Thriller Kaun? (Completed)

[Aakash.]

You are showing different love chemistry, Sapna loves Amit, Amit loves Kajal and Kajal also loves Amit but Rohit loves Kajal and Sagar loves Sapna...
In today's update, Kajal broke Rohit's heart, though this is not always what we want. Rohit's mother is in the police and Amit's mother is a criminal lawyer.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...

 

[Bhaiya Ji]

आज पहली बार पढ़ना शुरू किया.. और एक ही बार में पढ़ डाला...

गुड गोइंग...

लिखते रहें ...

 

[Rahul]

waiting new update bhai ji

 

[humtum]

oooooo hoooooo.....
to rohit ke maal par kabja kiya hai amit ne
ab amit ki maa par kabja karna hai rohit............

lekin ispector bhalla to in sabse kameena hai............
wo to maal par bhi najar gada chuka hai....ab maa par gadayega

interesting .................aapka thriller likhne ka andaj bhi nirala hai
xossip par to apki koi kahani padh nahi paya...... aap, axba, rajesh aur ftk ,,,,, kahaniyo se jyada to nhb par rehte the
abki bar man laga ke padh raha hu.......... ye ftk ne HalfbludPrince ke nam se id banai hai kya

Erotic bhi banane ki koshish karunga.
Start kiya tha xp me likhna fir admin role ki bajah se time hi nahi mila.

 

[humtum]

so rohit ka apna hi dukhra liye baitha hain.
ek toh jishe chaaha dil se woh naa mili... upor se uski mummy ko bhi promotion nahin mil rahi hain....
hmm.... rohit janta hain ki chahe lakh koshish kar le kaajal k pyar ko pane ke liye par Kajal, Amit ki hi hoke rahegi ... phir bhi ek try to banti hain...
ek toh buri nazar gare huye hain janab indira k upor...... upor se bolte hain kya janab k Kajal ko hi chaaha hain...
Khair............

Let's see what happens next....
Brilliant update......... Great going.....

Koshish jari hai uski waise , lage rahna chahiye kya pata kab mauka mil jaye

 

[humtum]

wonderfull update rohit se is inspectorwa ki aisi taisi karwa deo bhai aur isko dono maal dila deo

Haan kuchh to karega ye launda

 

[humtum]

kaaaaaaaaaaaajal............ use kaise bhool sakta hu...................pehle usne Chutiyadr ki mari thi ab humtum bhai ki maregi

Kaun hai ye kajal waise , main to bas haal me hi aaya hu yahan

 

[humtum]

आज पहली बार पढ़ना शुरू किया.. और एक ही बार में पढ़ डाला...

गुड गोइंग...

लिखते रहें ...

Thanks dear , aate rahiye

 

[humtum]

waiting new update bhai ji

Kal tak ek do aur update chipkata hu

 

[humtum]

You are showing different love chemistry, Sapna loves Amit, Amit loves Kajal and Kajal also loves Amit but Rohit loves Kajal and Sagar loves Sapna...
In today's update, Kajal broke Rohit's heart, though this is not always what we want. Rohit's mother is in the police and Amit's mother is a criminal lawyer.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...

Thoda complex banane ki koshish kar raha hu due to suspense in plot
Hope you like it.