• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Thriller Kaun? (Completed)

humtum

Well-Known Member
3,423
6,829
143
Ab rohit ki bhi prem kahani ka revenge angle samne a jayega.....

kajal se pyar...

Ye Chutiyadr wali afat....
Apne bhi pal li... Ab jhelo...

Bechari indira verma ke sapno ko tod diya

Yahan kuchh nahi karegi kaajal:D
 

humtum

Well-Known Member
3,423
6,829
143
Update 6 I felt a bit fast and it should be because Kajal is missing and it is very important to find it before something goes wrong. Both Payal and Indira are searching for the same person and he is Bhalla, Bhalla will not hide much longer and Sagar has also helped in all these things, so he too will be trapped. According to me everything is going well, now let us see what happens next.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
:heart::heart::heart:
thanks for reply aakash:hug:
 

humtum

Well-Known Member
3,423
6,829
143
Agar likh chuke hai to best hai...

Dekhe humara guess thoda bahut match karta hai ki nhi....

Waiting....

Keep rocking......
thanks for reply:hug:
 
  • Like
Reactions: Aakash.

humtum

Well-Known Member
3,423
6,829
143
Behtareen update,
Shayad Rohit kajal ko paane ke liye to nahi involved hua.
Thanks for reply:hug:
 
  • Like
Reactions: Aakash.

AkashVani

New Member
95
186
33

Chapter Five : update 8


“ chachu aap kahan pe ho..abhi tak nahi pahuche” saagar ne Rajeev bhalla se call pe kaha



“beta main raste me hi hu…” Rajeev bhall ne use apna position bataya


“ are kya chachu , aap to mere se pahle nikle the na fir kahan ruk gaye” saagar ne nahi socha tha ki uske uncle late se aayenge



“ main yehi delhi me apni ek item ke saath hu…tum ne kahan rakha hai use” Rajeev ne saagar se kaha



“ abhi to usko godown bale cabin me rakh ke ghar pe hu” saagar ne kaha


“ koi aur to nahi hai na wahan pe” Rajeev ne us se janna chaha


“ nahi raat me koi nahi tha aur abhi uski chabhi mere paas hai…soch raha tha bapu ko bata du” saagar ne use bataya


“ thik hai tab , bata de bhai ko aur pahuch ke dekh kaisi hai vo…main bhi delhi se nikal chuka hu” Rajeev ne use aage kya karna hai bataya


Saagar subah sabere apne ghar pe pahuch gaya tha aur usne kaajal ko godown me rakh aaya tha, apne ghar pe kisi ko batana nahi chahta tha lekin fir use laga ki apne pita , jise vo bapu kehta tha bata de. Usne apne chacha se poochhi ye baat aur usne bhi haan kar di to sabse pahle vo apne bapu ke paas gaya aur use bataya ki usne kaise aur kyon ye kidnap kiya hai.



“ laundiya maal hai kya? “ Naveen bhalla uski baat puri sunte hi bola



“ kya bapu aap bhi ….ye sab” saagar ko bura laga ye sunke



“ are maal hai to bata , bahut din se sala lund saaf nahi kiya hai..kar lenge..aur eska bura kyon maan raha hai..koyi lagti hai hai kya teri” Naveen bhalla ne uski taraf dekha aur hasne laga.


Naveen bhalla jo Rajeev ka bhai aur saagar ka baap tha , abhi bhi solid body ka malik tha aur kisi pehalwan ki tarah lagta tha.uski badi badi muchhe use aur khatarnak sakhsiyat ka malik banata tha. Usne pyjama aur baniyan pehna hua tha au res samay chai pi raha tha apne dalan pe baithe huye. Subah ka samay tha aur kisi ne nasta bhi nahi kiya tha. Saagar ko pata nahi kyon apne baap ke muh se aisi baten kaajal ke liye achhi nahi lagi, kuchh bhi ho kaajal uski dost thi etne samay se.


“ are chhor ye sab, vo to hum dekh lenge..chal nasta kar le pahle” navven ne apne bete ko nasta karne ko kaha jo ek ladki uske paas rakh ke gayi thi.



“ chhoti, kuchh khana pack bhi kar dena…mujhe le jana hai” saagar ne aawaj lagai aur apne baap ke saath baith ke nasta karne laga.


“ haan khana khila ke rakh usko , sehat kharab nahi honi chahiye chhori ki”Naveen ne khana khate huye kaha.


“ bapu, aap bhi na vo meri dost hai…chachu ka koi plan hai esliye maine use uthaya hai…lekin uske saath kuchh galat ka mat socho please” saagar ne apne baap ko samjhaya.


“ are kya baat hai..pyar karta hai kya tu us se .. chal koi na, tu maze le ..hum apna lund kahi aur saaf kar lenge” Naveen apne hi andaaz me bola aur hasne laga.



Kahna finish karke saagar , kaajal ke liye bhi nasta pack karba ke saath me godown le gaya ..uska godown sehar se dur tha aur sunsaan jagah pe tha. Uske charo taraf khet the aur main road se wahan tak jane ki ek kachhi sarak thi. Saagar ne wahan pahuch kea gal bagal dekha aur kisi ko na dekh usne gate khola aur andar chala gaya aur andar se darwaja band kar diya.


Vo aage badha, usne dekha ki kaajal chauki ke upar leti thi aur uske hath bandhe the aur muh pe tep laga hua tha. Uske cabin me kuchh chair aur ek table aur ek chauki thi aur usne us chauki pe bed laga ke kaajal ko uske upar lita diya tha ki use jayda problem na ho.


Kaajal us time jagi huyi thi aur saagar ko dekh ke uthne ki koshish kar rahi thi, vo ye janna chahti thi ki usne aisa kyo kiya. Kaajal loose t-shirt aur capri pehne huye thi sur uski solid body ka pura ehsas ho raha tha, uske sare ubhar un kapro me mehsus kiye ja sakte the. Jis time saagar uske ghar pe pahucha tha vo sone ki koshish kar rahi thi aur usi night dress me saagar use yahan utha laya tha.



Saagar uske paas gaya aur usne tiffin ka dabba table pe rakha aur usne aage badh ke kaajal ke muh se tape hataya , use laga bhi ki vo kuchh bolna chahti hai.


“ ye sab kya hai saagar , tum aisa kar sakte ho…hum dost hai etne time se”kaajal uspe bharak uthi. Uske hath bandhe the nahi to usko thappad bhi raseed kar deti.



“ mujhe maaf karna kaajal mujhe ye karna para tha…aur main abhi kuchh nahi bata sakta…tumhare liye khana laya hu..bhookhi hogi..khana kha lo” saagar ne tiffin me se rohit aur sabzi nikal ke uske muh ke samne kiya.


“ main nahi khaungi ye sab…tum mera hath kholo aur mujhe pahle ye batao ki aisa kyo kar rahe ho mere saath” kaajal ne us se sabal kiya aur saagar ko uske sabal se koi matlab nahi tha aur usne vo nibala uske muh ke andar jabardasti rakh diya.



“ tum kha lo pahle, jaldi sab pata chal jayega” saagar ne dusra niwala banaya aur use khilane laga. Kaajal ke aankho se aansu chhalak uthe aur kisi tarah usne niwala gale ke niche kiya. Lekin usne koi virodh nahi kiya , usko bhi bhookh lagi thi.



To be continued…

Awesome update:claps:
 
  • Like
Reactions: Aakash. and humtum
Top