Fantasy Karan

[RAJIV SHAW]

Mast update hai bhai

 

[Avir]

Nice one

 

[Kratos]

Nice update.. Ek baat batao karan ka flashback kab se start hoga aur uski family ke baare me tumne nahi bataya

 

[Sunny talwar]

Kahani to aap ki supar jaa rahi hai magar mujhe ye Nahi samajh me aa rha aap Baar Baar Karan ke dost pe itna focus kyo la dete ho

Yaar khani Karan ki jai uss ke dost ki Nahi aap uss ke love story explain Karne lagte ho Bura laga ho to sorry Bhai
But khani aap ki interesting hai hai bus aiese hi likhte jao

 

[Badshah Khan]

Good update bhai
Waiting for next

 

[King of light]

Kahani to aap ki supar jaa rahi hai magar mujhe ye Nahi samajh me aa rha aap Baar Baar Karan ke dost pe itna focus kyo la dete ho

Yaar khani Karan ki jai uss ke dost ki Nahi aap uss ke love story explain Karne lagte ho Bura laga ho to sorry Bhai
But khani aap ki interesting hai hai bus aiese hi likhte jao

Bhai ye aapko aage pta chale ga ke dost pe itna focus kyu kar rha hu. Vaise jyada kiya bhi nhi Sirf ek update hi to uske liye likha tha
Or bhai sidhe tor par btao to vivek mera favorite character hai. Use mai Aapni real life jodta hu. Mera ek friend tha vaisa hi. Maine usi ke nature ko likhne ki koshish ki hai is liye kai baar bahavnao mai beh jata hu. Hope aap understand kro ge. Baki aagar aapko story psnd nhi Aa rhi to jaise aap kho mai changes krne ko tyaar hu.

 

[Sunny talwar]

Bhai ye aapko aage pta chale ga ke dost pe itna focus kyu kar rha hu. Vaise jyada kiya bhi nhi Sirf ek update hi to uske liye likha tha
Or bhai sidhe tor par btao to vivek mera favorite character hai. Use mai Aapni real life jodta hu. Mera ek friend tha vaisa hi. Maine usi ke nature ko likhne ki koshish ki hai is liye kai baar bahavnao mai beh jata hu. Hope aap understand kro ge. Baki aagar aapko story psnd nhi Aa rhi to jaise aap kho mai changes krne ko tyaar hu.

Bhai agar ane wale wakt me Karan se wo update relat Kate ga to koi Baar Nahi
Par mujhe Aisha lagta hai agar Mai koi story padhta hu to uss me Jo dost ate hai thik hai Karan or uss ke dost ke dosti par agar Kuch hai to thik hai app samjha rahe hai na Mai Khana kya Chahta hu
Matab ki
Ye Karan ke story hai iss me aap kise dusre ke story add karoge to utna maja Nahi ata hai
Jo bhi add karo usse Karan ka connection hona Chahiye past future ya present me.
Mai aisa mujhe lagata hai ye aap ki story hai app jaisa chahye waisa likhe
Kuch Jada bole diya hou to sorry..

 

[Aj1980]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

 

[Defaulter]

Yar tum asa karo story ka name change kar ka vivek rakh do mujha to sala yeh vivek hi hero lag raha ha har update ka 50%vivek par hota hy jaisa woh hero ka dost ni khud hi hero ho

 

[Fighter]

Jabardast & Gajab update bro


Waiting for next