Fantasy Karan

[King of light]

Update post ke diya hai hai dosto btao kaisa lga agar psnd aaya to story aage badao ga

 

[Jitu kumar]

bhai for starting new story thread,

 

[Jitu kumar]

Awesome update bhai,
Starting to bahot hi shandaar hai,
ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

 

[Damha]

better new writer ke hisaab se achi but phir bhi improve karo font size chota karo font size sirf page bara ho ga update utni he rahe gi and cong

 

[anandsngh12]

Bahut Shandar Starting hai kahani ki
Ye Mahaguru kis ko marna nahi chahte the...koun hai vo yoddha....?
Khair inka jawab to samay hi dega
Anyway Agaz bahut badhiya hai bhai

 

[K S Lover]

nice starting waiting for next update update

 

[John Cena]

Boht khoob bhai boht acha start ha keep it up

 

[King of light]

Awesome update bhai,
Starting to bahot hi shandaar hai,
ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

Thanks bhai

 

[King of light]

better new writer ke hisaab se achi but phir bhi improve karo font size chota karo font size sirf page bara ho ga update utni he rahe gi and cong

Ok bhai aagle update Mai font size chota kr donga

 

[King of light]

Bahut Shandar Starting hai kahani ki
Ye Mahaguru kis ko marna nahi chahte the...koun hai vo yoddha....?
Khair inka jawab to samay hi dega
Anyway Agaz bahut badhiya hai bhai

Aap bas meri story pe aaye yhi mere liye bahot hai bhai
Maine aapko hi guru Maan ke ye story shuru ki hai
Bas ab aapki or baki sab dosto ki dua chaiye
Update raat tak deta hu bhai