Fantasy Karan

[King of light]

nice starting waiting for next update update

Thanks bhai

 

[King of light]

Boht khoob bhai boht acha start ha keep it up

Thanks bhai

 

[tpk]

congrats for new story

 

[Avir]

Congratulations

 

[Raja thakur]

Nice updates

 

[Last benchers]

Ye sirf aap hi kr skte ho

Nhi ye mujhse nhi hoga, Mai ye nhi kr skta.

Aapke siwa us ko koi bhi khatam nhi kr skta.ab aap hi is duniya ki aakhiri umeed ho Mahaguru Dhruv

Mahaguru- nhi ye Mai nhi kr skta jo bhi ho Mai us se Yudh nhi kr skta vo bhatak gya hai use ham smjha skte hai Gupta ji

Gupta ji- nhi aap bhi jante ho ke ab vo us raste par bahot aage ja Chuka hai ab use vapas Lana namumkin hai.

Mahaguru Dhruv kuch nhi bole

Gupta ji- ab tak us ki sena sirf ham logo pr hi hamla kr rhi thi bhut ab un logo ne aam logo pr bhi chup ke hamla krna shuru kr diya hai.

Mahaguru- to ab vo din aa hi gya hai jab us ka kuch krna hi pdega pr Mai us ko maar nhi skta.

Gupta ji- ham bas yhi chate the ke aap us ke khilaf yudh Mai hamara sath de.

Is ke Baad mahaguru or us(is ka Naam aage story mai pta chalega) ki sena ke vich Mai yudh hota hai

Or ab mahaguru or vo dono amne-samne the dono aapni aapni shaktio se ek duje pr vaar kr rhe the. vo to Puri takat ke sath mahaguru pr hamla kr rha tha par mahaguru us se sirf aapna bachao kr rhe the.

Vo- kya hua mahaguru lgta ham ab tum Mai vo baat nhi rhi ab to tum mere hath se hi Maro ge or vaise bhi tum ne mere khilaf yudh Mai aa kr aapna wada to todh diya hai

Mahaguru- lgta hai tum bhul rhe ho Mene unse ye wada kiya tha ke Mai tumhe nhi Maro ga pr ye wada nhi kiya tha ke Mai tum se ladai nhi kroga. Or vaise bhi ek din sab Ko marna hai tumhe bhi marna hai.

Vo- (is baat se gussa ho kr) mujhe marne wala paida nhi hua mahaguru Mai nhi marne wala

Isi gusse Mai us se ek galti ho jati hai ke us ka thyan ladai Mai se hat gya is ka fayada mahaguru ne ootha liya or us pr aapna ek magical spell ka istmal kr liya jis se us ka shrir pathar Mai badlna shuru ho gya pr us ne pura pathar Mai badlne se pehle aapne aapne shrir se ek roshini(light) bahar nikali or us ko asman Mai chod diya or vo vha se Chali gyi mahaguru ne use pakadna chaha pr vo bahot teji se vha se Chali gyi us ke Jane ke Baad vo pura pathar Mai Badal gya pr pathar Mai badlne tak vo hasta rha or khene lga ke mera ansh mujhe vapas laye ga tab Mai or mera ansh mil ke tumhe or tumhari duniya Ko khatam krege.

Yudh ke Baad us ke shrir Ko ek purn Surakskit jga pr rkha jata hai kyuki sab Ko pta tha ke vo mara nhi hai bus us ka shrir kadh hua hai.

Us ke kuch din Baad vo shrir achanak vha se gayab ho gya kisi Ko kuch pta nhi chala ke vo kha gya.

Fantastic update Bhai.....

 

[Stone cold]

bro 4 new thread

 

[Stone cold]

Ye sirf aap hi kr skte ho

Nhi ye mujhse nhi hoga, Mai ye nhi kr skta.

Aapke siwa us ko koi bhi khatam nhi kr skta.ab aap hi is duniya ki aakhiri umeed ho Mahaguru Dhruv

Mahaguru- nhi ye Mai nhi kr skta jo bhi ho Mai us se Yudh nhi kr skta vo bhatak gya hai use ham smjha skte hai Gupta ji

Gupta ji- nhi aap bhi jante ho ke ab vo us raste par bahot aage ja Chuka hai ab use vapas Lana namumkin hai.

Mahaguru Dhruv kuch nhi bole

Gupta ji- ab tak us ki sena sirf ham logo pr hi hamla kr rhi thi bhut ab un logo ne aam logo pr bhi chup ke hamla krna shuru kr diya hai.

Mahaguru- to ab vo din aa hi gya hai jab us ka kuch krna hi pdega pr Mai us ko maar nhi skta.

Gupta ji- ham bas yhi chate the ke aap us ke khilaf yudh Mai hamara sath de.

Is ke Baad mahaguru or us(is ka Naam aage story mai pta chalega) ki sena ke vich Mai yudh hota hai

Or ab mahaguru or vo dono amne-samne the dono aapni aapni shaktio se ek duje pr vaar kr rhe the. vo to Puri takat ke sath mahaguru pr hamla kr rha tha par mahaguru us se sirf aapna bachao kr rhe the.

Vo- kya hua mahaguru lgta ham ab tum Mai vo baat nhi rhi ab to tum mere hath se hi Maro ge or vaise bhi tum ne mere khilaf yudh Mai aa kr aapna wada to todh diya hai

Mahaguru- lgta hai tum bhul rhe ho Mene unse ye wada kiya tha ke Mai tumhe nhi Maro ga pr ye wada nhi kiya tha ke Mai tum se ladai nhi kroga. Or vaise bhi ek din sab Ko marna hai tumhe bhi marna hai.

Vo- (is baat se gussa ho kr) mujhe marne wala paida nhi hua mahaguru Mai nhi marne wala

Isi gusse Mai us se ek galti ho jati hai ke us ka thyan ladai Mai se hat gya is ka fayada mahaguru ne ootha liya or us pr aapna ek magical spell ka istmal kr liya jis se us ka shrir pathar Mai badlna shuru ho gya pr us ne pura pathar Mai badlne se pehle aapne aapne shrir se ek roshini(light) bahar nikali or us ko asman Mai chod diya or vo vha se Chali gyi mahaguru ne use pakadna chaha pr vo bahot teji se vha se Chali gyi us ke Jane ke Baad vo pura pathar Mai Badal gya pr pathar Mai badlne tak vo hasta rha or khene lga ke mera ansh mujhe vapas laye ga tab Mai or mera ansh mil ke tumhe or tumhari duniya Ko khatam krege.

Yudh ke Baad us ke shrir Ko ek purn Surakskit jga pr rkha jata hai kyuki sab Ko pta tha ke vo mara nhi hai bus us ka shrir kadh hua hai.

Us ke kuch din Baad vo shrir achanak vha se gayab ho gya kisi Ko kuch pta nhi chala ke vo kha gya.

Nice update

Interesting story lagti hai wo shaks jise maha guru ne pathar mai badal diya shayad wo unka koi karibi hoga like shishya to phir usne burai kyu chuna kya pehle se uske intentions aise hi the aur wo maha guru ke pass sirf apne maksad ke liye aya ho.
It will be more interesting jab story ka hero karan hi uska ansh ho tab karan kis ka sath dega maha guru yani achai ka ya uska jiska wo ansh hai.
Glad to know ke ap is story ko complete karoge we are always with you.

Eagerly waiting 4 next update

 

[Mathur]

first of all for new story and best of luck with your story

story ki starting hi aapne kaafi interesting tarike se ki hai jiss mai eek GURU apne hi SHISHYA se yudh kr rha hai par kisi ko diye gye vachan ke kaaran vo usse maar nhi rhe hai but kaid kr diya hai ussi ke sharir mai

kaid hone se pehle apna ANSH usne bahar chod diya hai shayad yeh ANSH hi hero hai

well mujhe umeed hai ki aap story jaari rakhen ge aur isse aant tak le kr jayenge

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING
from now i am
YOUR REGULAR READER

 

[Last benchers]

Update kb aayega guru