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Thriller Kaun? (Completed)

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Chapter Five : update 12


“ maine kuchh nahi kiya hai job hi kiya hai vo rohit ne kiya hai” saagar ne apna muh khola aur payal jo samajh nahi pa rahi thi ki kaise usne rohit ka naam liya


“ kaise esme rohit involve tha, mujhe bataoge tum” payal ne use roka, police wale jo use kheech ke le ja rahe the vo ruk gaye


“ ye mujhse mila tha pub me last month , wahan pe jaan pehchan huyi aur ese pata chala ki main amit ka jigdi hu..esme mujhse amit ke love interest kaajal ki baat ki aur mujhse sab kuchh jaan liya..esne mere bare me shayad sab kuchh pata kiya aur mere ghar pe aaya…mujhe laga ki ye mujhse milne aaya hai lekin asal me ye kavita se milne aaya tha, chuki ese pata tha ki main bhi usi flat me rahta hu to mere kamre pe aaya aur mujhe amit ke liye bharkane laga…sach baat thi ki sapna jise main bahut time se chahta tha amit ki wajah se mujhe bhav nahi deti thi…amit kaajal se alag tha aur use lagta tha ki es samay amit sapna ko apna lega..vo espe itni fida thi ki meri taraf sochne ka mauka hi nahi mila..ye sari baten rohit bhi jaan gaya tha…usne mujhe ye bataya ki kaajal bhi amit ki wajah se use nahi mil pa rahi hai.” Saagr bolte huye ruka aur usne rohit ki taraf dekha aur fir kaajal ki taraf bhi. Amit se najar nahi mila pa raha tha.


“….usne mujhe ek plan me shamil hone ke liye kaha jisme ye tha ki kisi tarah se amit ko fasaya ja sake aur agar main aisa karta hu to amit uske bhi raste se hat jayega aur mere bhi. Main maan gaya,aur esne mujhe sapna ke birthday ke din milne ka bola lekin ye nahi bataya ki usme kavita bhi shamil hai, kavita meri bhi dost thi aur maine uska aur amit ka Milan bhi karwaya tha jis time amit kaajal se alag hoke bahut akela mehsus kar raha tha, mere ghar ki party me mila tha” abki baar saagar amit ki taraf dekha aur bolte huye ruk gaya



“ aura age batao” payal khanna ne use aage batane ko kaha


“ mujhe koi plan nahi bataya tha rohit ne bas wait karne ko bola tha aur sham me mujhe ek call aaya ki kavita ki dead body uske room me pari hai aur mujhe use nikal ke apne car me rakhni hai aur party me kisi tarah se amit ke car me shift kar deni hai use...maine eske liye pahle mana kar diya kyoki khoon hua tha aur main fas sakta tha lekin maine socha ki apne chachu se baat kar lu aur unko call kiya usne mujhe aage badhne ko bola aur kaha ki main unse one crore ki demand karu..maine waise hi kiya aur rohit pahle to utne paise ke liye nahi mana lekin uske father jo businessman the unhone accept kar liya aur 50 lakh usi time hamare account me transfer kar diya aur baki amit ke jail jane ke baad dene ka wada kiya.” Saagar fir ruka aur rohit ki taraf dekhne laga, jo apni najare niche kiye huye tha, payal ajeeb najro se rohit ko dekh rahi thi.


“ rohit ne shayad kavita ka murder soch samajh ke kiya tha ya galti se ho gaya lekin maine uske body ko uske bedroom se nikal ke sare nishan us kamre se mitaye aur apne car me daal ke party me gaya, Rajeev chachu pahle se hi ready the us raat duty pe jo unhone jaan bujh kar liya tha…jab party me amit fight karne laga us samay eski key gir gayi thi aur maine use le liya aur samay dekhke amit ki car me kavita ke body ko shift kar diya aur fir uski key uske pocket me daal di, vo nashe me tha aur ye sab jaan nahi paya, hum dono ek do baar gale bhi mile the aur mujhe mauka mil gaya tha. Bas maine etna hi galat kiya tha” saagar ne apni baat finish ki.


“ tumne aur bhi jurm kiye hai, mere security guard ko goli mari hai tumne ..uski saza to milegi tumhe” payal ne uske pure gunah nahi lekin baki ke kuchh aur bata diye..use pata chal gaya tha ki raat uski izzat se khelne wala aur koi nahi saar aur Rajeev bhalla hi the, lekin usne apne rape ka case nahi lagaya.


“ vo mam….sorry mujhse galti ho gayi, main chachu ki baton me aa gaya tha” saagar apna sar niche kiye huye bola



“ aur rohit tum apni baat bataoge ki tumne aisa kyon kiya?” Indira ne rohit ki taraf gusse se dekhte huye kaha, usko apne aap pe bhi gussa aa raha tha ki kiss insaan ke saath usne vo sab kar liya.rohit samajh chukka tha ki vo ghir chukka hai aura b bachna muskil hai, uski mom use nahi chhoregi bhale hi uske papa usko bachane ki kitni bhi koshish kare.



“ main kaajal ko chahta tha aur kaajal amit ko , ye main janta tha ..jab dono alag huye uske pichhe bhi mera hi hath tha, maine hi us ladki ko amit ke paas bheja tha aur kaajal ko bataya ..kaajal sach samajh nahi payi aur amit se relation finish kar liya..mujhe laga kaam ho gaya lekin main galat tha alag hoke bhi kaajal amit se kabhi bhi alag nahi huyi, usne hamesha mujhe apne paas aane se roka aur har baar amit ki baat bolti…maine bhi edhar udhar muh marna suru kiya, kisi aur ko khojne laga…kavita mili, achhi lagi aur main uske saath khus tha, lekin achhank se saagar se pata chala ki amit aur kavita ne saath me raat gujare …main ye sunke jaise pagal sa ho gaya…main kaajal ko kuchh time ke liye bhool gaya tha lekin fir se amit ne mujhe chot pahuchai thi, main us dard ko jhel nahi paya aur mujhe kavita ke upar bhi bahut gussa tha..fir maine plan banaya…” rohit bolte huye ruka aur payal ki taraf dekhne laga, uski aankho se aansu nikal rahe the, payal bhi uska dard samajh sakti thi lekin vo kisi khooni ki maa banna pasand nahi kar sakti thi.



Rohit us din ka kissa batane laga……


Dophar ko rohit , kavita ke apartment me pahucha ..usne pahle hi bol diya tha kavita ko ki use milna hai…kavita ke liye uska pyar bhi kuchh kuchh ek tarfa hi tha , aaj tak kavita ne bhi use dost hi mana tha use apne bahut kareeb nahi aane diya tha lekin use amit aur kavita ke bare jo baat pata chali vo use pacha nahi pa raha tha aur aaj kuchh soch ke hi us se milne jar aha tha. Use ye bhi pata chala tha ki kavita abhi bhi amit ke pichhe padi hai aur uske saath dosti karna chahti hai…gussa aur tha ki usme kya kami hai ki Sali sab ladkiyan amit kea age pichhe hi chakkar lagana chahti hai.


Jab rohit uske flat pe pahucha to kavita usi ka wait kar rahi thi.


“ kya baat hai jo es samay milne ko bola” kavita ne us se kaha


“ tumhari yaad aa rahi thi , main kya karta” rohit ne us se kaha


“ majak mat karo rohit…tumhe kaha na maine mujhe kuchh aur time chahiye decide karne ke liye” kavita boli aur kitchen me chali gayi rohit ke liye pani lane…aur rohit bhi uske pichhe kitchen me chala gaya.


“ are tum yahan kyo aaye ho” kavita ne use kitchen me dekh ke kaha


“ kya karu, control nahi hota tumko dekh ke” rohit ne kaha aur use apne bahon me bhar liya. Kavita apne aapko uski bahon se chhurane ki koshish karti rahi aur usne apne hath ka pura jor lagaya lekin nakam rahi uske chehre ko nocha bhi lekin kuchh nahi ho paya.


Rohit use liye huye uske bedrrom me aaya aur use uske bed pe lita diya aur uske upar aa gaya aur bina samay gabaye usne apne dono hatho ko uske moti chuchiyon ko pakad ke dabane laga. Kavita dard se karah uthi lekin usne koi shor nahi machaya .lekin uske hath rohit ke upar chal rahe the aur vo use bura bhala bol rahi thi .vo bas chooro mujhe chhoro hi bolti rahi aur rohit uski chuchiyon ke saath khelta raha tha.


Rohit ko lag gaya ki vo halla nahi karegi aur usne uske kapre farne suru suru kar diye aur usi ke fate huye kapre uske muh me daal diye aur uske hath ko bed se baandh diya, use aisa esliye karna para tha kyoki usne apne nakhoon se uske chehre aur body ko luhluhan kar diya tha. Usne kavita ke bra ko bhi faar diya aur uski panty ko bhi , usko itna gussa tha ki uske har cheez me pyar nahi dikh raha tha .agle hi pal kavita uske samne nangi bed pe leti thi letin fati huyi bra aur panty me aur use vo bahut hi sexy lag rahi thi, usne apne kapro ko bhi khol ke fenka aur apne lambe aur tagde lund ko kavita ki chut se lagaya aur use andar dalta chala gaya, kavita dard aur excitement ke mile jule asar me karahati rahi lekin uski aawaj bahar nahi nikal pa rahi thi aur rohit uska pura maza leta raha.


Rohit tab tak kavita ke angon ke saath khelta raha jab tak ki uska pura maal kavita ke andar nikal na gaya…fir usne apne aapko kavita se alag kiya aur bed ke kinare baith gaya.usne kavita ke muh se kapda nikala aur uske hath bhi khol diye.kavita bhi uth ke baith gayi….tuffan aake ja chukka tha aur abhi sab kuchh saant sa ho gaya tha.


“ tumne ye kya kiya mere saath”


“ wahi jo tum dusro ke saath kar rahi thi”


“ main…..maine kisi dusre ke saath ye sab nahi kiya hai kabhi……”


“ tum sach nahi bol rahi ho aur aaj tak kabhi sach nahi bola, tum dagabaaaz ho…tum pe kisi ko bharosa nahi karna chahiye”


“ tumhe jo sochna hai soch lo lekin main waisi nahi hu jaisa tumne mere bare me soch rakha hai…aur agar kuchh bhi karu to tumhe kisne hak diya mere saath kuchh bhi galat karne ka..tumne jo aaj mere saath kiya hai, use main seh nahi sakti ..main sabko bataungi…tumko saza dilaungi ….tumhari himmat kaise huyi ye sab mere saath karne ki”


Dophar ka samay tha , aaj Wednesday tha aur dusre ghar me shayad hi koi aadmi hoga kyoki es society me har ghar me wife husband kaam karte hai aur es samay bachhe school me the ..ek tarah se security ko chhor de to shayad hi koi es apartment me hoga abhi.


Bed pe baithe huye kavita jiske body pe ek kapre ke naam pe uski fati huyi bra aur panty bhar thi aur uske bagal me baitha rohit bhi nanga hi tha usne upar to baniyan pehan rakhi thi lekin niche pura nanga tha.


Us room me charo taraf saman faila hua tha jaise kisi ne sab kuchh utha kar charo taraf feka ho, kavita ke dono madmast ubhar uske fate huye bra se bahar ko nikle huye the aur uspe ek do jagah khoon ki bunde bhi najar aa rahi thi aisa lag raha tha jaise uspe kisi ne apne nakhoon ya daant gara diye ho. Uske hotho pe lagi huyi lipistic uske chehre pe bhi faily huyi thi aur uske hotho pe halki si khoon ki bunde thi jaise kisi ne uske hotho ko bhi kata tha.


Rohit ki halat achhi nahi thi, uske chehre ko jaise kisi ne apne nakhono se kharocha tha aur saath me uske peeth pe bhi charo taraf kisi ne apne nakhoono ka nishan chhor rakha tha. Uske chehre aur peeth pe bhi khhon ki kuchh bunde najar aa rahi thi.


“ aaj mujhe apne dil pe pathhar rakh ke ye kaam karna hi padega”


“ ab kya karna baki reh gaya hai tumse , jaise aadmi ho abhi bhi yehi ho”


“ main aaj aise nahi jaoonga …..”


“ to ab aur kya karna hai tumhe….”


Rohit apni jagah se utha aur kitchen ki taraf gaya aur jab lauta to uske hath me knife tha aur use dekh ke kavita ke chehre ka rang hi peela pad gaya.


“ tum ye kya kar rahe ho..please kuchh bhi mat karna aisa “


“ ab mujhe ye batao, ki tum tarap tarap ke marna chahti ho ya aaram se” usne hath me pakde huye knife ko ghumate huye kaha.


“ nahi….nahi…tum aisa nahi karoge….tum ko chahiye le lo….lekin please mujhe mat maro..please”


kavita ne apne aapko us se dur karne ki bharpoor koshish ki lekin uske hath se dur na ja saki aur rohit ne apne hath me pakde knife ko kavita ke gale se lagaya aur jor se dabate huye kheech diya ,kavita chhekh bhi nahi payi aur uske gale se khoon ki dhar beh nikli , uski aankhe jaise bahar ko nikalne k oho gayi thi aur bed pe girke tarapne lagi, uske muh se aawaj nahi nikal pa rahi thi..vo kuchh bolna chahti thi..jitni vo koshish karti utna hi uska khoon uske gale se bahar ko nikalne lagta.


Agle kuchh pal tak rohit usko tarapte huye dekhta raha aur jaise hi use laga ki kavita shant ho gayi hai usne apne hath me lage huye khoon ko uske kapde se saaf karne laga.


“ bas yehi bacha tha uske aage saagar ne bata diya aapko” rohit ne apni puri baat bata di aur niche jhakne laga.


“ esko bhi hathkari lagao…lekin ye batao ki kya papa ne tumhe utna paisa es baat ke liye diya tha..unhe malum tha ye sab” payal ne kaha


“ sab mera kiya hai mom…aap papa ko esme mat lao…maine galat kiya hai mujhe uski saza milni chahiye aur kisi ko nahi…sorry amit mere paas aur koi rasta nahi tha aur kaajal mujhe maaf kar dena..meri wajah se tum dono ko ye sab jhelna pada hai” rohit ne kaha aur police wale ke saath nikal gaya.


Police team saagar aur rohit ko arrest karke nikal chuki thi, unhone bhalla brothers ki lash bhi utha li thi. Ab us godown me amit , kaajal, Indira aur payal the.


“ amit tumhe aur tumhari mom ko ghabrane ki jaroorat nahi hai..tumne jo kiya sahi kiya us samay..main ye baat chargesheet me nahi aane dungi…tum aur kaajal khus raho…kabhi koi problem ho to mujhe apni mom samajh ke hi aa jana…kash mera beta bhi tum jaisa hota” payal ne usne kaha aur unke saath bahar nikal gaye.



The End
 

humtum

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Fir se adhura.....

Bhai bola tha ki bhale hi time lo..ek sath likh dete.....

Well....mujhe climax ka intzar rahega....

Yaha to sab bahut jaldi hi nipat gaya...bhalla bandhu ko theek se saza hi nhi mil paai....afsos...

Aur ye baat bhi saamne aani chahiye ki rohit ki chal ke chakkar me wo khud ki maa ko chuda baitha .....tabhi saale ko samjh aayga ki kisi se jalane se kya nuksaan ho sakta hai....

Aur rohit ko kya saza milegi...???

Well...climax kab tak latkana hai....????

post kar diya
 
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Ankitshrivastava

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Climax accha tha..but meri iksha puri nhi hui....

Rohit ke saamne uski mom ka sach aur amit ke saamne uski mom ka sach aana hi chahiye tha....gunaah to wo bhi tha....

Rohit aur indra ko sharminda hona hi chahiye tha.....

Well...overall good story...next ke liye good luck....
 

kamdev99008

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Climax accha tha..but meri iksha puri nhi hui....

Rohit ke saamne uski mom ka sach aur amit ke saamne uski mom ka sach aana hi chahiye tha....gunaah to wo bhi tha....

Rohit aur indra ko sharminda hona hi chahiye tha.....

Well...overall good story...next ke liye good luck....
mera bhi yahi manna tha..................

indira ka na sahi................. payal ka jarur ana chahiye tha

jis attitude ke sath rohit ne kaha ki ismein papa se koi matlab nahi...
use ye bhi to pata chalna chahiye tha ki apne baap ko to usne bacha liya....
lekin uske plan aur uske sathiyon ne hi uski maa chod di...............

tab usko attitude ki jagah .................pachhtave ki feeling ati
 

humtum

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Puri police team godown pe pahuch chuki thi aur ek police van me pichhe rohit aur saagar ko bitha diya gaya tha, dono ek dusre ke bagal me the.


“ mere bapu aur chachu ne bhi amit aur uski mom ke saath galat kiya tha aur tumhari wajah se maine bhi uske saath galat hi kiya..vo kaun sa pal tha jab main tumse mila aur mere se aisa ho gaya…amit ek sacha dost tha mera aur maine uske saath..” saagar bolta chala gaya.


“ main samajh nahi paya ki main kya karte jar aha hu..har time wahi samne aa gaya aur maine ye sab kar dala…sorry “ rohit ne saagar ki taraf dekhte huye kaha.



Saagar apne hathkari me bandhe hath ko rohit ke kandhe pe rakha aur dhire se uske kaan ke paas aake bola


“ beta jaisi karni waisi bharni…tune jo mere se karbaya uska fal tujhe dusri tarah se bhi mila hai..main aur mere chachu teri mom ki aage aur pichhe se laga chuke hai…kal raat tere ghar pe kebal security guard hi nahi mara tha teri mom ka jabardat rape bhi hua tha..teri mom ne bataya nahi tujhe…ab tu ye soch soch ke na jail me hath saaf karna” saagar ne use bataya aur jor jor se hasne laga.


Rohit ka gussa satave aasaman pet ha usne saagar ko jor se dhakka mara aur vo chalti van me floor pe gira aur rohit uske upar baith ke uske muh aur sine pe apne dono jure hatho se ghuse barsane laga. Saath me baithe police walon ne unhe hataya aur dono ko alag alag bithaya.



Udhar payal khanna aage aage kaajal ke saath jeep ki taraf badhi aur Indira aur amit pichhe se us godown se bahar nikle ..indira ko es baat ki khusi thi ki aaj uska barso pahle ka badla pura hua to dusri taraf use es baat ke liye aatmaglani ho rahi thi ki usne kaise rohit ke saath ye sab kar liya…use laga ki amit ko sach bata deni chahiye.



“ amit mujhe tumko kuchh baat batani thi” Indira ne us se dhire se kaha


“ kya baat mom?” amit ruk gaya apni mom ki baat sunne ko



“ kal jab tum ghar pe nahi the aur rohit aaya tha …usne kuchh kiya aur pata nahi main uske saath…..mujhe galti ho gayi….mujhe apne aap pe control rakhna chahiye tha” Indira ne apne man ka bojh halka kiya



“ to kya usne aapke saath bhi galat kiya” amit ko ye baat sunke rohit pe aur gussa aa raha tha.



“ kuchh jyada nahi lekin job hi hua usme meri bhi bhagidari thi..main tumse ye baat chhupa sakti thi..lekin maine socha ki tumhe bata du” Indira ne apna sar niche karte huye kaha


Amit ne kuchh nahi bola aura age badh gaya lekin use bahut bura laga ye sunke…aur apne aapko samjhane laga ki galti ho sakti hai usne bhi bahut galtiyan ki hai..use bhi kavita ke saath vo sab nahi karna chahiye tha …thanks to kaajal ki usne use maaf kar diya aur yehi soch ke usne bhi apni mom ki baat ko bhula dena hi sahi samjha.


Payal ne apni gadi start ki aur use jahan es baat ki khusi thi ki jisne uske saath bura kiya uske bura hua lekin apne bete rohit ke liye vo asmanjas me thi. Rohit ke bare me sochte huye usne gadi aage badha di aur uske saath baki log bhi wahan se nikal pare.

 
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