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[Nky]

Update 17
jaisa ki sb ko pta chl hee gya hoga ki .....iss story k updt kaise aate h ......toh m phle hee bol deta hu ki .....jisko lgta h stry dubb gyi h.....woh stry chor skte h ......baki jinko kuch ummid h .....woh aane wle updt k liye tyr rhe h.......
(Pichle pge pr hee pichle updt h)
aab aage ....

jagdeep-- mere privr ko jne doh ravan .....g bekasur h ....joh Krna h mere sth kro pr plz inhe jne doh

raavan-- ahh y minnat bhari awaz ....y khauf tumhri awz m ......waah mujhe maaza aagya .... Maine kha tha .....mujhe wps aane p biwas mt kro ....pr tum log nhi mne .....aab tamasha dekho

Sumit- pitaji kaun h y .....ye sb kia hoo rha meri kuch smjh m nhi aa rha h ....

deepak-- meri bhi smjh nhi aa rha h .....akhir y sb log kiu jhuk gye h

KD- aare aare bap-bete ko kuch smjh nhi aaya ......kiu jgdeep tune inhe apni krni nhi baatai

jagdeep- nhi ravan inhe jaane doh....inka koi dosh nhi h.....aur n mera tha ....yakin kro....mera.....plz yakin kro mera .....y tumhra bhi parivar h .......usske liye chor doh ravan plz..

KD- parivar.....abe haat ......tune mera sb kuch chinn k mujhe wps jga diya h .....tune mujh s ....meri ruchi ko Chhinna h ......tune meri jindagi chhinna h mujh s ....aare tu. Toh itne niche gir gya ki .....apni poti ko maarwa diya ....tune meri aatma ko mujhe s chhinn liya h .....aur tu kehta h maaf kr du ......tu aaj apne kandho pr apne parivr ki lash uthayega ....teri antim kriya k liye .....koi jinda nhi bachega ....jagdeep ......aaj k iss samy k kb s intzr kr rha tha ......haa haa Aaha haaah.....akhir kr y din aa hee gya ...

awaz- shi kha ravan .....akhir kr y din aa hee gya ....

ek awz aayi ....jisse kd hazaro m phechn skta tha .....yhi awz ussne sunni thi .....uss nakb k aandr s .....jisne usski jindagi usse chhinni thi....

KD- TOH TU BHI AA GYA .....raka

raka- aaj tu nhi bache ga ......ravan dekh aaj mere pas puri fauz h tere jaise superhumans ki ......aaj tu nhi baachega....

KD piche murta h toh samne ek uniform m ....puri army khri thi...... hi-tech machine gun ki jgha ......purane jmne k jaisa ....talwar aur bhaala liye khre the ....

KD- haa haa tune toh inhe mere jaisa hee nhi banaaya balki meri tarika bhi d diya h larne k.......aare tu kl bhi baacha tha mere smne aaur aaz bhi....tu ek chinti hee h ....jisse m jb chaahu tb msl du.....

raka- inhe maine tere hee khoon k baanayi ek serum s tyr kiya h ......mujhe pata tha ....tu ek superhuman h ....kiuki tu baachpan s hee ek hath s .....biklang tha .....pr phir bhi tu itna takt br tha ......mujhe pta tha tujhe mrna kisi akele ki baat nhi .....toh dekh aaj tere smne tere jaisi ki fauz h .......bass inme ek kaami h ....ki.....y talwar aur bhala k siwa koi aur hathyr nhi chaala pte ....pr koi n .......y kaafi h

KD- haa haa ......aare yr .....tune mujhe itna saasta smjh liya .......ki y kuch log mujhe rok payenge.......maine soch tha ki .....tum dono ko kuch aur any tk jinda choor du .....pr nhi .....tujhe toh mrne k sauk h .......

saka- y 1001 ki fauz tumhe km lgti h ....y pure sahar ko tahas Nahas kr denge ....itne tktbr h .....

KD- woh .....toh y .....chuha bhi bolne lga .......

Saka kd ki awaz sunn k apne bhai k piche dubak gya.....

Raka- aaj teri maut paaki h raavan...

KD- KOI AIRA GAIRA VANVAN SAVAN .....NHI .....RAVAN HU M....

"Chetakkkkkkk""

Tbhi ek ghora ki hiinn hina n ki awz aayi .....jaise hee sb ki nazr udhr gyi toh .....ek sunhaara ghora ....daurte hue aa rha tha .....

cheetak tezi s daurte hue nikla jaisa tufan aa gya ho......ek secnd m woh kd k bagl m khra tha ....

jiske pith p.....dono wor ek ek tlwr thi

KD n chetak k grdn sehlte hue ......talwar kich li...

KD- meri saathi.......y mere sikr h tum snt rhna....

Chetak jaise smjh gya .....woh hinn hina k piche haat gya.....

KD- aahhha ......abb aayega maaza......

Dono talwar jaise chamk uthhi .....

raka- aaj tera aant nischit h ......aaj iss ravan ko ......y raka maut k ghat uttr k......kalyug k ravan k aant krega.....

KD- tu .....shyd ....bhul gya ......MAUT K FARISHTA H ......RAVANA.....

Ek kdm piche hat k .....ravan n ek chalng lagyi.....aur smne khre fauz k bicho bich uttra .....

"Aoo suru krte h ......phir s ......""

raka n Jaise hee adesh diya ab ek sath kd p tuut pr.....

raka khush hoo gya kiuki ......kisi k chilane ki awz aayi thi ......usse laga .......ravan gya .....ki tabhi .....ek mundi urr k raka aur saka paao m girra.....

saka- haa haa gya ....y toh .....itne m gya .....

raka n mundi plti tabhi smne s aawz n uska dhiyan apne taraf kich liya

""Woh RAVAN H.........USSE MAARA NHI J SKTA ........SHYD TU BHUL GYA .....SAKA...."

Jha smne wle sksh ko dekh k .....jagdeep k chehare p .....s daar km hoo gya tha ......whi saka daar gya tha ..............

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[Arjun Singh 72]

Fabulous update
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[Shahrukh]

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[Hunterrrr69]

Update 17
jaisa ki sb ko pta chl hee gya hoga ki .....iss story k updt kaise aate h ......toh m phle hee bol deta hu ki .....jisko lgta h stry dubb gyi h.....woh stry chor skte h ......baki jinko kuch ummid h .....woh aane wle updt k liye tyr rhe h.......
(Pichle pge pr hee pichle updt h)
aab aage ....

jagdeep-- mere privr ko jne doh ravan .....g bekasur h ....joh Krna h mere sth kro pr plz inhe jne doh

raavan-- ahh y minnat bhari awaz ....y khauf tumhri awz m ......waah mujhe maaza aagya .... Maine kha tha .....mujhe wps aane p biwas mt kro ....pr tum log nhi mne .....aab tamasha dekho

Sumit- pitaji kaun h y .....ye sb kia hoo rha meri kuch smjh m nhi aa rha h ....

deepak-- meri bhi smjh nhi aa rha h .....akhir y sb log kiu jhuk gye h

KD- aare aare bap-bete ko kuch smjh nhi aaya ......kiu jgdeep tune inhe apni krni nhi baatai

jagdeep- nhi ravan inhe jaane doh....inka koi dosh nhi h.....aur n mera tha ....yakin kro....mera.....plz yakin kro mera .....y tumhra bhi parivar h .......usske liye chor doh ravan plz..

KD- parivar.....abe haat ......tune mera sb kuch chinn k mujhe wps jga diya h .....tune mujh s ....meri ruchi ko Chhinna h ......tune meri jindagi chhinna h mujh s ....aare tu. Toh itne niche gir gya ki .....apni poti ko maarwa diya ....tune meri aatma ko mujhe s chhinn liya h .....aur tu kehta h maaf kr du ......tu aaj apne kandho pr apne parivr ki lash uthayega ....teri antim kriya k liye .....koi jinda nhi bachega ....jagdeep ......aaj k iss samy k kb s intzr kr rha tha ......haa haa Aaha haaah.....akhir kr y din aa hee gya ...

awaz- shi kha ravan .....akhir kr y din aa hee gya ....

ek awz aayi ....jisse kd hazaro m phechn skta tha .....yhi awz ussne sunni thi .....uss nakb k aandr s .....jisne usski jindagi usse chhinni thi....

KD- TOH TU BHI AA GYA .....raka

raka- aaj tu nhi bache ga ......ravan dekh aaj mere pas puri fauz h tere jaise superhumans ki ......aaj tu nhi baachega....

KD piche murta h toh samne ek uniform m ....puri army khri thi...... hi-tech machine gun ki jgha ......purane jmne k jaisa ....talwar aur bhaala liye khre the ....

KD- haa haa tune toh inhe mere jaisa hee nhi banaaya balki meri tarika bhi d diya h larne k.......aare tu kl bhi baacha tha mere smne aaur aaz bhi....tu ek chinti hee h ....jisse m jb chaahu tb msl du.....

raka- inhe maine tere hee khoon k baanayi ek serum s tyr kiya h ......mujhe pata tha ....tu ek superhuman h ....kiuki tu baachpan s hee ek hath s .....biklang tha .....pr phir bhi tu itna takt br tha ......mujhe pta tha tujhe mrna kisi akele ki baat nhi .....toh dekh aaj tere smne tere jaisi ki fauz h .......bass inme ek kaami h ....ki.....y talwar aur bhala k siwa koi aur hathyr nhi chaala pte ....pr koi n .......y kaafi h

KD- haa haa ......aare yr .....tune mujhe itna saasta smjh liya .......ki y kuch log mujhe rok payenge.......maine soch tha ki .....tum dono ko kuch aur any tk jinda choor du .....pr nhi .....tujhe toh mrne k sauk h .......

saka- y 1001 ki fauz tumhe km lgti h ....y pure sahar ko tahas Nahas kr denge ....itne tktbr h .....

KD- woh .....toh y .....chuha bhi bolne lga .......

Saka kd ki awaz sunn k apne bhai k piche dubak gya.....

Raka- aaj teri maut paaki h raavan...

KD- KOI AIRA GAIRA VANVAN SAVAN .....NHI .....RAVAN HU M....

"Chetakkkkkkk""

Tbhi ek ghora ki hiinn hina n ki awz aayi .....jaise hee sb ki nazr udhr gyi toh .....ek sunhaara ghora ....daurte hue aa rha tha .....

cheetak tezi s daurte hue nikla jaisa tufan aa gya ho......ek secnd m woh kd k bagl m khra tha ....

jiske pith p.....dono wor ek ek tlwr thi

KD n chetak k grdn sehlte hue ......talwar kich li...

KD- meri saathi.......y mere sikr h tum snt rhna....

Chetak jaise smjh gya .....woh hinn hina k piche haat gya.....

KD- aahhha ......abb aayega maaza......

Dono talwar jaise chamk uthhi .....

raka- aaj tera aant nischit h ......aaj iss ravan ko ......y raka maut k ghat uttr k......kalyug k ravan k aant krega.....

KD- tu .....shyd ....bhul gya ......MAUT K FARISHTA H ......RAVANA.....

Ek kdm piche hat k .....ravan n ek chalng lagyi.....aur smne khre fauz k bicho bich uttra .....

"Aoo suru krte h ......phir s ......""

raka n Jaise hee adesh diya ab ek sath kd p tuut pr.....

raka khush hoo gya kiuki ......kisi k chilane ki awz aayi thi ......usse laga .......ravan gya .....ki tabhi .....ek mundi urr k raka aur saka paao m girra.....

saka- haa haa gya ....y toh .....itne m gya .....

raka n mundi plti tabhi smne s aawz n uska dhiyan apne taraf kich liya

""Woh RAVAN H.........USSE MAARA NHI J SKTA ........SHYD TU BHUL GYA .....SAKA...."

Jha smne wle sksh ko dekh k .....jagdeep k chehare p .....s daar km hoo gya tha ......whi saka daar gya tha ..............

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