Thriller Kaun? (Completed)

[humtum]

Nice thriller story bhai

Thanks dear

 

[humtum]

New story start kar do bhai incest adultery

Abhi man nahi kar raha kuchh likhne ka

 

[humtum]

Bhai indra ka to accha raha...
but rohit ki mom ka...use to idea hi nhi ki uska beta sab jaan chuka...ye maa-bete ke saamne open hota to aur accha....

Well....honestly....sach a great story nd narration.....

Thanks......

Thanks Ankit

 

[humtum]

jo mila utna hi bahut hai..................

humtum bhai ko ki unhone itni mehnat aur lagan se pahli story complete ki bina latkaye

Thanks kamdev bhai

 

[humtum]

Hahaha....well said....

Thanks HT ...hope we will see another one soon....

Abhi doctor wali finish karta hu pahle

 

[humtum]

No matter how many mistakes Sagar may have made, but he tried to save the honor of Kajal, I loved it, at least something good happened. It was not successful, that's another matter.
Bhalla was resorting to Kajal to save his life like a coward. The love chemistry you showed in the beginning now makes sense. Everything happened because of love. Rohit wanted to force Kajal's love and love could not be forced.
Mother and son gave death to both brothers, I am very happy to know that this should happen to such people. The first scene of the story is also being understood now. Indira did well by telling Amit the truth.
Today, due to all your hard work, this story has become good. Finally everything went well I am very happy with it. Everything from the beginning of the story to the last update was very good. I liked your story very much. I am impressed with your writing. I hope you will come to us soon with a new story. Thank You...
...KAUN...

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Thanks for all support through your detailed review of every update.

 

[humtum]

Thread Title Changed On Ts's Request.

Regards
Siraj Patel

I know you are busy in many work but kuchh reply to de hi sakte the story padh ke.

 

[Rahul]

I know you are busy in many work but kuchh reply to de hi sakte the story padh ke.

ht bhai bahut jaldi end kar diya yaar abhi bahut game tha isme

 

[Raanjhanaa]

https://xforum.live/threads/end-with-start.11050/ Super

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Abhi doctor wali finish karta hu pahle

Jaroor...update kab jaroge.....