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Interesting plotUpdate 1
Miami beach me baitha hua main apne beer ko enjoy kar raha tha , mere bagal me hi ek khubrusat aur hot firangi ladki kewal apne bikini me leti hui thi, halki dhoop khili hui thi aur ek chhate ke niche baithe hue maine apni ungaliyo ko us ladki ke penty ke ander ghusaye hue uske gilepan ka ahsaas kar raha tha , ladki ke chahre me bas ek muskan thi wo ankho me sun glass lagaye hue aaram se leti hui thi , usne ek karrwat li aur machalte hue mere sine se aa lagi …
“baby office chale .. main bahut horny ho rahi hu ..”
Usne English me kaha (ab firangi ladki English me hi bolegi lekin usa me bhi main dialogs ko hindi me hi likhunga , baki aap imagin kar lena )
“thodi der aur pani chhodne do na baby wanha tumhara baap bhi hoga “
“lekin ham unke samne jayenge hi nahi , tumhare cabin me ya basement me , ya koi hotel le le abhi ke liye “
Main janta tha ki ye chidya apne chut me lagi hui aag se jal rahi hai aur use bujhane ke liye mare ja rahi hai lekin fir bhi main use wanha thodi der aur bithana chahta tha , karan tha india se aane wala phone call jiska main besabri se intjaar kar raha tha ……
Tabhi mera phone baj utha aur screen me no. ke sath aaye photo ko dekhkar mere chahre ki muskan aur bhi badi ho gai , wo video call thi ..
Phone uthate hi samne ka najara mujhe dikhane laga tha ..
Samne ek ladki bade hi pyar se mujhe dekh rahi thi , uske pure chahra pasine se beega hua tha aur wo ek bister me leti hui thi, abhi wo nile rang ka poshakh pahane thi jo bata raha tha ki wo abhi kisi hospital me hai , ye video front nahi back camare se banayi ja rahi thi ..
“badhai ho akki tum mama ban gaye “
Camare ke pichhe se ek aawaj aayi aur use sunkar mere chahre me khusi ki ek lahar si doud gayi ..
“aapko bhi badhai ho jija ji , aur meri pyari didi kaisi hai aur mere bhanje ko to dikhao , bhanja hai ki bhanji “
“bhanja hua hai “
Aur screen me baju me soye hue ek abhi abhi khile hue phool ka chahra chamakanne laga , uuse dekhkar maine use wahi se kiss kiya ..
“lo apni didi se bat karo “
Ab front camara shuru ho chuka tha ..
Didi ki muskan khil rahi thi , lag raha tha ki wo bahut hi thaki hui hai lekin fir bhi wo muskaura rahi thi
“kaisa hai tera bhanja??? “
Didi ki boli me ek chasani si mithas thi
“lag to bilkul mere jaise hai , apne mama par hi jayega “
Meri bat sunkar didi khilkhilakar hans padi
“nahi re baba tere upper to ise bilkul nahi jane dungi badmaas kahi ke “
Didi ki hansi abhi bhi kayam thi lekin unhone jija ji ki or dekha
“aap wo dawaiya le aaiyye na “
“are ha main to bhul hi gaya tha abhi jata hu tum akki se bat karo “
Jija ji ke jane ke bad hi didi ke chahre me ek shararti Muskaan aa gayi
“ha ab bol kya bol raha tha “ unhone muskurate hue kaha
“bas yahi ki mera beej hai to mere jaisa to hoga hi “
Meri bat sunkar didi khilkhila uthi
“ha kamine lekin tere jaise ise bahanchod nahi banne dungi “
Wo mujhe gussa to dikha rahi thi lekin main janta tha ki unka ye gussa mahaj masti hi hai
“are didi main to ise apne jaise madarchod bhi banaunga , socho bada hokar ye tumhari hi lega ..”
“kamina kahi ka maar khayega ..”
Didi ne wahi se mujhe apna jhapad dikhaya
“maa kaha hai ??“
“wo aur nidhi ghar gaye hue hai , kuchh hi der me aa jayenge aur ye tere sath chudail koun hai , Mehta ki beti to julia nahi “
“ha wahi hai ??”
“oh to kamine ne akhir pata hi liya ise “
“bilkul aise ye bhi maa ki meharbani hi hai ki unhone mujhe ijajat di ..”
“ha all the best ,us Mehta ko barbad karne ke liye, usi ke karan ham logo ne itni takleefe dekhi hai “
“janta hu didi us sale ko to main sabak sikha hi dunga lekin … yanha kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki main unka hi beta hu “
“ha bhai tujhe isi chij se to bachna hoga , aise tu pakka bahanchod hai ye to tune fir se sabit kar diya , akhir juliya bhi to teri bahan hi hui “
Ham dono hi joro se hans pade the ..
Aise to mere hotho me muskan thi lekin fir bhi dil me ye bat bar bar ghum rahi thi , mere najro ke samne bar bar meri maa ki taswir umad jati thi jisne itani muskil se hame kabil banaya tha aur us baap ki bhi jisne hame bachpan me yu hi tadafane ke liye chhod diya ..
Main apne hi yado ke Bhawar me ghum hone laga tha ………….
congratulations for new storyUpdate 1
Miami beach me baitha hua main apne beer ko enjoy kar raha tha , mere bagal me hi ek khubrusat aur hot firangi ladki kewal apne bikini me leti hui thi, halki dhoop khili hui thi aur ek chhate ke niche baithe hue maine apni ungaliyo ko us ladki ke penty ke ander ghusaye hue uske gilepan ka ahsaas kar raha tha , ladki ke chahre me bas ek muskan thi wo ankho me sun glass lagaye hue aaram se leti hui thi , usne ek karrwat li aur machalte hue mere sine se aa lagi …
“baby office chale .. main bahut horny ho rahi hu ..”
Usne English me kaha (ab firangi ladki English me hi bolegi lekin usa me bhi main dialogs ko hindi me hi likhunga , baki aap imagin kar lena )
“thodi der aur pani chhodne do na baby wanha tumhara baap bhi hoga “
“lekin ham unke samne jayenge hi nahi , tumhare cabin me ya basement me , ya koi hotel le le abhi ke liye “
Main janta tha ki ye chidya apne chut me lagi hui aag se jal rahi hai aur use bujhane ke liye mare ja rahi hai lekin fir bhi main use wanha thodi der aur bithana chahta tha , karan tha india se aane wala phone call jiska main besabri se intjaar kar raha tha ……
Tabhi mera phone baj utha aur screen me no. ke sath aaye photo ko dekhkar mere chahre ki muskan aur bhi badi ho gai , wo video call thi ..
Phone uthate hi samne ka najara mujhe dikhane laga tha ..
Samne ek ladki bade hi pyar se mujhe dekh rahi thi , uske pure chahra pasine se beega hua tha aur wo ek bister me leti hui thi, abhi wo nile rang ka poshakh pahane thi jo bata raha tha ki wo abhi kisi hospital me hai , ye video front nahi back camare se banayi ja rahi thi ..
“badhai ho akki tum mama ban gaye “
Camare ke pichhe se ek aawaj aayi aur use sunkar mere chahre me khusi ki ek lahar si doud gayi ..
“aapko bhi badhai ho jija ji , aur meri pyari didi kaisi hai aur mere bhanje ko to dikhao , bhanja hai ki bhanji “
“bhanja hua hai “
Aur screen me baju me soye hue ek abhi abhi khile hue phool ka chahra chamakanne laga , uuse dekhkar maine use wahi se kiss kiya ..
“lo apni didi se bat karo “
Ab front camara shuru ho chuka tha ..
Didi ki muskan khil rahi thi , lag raha tha ki wo bahut hi thaki hui hai lekin fir bhi wo muskaura rahi thi
“kaisa hai tera bhanja??? “
Didi ki boli me ek chasani si mithas thi
“lag to bilkul mere jaise hai , apne mama par hi jayega “
Meri bat sunkar didi khilkhilakar hans padi
“nahi re baba tere upper to ise bilkul nahi jane dungi badmaas kahi ke “
Didi ki hansi abhi bhi kayam thi lekin unhone jija ji ki or dekha
“aap wo dawaiya le aaiyye na “
“are ha main to bhul hi gaya tha abhi jata hu tum akki se bat karo “
Jija ji ke jane ke bad hi didi ke chahre me ek shararti Muskaan aa gayi
“ha ab bol kya bol raha tha “ unhone muskurate hue kaha
“bas yahi ki mera beej hai to mere jaisa to hoga hi “
Meri bat sunkar didi khilkhila uthi
“ha kamine lekin tere jaise ise bahanchod nahi banne dungi “
Wo mujhe gussa to dikha rahi thi lekin main janta tha ki unka ye gussa mahaj masti hi hai
“are didi main to ise apne jaise madarchod bhi banaunga , socho bada hokar ye tumhari hi lega ..”
“kamina kahi ka maar khayega ..”
Didi ne wahi se mujhe apna jhapad dikhaya
“maa kaha hai ??“
“wo aur nidhi ghar gaye hue hai , kuchh hi der me aa jayenge aur ye tere sath chudail koun hai , Mehta ki beti to julia nahi “
“ha wahi hai ??”
“oh to kamine ne akhir pata hi liya ise “
“bilkul aise ye bhi maa ki meharbani hi hai ki unhone mujhe ijajat di ..”
“ha all the best ,us Mehta ko barbad karne ke liye, usi ke karan ham logo ne itni takleefe dekhi hai “
“janta hu didi us sale ko to main sabak sikha hi dunga lekin … yanha kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki main unka hi beta hu “
“ha bhai tujhe isi chij se to bachna hoga , aise tu pakka bahanchod hai ye to tune fir se sabit kar diya , akhir juliya bhi to teri bahan hi hui “
Ham dono hi joro se hans pade the ..
Aise to mere hotho me muskan thi lekin fir bhi dil me ye bat bar bar ghum rahi thi , mere najro ke samne bar bar meri maa ki taswir umad jati thi jisne itani muskil se hame kabil banaya tha aur us baap ki bhi jisne hame bachpan me yu hi tadafane ke liye chhod diya ..
Main apne hi yado ke Bhawar me ghum hone laga tha ………….
Badiya start
Looks Good.
Please continue.
nice start
Nice start
Bhai Age to Likho
Wah concept to zabardast lag raha hy dekhte hy agy kia hota hy update thora bara krne ki koshish kary waiting for next update
Bhai bahut jasndar story lg rhi hai bs update regular dete rehna
Interesting plot
Nice work but where is next update
Story ti mast hai
Story flash back v likho
sabhi dosto ka dhanywad ..congratulations for new story