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Fantasy KD- IN Search of family(journey begins)

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update 15

so guys jaisa kha tha......ek aur update likha rha hu......iss part k .....y 'c' section k ant hone wala h.....uske baad KD k pichle jivan k pata chlega ....

abb aage

jagdeep aur uska pura parivar OT k bahar khade doc k bhr Anne k intizar kr rhe the......jha sari aurte roh rhi thi whi ......jagdeep k gussa asmaan chu rha tha ....

tabhi doc OT s bhr nikle

jagdeep- abb kaisa h mera pota doc shb

doc- abb bilkul thik h.....bas kuch chote aayi thi ....humne unn p dressing kr dee.....h ......ab woh bilkul thik h kl aap usse dischrge krwa skte h .....pr unki paatiyo ko badlwate rahiye g

Jagdeep- sukriya doc shb

doc- y toh mera farz tha Thakur shb.....app k pote ko private room m shift kr diya h app unse mill skte h

sb log doc k sukriya aada krte hue ......

deepak s milne jaate h

sbhi depak k hal chal puch k usse wahi gher lete h .....aur puri ghatna k baare m puchne lgte h

jagdeep- tumne saka ko kiu jinda chor diya.....mere sher......sura k sath usse bhi mr dete

deepak- dada ji mr toh m usse bhi deta pr .....woh mujh s lada hee nhi .....woh toh murga baana bhokh rha tha

Suresh- kia mtlb

deepak- papa ......woh .....mere dost k daar s aesa kr rha tha ......

Jagdeep- kaun dost beta

deepak- usska nm toh KD h .....pr woh apna nm hr br kisi ko kuch aur baatata h ......

Urmila- y bhala kaisa ladka h bhala aese koi nm thori badlta ....h....usske ma baap n usska nm kitna pyar s rkha hoga...

deepak- shyd woh aanath h dadi......

urmila- bechara .....koi nhi beta usse bula n ....hum usse milna chahenge

Jagdeep- h usse bula loh.....woh yha bhi nhi h.....tumhara dost h toh tumhre paas hone chahiye tha usse

deepak- woh aazeeb h dada ji.....maur sbse jada toh m .....saka k khe uss baaat s parshan hu

suresh- kaun see baat beta

deepak- uss ne KD ko .......kisi aur nm s pukra tha .......kia nm tha....
......h...ha......hmmm.....h.....yd aaya ......RAVAN....h yahi kha tha ussne

jagdeep- kia kha tumne.....shayd maine galt nm suna......

deepak- RAVAN ......dada ji ....saka usse yhi keh rha tha ......woh usse bahut jaada drta h .....Jaise koi haivan aa gya h ......uss jaisa paapi bhi ...kisi s drta h .....y mujhe aaj pata chala

jagdeep- darna bhi chahiye ....beta ......RAVAN k ithihas .....sirf haivaniyt s bhara hua h......mujhe jindagi m pheli baar jisne daar k mtlb smjhya tha mujhe woh h.....RAVAN......usska ithihas lassho aur khoono s bhari hui h......ravanpur k ....RAVAN h

deepak- aap mjk kr rhe n dada ji.....woh toh kbk mr gya tha......

Jagdeep- nhi woh maara nhi ....tha.....usse kisi k pyaar n badl diya tha ......aur saka siwaye usske kisi aur s nhi drta h......woh usska sbse aacha dost hua krta tha ......

deepak- phir

jagdeep- phir ......usse waps haivan baanne p majbur kiya tha ....meri ek glti aur ...saka k dhoke n ....

Deepak- aesa kia hua tha dada ji....

Sb log jagdeep aur deepak k baat bine kuch bole sunn rhe the .....unhe iss sb k baare m kuch pata nhi tha....

jagdeep- woh phir kbhi baataunga .....aaj sb log yhi rehenge aur kl shubha hee hum yha s niklenge....

phir suresh n sb k whi rehne k intizm kiya

dusri tarf

meera- hlo ....

admi- beti m bol rha hu ....jagdeep

meera- prnam pita ji....aaj apne kaise yd kiya sb thik toh h n....

jagdeep- khush rho beti .....beti......depak p humla hua tha ....jis s usse RAVAN n bachya.....

meera- hmm toh RAVAN wps aa gya h ....kha h app...

jagdeep- **** iss shar k ** hospital m h hum log.....mujhe dr h ....RAVAN mere pure parivar ko khtm krne k liye lauta h.....

meera- app fikr mt kriye .....pita ji .....m kl shubha wha pahuch jaungi.....aur waise bhi RAVAN ....apna waada nhi torega......jb tk woh apna wda nhi pura krega tb tk ....woh tlwr nhi uthayega ...

jagdeep- pr mujhe lgta h ussne woh kr diya h .....

meera- m aaa rhi hu.....agr aesa h toh app security bhra lijiye ......kiuki agr ussne apna wada pura kiya h toh RAVAN phir tabhi machake mnega .....

jagdeep- tum jnti ho agr smne RAVAN ho toh .....1000 logo ki fauz bhi km pr jye .....
beti tum jldi s tha aaaoo

meera- m aa rhi hu.....app shubha jitne jldi hoo ske utne jldi wha s nikl jaiyega...

jagdeep- thik h beti.....

.......
Baat khtm hone k baad dono hee akhono s need koso dur thi....jagdeep ko apne pariwar ki chinta thi....kiuki RAVAN ki haivaniyt s woh aache s wakif tha...

udhar meera bhi apne private jet s nikl chuki thi .....iss bakt woh duniya k dusre kone m ....ek meeting kr k apne ghr j rhi thi .....tbhi ussko jagdeep k phn aaya tha....

subha at 6AM

sb log jldi jldi uth k gaon jne k liye niklne wle the ....

abhi y log car k paas pahuche n hee wle the ki.....

ek sath saari gariya blast kr gayi

waha dhua hee dhua fail gya tha .....

jagdeep ki halat khrabh hoo rhi thi......usse ...smjh aa gya tha .....ki.....kaun aa rha h...

wahi sre log joh jagdeep k sath aaye the woh log jagdeep aur uske family walo ko gher k khre the...wha 1000 s jaada log the......

suresh- kaun h smne aao.....

ki tabhi dhue m ek aksh dikha

suresh- kaun ho tum...

"RAVANA "

.....
.......to be continued
 

Ashu1345

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update 14
So guys ....as review says some guys really like my story writting......as I like my slef.......so ....for them .....guys wait for some time .... update will soon posted on regular basis........
so jaisa ki pichle updt m parh liya app sb n .....

aab aage

admi tezi s chila rha tha phn pkra pr udhar s phn cut chuka tha

Admi k awaz sunn k ghar k saare log bahar aagye the

admi2- kia hua pita ji......

Admi- suresh .....jldi kro ....sbb ko khao ki Tyr hoo jye.....humre pote ....depak pr humla hua h ......

suresh- kis ki itni himmat hoo gyi joh mere bete p humla kre....

Jagdeep- smay nhi h .....jldi kro

idhar sari aurto k rina dhona suru hoo chuka tha....

par ghar k mard Tyr hoo rhe the hathiyar aur baaki smane gaari m dal k......pura parivar ravaana hua hospital ki taraf.....jaise ek gaon utha k j rha ho......100 s jaada gariya ek line m daur rhi thi .....jiss m s aage Jagdeep k bodyguard k car thi phir uski family ki ......phir baaki unnke chahane walo ki .....trackter .....truck .....jisko joh mila woh hee utha k gariyo m baithe gye the......jaise koi andhi si aaa gyi thi ......

jha s bhi y kafila niklta log side hote j rhe the .....itne logo ko hathiyar liye jaate dekh sb ....ki faate j rhi thi

Wahi police aur parshashn m bhi harkmp macha hua tha...

unhe bhi pata chl chuka tha .......ki Jagdeep thakur nikla h .....apne kafile k sath......

jagdeep thakur apne smay k jalad kehlata tha......jisse dushmani krne ki soch li .....phir smjho tandav hona taye h....smne wle k pura khandaan tabha n kr d tb tk rukta nhi tha.....par pichle kuch saalo s sant baitha ......h.....par aaj phir kisi n jagdeep thakur s dushmani krne ki thaani h .......phir tandav hone k asar h......isse s pura police department hila hua h....

idhar y log hospital pahuche udhar puri punjab ki police jaise hospital k pass tainaat kr dee gayi thi.....

Jagdeep tezi s gaari s nikla .....aur smne khre dig k smne j ke khra hoo gya...

Jagdeep- niklo yha s.....

pure gusse m kha tha jagdeep thakur n .....

dig- pr thakur shahb yha khtra h .....

jagdeep- maine kha niklo abhi ......

jagdeep n aur gusse aur taise m kha tha jisse dig ki faat gyi thi

woh aur kuch bole bina ....puri police force leke nikl gya waha s....

jagdeep n apne admiyo s yaha ki surksha dekhne k liye kha ....aur apne parivaar k sath andr chaala gya ......

idhar pure hospital ko thakur k admiyo n gher liye tha ......

Ek admi n aake suresh ko bataya ki Deepak kha h....

phir sb udhar hee nikl gye .....
........
....to be continued
Bhai bahut hard story hai
Bus bhai try kr daily update de
 

Ashu1345

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Bahut hard upadte bhai
Ab ravan ki flashback dekhna hai ki kya hua tha uske sath
I hope Jagdeep or uska bahut purana rishta hai
update 15

so guys jaisa kha tha......ek aur update likha rha hu......iss part k .....y 'c' section k ant hone wala h.....uske baad KD k pichle jivan k pata chlega ....

abb aage

jagdeep aur uska pura parivar OT k bahar khade doc k bhr Anne k intizar kr rhe the......jha sari aurte roh rhi thi whi ......jagdeep k gussa asmaan chu rha tha ....

tabhi doc OT s bhr nikle

jagdeep- abb kaisa h mera pota doc shb

doc- abb bilkul thik h.....bas kuch chote aayi thi ....humne unn p dressing kr dee.....h ......ab woh bilkul thik h kl aap usse dischrge krwa skte h .....pr unki paatiyo ko badlwate rahiye g

Jagdeep- sukriya doc shb

doc- y toh mera farz tha Thakur shb.....app k pote ko private room m shift kr diya h app unse mill skte h

sb log doc k sukriya aada krte hue ......

deepak s milne jaate h

sbhi depak k hal chal puch k usse wahi gher lete h .....aur puri ghatna k baare m puchne lgte h

jagdeep- tumne saka ko kiu jinda chor diya.....mere sher......sura k sath usse bhi mr dete

deepak- dada ji mr toh m usse bhi deta pr .....woh mujh s lada hee nhi .....woh toh murga baana bhokh rha tha

Suresh- kia mtlb

deepak- papa ......woh .....mere dost k daar s aesa kr rha tha ......

Jagdeep- kaun dost beta

deepak- usska nm toh KD h .....pr woh apna nm hr br kisi ko kuch aur baatata h ......

Urmila- y bhala kaisa ladka h bhala aese koi nm thori badlta ....h....usske ma baap n usska nm kitna pyar s rkha hoga...

deepak- shyd woh aanath h dadi......

urmila- bechara .....koi nhi beta usse bula n ....hum usse milna chahenge

Jagdeep- h usse bula loh.....woh yha bhi nhi h.....tumhara dost h toh tumhre paas hone chahiye tha usse

deepak- woh aazeeb h dada ji.....maur sbse jada toh m .....saka k khe uss baaat s parshan hu

suresh- kaun see baat beta

deepak- uss ne KD ko .......kisi aur nm s pukra tha .......kia nm tha....
......h...ha......hmmm.....h.....yd aaya ......RAVAN....h yahi kha tha ussne

jagdeep- kia kha tumne.....shayd maine galt nm suna......

deepak- RAVAN ......dada ji ....saka usse yhi keh rha tha ......woh usse bahut jaada drta h .....Jaise koi haivan aa gya h ......uss jaisa paapi bhi ...kisi s drta h .....y mujhe aaj pata chala

jagdeep- darna bhi chahiye ....beta ......RAVAN k ithihas .....sirf haivaniyt s bhara hua h......mujhe jindagi m pheli baar jisne daar k mtlb smjhya tha mujhe woh h.....RAVAN......usska ithihas lassho aur khoono s bhari hui h......ravanpur k ....RAVAN h

deepak- aap mjk kr rhe n dada ji.....woh toh kbk mr gya tha......

Jagdeep- nhi woh maara nhi ....tha.....usse kisi k pyaar n badl diya tha ......aur saka siwaye usske kisi aur s nhi drta h......woh usska sbse aacha dost hua krta tha ......

deepak- phir

jagdeep- phir ......usse waps haivan baanne p majbur kiya tha ....meri ek glti aur ...saka k dhoke n ....

Deepak- aesa kia hua tha dada ji....

Sb log jagdeep aur deepak k baat bine kuch bole sunn rhe the .....unhe iss sb k baare m kuch pata nhi tha....

jagdeep- woh phir kbhi baataunga .....aaj sb log yhi rehenge aur kl shubha hee hum yha s niklenge....

phir suresh n sb k whi rehne k intizm kiya

dusri tarf

meera- hlo ....

admi- beti m bol rha hu ....jagdeep

meera- prnam pita ji....aaj apne kaise yd kiya sb thik toh h n....

jagdeep- khush rho beti .....beti......depak p humla hua tha ....jis s usse RAVAN n bachya.....

meera- hmm toh RAVAN wps aa gya h ....kha h app...

jagdeep- **** iss shar k ** hospital m h hum log.....mujhe dr h ....RAVAN mere pure parivar ko khtm krne k liye lauta h.....

meera- app fikr mt kriye .....pita ji .....m kl shubha wha pahuch jaungi.....aur waise bhi RAVAN ....apna waada nhi torega......jb tk woh apna wda nhi pura krega tb tk ....woh tlwr nhi uthayega ...

jagdeep- pr mujhe lgta h ussne woh kr diya h .....

meera- m aaa rhi hu.....agr aesa h toh app security bhra lijiye ......kiuki agr ussne apna wada pura kiya h toh RAVAN phir tabhi machake mnega .....

jagdeep- tum jnti ho agr smne RAVAN ho toh .....1000 logo ki fauz bhi km pr jye .....
beti tum jldi s tha aaaoo

meera- m aa rhi hu.....app shubha jitne jldi hoo ske utne jldi wha s nikl jaiyega...

jagdeep- thik h beti.....

.......
Baat khtm hone k baad dono hee akhono s need koso dur thi....jagdeep ko apne pariwar ki chinta thi....kiuki RAVAN ki haivaniyt s woh aache s wakif tha...

udhar meera bhi apne private jet s nikl chuki thi .....iss bakt woh duniya k dusre kone m ....ek meeting kr k apne ghr j rhi thi .....tbhi ussko jagdeep k phn aaya tha....

subha at 6AM

sb log jldi jldi uth k gaon jne k liye niklne wle the ....

abhi y log car k paas pahuche n hee wle the ki.....

ek sath saari gariya blast kr gayi

waha dhua hee dhua fail gya tha .....

jagdeep ki halat khrabh hoo rhi thi......usse ...smjh aa gya tha .....ki.....kaun aa rha h...

wahi sre log joh jagdeep k sath aaye the woh log jagdeep aur uske family walo ko gher k khre the...wha 1000 s jaada log the......

suresh- kaun h smne aao.....

ki tabhi dhue m ek aksh dikha

suresh- kaun ho tum...

"RAVANA "

.....
.......to be continued
 

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kya baat hai dhamakedar entry.... to ye dada hai deepak ka.... to wo koun tha jo kisi ki photo leke ro raha tha.... or ye meera kya hai koun hai... jisse ravan rook jayega... kya dushmani hai inki.... waiting
 
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