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Fantasy KD- IN Search of family(journey begins)

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Black water

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Awesome update
 

Reza

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Update 13

so dekho bhai log....mere ko samjh aa rha kisi ko ye story psnd h ya nhi .... issiliye m aese updt krta hu.....kiuki jb stry mere ko hee parh n h.....toh kiya pharakh parta h....ki updt late kiu aa rha h......kiuki meri prblm slove hoo chuki h......chlo choro.......so jaisa ki pichle updt m parha maine .......y hua tha .....ab aage dekhte h iss jrny m ...
...
aab aaage

sura jamin p paara hua tha.....uss ki ruuh uska sarir s iss sansr m bilupt ho chuki thi.....jisse dekh k hr koi hairan pareshan tha......stdnts aur teacher pareshaan the ki.....unke clg m ek khoon hua h....wahi sura k baaki sathi hairan the ki y kya abhi.....

Wahi saka murga baana bhaukh rha tha ....usski aankhne niche jamin p thi.....usse paata tha ....ki agr RAVAN yaha h ...toh koi baat jrur hogi......

aur uss m itni himat nhi ki woh uss k smne bhi dekh ske ya uss s kuch puch ske...

wahi unn bhir m s ek ladki n police aur ambulance ko bula liya tha ...

aur apne aadat k anusr police hamesa last aayi amblnce k sath..... amblnce sare jhaki aur sura k dead body le gayi.....phir ek aur amblnce m depak ko bhi l jaya gya .....

police wle kuch nhi kr rhe the....kiuki unhe pata chal chuka tha ki yaha saka k logo n kisi ko mrn k plan banaya tha .....

Par jb uss n sura ki lash dekhi toh woh khud dar gya thi ki saka ke sbse bafadar bande ki lash yaha paari thi ....

Aur saka waha murga bana baitha baang d rha tha.....

kisi bike p lete launde k ssmne

par woh kuch n kiya aur chup chap nikl gya ......

idhar

KD- chal aw aese hee bhokte hue nikl yha s

saka apna sr ha m hilaya aur waise hee bhokte hue nikl gya ....

sre log soch rhe the ki y kia hua abhi....

KD- niklo b sb ....ab tamasha khtm......packupppp....

sb log KD ki bhari bharkm chetavni s .....sb log nikl liye....

wahi KD bhi apni bullet l ke nikl gya ...

Dusri trf

kahi dur ek ghar k landline baaj rha tha.....

ek admi n phone uthaya..

admi- hello kaun

unknown- tumra pota .....iss hospital m bhrti h.....

admi- hlo hlo hlo kaun bol rha h .....

............
Vai fantastic update
Vai update thora joldi diya koro
 

Ashu1345

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Update 13

so dekho bhai log....mere ko samjh aa rha kisi ko ye story psnd h ya nhi .... issiliye m aese updt krta hu.....kiuki jb stry mere ko hee parh n h.....toh kiya pharakh parta h....ki updt late kiu aa rha h......kiuki meri prblm slove hoo chuki h......chlo choro.......so jaisa ki pichle updt m parha maine .......y hua tha .....ab aage dekhte h iss jrny m ...
...
aab aaage

sura jamin p paara hua tha.....uss ki ruuh uska sarir s iss sansr m bilupt ho chuki thi.....jisse dekh k hr koi hairan pareshan tha......stdnts aur teacher pareshaan the ki.....unke clg m ek khoon hua h....wahi sura k baaki sathi hairan the ki y kya abhi.....

Wahi saka murga baana bhaukh rha tha ....usski aankhne niche jamin p thi.....usse paata tha ....ki agr RAVAN yaha h ...toh koi baat jrur hogi......

aur uss m itni himat nhi ki woh uss k smne bhi dekh ske ya uss s kuch puch ske...

wahi unn bhir m s ek ladki n police aur ambulance ko bula liya tha ...

aur apne aadat k anusr police hamesa last aayi amblnce k sath..... amblnce sare jhaki aur sura k dead body le gayi.....phir ek aur amblnce m depak ko bhi l jaya gya .....

police wle kuch nhi kr rhe the....kiuki unhe pata chal chuka tha ki yaha saka k logo n kisi ko mrn k plan banaya tha .....

Par jb uss n sura ki lash dekhi toh woh khud dar gya thi ki saka ke sbse bafadar bande ki lash yaha paari thi ....

Aur saka waha murga bana baitha baang d rha tha.....

kisi bike p lete launde k ssmne

par woh kuch n kiya aur chup chap nikl gya ......

idhar

KD- chal aw aese hee bhokte hue nikl yha s

saka apna sr ha m hilaya aur waise hee bhokte hue nikl gya ....

sre log soch rhe the ki y kia hua abhi....

KD- niklo b sb ....ab tamasha khtm......packupppp....

sb log KD ki bhari bharkm chetavni s .....sb log nikl liye....

wahi KD bhi apni bullet l ke nikl gya ...

Dusri trf

kahi dur ek ghar k landline baaj rha tha.....

ek admi n phone uthaya..

admi- hello kaun

unknown- tumra pota .....iss hospital m bhrti h.....

admi- hlo hlo hlo kaun bol rha h .....

............
Bhai ek baat bolu
Apki story bahut jyada sundar hai
Mere mumbai ke launguage me bolu to
Bahut hard hai
Or aap daily update diya kro plzz
 

Aryanv

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Update 13

so dekho bhai log....mere ko samjh aa rha kisi ko ye story psnd h ya nhi .... issiliye m aese updt krta hu.....kiuki jb stry mere ko hee parh n h.....toh kiya pharakh parta h....ki updt late kiu aa rha h......kiuki meri prblm slove hoo chuki h......chlo choro.......so jaisa ki pichle updt m parha maine .......y hua tha .....ab aage dekhte h iss jrny m ...
...
aab aaage

sura jamin p paara hua tha.....uss ki ruuh uska sarir s iss sansr m bilupt ho chuki thi.....jisse dekh k hr koi hairan pareshan tha......stdnts aur teacher pareshaan the ki.....unke clg m ek khoon hua h....wahi sura k baaki sathi hairan the ki y kya abhi.....

Wahi saka murga baana bhaukh rha tha ....usski aankhne niche jamin p thi.....usse paata tha ....ki agr RAVAN yaha h ...toh koi baat jrur hogi......

aur uss m itni himat nhi ki woh uss k smne bhi dekh ske ya uss s kuch puch ske...

wahi unn bhir m s ek ladki n police aur ambulance ko bula liya tha ...

aur apne aadat k anusr police hamesa last aayi amblnce k sath..... amblnce sare jhaki aur sura k dead body le gayi.....phir ek aur amblnce m depak ko bhi l jaya gya .....

police wle kuch nhi kr rhe the....kiuki unhe pata chal chuka tha ki yaha saka k logo n kisi ko mrn k plan banaya tha .....

Par jb uss n sura ki lash dekhi toh woh khud dar gya thi ki saka ke sbse bafadar bande ki lash yaha paari thi ....

Aur saka waha murga bana baitha baang d rha tha.....

kisi bike p lete launde k ssmne

par woh kuch n kiya aur chup chap nikl gya ......

idhar

KD- chal aw aese hee bhokte hue nikl yha s

saka apna sr ha m hilaya aur waise hee bhokte hue nikl gya ....

sre log soch rhe the ki y kia hua abhi....

KD- niklo b sb ....ab tamasha khtm......packupppp....

sb log KD ki bhari bharkm chetavni s .....sb log nikl liye....

wahi KD bhi apni bullet l ke nikl gya ...

Dusri trf

kahi dur ek ghar k landline baaj rha tha.....

ek admi n phone uthaya..

admi- hello kaun

unknown- tumra pota .....iss hospital m bhrti h.....

admi- hlo hlo hlo kaun bol rha h .....

............
Fantastic update
 
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Waah Bhai ...kaisa julm krte ho. Bahut din bad update v aate hai or padhna suru hi Kiya update khtm ho gya...
I know updt are sml..... wait for some time.....
 
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