Fantasy Karmyudh ( Completed )

[Lovingheart]

Mujh

UPDATE 19

Ghar par jaise hi mai pahucha to sabhi lobby me baithe tension me lag rahe they. Mujhe dekhkar maa turant bhaagkar mere paas aayi.

Maa – kahan tha tu, mobile kyu band hai tera. Office bhi nahi gaya kahan tha pura din.

Maine ek najar sabhi k chehro par daudayi. Maa ki jahan aanke nam thi to papa ki aankho me tension saaf dikh rahi thi. Mehak aur muskaan k chehro par bhi fikr dekhi ja sakti thi.

Me – kahin nahi ma, subah dr uncle k ghar gaya tha fir wahan se kisi kaam se nikal gya tha, mobile ki battery kab khatam ho gayi pta hi nahi chala. Sorry maa papa aap ko pareshaan karne k liye.

Papa – koi baat nahi beta, tumse baat nahi hui na isliye sab pareshaan ho gaye they. Chalo pehle khana kha lo fir baat karte hain, pata hai teri maa aur mehak ne din me bhi khaya kuch.

Me – ye kya baat hui maa. Aise to aap log apni tabiyat kharaab kar loge. Main kahin kaam me fas gaya tha lekin aap… aainda aisa nahi hona chahiye.

Maa – ye to mujhe kehna chahiye k aainda aisa nahi hona chahiye.

Me – I promise maa nahi hoga.

Fir sabne sath dinner kiya aur fir mai apne room me chala gya. Abhi mai change karke bed par letne hi jar aha tha ki door par knock hui. Maine darwaja khola to saamne mehak khadi thi.

Me – mehak tum…. is waqt…

Mekak – kya mai andar aa sakti hu

Me – haa haa kyu nahi…

Me ek side ho gya to wo andar aakar khadi ho gayi. Maine use chair ki taraf ishara karte hue bola, please baitho.

Wo kuch kehna to chaah rahi thi par shasyad samajh nahi aa raha tha ki baat kaise shuru karu

“sorry”

Me – sorry for what

Mehak – mai ye sab … matlab main ye nahi chahti thi ki sach tumhe aise pta chale… par… par mai kya karti mai bhi ab apni feelings ko aur nahi daba sakti thi, isliye….

Me- look mehak, jo bhi hua mujhe dr uncle se sab pta lag gya hai. Par abhi mai apni identity ko lekar khud itna puzzled hu ki kuch aur nahi soch pa raha hu. Aur mai ye sach muskaan k aage bhi nahi aane de sakta, wo ye bardasht shayad na kar paaye.

Mehak – mai samajh sakti hu par…… ok take your time but please don’t break heart. I love you.

Apni ankho ki nami ko chhipate hue wo apne room me chali gayi. Mai kuch der wahi baitha sab sochta raha fir so gaya.

Subah neend me mujhe aisa laga ki koi mera sir sehla raha hai, maine aankhe kholi to deakha maa mere sirhaane baithi thi.

Me – maa aap yahan

Maa – beta kaise ho

Me – aap mere room me, koi baat hai kya.

Maa – pehle tum fresh ho jao fir batati hu.

Me fresh hone bathroom me ghus gaya.

Mujhe yeh samjh nahi ayi ki

Mehak ko ajay urf yadasht khoya hua ladke se pyar kese hua
Any special reason

Ya fir tharak charhi hai usko

 

[Nevil singh]

UPDATE 19

Ghar par jaise hi mai pahucha to sabhi lobby me baithe tension me lag rahe they. Mujhe dekhkar maa turant bhaagkar mere paas aayi.

Maa – kahan tha tu, mobile kyu band hai tera. Office bhi nahi gaya kahan tha pura din.

Maine ek najar sabhi k chehro par daudayi. Maa ki jahan aanke nam thi to papa ki aankho me tension saaf dikh rahi thi. Mehak aur muskaan k chehro par bhi fikr dekhi ja sakti thi.

Me – kahin nahi ma, subah dr uncle k ghar gaya tha fir wahan se kisi kaam se nikal gya tha, mobile ki battery kab khatam ho gayi pta hi nahi chala. Sorry maa papa aap ko pareshaan karne k liye.

Papa – koi baat nahi beta, tumse baat nahi hui na isliye sab pareshaan ho gaye they. Chalo pehle khana kha lo fir baat karte hain, pata hai teri maa aur mehak ne din me bhi khaya kuch.

Me – ye kya baat hui maa. Aise to aap log apni tabiyat kharaab kar loge. Main kahin kaam me fas gaya tha lekin aap… aainda aisa nahi hona chahiye.

Maa – ye to mujhe kehna chahiye k aainda aisa nahi hona chahiye.

Me – I promise maa nahi hoga.

Fir sabne sath dinner kiya aur fir mai apne room me chala gya. Abhi mai change karke bed par letne hi jar aha tha ki door par knock hui. Maine darwaja khola to saamne mehak khadi thi.

Me – mehak tum…. is waqt…

Mekak – kya mai andar aa sakti hu

Me – haa haa kyu nahi…

Me ek side ho gya to wo andar aakar khadi ho gayi. Maine use chair ki taraf ishara karte hue bola, please baitho.

Wo kuch kehna to chaah rahi thi par shasyad samajh nahi aa raha tha ki baat kaise shuru karu

“sorry”

Me – sorry for what

Mehak – mai ye sab … matlab main ye nahi chahti thi ki sach tumhe aise pta chale… par… par mai kya karti mai bhi ab apni feelings ko aur nahi daba sakti thi, isliye….

Me- look mehak, jo bhi hua mujhe dr uncle se sab pta lag gya hai. Par abhi mai apni identity ko lekar khud itna puzzled hu ki kuch aur nahi soch pa raha hu. Aur mai ye sach muskaan k aage bhi nahi aane de sakta, wo ye bardasht shayad na kar paaye.

Mehak – mai samajh sakti hu par…… ok take your time but please don’t break heart. I love you.

Apni ankho ki nami ko chhipate hue wo apne room me chali gayi. Mai kuch der wahi baitha sab sochta raha fir so gaya.

Subah neend me mujhe aisa laga ki koi mera sir sehla raha hai, maine aankhe kholi to deakha maa mere sirhaane baithi thi.

Me – maa aap yahan

Maa – beta kaise ho

Me – aap mere room me, koi baat hai kya.

Maa – pehle tum fresh ho jao fir batati hu.

Me fresh hone bathroom me ghus gaya.

nice update bhai
yeh mahak ne kahan fasha diya mitr

 

[Nevil singh]

intjaar rahega mitr pyare

 

[ashish_1982_in]

UPDATE 19

Ghar par jaise hi mai pahucha to sabhi lobby me baithe tension me lag rahe they. Mujhe dekhkar maa turant bhaagkar mere paas aayi.

Maa – kahan tha tu, mobile kyu band hai tera. Office bhi nahi gaya kahan tha pura din.

Maine ek najar sabhi k chehro par daudayi. Maa ki jahan aanke nam thi to papa ki aankho me tension saaf dikh rahi thi. Mehak aur muskaan k chehro par bhi fikr dekhi ja sakti thi.

Me – kahin nahi ma, subah dr uncle k ghar gaya tha fir wahan se kisi kaam se nikal gya tha, mobile ki battery kab khatam ho gayi pta hi nahi chala. Sorry maa papa aap ko pareshaan karne k liye.

Papa – koi baat nahi beta, tumse baat nahi hui na isliye sab pareshaan ho gaye they. Chalo pehle khana kha lo fir baat karte hain, pata hai teri maa aur mehak ne din me bhi khaya kuch.

Me – ye kya baat hui maa. Aise to aap log apni tabiyat kharaab kar loge. Main kahin kaam me fas gaya tha lekin aap… aainda aisa nahi hona chahiye.

Maa – ye to mujhe kehna chahiye k aainda aisa nahi hona chahiye.

Me – I promise maa nahi hoga.

Fir sabne sath dinner kiya aur fir mai apne room me chala gya. Abhi mai change karke bed par letne hi jar aha tha ki door par knock hui. Maine darwaja khola to saamne mehak khadi thi.

Me – mehak tum…. is waqt…

Mekak – kya mai andar aa sakti hu

Me – haa haa kyu nahi…

Me ek side ho gya to wo andar aakar khadi ho gayi. Maine use chair ki taraf ishara karte hue bola, please baitho.

Wo kuch kehna to chaah rahi thi par shasyad samajh nahi aa raha tha ki baat kaise shuru karu

“sorry”

Me – sorry for what

Mehak – mai ye sab … matlab main ye nahi chahti thi ki sach tumhe aise pta chale… par… par mai kya karti mai bhi ab apni feelings ko aur nahi daba sakti thi, isliye….

Me- look mehak, jo bhi hua mujhe dr uncle se sab pta lag gya hai. Par abhi mai apni identity ko lekar khud itna puzzled hu ki kuch aur nahi soch pa raha hu. Aur mai ye sach muskaan k aage bhi nahi aane de sakta, wo ye bardasht shayad na kar paaye.

Mehak – mai samajh sakti hu par…… ok take your time but please don’t break heart. I love you.

Apni ankho ki nami ko chhipate hue wo apne room me chali gayi. Mai kuch der wahi baitha sab sochta raha fir so gaya.

Subah neend me mujhe aisa laga ki koi mera sir sehla raha hai, maine aankhe kholi to deakha maa mere sirhaane baithi thi.

Me – maa aap yahan

Maa – beta kaise ho

Me – aap mere room me, koi baat hai kya.

Maa – pehle tum fresh ho jao fir batati hu.

Me fresh hone bathroom me ghus gaya.

nice update bhai

 

[win_sam201]

Nice update waiting for next

 

[gOlDy]

Mujh

Mujhe yeh samjh nahi ayi ki

Mehak ko ajay urf yadasht khoya hua ladke se pyar kese hua
Any special reason

Ya fir tharak charhi hai usko

Bhai mehak ko to pta tha k wo uska bhai nahi h fir bhi uski itni care karta h, mall me bhi bhida uske liye aur thakur se bhi , even khud hospital pahuch gya, kya aise ladke k liye bhi soft corner nahi banega. Jab sush ne use propose kar diya to aur aag lag gayi.... Baaki anadi writer hu to shayad explain karne me kuch kami reh gayi ho.

 

[gOlDy]

nice update bhai
yeh mahak ne kahan fasha diya mitr

Wo to khud dil k hatho majboor h.

 

[gOlDy]

UPDATE 20

Bathroom se fresh hoke jab main nikla to mom k sath papa bhi mere room me baithe they.

Me – papa aap….. good morning papa… aaj aap dono mere room me. Matlab samajh nahi aaya.

Papa – beta…. darasal Dr ne mujhe kal hi bta diya tha ki tujhe sab sach pta lag gya hai… main maafi chahunga ki maine tujhse ye sab chhipaya. Aisa nahi hai ki hamne prayas nahi kiya tumhaare ateet k bare me janne ka par hame kuch pta nahi chal saka…. Pta hai jab hum apne bête ka antim sanskaar kar k laute to hame yahi darr sata rha tha ki kahi ab bête k baad beti ko bhi na kho du, muskaan ki jaan apne bhai me basti thi. Tabhi mujhe dr ka phone aaya aur usne mujhe tumhare bare me bataya.

Me – fir

Papa – fir jab dr ne bataya k tumhara face bilkul jal chukka hai aur tum koma me ho aur urgent tumhare chehre ki plastic surgery honi hai to maine dr ko kaha k agar hum tumhe ajay ka chehra de de to jab tak muskan ka operate nahi ho jata, use behlaya ja sakta hai. Aur is khatre ko tala ja sakta hai. Isiliye maine ye sab kiya.

Maa – chahe ye job hi kahe beta hamne tumhe apne dil se Ajay hi mana hai, kal jab tumhara koi pta nahi laga to main ye sochkar ghabra gayi ki kahin tum hame chhod k to nahi chale gaye sachhai janne k baad.

Me – maa aapko aise batane ya jatane ki jarurat nahi. Kya maine ye sab feel nahi kiya. Kya mai nahi janta ki aap dono jo mujhe itna pyar karte ho wo aapki sachhi feeling hai ya koi natak. Papa aap logo ne mujhe nayi jindgi di hai, aur jindgi dene wala pita hi hota hai to koi bojh apne dil par na rakhe aur ho sake to apne aashiwad ki ye chhaya mere sir par hamesha aise hi banaye rakhna.

Dono ne aise hi mujhe gale laga liya. Hum teeno ki hi aankhe nam thi.

Me – par dad ek ijajat mai aap dono se chahunga.

Papa – bol beta

Me – mai apne past ke bare me janna chahta hu. Aakhir kaun hu mai, kahan se aaya hu, kya naam hai mera…

Maa – beta tumhare papa ne bataya na ki unhone tumhare bare me pta karne ki bahut koshish ki par kuch pta nahi chala.

Me – par maa koi hai jiski madad se mai apne ateet k bare me jaan sakta hu.

Aur maine unhe baba aur unki baato k bare me bataya.

Papa – agar aisa hi hai beta to mai tumhe nahi rokunga par ye wada jarur chahunga k tum hame bhi na chhodo, yahin hamare sath raho.

Me – mai wada karta hu papa main apna sach jaankar yahin lautunga.

Papa ne ye kehte hue mujhe fir gale laga liya – theek hai beta main sab set kar dunga.

Fir kuch der baad jab hum brakefast table par ikatthe baithe they.

Papa – beta ajay , mai chahta hu ki tum kuch din k liye hamari Dehradun wali factory ka kaam dekh kar aao wahan kuch issues hain jo suljhane jiske liye tumhara ya mera wahan jana jaruri hai.

Muskaan – to aap chale jao papa, bhaiya kahin nahi jayenge.

Me – bad manners muskan. Mere hote hue papa ko preshaan hone ki kya jarurat hai. Aur fir main wahan rehne thode hi ja raha hu, bas kaam nipata kar jaldi hi wapis aa jaunga.

Muskaan – to fir promise karo aap wahan se daily mujhe phone karoge aur wapis aakar mujhe kam se kam ek hafta ghumaane le jaoge.

Me – ok promise

Bas fir kyat ha, Dehradun k bahane mai Rishikesh jaane ki taiyaari karne laga.

 

[Shanu]

Mindblowing update.........
keep posting bhai............
waiting for next update...........

 

[ashish_1982_in]

UPDATE 20

Bathroom se fresh hoke jab main nikla to mom k sath papa bhi mere room me baithe they.

Me – papa aap….. good morning papa… aaj aap dono mere room me. Matlab samajh nahi aaya.

Papa – beta…. darasal Dr ne mujhe kal hi bta diya tha ki tujhe sab sach pta lag gya hai… main maafi chahunga ki maine tujhse ye sab chhipaya. Aisa nahi hai ki hamne prayas nahi kiya tumhaare ateet k bare me janne ka par hame kuch pta nahi chal saka…. Pta hai jab hum apne bête ka antim sanskaar kar k laute to hame yahi darr sata rha tha ki kahi ab bête k baad beti ko bhi na kho du, muskaan ki jaan apne bhai me basti thi. Tabhi mujhe dr ka phone aaya aur usne mujhe tumhare bare me bataya.

Me – fir

Papa – fir jab dr ne bataya k tumhara face bilkul jal chukka hai aur tum koma me ho aur urgent tumhare chehre ki plastic surgery honi hai to maine dr ko kaha k agar hum tumhe ajay ka chehra de de to jab tak muskan ka operate nahi ho jata, use behlaya ja sakta hai. Aur is khatre ko tala ja sakta hai. Isiliye maine ye sab kiya.

Maa – chahe ye job hi kahe beta hamne tumhe apne dil se Ajay hi mana hai, kal jab tumhara koi pta nahi laga to main ye sochkar ghabra gayi ki kahin tum hame chhod k to nahi chale gaye sachhai janne k baad.

Me – maa aapko aise batane ya jatane ki jarurat nahi. Kya maine ye sab feel nahi kiya. Kya mai nahi janta ki aap dono jo mujhe itna pyar karte ho wo aapki sachhi feeling hai ya koi natak. Papa aap logo ne mujhe nayi jindgi di hai, aur jindgi dene wala pita hi hota hai to koi bojh apne dil par na rakhe aur ho sake to apne aashiwad ki ye chhaya mere sir par hamesha aise hi banaye rakhna.

Dono ne aise hi mujhe gale laga liya. Hum teeno ki hi aankhe nam thi.

Me – par dad ek ijajat mai aap dono se chahunga.

Papa – bol beta

Me – mai apne past ke bare me janna chahta hu. Aakhir kaun hu mai, kahan se aaya hu, kya naam hai mera…

Maa – beta tumhare papa ne bataya na ki unhone tumhare bare me pta karne ki bahut koshish ki par kuch pta nahi chala.

Me – par maa koi hai jiski madad se mai apne ateet k bare me jaan sakta hu.

Aur maine unhe baba aur unki baato k bare me bataya.

Papa – agar aisa hi hai beta to mai tumhe nahi rokunga par ye wada jarur chahunga k tum hame bhi na chhodo, yahin hamare sath raho.

Me – mai wada karta hu papa main apna sach jaankar yahin lautunga.

Papa ne ye kehte hue mujhe fir gale laga liya – theek hai beta main sab set kar dunga.

Fir kuch der baad jab hum brakefast table par ikatthe baithe they.

Papa – beta ajay , mai chahta hu ki tum kuch din k liye hamari Dehradun wali factory ka kaam dekh kar aao wahan kuch issues hain jo suljhane jiske liye tumhara ya mera wahan jana jaruri hai.

Muskaan – to aap chale jao papa, bhaiya kahin nahi jayenge.

Me – bad manners muskan. Mere hote hue papa ko preshaan hone ki kya jarurat hai. Aur fir main wahan rehne thode hi ja raha hu, bas kaam nipata kar jaldi hi wapis aa jaunga.

Muskaan – to fir promise karo aap wahan se daily mujhe phone karoge aur wapis aakar mujhe kam se kam ek hafta ghumaane le jaoge.

Me – ok promise

Bas fir kyat ha, Dehradun k bahane mai Rishikesh jaane ki taiyaari karne laga.

Nice update brother