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Aapka shayari bahut hi lajaawab hai ... Har scene aur condition me likh rahe hai aap. Wo bhi itna shaandaar.Dikhakar ek
jhalak,
woh apne
haathon se
likhna rok lete hai.
Taraste rehte
hain ham unke
update ko,
woh dil par
bijli girati chale
jate hai.
NOW
I think nisha ke papa shreya ka bataae gye
aur nisha ka reaction muskan hoga jaise hero nisha ko aage barhta daikh khush hota hai vaisa andar thora dukh bhi hoga but hero ki khusi ke aage nisha apne dukh ko mita de gi
its my point of view
Kahani me aapka swagat hai bhai...Tarsaane se hi sahi aap story me to aaye ...Saath bane rahiye bhai.Bhai ye kya kardiya yar aapne esa tarsana achanahi he bhai jaldi se update dedo
Thanks Prince bhai for your support and review...Nisha ki Papa ne jhoot to nahi bola...Unhe jitna pata tha unhone wo Nisha ko bataya...Aur makshad yahi tha ki Atul apni life me aage badh chuka hai to Nisha bhi aage badh jaaye...Saath bane rahiye bhai.Nice update Bhai. Lekin Nisha k papa ne jhootkyu Bola.
Likha nahi tha bhai next update...Warna send kar deta ...Next update will be posted asap.Yeahhh
mera guess sahi tha iss ke inam next update abhi mujhe personal msg me send kar do just jocking
galat fehmi huwi hai unhe read wo wala update jb nisha ke papa atul ke ghar gye the
Thoda nahi bhai jyada sahi tha ...Aise hi saath bane rahiye.Thoda thoda sahi tha na bhai mera guess.
Par bhai superb update.
Itna aashan situation bhi nahi tha bhai...Kis munh se wo Atul se ye sawal puchte? Wo Atul ke ghar tak tak gaye aur Atul ka saamna kar sake itna karne me bhi bahut himmat tha... Aur Atul ka body language aur situation aisa tha ki koi bhi aisa hi samajhta.Ye Nisha ka papa , papa nhi pagal hai yeda hai kisi se kuch pucha nhi bas jo dekha usme apna 10gm ka dimag lagake fir se villen ban gya anjane mai hi shi
Flashback abb jyada nahi hai...Preeti se related kuch events and Atul aur Nisha ka judaai ka scene.Bhai ye flashback kitne din Tak chlega yaa Puri story hi flashback pe aadharit hai,,,,thoda romance bhi do yaar sirf dard hi dard mil RHA hai,,,,
Thanks Hellohoney bhai for your support and review...Sahi vakt par sahi baaton ka khulasha hota rahega...Saath bane rahiye bhai.Behtarin bhai ab jalsi se sare khulase karo bhai waiting for next update