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Update 18
...so guys......y section c h aur aaj y kal tk y section k aant krta hu .....phir ......RAVANA ....K baare m jaanenge..... section A &C m.......aur y toh baata hee du ki ....agr nxt prt likhna hua toh.....woh ek dusre dimensions k upr hoga .......
aab aage ...
.saka- meera tum ....tumhe pata tha ki..... RAVANA .....JINDA h .....
meera- tum aur tumhr bhai phle bhi mnd budhi the aaj bhi mndbudhi hoo.....
raka- tmz s baat kro ....
meera- bewkuf hoo tum log....joh RAVAN s sidha bhirne aaaye hoo....woh log aa rhe h
tabhi jaise bhukamp aa gya .......ek huzum utha
...
Saka ki muh sukh gya
......usse andhesha hoo gya tha ....shyd .....
saka- y .....khi ......
meera khre khre muskra rhi thi .....
meera ki muskurahat ...saka aur raka ki becheni baarha rhi thi...
Sb ki nzr road p thi .....ki tbhi ......hazro lakho k bhir ....hatho m chaaku kuldhi gandasa .....aur naa jaane kiya kiya liye unke chro uor s gher liye ......
pure sahar ko .....inn logo n gher liya ...tha......jaise Kai gaon uth k chle aaye the.....purra sahar ....ek kile m bdl gya tha
.....chro trf .....gaon wle pure sahar ko kbza kiye hue the.....
jgdeep aur usske parivar wle bhi kmp rhe the......itne sre log.....yha kiya kr rhe h......pura chaaka jm hoo gya tha.....sre police deprtmnt ko hazro log gher k .....khre the .....unko ...kuch krne ko hee nhi mill rha tha.....unke sare hathiyar sb inn logo n kbza liya tha.....
Deepak- y ...y log ....kun h....hhh.....dada ji.....y log kun.....
jgdeep- maine kha n.....tum RAVAN KO NHI JNTE HOO......USKA ITIHAS SIRF LAASHO S BHARA HUA H......
saka- bhai ......ab kiya hoga ......
raka- tu chinta mt kr..... RAVAN toh gya .....y log ab kuch nhi krnge.....
meera- mndbudhi hoo tum ........ RAVANA.....
sre log .....bhi .....jaikr lgne lg.....RAVANA .... RAVANA ..... RAVANA ....
yha saka aur raka hss rhe the......ki tbhi ....ek sath 5 mundi unke smne aa k giri .......aur jb unki nzr smne gyii toh......ruhh kmp gyi unki.....smne RAVANA ......apna tndm dikha rha tha.....unhe smjh nhi aa rha tha ki unke super humans ko bhi kaise RAVAN maar d rrha tha ......
aur ab y log bhg bhi nhi skte the.....pura shr ko ..... RAVAN ko logo n gher rakha tha ....
udhr jaise RAVAN .....ek shaitan baan gya tha .....apne nm k arth jaise phirse smjh n p lga hua tha ........
meera- murkh hoo tum dono....tumne inko .... RAVAN k khoon s banaya h.....jiske bazha s .....inki superhumans ki kabiliyt .... RAVAN K smne kisi km k nhi ......
raka aur saka k toote urr gye y sunn k......kha woh kalyug k RAVAN MRNE AAYE THE .....aur kha inka aant njdik aa rha tha......
idhr y log lge hue the......udhr ek ek kr k.....lashe bichata hua aage behta j rha tha .......aur y akhri bande k srir k tukre kr ...k....saka aur raka k smne khra tha....RAVANA.....pura khoon s saana hua .....jaise aabhi abhi khoon k smundr s nha k nikl hoo.....
RAVAN- aab teri baari .....meri piile .......bahut jii liya ...tune ......ab tera yha k khta pura hua .....ab tujh s mulkt .......HELL m hogi.........
aur saka k dhr uske grdn s alg hoo gya ....aur issi k sth.....uss k srir k hazro tukre m bdl diya ravan n......raka rota iss phle uska haal bhi kuch apne bhai ki tarah hee hua ......
aur ab ....baari thi......
RAVAN aage brh rha tha......dono tlwr khoon s ssne hue chmk rhe the......ravan k pura srir khoon s sna hua tha ....jiss m uss k barso puaarana rup ....jagdeep aur meera ko dikh rha tha .........jagdeep kpp rha tha .......woh aur uska picha parivar piche haat rha tha .....aur RAVAN aage barhte j rha tha ......aur idhr chetak jaise .....khusi s uchaal rha tha .....jaise usse iss khoon khrbe m.....maaja aa rha tha....
....
waaha ek aur parivar tha.....joh chup khre the......uss privr k sare logo....k akhono m aasu tha..........
.....
to be continued
...so guys......y section c h aur aaj y kal tk y section k aant krta hu .....phir ......RAVANA ....K baare m jaanenge..... section A &C m.......aur y toh baata hee du ki ....agr nxt prt likhna hua toh.....woh ek dusre dimensions k upr hoga .......
aab aage ...
.saka- meera tum ....tumhe pata tha ki..... RAVANA .....JINDA h .....
meera- tum aur tumhr bhai phle bhi mnd budhi the aaj bhi mndbudhi hoo.....
raka- tmz s baat kro ....
meera- bewkuf hoo tum log....joh RAVAN s sidha bhirne aaaye hoo....woh log aa rhe h
tabhi jaise bhukamp aa gya .......ek huzum utha
...
Saka ki muh sukh gya
......usse andhesha hoo gya tha ....shyd .....
saka- y .....khi ......
meera khre khre muskra rhi thi .....
meera ki muskurahat ...saka aur raka ki becheni baarha rhi thi...
Sb ki nzr road p thi .....ki tbhi ......hazro lakho k bhir ....hatho m chaaku kuldhi gandasa .....aur naa jaane kiya kiya liye unke chro uor s gher liye ......
pure sahar ko .....inn logo n gher liya ...tha......jaise Kai gaon uth k chle aaye the.....purra sahar ....ek kile m bdl gya tha
.....chro trf .....gaon wle pure sahar ko kbza kiye hue the.....
jgdeep aur usske parivar wle bhi kmp rhe the......itne sre log.....yha kiya kr rhe h......pura chaaka jm hoo gya tha.....sre police deprtmnt ko hazro log gher k .....khre the .....unko ...kuch krne ko hee nhi mill rha tha.....unke sare hathiyar sb inn logo n kbza liya tha.....
Deepak- y ...y log ....kun h....hhh.....dada ji.....y log kun.....
jgdeep- maine kha n.....tum RAVAN KO NHI JNTE HOO......USKA ITIHAS SIRF LAASHO S BHARA HUA H......
saka- bhai ......ab kiya hoga ......
raka- tu chinta mt kr..... RAVAN toh gya .....y log ab kuch nhi krnge.....
meera- mndbudhi hoo tum ........ RAVANA.....
sre log .....bhi .....jaikr lgne lg.....RAVANA .... RAVANA ..... RAVANA ....
yha saka aur raka hss rhe the......ki tbhi ....ek sath 5 mundi unke smne aa k giri .......aur jb unki nzr smne gyii toh......ruhh kmp gyi unki.....smne RAVANA ......apna tndm dikha rha tha.....unhe smjh nhi aa rha tha ki unke super humans ko bhi kaise RAVAN maar d rrha tha ......
aur ab y log bhg bhi nhi skte the.....pura shr ko ..... RAVAN ko logo n gher rakha tha ....
udhr jaise RAVAN .....ek shaitan baan gya tha .....apne nm k arth jaise phirse smjh n p lga hua tha ........
meera- murkh hoo tum dono....tumne inko .... RAVAN k khoon s banaya h.....jiske bazha s .....inki superhumans ki kabiliyt .... RAVAN K smne kisi km k nhi ......
raka aur saka k toote urr gye y sunn k......kha woh kalyug k RAVAN MRNE AAYE THE .....aur kha inka aant njdik aa rha tha......
idhr y log lge hue the......udhr ek ek kr k.....lashe bichata hua aage behta j rha tha .......aur y akhri bande k srir k tukre kr ...k....saka aur raka k smne khra tha....RAVANA.....pura khoon s saana hua .....jaise aabhi abhi khoon k smundr s nha k nikl hoo.....
RAVAN- aab teri baari .....meri piile .......bahut jii liya ...tune ......ab tera yha k khta pura hua .....ab tujh s mulkt .......HELL m hogi.........
aur saka k dhr uske grdn s alg hoo gya ....aur issi k sth.....uss k srir k hazro tukre m bdl diya ravan n......raka rota iss phle uska haal bhi kuch apne bhai ki tarah hee hua ......
aur ab ....baari thi......
RAVAN aage brh rha tha......dono tlwr khoon s ssne hue chmk rhe the......ravan k pura srir khoon s sna hua tha ....jiss m uss k barso puaarana rup ....jagdeep aur meera ko dikh rha tha .........jagdeep kpp rha tha .......woh aur uska picha parivar piche haat rha tha .....aur RAVAN aage barhte j rha tha ......aur idhr chetak jaise .....khusi s uchaal rha tha .....jaise usse iss khoon khrbe m.....maaja aa rha tha....
....
waaha ek aur parivar tha.....joh chup khre the......uss privr k sare logo....k akhono m aasu tha..........
.....
to be continued
bd sharkar
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Nice update... lekin itne din key gap Mey update dey rah ho bahi ap ..iska toh kheyal rakho..Pura update dia koro..nehi toh jis Tarah Apne update dey rah ho kita na time lagega ye toh uprwala Er ap janey
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Awesome update bhai
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Hunterrrr69
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Waah aisa ithihas Likha hai Jo bdlne ki koi sochega bhi nhi mja aagya ab aayega smjh main jghdeep ke and Meera support main hai ya against RAVAAN ke ye smjh nhi aarha
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Kl iss section k aaur updt dene ki kosis krunga bhai
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