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Fantasy Karmyudh ( Completed )

Rohit1988

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UPDATE 1

“Aaahhh… mera sir…” main jaise neend se jaagte hi bhayankar peeda mehsoos kar rha tha. Sab dhundhla sa najar aa raha tha. kuch palo baad jab najar ne kaam karna shuru kiya to maine charo aur dekha. Main shayad hospital ke bistar par tha kyoki paas hi ek doctor aur nurse khade they.

“how are you feeling young man” shayad Dr ne poochha.

“ahhh.. sir fata jaa rha hai mera, kahan hoon main” maine karahti awaz me jawab diya.

“Central hospital *******” ye jawab nurse ne diya.

“aaahhh…. M… main yahan… yahan kaise aaya… mujhe kya hua hai” maine poocha.

“tumhe nahi pata, kya hua tha tumhare sath” doctor ne jawab me ulta sawal daag diya.

“main yahan…. Aaahhh… main kaise…. Mujhe yaad nahi aa raha… ufff… mai… mera naam…, mera naam kya hai”

“relax youngman, tum ek lambi behoshi se uthe ho thoda rest karo abhi jyada stress mat lo” kehte hue dr ne ek injection laga diya aur main fir se neend me doobta chala gya.

Next morning

main jab jaaga saamne wall clock 6.30 am ka time dikha rahi thi, ab dard kaafi kam tha, mujhe fir sab yaad na aane se bechaini si hone lagi, maine charo aur najar daudayi to pas main baithi nurse dikhi, maine use awaz lagakar paani maanga. Pani piker maine usse poocha, “main kaun hu yahan kaise aaya, mujhe kuch yaad kyon nahi aa raha.”

Wo boli “abhi dr saab aa rahe hain wahi jawaab denge tumhe.”

“mujhe fresh hona hai” main bola, mujhe thodi kamjori feel ho rahi thi.

“main wardboy ko bhejti hoon” kehkar wo bahar chali gayi, thodi der me ek wardboy aaya aur mujhe fresh wagerah karwaya. Fresh hoke main bed par adhleta hua firse apna ateet yaad karne ki koshish karne laga. Par sab bekaar…

Aakhir kaun hoon main, yahan kaise aaya..

Dr ko apne room me aate hue dekh kar main thoda sidha hone ki koshish karne laga.

Dr. - “so youngman , how are you feeling now.”

Me- “much better dr., par mujhe kuch yaad kyo aa raha hai”

Dr. – “well you got a serious accident jisme tumhare sir par chot lagi thi, tum almost 2 mahine se coma me they. Isiliye shayad kuch yaad nahi aa raha, thoda stress kam lo, jaldi sab yaad aa jayega.”

Me - “Aur abhi jab main bathroom me tha maine apne face par bhi kayi nishaan dekhe.”

Dr – “actually accident me kayi chote tumhaare face par bhi aayi thi unhi k daag hain” Fir thoda ruk kar bole “waise maine tumhari family ko inform kar diya hai wo aate hi honge”

“family” maine dohraya, “aap jante hain unhe, kaun hain wo, mera… mera naam kya hai.”


“thakur ajay pratap” ek bhaari awaz sunkar maine us taraf najar ghumayi to dekha ek roabdaar banda jo shayad 45 se 50 saal ka hoga, darwaje pe khada tha, pehnaave se koi raees lag raha tha.



Bhai ji Congratulations for new story
But update regular or lambe ho to story padhne me maja aaye dekhte hai aap kaha tak is story ko horror, fantasy, adventures or trailing bana pate ho jise ham sabka is story se lagaw bana rahe

Acha likho lamba likho or long story likho
100 nahi is story ko 500 se jayada update vala likho

Lage raho
God Bless u bhai ji
 

Rohit1988

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Update 2

“aap thakur ajay pratap ho mere yaani Thakur bheesham pratap k bête” mere paas aate hue unhone kaha.

Me- “aap… aap mere pita hain”

Thakur (mere sir par hath ferte hue) – “haan mere bachhe, aur ye tumhari maa Mamta” unhone darwaje ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha.

Maine darwaje ki aur dekha to ek sundar si aurat darwaje pe khadi mujhe dabdabayi aankho se dekh rahi thi. Unke chehre pe hi mamta ka sagar umad raha tha.

“kya dekh rahi ho Mamta apne bête ko gale nahi lagaogi” thakur sahab apni patni se bole.

“Maaaa….” Bolte hue maine unki aur hath utha diya, wo bhi daudkar aake mujhse lipat gayi. Aur rote hue “mera beta… mera bachha” karne lagi.

Thakur sahab dr se “kaisa hai ab ye”

Dr – “physically to ye fit hai par abhi purana kuch yaad nahi kar pa raha hai, lambi behoshi se utha hai shayad ghar k mahaul me sab yaad aa jaaye.”

Thakur – “to kya hum ise ghar le ja sakte hain”

Dr – “bilkul”

Aur kuch samay baad main maa aur papa k sath ek badi si gaadi me ghar ki aur ja raha tha.

“papa mera ye accident kaise hua tha” maine poocha to wo bole, “beta mat pooch wo khaufnaak hadsa, tum apni padhai poori karke London se india aaye they, hum sabhi ko surprise dene ke liye tumne apne aane ki baat kisi ko nahi batayi thi. Taxi se apne shahar aate hue raaste me ek bhayanak accident hua jisme ek bus ek truck aur kuch car buri tarah bhid gayi, kayi log mare bhi gaye. Tumhare jis dost ne airport pe tunhe receive kiya tha aur taxi me bithaya tha, uske phone se hame is hadse k bare me pata chala tab hum wahan jaakar tumhe utha kar lekar aaye, aur tabse tum behosh they.”

Maa- “ Pta hai hum sab kitne sadme me they, tumhari chaheti behan muskan ne to jaise hasna hi chood diya, vaise hi wo ”

Thakur sahab baat kat te hue bole, “use hamne tumhaare accident ka bhi nahi bataya, wo to aaj bhi tumhe London hi samajhti hai, aaj tum ghar ja rahe ho is surprise se khushi se pagal hi ho jayegi”

Kuch der hum chup rahe fir maine maa se poocha, “maa hamare pariwaar me aur kaun kaun hai”

Maa mujhe pariwar k bare me batane lagi.

Family introduction-

Father – thakur bheeshm pratap, 50 years, purane jamindaar hain, kaafi jameen jaidaad hai, badi factories hain jinka jyadatar maal export hota hai. Gaanv me pushtaini jameene aur farmhouse hain.

Mother- mamta rani, 43 years, housewife

Hero – Ajay , 24 , London se MBA kar k lauta hai,

Talented, Handsome hunk, mascular body, kuch aur khoobiyaan hain jo baad me pta chalengi.

Mehak- sister, 21, cuteness aur khoobsoorti ki khadaan kehlo. Graduation final year me hai. Beauty with brain ka perfect combination.

Muskaan- sister, 16, super duper cuto, shaitaan aur poore pariwar ki jaan.

Inke alawa

Dr uncle- dr Mahesh, 47 years, padosi aur family friend, (hero inhi ki dekhrekh me tha)


Sushmita- 22, dr sahab ki beti aur Ajay aur mehak ki childhood friend.



Lovely update bhai ji
Keep update
 

gOlDy

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Bhai ji Congratulations for new story
But update regular or lambe ho to story padhne me maja aaye dekhte hai aap kaha tak is story ko horror, fantasy, adventures or trailing bana pate ho jise ham sabka is story se lagaw bana rahe

Acha likho lamba likho or long story likho
100 nahi is story ko 500 se jayada update vala likho

Lage raho
God Bless u bhai ji


Thanks bro, thoda mushkil hai par poori koshish karunga apko nirash na karu
 

Black water

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Update 2

“aap thakur ajay pratap ho mere yaani Thakur bheesham pratap k bête” mere paas aate hue unhone kaha.

Me- “aap… aap mere pita hain”

Thakur (mere sir par hath ferte hue) – “haan mere bachhe, aur ye tumhari maa Mamta” unhone darwaje ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha.

Maine darwaje ki aur dekha to ek sundar si aurat darwaje pe khadi mujhe dabdabayi aankho se dekh rahi thi. Unke chehre pe hi mamta ka sagar umad raha tha.

“kya dekh rahi ho Mamta apne bête ko gale nahi lagaogi” thakur sahab apni patni se bole.

“Maaaa….” Bolte hue maine unki aur hath utha diya, wo bhi daudkar aake mujhse lipat gayi. Aur rote hue “mera beta… mera bachha” karne lagi.

Thakur sahab dr se “kaisa hai ab ye”

Dr – “physically to ye fit hai par abhi purana kuch yaad nahi kar pa raha hai, lambi behoshi se utha hai shayad ghar k mahaul me sab yaad aa jaaye.”

Thakur – “to kya hum ise ghar le ja sakte hain”

Dr – “bilkul”

Aur kuch samay baad main maa aur papa k sath ek badi si gaadi me ghar ki aur ja raha tha.

“papa mera ye accident kaise hua tha” maine poocha to wo bole, “beta mat pooch wo khaufnaak hadsa, tum apni padhai poori karke London se india aaye they, hum sabhi ko surprise dene ke liye tumne apne aane ki baat kisi ko nahi batayi thi. Taxi se apne shahar aate hue raaste me ek bhayanak accident hua jisme ek bus ek truck aur kuch car buri tarah bhid gayi, kayi log mare bhi gaye. Tumhare jis dost ne airport pe tunhe receive kiya tha aur taxi me bithaya tha, uske phone se hame is hadse k bare me pata chala tab hum wahan jaakar tumhe utha kar lekar aaye, aur tabse tum behosh they.”

Maa- “ Pta hai hum sab kitne sadme me they, tumhari chaheti behan muskan ne to jaise hasna hi chood diya, vaise hi wo ”

Thakur sahab baat kat te hue bole, “use hamne tumhaare accident ka bhi nahi bataya, wo to aaj bhi tumhe London hi samajhti hai, aaj tum ghar ja rahe ho is surprise se khushi se pagal hi ho jayegi”

Kuch der hum chup rahe fir maine maa se poocha, “maa hamare pariwaar me aur kaun kaun hai”

Maa mujhe pariwar k bare me batane lagi.

Family introduction-

Father – thakur bheeshm pratap, 50 years, purane jamindaar hain, kaafi jameen jaidaad hai, badi factories hain jinka jyadatar maal export hota hai. Gaanv me pushtaini jameene aur farmhouse hain.

Mother- mamta rani, 43 years, housewife

Hero – Ajay , 24 , London se MBA kar k lauta hai,

Talented, Handsome hunk, mascular body, kuch aur khoobiyaan hain jo baad me pta chalengi.

Mehak- sister, 21, cuteness aur khoobsoorti ki khadaan kehlo. Graduation final year me hai. Beauty with brain ka perfect combination.

Muskaan- sister, 16, super duper cuto, shaitaan aur poore pariwar ki jaan.

Inke alawa

Dr uncle- dr Mahesh, 47 years, padosi aur family friend, (hero inhi ki dekhrekh me tha)


Sushmita- 22, dr sahab ki beti aur Ajay aur mehak ki childhood friend.
Awesome update bhai
 
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