Incest Kamina Khiladi

[urc4me]

Pratiksha hai agle update ki

 

[K S Lover]

Wah zabardast fantastic update waiting for next update

 

[Naina]

The qualities and passion of a writer is that through the character of story , make story's name meaningful. In which you were completely successful.

Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
( chaahe aap identity hi badal lijiye apni lekin aap meri nazar mein aap ek legendary writer the, hai aur rahenge )
Let's see what happens next.....

 

[Naina]

आप की स्टोरी का इंतजार है कांटेस्ट में सर जी ।
और एक रिक्वेस्ट है...अपनी आइडेंटी ओपन करें.... बहुत लोग आपको मिस कर रहे हैं ।

 

[urc4me]

Pratiksha hai agle update ki.

 

[rockykamina]

Nice update

ekdom jackass update, bahut bahut m,ast kahani

Awesome

Nice n fantastic update

Eagerly waiting

wonderful update! Very nice story

Rasprad aur Romanchak. Intejar hai agle update ka

Waiting

Intejar hai agle update ka

Eagerly waiting for update

Pratiksha hai agle update ki

Wah zabardast fantastic update waiting for next update

The qualities and passion of a writer is that through the character of story , make story's name meaningful. In which you were completely successful.

Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
( chaahe aap identity hi badal lijiye apni lekin aap meri nazar mein aap ek legendary writer the, hai aur rahenge )
Let's see what happens next.....

Pratiksha hai agle update ki.

dhanywad dosto ...
update thode der me post kar raha hu ..
update dene me thoda late ho jata hai mujhe , kaam hi itna hota hai lekin jab bhi dunga to thoda lamba update dene ki koshis karunga, thanks ..

 

[rockykamina]

आप की स्टोरी का इंतजार है कांटेस्ट में सर जी ।
और एक रिक्वेस्ट है...अपनी आइडेंटी ओपन करें.... बहुत लोग आपको मिस कर रहे हैं ।

yanha main chhupane ki koshis me hu aur aap sabhi ko bata do
ab utna time nahi raha sanju bhai ki contest me likh pau , main to is bar padh bhi nahi paa raha hu stories ko ...
fir bhi aap bol rahe ho to koshis karunga kuchh likh paya to isi id se likhunga ...

 

[rockykamina]

Update 9​

Bahadur ki giraftari ke 2 mahine pahle ..

Mujhe ek nayi khaber mili thi aur mera dimag teji se chalne laga , mujhe jo chij pata chali thi wo mujhe ek marg ki tarah dikhai de raha tha bahadur ko khatm karne ka ek marg…

Lekin mujhe sochna ye tha ki main is khaber ko main kaise upyog karu…

Main bahadur ke ander kaam karne wala ek chhota mota gunda nahi banna chahta tha , naa hi meri mansa don banker sabhi par rob jagane kit hi , aur naa hi mujhe bahut power ya koi political status hi chahiye tha , ye bhi ajib baat hai ki mujhe paiso ki bhi koi lalach nahi thi ….

Asal me mujhe ye sabhi chahiye tha aur in sabse bhi kahi jyda kuchh aisa jiske samne ye sabhi chije bhi chhote lage , wo kya tha ye to mujhe pata nahi tha lekin isi mahatwakansha ke karan main kisi bhi chij ke lalach me nahi fansta tha , ye sabhi mere liye mahaj mere kaam ko pura karne ke jariye the aur main khud ko ek kadam upper pata, mujhe kaha pahuchna tha ye to mujhe nahi pata tha lekin main upper jana chahta tha , main janha bhi hu wanha se ek kadam aur upper …

Mere raste me ab bahadur roda ban raha tha aur use raste se hatakar mujhe uski jagah leni thi , meri mehnat ka paisa wo kyo khaye ???

Upper se bahadur ek kamjor adami tha , jis jagah me wo tha wanha pahuchkar bahut kuchh kiya jaa sakta tha aur main uski jagah lene ko bekraar ho raha tha ..

Aur janha chah hai wahi raah bhi hoti hai , mujhe bhi ek raah mil gayi , ek khaber , anduruni khaber jo bahadur ke hi ek wafadaar ballu ne mujhe nashe ke halat me bata di , ab ballu ko laga hoga ki is bachche ke samne kuchh bhi bolne se bahadur ka kya bigad jayega , ballu ko ye nahi pata tha ki ye bachcha bahadur ka hi nahi uska bhi baap banne wala hai …

Khaber thi Savita aunty ke baare me , Savita aunty , mere teen dosto me se ek Shekhar ki maa thi , jaisa maine pahle hi bataya tha ki Shekhar ke pita ek inspector the aur unki mout yahi ke ek local gang se ladate hue ho gayi , unki mout ke bad Savita aunty ko police vibhag me constable ki noukari mil gayi , usi police station me janha kabhi unke pati inspector hua karte the, suna tha ki unke pati bahut hi immandaar insaan the aur usi ki saja unhe mili thi , Savita aunty bahut hi aatmsamman wali mahila thi lekin do bachcho ki jimmedari bhi unke kandhe me aa giri thi aur unhone apne aatmsamman ko baju me rakhkar ye noukari karna swikar kar liya , waqt ki maar ne unke jivan ko bhi sakht bana diya tha janha kabhi koi barish hone ki sambhawana nahi thi , main kabhi kabhi sochta tha ki akhir aunty itani tikhi kyo hai lekin iska kaaran mujhe ballu ki batai bato se pata chala …

Ballu aur meri batchit kuchh yu thi

Ballu : kya batau yaar akki wo sala inspector bahut hi immandar tha (5 ve pag ko ander karte hue akhir ballu ne kaha )

Main : to kya karem ko usse dikkat thi.. (kareem bhi ek don tha jo ki bahadur ka competitor tha , aur dono ke gang me hamesha thani rahti thi )

(maine uske liye ek aur pag banayya , itne dino se ise pila raha tha aaj sale ne kuchh kaam ka bola tha )

Ballu : ab kya kahu , uska beta to tera aur rohit ka dost hai na ..

Main : ha hai to , lekin usse kya hua ,

Ballu : ager malik(bahadur) ko pata chala ki maine tujhe kuchh bataya hai to … ( wo hansate hue wo pag bhi pi gaya , sala daruubaaj , maine fir se uske liye ek pag bana diya )

Main : abe ballu ab wo bas tere malik hi nahi hai main bhi to unke liye kaam karta hu na …

(main kisi bhi halat me usse kuchh aisa janna chahta tha jisse bahadur ke khilaf mujhe kuchh mil jaye , wo kya tha mujhe pata nahi )

Ballu : are nahi aisa kuchh khas nahi tha wo to aise hi mere muh se nikal gaya , aise bhi us inspector ke bare me tujhe kuchh bola to galat ho jayega , sale tu uske bete ka dost hai (ballu ki maa ki chut sala itna pi ke bhi kuchh bakane se mana kar raha tha, main eek pa gaur bana diya aur sath hi khud ka pag ander karte hua thode nashe me hone ki acting ki )

Main : ballu tera aana jana to police station me chalta rahta hai na , ek chij bata Shekhar ki maa Savita tujhe kaise lagti hai , tujhe kabhi kabhi aisa nahi lagta ki use wahi pakad ke chod du ..

(ballu ne ek bar mujhe ghura , wo samjhna chahta tha ki abhi abhi jo maine apne hi dost ki maa ke bare me bola wo sahi tha ki nahi , wo thoda lahraane laga tha , mujhe pata tha ki ballu ek no. ka chamadibaaj hai , chut ke chakkar me puri tarah se barbad insaan , aise nahi to waise shyad mere jaal me wo fans hi jaaye )

Ballu : bhai hai to gajab ki maal lekin Sali ham jaise chhote mote logo se kya chudwayegi , use to mantri ji chodate hai

Main : kya ??

(mera muh fata ka fata rah gaya tha , aur muh me rakhi daru bhi bahar aa gayi , lekin maine khud ko turant samhala aur apne dimag ke ghode ko jaldi jaldi chalane laga , ye ek surag mujhe bahut kuchh bata sakta tha aur iske liye mujhe dimag lagana tha )

Main : aise ye to main janta tha , bahadur kaka ne hi mujhe bataya tha ( maine bahut teji se dimag laga kar ballu ke upper apna daaw fek diya )

Ballu : kya ?? malik ne tumhe bata diyya

( ballu ki baat se do chije to saaf ho gayi thi ki bahadur kahi na kahi in sabme involve hai , kya wo Savita aunty ki dalali karta hai ??? lekin ager aisa hota to mujhe kuchh to bhanak lag hi jaati .. ya baat kuchh aur bhi hai ..)

Main : kyo sale wo tere malik hai lekin mere liye to wo mere kaka bhi hai na … to mujhe kyo chhupayenge unhone mujhe Savita aur uske pati dono ke bare me bata diya ..

(ab ballu ka chahra dekhane layak tha , maine uska ek aur pag bana diya , main chahta tha ki wo nashi me dhut ho jaye aur kuchh aisa bol jaaye ki main bahadur ko bhi fansa sakuu aise usne Savita aunty ke bare me jo bola tha wo mere bahut kaam aane wala tha lekin ballu se aaj bahut kuchh bulwaya jaa sakta tha )

Ballu : inspector ke bare me bhi , aisa kaise ho sakta hai ??

(ballu ka chokana hi bata raha tha ki inspector aur bahadur ke bich kuchh aisa raaj tha jo ki bahadur secret rakhna chahta tha , lekin wo kya ho sakta hai , maine apna dimag lagaya, aisa koun sa raaj ho sakta tha jo bahadur aur inspector se juda hua tha aur jo ballu ko bhi pata ho ..

Ballu ko raaj pata hai matlab ki raaj crime se juda hua hoga, ballu ne pahle kaha tha ki Shekhar ke papa bahut hi immandar the , ek immandar police wala hamesha criminals ke liye khatra hota hai aur yanha criminals the bahadur aur kareem , matlab kya kareem hi nahi bahadur bhi Shekhar ke papa ke mout ka jimmedar tha … aur ye bat ballu ko bhi pata hai matlab ki isme ballu bhi samil raha hoga .. mere hotho me ek muskan aa gayi …main to shorlocks homes ban gaya )

Main : kaise kaise kya, wo mujhse kuchh bhi nahi chhupate, sale unka aadhe se jyda business to main hi laa ke deta hu , kaka kise kise chodate hai sab mujhe pata hai , main janta hu ki inspector ko bahadur kaka aur kareem ne milkar marwaya tha aur use marne walo me tub hi shamil tha ..

(ballu ke to hosh hi ud gaye aur uske chahre ka rang dekh kar main samjh gaya ki mera anumaan sahi tha .. jaise uska pura nasha hi gayab ho gaya ho wo uthkar mere muh me hath rakhane laga )

Ballu : abe chup chup marwayega kya .. dheere bol

(main joro se hansa )

Main : ab bata bhi de , kaka ne mujhe bas bahari chije batayi puri baat nahi batayi thi ..

(tabhi maine apna mobile nikala jaise ki main usme kuch check kar raha hu aur recording on karke fir se waise hi baith gaya , idhar ballu thoda relex hokar apna pag pita hai aur is bar khud se apne liye ek pag banata hai , ab tak ham dono ne milkar puri botal khali kar li thi maine turant hi dusara botal bhi khol diya )

Ballu : kya batau yaar wo sala inspector bahut hi immandar tha, use kharidane ki bahut koshis ki lekin wo nahi mana, use darane ki bhi koshis ki lekin sale ko jaan ka bhi koi dar nahi tha , usse to mantri khan sahab (Suleman khan ) bhi pareshan rahne lage kyoki kareem aur bahadur dono hi apne kaam se kamaya hissa unhe dete the lekin wo bhi kuchh nahi kar sakte the kyoki uski posting yanha par grih mantri sharma ji ne khan se pareshan hokar lagwayi thi , khan ko ye bat pata thi isliye wo bhi chup tha lekin kareem aur bahadur ke sath milkar use marwane ka plan banne laga, akhir me inspector ko kutte ki mout mara gaya , uski dardnaak mout ne sabhi ko hila diya tha, khan ne grih mantri ko bhi chup karwa diya kyoki sabhi ko pata tha ki grihmantri chahkar bhi kuchh nahi kar payenge , khan aise bhi is pure ilake ka Bahubali hai usne fir se sabit kar diya ki uske khilaf yanha koi bhi kuchh nahi kar sakta …

Bahadur aur kareem bhale hi itane bade dushman ho lekin jo dono ka dushman hota hai use dono milkar nipta dete hai isliye to itane dino se dono hi apni apni jagah bane hue hai …

(main uski baato ko dhyan se sun raha tha sath hi sath mujhe un salo par bhar bhar kar gussa bhi aa raha tha , uski bate mere mobile me record ho rahi thi , ab mujhe janna tha ki Savita aunty in sabme kaise fans gayi )

Main : humm lekin bahadur kaka bhi gajab ke hai na , pati ko maar diya aur patni ko dhandhe me lagwa diya

(meri baat sunkar ballu joro se hans pada )

Ballu : ha sahi hai , aise inspector ki mout ko accident bata kar case ko band kar diya gaya tha, ab bechari Savita bhi besahara ho gayi thi bahadur ne use bataya ki uske pati ki mout ka jimmedar koi aur nahi balki kareem hai , lekin wo bechari akeli aourat kar bhi kya sakti thi sath hi uske dono bachche bhi us waqt chhote the use unki bhi chinta thi , wo kisi se ladai to kar nahi sakti thi..

Aise malik (bahadur ) ka dimag chalta bahut hai unhone Savita ko noukari lagane ki baat kar apne jaal me fansa liya aur khan se sifarish karne ke bahane use khan ko soup diya,aise ab wo khan ki personal randi ban gayi hai , aur khan use ek hi police station me rahne deta hai uska transfer bhi kahi nahi hota, kai logo ko ye baat pata hai ki uspar khan ka hath hai isliye koi usse panga bhi nahi leta ..

Lekin tune baat to sahi kahi thi ki Sali ko utha utha kar chodane ka man karta hai ..

(ballu ek Kamini hansi me hans pada , wahi mere dil me Savita aunty ke liye daya ka bhaw aa gaya , Savita aunty ka contect ab mantri ke sath tha , mantri jisne unke pati ko mara tha unke bachcho ko anath kiya tha ..

Ab wo uski personal randi thi … ager ye baat Savita aunty ko pata chalegi to unke dil me kya bitegi ..???

Main thode der tak isi soch me baitha raha )

Ballu : abe kya ho gaya kya soch raha hai ..??

(ballu ki bat sunkar main bas halke se muskuraya )

Main : kuchh nahi bas soch raha hu ki savita ko choda kaise jaaye, kya bolta hai mere paas ek plan hai

(ballu ki ankhe choudi ho gayi , maine uski taraf puri botal khiska di , wo sidhe botal utha kar pine laga tha auur nashe me madmast ho chuka tha )

Ballu : kya plan , sale khan hame maar dalega

(main joro se hans pada )

Main :kuchh nahi hoga , tu bol tujhe chodana hai kya aaj hi abhi …

(use to jaise meri bat par yakin hi nahi hua )

Ballu : lekin kaise

(main joro se hasane laga tha jaise use chidha raha hu )

Main : sale tu aam kha na guthali kyo gin raha hai , ab tujhe to ye bhi pata nahi hoga ki bahadur kaka bhi use chodate hai aur sath me main bhi

(main joro se hasane laga , wo mujhe aise dekh raha tha jaise use meri bat par koi yakin hi nahi ho raha hai )

Ballu : aisa kaise ho sakta hai

Main : janna hai na to nadi ke paas wali pahadi ke upper jo khandar hai na wahi jana , aaj tujhe Savita ki chudai aur chud dono dikhata hu, ab chalna hai mujhe late ho raha hai , aaj to main uski khoob joro se lunga ..

(ballu ne jaldi se daru khatm kar di ab wo thoda hila hua lag raha tha )

Ballu : bhai mujhe bhi le chal na apne sath

(maine use ghur kar dekha )

Main : chal tu bhi kya yaad rakhega lekin tu thode dur paidal hi aa ja warna logo ko shak ho jayega , fir main tujhe gadi me bithakar le jaunga, apni gadi ki chabi de de ……



Ballu ne waisa hi kiya koi aadhe ghante ke bad wo aisi jagah par aa gaya tha janha puri tarah sunshan tha aur maine use gadi me bitha liya ..

Ham dono pahadi ke niche khade the ..

Main : upper chadh payega sale darubaaj ..

Maine use chidhaya

Ballu: sale tune mera dam dekha kaha hai

Wo doudkar upper chadhne laga tha , raat ka samay tha aur sannata puri tarah se chhaya hua tha , maine gadi se do dastane nikale aur use apne hatho me pahan liya uske bad maine wo do botal nikale jise aaj ham dono ne milkar piya tha , maine use pahle hi ponchh liya tha, waise hi maine gadi ke handel ko bhi pochh liya ..

Main : abe ruk ja ye dekh botal me to abhi bhi daru hai ise pahle puri khali to kar de ..

Maine dono botal use de diye jisme thodi thodi daru maine hi bhari thi ..

Wo bina kuchh soche dono botal se sidhe daru pi gaya .. maine dono botal fir se apne paas rakh liye ..

Wo josh me aakar dodate hue choti par pahuch raha tha wahi main aaram se uske pichhe pichhe jaa raha tha , ham upper us khandar me pahuch gaye the

Ballu: Savita kab aane wali hai ??

Main: aa jayegi tu kyo fikra kar raha hai , abhi to usne msg kiya tha mujhe bas aadhe ghanta aur ..

Main khandar ke us jagah par pahucha janha se niche ka najara dekha ja sakta tha ,

Main : abe idhar aa dekh wo aarahi hai

Ab us ballu chutiye ko itni bhi samjh nahi thi ki raat ke is waqt pahadi se niche kaise dikh jayega lekin wo aa gaya ,

Ballu : kaha bhai

Wo niche ki or dekhane laga aur ..

Main : yanha madarchod

Maine use joro se dhakka diya , aur wo chillate hue niche gir gaya , pahadi itani badi to thi ki niche girne par achcha khasa nuksaan ho sakta tha lekin wo marega ya nahi ye main nahi bol sakta tha , maine uske piche hi ek botal ko phek diya aur dusare botal ko wahi diwal se maarkar tod diya ..

Main jaldi se niche gaya aur use dhundhane laga

Main : ballu sale kaise gir gaya tu ..

Maine pahle hi tourch rakh liya tha main janta tha ki iski jarurat padhne wali hai ,akhir mujhe ballu mil hi gaya ..

Maine uske chahre me roshani dali ..

Sala abhi bhi jinda tha , lekin sar se bahut khoon bah chuka tha ..

Chahre par roshani padne par wo meri or hi dekhane laga , main uske chahre ke paas baith gaya tha

Main :sale ballu , tune jivan me bahut paap kiye hai , to ise apne papo ki saja samjh lena , tujhe marne ka mera koi paln nahi tha lekin ager tu jinda rah jayega to sale kal jakar bahadur ko bata dega ki tune mujhe inspector aur Savita ke bare me itna kuchh bata diya, meri muskile faltu me badh jayegi .. to beta tujhe to marna hi tha , bas thodi der aur khoon tera bahut bah gaya hai, thode der me tu behosh ho jayega aur jab tu marega to tujhe pata bhi nahi chalega ki tu mar gaya …bye bye ballu …

Main muskurate hue wanha se nikal gaya, uski gadi wahi chhodkar main paidal hi ghar ki or nikal gaya tha lekin mujhe apne ghar nahi jana tha , mujhe jana tha Savita aunty ke ghar ………..

 

[Veer]

Fantastic update! Mind blowing writing! Very very well planned story!

 

[BIMBO]

vah! bahut h mast, lajawab,fadu aur jabardast update