithi ho jao aur apna kaam karo mere liye chai banao tab tak mai Manoj ko phone kar deta hun body ko hatane ke liye yaha se...
Doctor ki baat sun woh ek baar fir hosh mai aati hai aur laanat bari nazron se use dekhti hai.... Magar woh kar bhi kya sakti thi agar use yaha rehna hai toh doctor ki baat na maane ka sawaal hi nhi uthta.. magar ek problem uske saamne yeh thi ki ladka Jo rote rote badi mushkil se abhi hi soya tha uske haath ki ek ungli abhi bhi uske haath mai hi thi... Agar woh chai banane jaati hai toh use baache ko yahi chod kar jana padega... Abhi woh apni soch mai ghum hi thi tabhi use doctor ki baat sun jor ka dhakka lagta hai... Aur uske maathe par paseena aur chinta ubhar aati hai...
Doctor... Aur haan 10 bje tak Ravi aayega Usko operation ka saman aur injection de Dena jo maine tumhe kal rakhne ko diya tha.. saath mai woh ****rs bhi dega woh le lena... Ab jaldi karo tumhe pta hai na mujhe uthane ke baad chai der se peene ki aadhat nahi hai warna Mera sir dard karta hai... Chalo jao khadi kyun ho... Yashoda sunayi de raha hai tujhe...
Yashoda jo iss samay doctor ki baat sun khoyi hui thi.. tabhi doctor use jhakjhor kar hilata hua kaam ki dubara kehta hai... Magar use kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya kare kya jawaab de.. qki woh injection toh usne raat ko hi lady ko laga diya tha.. jise doctor ne Ravi ko bech diya hai... Ab woh injection kaha se laye abhi kuch soche usse pehle ek bar fir doctor use jhakjhor deta hai...
Doctor... Kha khoi ho tabiyat toh theek hai tumhare... Yaa kaan behnre ho gye hai jaldi se apne kaam par lag jao mujhe ek baat baar baar kehne ki aadat nahi hai....
Doctor ki baat se uska gussa saaf pta chal raha tha tabhi yashoda kapte hotho se use raat ki poori baat batati hai jisse sun doctor gusse mai laal ho jata hai aur apna gussa yashoda par nikaal deta hai... Ek rakh ke tappad use maarte hue kehta hai...
Doctor... Tumhari himmat bhi kaise hui bina mujhse puche... Cesarean delivery krne ki kisse permission li tumne... Jawaab do kisse puch kar yeh sab kiya... Pta bhi hai jo injection tumne ise diya uski keemat kya thi... Jawaab do hai koi jawaab tumhare paas...
Yashoda aakhon mai aasun liye maar kha rahi thi... Qyuki use khud nahi pata tha uski keemat usne bas lady ki madat ke liye woh injection use de diya tha... Doctor ek baar fir thappad uske gaal par jadd deta hai... Aur cheenkhta hua kehta hai...
Doctor... Nikal jao iss hospital se warna mai kuch kar dunga tumhe... Aur jo mera nuksaan hua hai woh tumhari salary se kaat lunga jao dafa ho jao yaha se abhi isi waqt mai tumhe nokri se nikalta hun...
Yashoda use kuch kehna chahti thi magar doctor uski nahi sunta... Woh pairon mai girkar doctor ko hospital na nikalane ke liye mana rahi hoti hai magar doctor ek nahi sunta aur pair jhatk deta hai jisse sir paas table se lagta hai.... Jisse uski pakad chooth jati hai uske pairon se... Aur doctor wanha se chala jata hai...
Peeche Yashoda roti rehti hai magar uski sunne waala koi nahi tha... Usse reh rehkar yaad aata hai uske maa papa ne use nurse banane ke liye kitni mehnat ki thi... Yaha tak uski padhai ke liye unke paas ek matr jo zameen ghar ki aur kuch gehne the woh bhi girwi rakh diye the.. yeh sochkar ki unki beti padh likh kar unki gareebi ko door karegi... magar aaj use yaha se nikaal diya gaya yeh baat kaise kaise woh apne maa papa ko bataegi....
Abhi woh Soch me gum hi thi ki Tabhi use baache ki rone ki awaaz sunayi deti hai.... jisse uska dhyaan Tut jata hai aur Nazar utha kar jab woh use dekhti hai toh use lady ki yaad bhi aati hai... Usse baache ki fikar bhi hoti hai ki ab iska kya hoga doctor shayad ise bhi... Nhi nhi... Yeh sochkar hi uske rongte khade ho jate hai... Aur woh aage badh baache ko apni goad mai utha leti hai...
Baacha bhi uski goad mai aa Rona kam kar deta hai magar hath pair abhi bhi maar raha tha jise dekh rote hue bhi uske chehre par ek muskurahat aa jati hai uske masoom Surat par woh ek kiss kar deti hai... Aur natakhat Nandkishor kehti hai jo uski maa pet mai jab tha usse baatain karte waqt keh rahi thi... jisse sun ladka bhi kilkaari leta hua hass deta hai aur yashoda ki ungli pakad leta hai... Jisse woh chudane ki koshish krti hai magar ladka nahi chodta... Ab uske chehre par muskaan aur gehri ho jaati hai... Woh ek tak use dekhti rehti hai tabhi woh Uth khadi hoti hai aur bacche ko saath le ghar ki taraf nikal padti hai...
To be continued...
( Kaafi samay lag gya pehla update aap sab ke saamne hazir aacha ya bura jaisa bhi ho comment kar mujhe jaroor batana... Next update bhi taiyar hai... 15 like aim hote hi post kar dunga.. bhut time baad return Kiya hai.. hope dhere dhere skills sudhar jayengi.. )
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First update kitne time me parha uss ke baad bhi ye he kaho gye kia15 update 3 month... 2 ghante mai nipat jayega men...
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