Fantasy KD- IN Search of family(journey begins)

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Nice update bro
Update 12

so dosto y baata du.....ki updt late aayega kuch din issi taarh s pr aayega ......kiuki iss prt k ant likha j chuka h.....so jaise ki pichle updt m tum lgo n org hee liya hoga ..........toh ab aage barhte h ....iss jurny m......

aab aaage...

saka k hath pao fhul the.....RAVAN kis haivan k nm h usse behatar shyd hee koi jnta tha......balki insan tha hee nhi.....ek rashash tha .......ek woh RAVAN tha..LANKAPATI RAVAN...jiss k dust karmo k chlte baghwan shri ram n unka aant kiya tha......


Aur ek y RAVAN h....kalyug k RAVAN jiske ant krne wla shyd koi paida hee nhi hua h....

aaj bhi usse yd h jb ussne RAVAN k .....waishi y iu kahu uska haivaniyat ......uss n dekhi thi .....phli br......aaj bhi woh raat yd krta h toh meri ruh kaamp jaati h......aur woh toh bas ek suruvat thi.....

uss k bd RAVAN n joh kiya woh aaj bhi unn sb ko yd h joh iss k sakshat gawh the....

saka aesi hee apne khayalo m khoya tha ..... Aur niche s apni pent gilli kr rha tha...

deepak- (man m) y saka KD ko RAVAN kiu bula rha .....RAVAN toh kb k maar chuka h .....phir y sb kiya h.....par y bhi sach h ki maine ab tak RAVAN ko nhi dekha h......par y toh RAVAN k dost hua krta tha......toh jrur y KD hee RAVAN hoga.....aur agr aesa h toh meri manjil duur nhi h .....m aaj hee ghar wlo ko y baata dunga ki RAVAN yhi h mere sahar m.......aesi kuch chize soch k Deepak bhi khush tha

KD- HAA haa .....tu nhi bdla saka abhi bhi tu utna hee phatu h....jitna pheli br milne p tha...haa haaa.....dekh sala phir tu muut diya .....haa haa?.......

KD ki awaz sunn k sb ki tndra tuti.....

saka- bhai....bhai ....mujhe maaf kr dijiye .....w.....

KD- RAVAN aaram kr rha h ....mere andr .....iss bakt KD jg rha h.......rhi teri aur tere bhai ki baat.....tu chinta mat kr beta .....tere ko aaj nhi pelunga.....tere aur tere uss don bhai ko....ek sath marunga.....pr uss phle mujhe aur kai km krne h.....mujhe sirf tune dokha nhi diya h....koi aur bhi h ....jld hee sb k no. lge g......

saka y sunn k khus hua ki aaj woh nhi mrega...agr aaj bach gya toh ....woh kahi j k chup jyega y sb woh plan kr chuka tha .....jiss woh bahut khus hoo rha tha.....Joh uss k chehare s jhlk rha tha....

KD- khus n hoo beta....chl murga ban ....aur bhok n suru kr kutte k jaise murga style m.....chal sabas.....

saka ki paltu kutte ki tarah wahi kr rha tha .....joh KD keh rha tha......nhi toh usse pta tha ....ki aesa n krne o anzm kiya hoga....

udhar sb log ..... aschaarya s dekh rhe the....ki inta baara gunda ek launde k smne jukh k uss k kuut baan gya h.....wahi saka k sath aaye uss k admi bhi dar s apne boss jaisa kr rhe the .....joh joh RAVAN k itihas s wakif the unke liye sirf uss nm hee kafi h .....pent m mutne k liye .....

wahi sura aur baki admi abhi bhi sock m the .....ki y k ...ho rha h.....

phir KD sura aur baakiyo ki taraf dekhta h ....phir Deepak ki taraf joh.....joh buri tarah s jakhmi tha ....phir bhi .....ladne k liye kisi tarah khada tha......

KD- toh sura aur baaki log y dhiyan rakho ki Deepak s sirf koi ek hee lareg ab ...aur uss k bad joh jite g woh apne man k karega.....samjhe .....auur agr koi bich m aaya inn dono k .....toh ussko usske khandan samet jinda jala dunga .....samjhe ki nhi smjhe ....

sb- smjh gye aaka ....

sura bhi issi liye aesa krne ko Tyr hoo gya tha ....kiuki ek toh woh apne dost saka ko ache s jnta tha .....woh kisi danav s km nhi tha.....pr agr woh iss launde k aage jhuk rha h...toh jrur koi bat hogi....dusra usse pura viswas tha ...ki jiss haalat m Deepak h usse woh baare aram s patak dega ......

yahi soch k woh maidan m kudd gya aur apne admiyo ko bhi smjha diya tha ki koi bich m nhi ayega .......

Wasie bhi shyd hee koi admi unk bich aata ....sb ki pheli s faati pari thi ....

idhar depak bhi tayr tha ....jaise hee sura n phela attack kiya .....chaaku s .....Deepak uss kisi tarh doch kiya par....phir bhi .....woh jakhmi hoo hee gya ...tha....aur isse phele ki depak smbhalta dusra waar hua joh ssidhe usake pair p hua tha .....woh chaku uss k pair m ek lamba cut kr diya tha ......woh drd s karha raha tha .....idhar KD aram s apni bike p leta hua tha .....

udhr depak ko drd a trpte dekh sura over confidence m aa gya ....uss lgn lga ki ....ab toh woh isse ek muuke s hee dharsai kr dega

sura n apna chaaku depak ki tarf pheka

sura- chal munna khr hoo j....apne gaon m toh baar sher banta tha ....ajj kiya hua ....sher ...chuuha baan gya kiya hhaa haaa .....chl tere p rehm kiya ab ....tu chaku s lr apun toh tujhe apne hatho s hee mr dega ....aur uss k baad tera khandan bhi gya.....

sura- uss m sbse phela sikr hogi teri badi behen ***......phir ek kr k sb ko m apne niche leta aaunga ....tu dekhte j .....

depak ko apna akhri smy dikh rha tha ....woh KD ki tarf dekhta h joh arm s bike p leta hua ....tha.....usse gussa aa rha tha ...ki kaisa dost chunna h maine....yha m ...mr rha hu ....aur y arm s bike l leta h .....
Depak apni akhne baand hee kr rha tha y sb sochte hue ki....usse sura ki kahi baat sunai dee.....jisne uss k srir k andr ek ajib si takt k sanchar kiya .....aur woh purri furti s utha aur chaaku lete hue aur sura k kuch smjh n s phele hee sura ki gardn m gussa diya .....y itni tez hua ki koi dekh hee nhi pya......ki kiya hua ....par idhar KD muskura rha tha

idhar sura mr chuka tha aur udhar depak bhi dharshai hoo k niche gir pra ......
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............to be continued

Update 13

so dekho bhai log....mere ko samjh aa rha kisi ko ye story psnd h ya nhi .... issiliye m aese updt krta hu.....kiuki jb stry mere ko hee parh n h.....toh kiya pharakh parta h....ki updt late kiu aa rha h......kiuki meri prblm slove hoo chuki h......chlo choro.......so jaisa ki pichle updt m parha maine .......y hua tha .....ab aage dekhte h iss jrny m ...
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aab aaage

sura jamin p paara hua tha.....uss ki ruuh uska sarir s iss sansr m bilupt ho chuki thi.....jisse dekh k hr koi hairan pareshan tha......stdnts aur teacher pareshaan the ki.....unke clg m ek khoon hua h....wahi sura k baaki sathi hairan the ki y kya abhi.....

Wahi saka murga baana bhaukh rha tha ....usski aankhne niche jamin p thi.....usse paata tha ....ki agr RAVAN yaha h ...toh koi baat jrur hogi......

aur uss m itni himat nhi ki woh uss k smne bhi dekh ske ya uss s kuch puch ske...

wahi unn bhir m s ek ladki n police aur ambulance ko bula liya tha ...

aur apne aadat k anusr police hamesa last aayi amblnce k sath..... amblnce sare jhaki aur sura k dead body le gayi.....phir ek aur amblnce m depak ko bhi l jaya gya .....

police wle kuch nhi kr rhe the....kiuki unhe pata chal chuka tha ki yaha saka k logo n kisi ko mrn k plan banaya tha .....

Par jb uss n sura ki lash dekhi toh woh khud dar gya thi ki saka ke sbse bafadar bande ki lash yaha paari thi ....

Aur saka waha murga bana baitha baang d rha tha.....

kisi bike p lete launde k ssmne

par woh kuch n kiya aur chup chap nikl gya ......

idhar

KD- chal aw aese hee bhokte hue nikl yha s

saka apna sr ha m hilaya aur waise hee bhokte hue nikl gya ....

sre log soch rhe the ki y kia hua abhi....

KD- niklo b sb ....ab tamasha khtm......packupppp....

sb log KD ki bhari bharkm chetavni s .....sb log nikl liye....

wahi KD bhi apni bullet l ke nikl gya ...

Dusri trf

kahi dur ek ghar k landline baaj rha tha.....

ek admi n phone uthaya..

admi- hello kaun

unknown- tumra pota .....iss hospital m bhrti h.....

admi- hlo hlo hlo kaun bol rha h .....

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Nice update bro

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

update 14
So guys ....as review says some guys really like my story writting......as I like my slef.......so ....for them .....guys wait for some time .... update will soon posted on regular basis........
so jaisa ki pichle updt m parh liya app sb n .....

aab aage

admi tezi s chila rha tha phn pkra pr udhar s phn cut chuka tha

Admi k awaz sunn k ghar k saare log bahar aagye the

admi2- kia hua pita ji......

Admi- suresh .....jldi kro ....sbb ko khao ki Tyr hoo jye.....humre pote ....depak pr humla hua h ......

suresh- kis ki itni himmat hoo gyi joh mere bete p humla kre....

Jagdeep- smay nhi h .....jldi kro

idhar sari aurto k rina dhona suru hoo chuka tha....

par ghar k mard Tyr hoo rhe the hathiyar aur baaki smane gaari m dal k......pura parivar ravaana hua hospital ki taraf.....jaise ek gaon utha k j rha ho......100 s jaada gariya ek line m daur rhi thi .....jiss m s aage Jagdeep k bodyguard k car thi phir uski family ki ......phir baaki unnke chahane walo ki .....trackter .....truck .....jisko joh mila woh hee utha k gariyo m baithe gye the......jaise koi andhi si aaa gyi thi ......

jha s bhi y kafila niklta log side hote j rhe the .....itne logo ko hathiyar liye jaate dekh sb ....ki faate j rhi thi

Wahi police aur parshashn m bhi harkmp macha hua tha...

unhe bhi pata chl chuka tha .......ki Jagdeep thakur nikla h .....apne kafile k sath......

jagdeep thakur apne smay k jalad kehlata tha......jisse dushmani krne ki soch li .....phir smjho tandav hona taye h....smne wle k pura khandaan tabha n kr d tb tk rukta nhi tha.....par pichle kuch saalo s sant baitha ......h.....par aaj phir kisi n jagdeep thakur s dushmani krne ki thaani h .......phir tandav hone k asar h......isse s pura police department hila hua h....

idhar y log hospital pahuche udhar puri punjab ki police jaise hospital k pass tainaat kr dee gayi thi.....

Jagdeep tezi s gaari s nikla .....aur smne khre dig k smne j ke khra hoo gya...

Jagdeep- niklo yha s.....

pure gusse m kha tha jagdeep thakur n .....

dig- pr thakur shahb yha khtra h .....

jagdeep- maine kha niklo abhi ......

jagdeep n aur gusse aur taise m kha tha jisse dig ki faat gyi thi

woh aur kuch bole bina ....puri police force leke nikl gya waha s....

jagdeep n apne admiyo s yaha ki surksha dekhne k liye kha ....aur apne parivaar k sath andr chaala gya ......

idhar pure hospital ko thakur k admiyo n gher liye tha ......

Ek admi n aake suresh ko bataya ki Deepak kha h....

phir sb udhar hee nikl gye .....
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....to be continued

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[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

update 15

so guys jaisa kha tha......ek aur update likha rha hu......iss part k .....y 'c' section k ant hone wala h.....uske baad KD k pichle jivan k pata chlega ....

abb aage

jagdeep aur uska pura parivar OT k bahar khade doc k bhr Anne k intizar kr rhe the......jha sari aurte roh rhi thi whi ......jagdeep k gussa asmaan chu rha tha ....

tabhi doc OT s bhr nikle

jagdeep- abb kaisa h mera pota doc shb

doc- abb bilkul thik h.....bas kuch chote aayi thi ....humne unn p dressing kr dee.....h ......ab woh bilkul thik h kl aap usse dischrge krwa skte h .....pr unki paatiyo ko badlwate rahiye g

Jagdeep- sukriya doc shb

doc- y toh mera farz tha Thakur shb.....app k pote ko private room m shift kr diya h app unse mill skte h

sb log doc k sukriya aada krte hue ......

deepak s milne jaate h

sbhi depak k hal chal puch k usse wahi gher lete h .....aur puri ghatna k baare m puchne lgte h

jagdeep- tumne saka ko kiu jinda chor diya.....mere sher......sura k sath usse bhi mr dete

deepak- dada ji mr toh m usse bhi deta pr .....woh mujh s lada hee nhi .....woh toh murga baana bhokh rha tha

Suresh- kia mtlb

deepak- papa ......woh .....mere dost k daar s aesa kr rha tha ......

Jagdeep- kaun dost beta

deepak- usska nm toh KD h .....pr woh apna nm hr br kisi ko kuch aur baatata h ......

Urmila- y bhala kaisa ladka h bhala aese koi nm thori badlta ....h....usske ma baap n usska nm kitna pyar s rkha hoga...

deepak- shyd woh aanath h dadi......

urmila- bechara .....koi nhi beta usse bula n ....hum usse milna chahenge

Jagdeep- h usse bula loh.....woh yha bhi nhi h.....tumhara dost h toh tumhre paas hone chahiye tha usse

deepak- woh aazeeb h dada ji.....maur sbse jada toh m .....saka k khe uss baaat s parshan hu

suresh- kaun see baat beta

deepak- uss ne KD ko .......kisi aur nm s pukra tha .......kia nm tha....
......h...ha......hmmm.....h.....yd aaya ......RAVAN....h yahi kha tha ussne

jagdeep- kia kha tumne.....shayd maine galt nm suna......

deepak- RAVAN ......dada ji ....saka usse yhi keh rha tha ......woh usse bahut jaada drta h .....Jaise koi haivan aa gya h ......uss jaisa paapi bhi ...kisi s drta h .....y mujhe aaj pata chala

jagdeep- darna bhi chahiye ....beta ......RAVAN k ithihas .....sirf haivaniyt s bhara hua h......mujhe jindagi m pheli baar jisne daar k mtlb smjhya tha mujhe woh h.....RAVAN......usska ithihas lassho aur khoono s bhari hui h......ravanpur k ....RAVAN h

deepak- aap mjk kr rhe n dada ji.....woh toh kbk mr gya tha......

Jagdeep- nhi woh maara nhi ....tha.....usse kisi k pyaar n badl diya tha ......aur saka siwaye usske kisi aur s nhi drta h......woh usska sbse aacha dost hua krta tha ......

deepak- phir

jagdeep- phir ......usse waps haivan baanne p majbur kiya tha ....meri ek glti aur ...saka k dhoke n ....

Deepak- aesa kia hua tha dada ji....

Sb log jagdeep aur deepak k baat bine kuch bole sunn rhe the .....unhe iss sb k baare m kuch pata nhi tha....

jagdeep- woh phir kbhi baataunga .....aaj sb log yhi rehenge aur kl shubha hee hum yha s niklenge....

phir suresh n sb k whi rehne k intizm kiya

dusri tarf

meera- hlo ....

admi- beti m bol rha hu ....jagdeep

meera- prnam pita ji....aaj apne kaise yd kiya sb thik toh h n....

jagdeep- khush rho beti .....beti......depak p humla hua tha ....jis s usse RAVAN n bachya.....

meera- hmm toh RAVAN wps aa gya h ....kha h app...

jagdeep- **** iss shar k ** hospital m h hum log.....mujhe dr h ....RAVAN mere pure parivar ko khtm krne k liye lauta h.....

meera- app fikr mt kriye .....pita ji .....m kl shubha wha pahuch jaungi.....aur waise bhi RAVAN ....apna waada nhi torega......jb tk woh apna wda nhi pura krega tb tk ....woh tlwr nhi uthayega ...

jagdeep- pr mujhe lgta h ussne woh kr diya h .....

meera- m aaa rhi hu.....agr aesa h toh app security bhra lijiye ......kiuki agr ussne apna wada pura kiya h toh RAVAN phir tabhi machake mnega .....

jagdeep- tum jnti ho agr smne RAVAN ho toh .....1000 logo ki fauz bhi km pr jye .....
beti tum jldi s tha aaaoo

meera- m aa rhi hu.....app shubha jitne jldi hoo ske utne jldi wha s nikl jaiyega...

jagdeep- thik h beti.....

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Baat khtm hone k baad dono hee akhono s need koso dur thi....jagdeep ko apne pariwar ki chinta thi....kiuki RAVAN ki haivaniyt s woh aache s wakif tha...

udhar meera bhi apne private jet s nikl chuki thi .....iss bakt woh duniya k dusre kone m ....ek meeting kr k apne ghr j rhi thi .....tbhi ussko jagdeep k phn aaya tha....

subha at 6AM

sb log jldi jldi uth k gaon jne k liye niklne wle the ....

abhi y log car k paas pahuche n hee wle the ki.....

ek sath saari gariya blast kr gayi

waha dhua hee dhua fail gya tha .....

jagdeep ki halat khrabh hoo rhi thi......usse ...smjh aa gya tha .....ki.....kaun aa rha h...

wahi sre log joh jagdeep k sath aaye the woh log jagdeep aur uske family walo ko gher k khre the...wha 1000 s jaada log the......

suresh- kaun h smne aao.....

ki tabhi dhue m ek aksh dikha

suresh- kaun ho tum...

"RAVANA "

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.......to be continued

Super duper update bro

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update 16

so guys .....as u all already read what happens previously....
....so now let's begin further journey
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abb aage

RAVAANA......
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Y sirf ek nm hee nhi kauf k dusra nm bhi h......

ek woh RAVAN tha .....aur ek y RAVAANA H .....

jiss jiss n .....RAVAANA k baare m sunna h ...unke liye ....uski maujudgi ....shaitan k agman h......

uski haivaniyt k kisse hr jgha mashur h .....joh ussne 5 saal ...phele ..havinpur m dikhai thi .....ajj bhi havinpur waisa hee h .....ek khandhaar baana k choora tha RAVAN n usse....

Idhar

y nm sunn k Jha jgdeep ki halat khrbh hoo gyi thi ....

whi usske sath joh log gaon s aaye the .....

woh sb apne ek pair p jhuk gye

Jisse sb ko jhtka lga tha.....

Ki ek puri fauz thi unke sath jisse Sumit aur baaki sb nischit the .....

par woh kha jnte the .....RAVANA K ithis ....joh jgdeep aur gaon wle jante the .....

uska y rup m khi n khi ajj bhi woh apna hee dosh manta tha.....

Ussne hee glti ki thi ....joh woh glti kr gya .....

Pr joh kismat m likha h woh toh hona hee h ....

aur aaj usse apne parivaar ki maut dikh rhi thi....

udhar...

raka ek metting m tha ....jha woh apna ....ek nya hathiyar bechne k liye usska presentation kr rha tha ...usse abhi tk kuch paata nhi tha ....
Saam hone wli thi .....raka apni metting khtm krne hee wla tha ki ....

waha ek admi aaya .....ussne kuch bola aur raka nikl gya bina kuch bole...

iss bakht raka apne bhai k samne tha .....joh daar s kaap rha tha ....

raka- kia hua bhai .....tujhe tu itna dar kiu rha h dekh m tere pass hu ....

saka- **"***

raka- bol n bhai .....baata kis ki itni himat hoo gyi joh teri y halat ho gyi h .....baata mujhe m uski woh haalat krunga ki joh kisi n socha bhi nhi hoga...

saka- bhai bhai ......woh aa gya h ....woh waps aa gya h ....woh waps aa gya bhai ......woh kisi ko nhi choore ga...bhai
......mujhe nhi marna ....bhai mujhe nhi marna

saka ek daam kaap rha tha usaki aesi haalt ussne phle nhi dekhi thi .....pr usaki aesi halt uss kuch yd dila rhi thi ......joh usske bhi rup kaapa d rha tha ki agr woh sach hua toh....

raka - kaun aa gya mere bhai .....dekh sant hoo j baata mere ko ....m usse jinda nhi chorounga ....

saka- bhai bhai woh aa gya bhai .....maine kha tha ....bhai ....usse maara nhi ja sakta .....maine kha tha bhai ....

raka n ek balti paani mangwaya aur usse saka p daal diya .....kiuki woh pura baukhlaya hua tha ....

raka- aab baata kia hua dekh chinta maat kr tera bhai k pass aaj ek superhuman ki puri fauz h .....tu chinta maat kr...chl baata mere ko...

saka rone lga tha .....

saka- bhai ...woh laut aaya h ...

raka- kaun

saka- RAVANA....

y nm jaise hee raka k kann m gye .....woh larkhra k dharama s piche gir paara ....uska bhi haath pau full n laage the ...

raka- nhi nhi .....woh toh maar gya tha .....

saka - nhi bhai woh jinda h ....aur phele s khi behtr hoo gya h....bhai .....uska dusra hath bhi thik hoo gya h .....aur uska chehaara bhi shi hoo gya h .....aabb maut phir naache gi sb k uupar ....

raka - aesa kaise possible h ....uska chehara toh paise s thik hoo skta h ...pr uska ek hath toh uska paidaisi khrbh tha .....aur agr woh wahi h toh .....phir ussne tumhe kiu chor diya ...

saka- pta nhi bhai .....uska kha woh hum dono ko ek sath milega....par usse phele ...usse kisi aur ko usska kiye ki saaja dena h ....mujhe nhi marna h bhai mujhe baacha lo...

Raka- tu chinta n kr .....aaj mere pass uske jaise hee superhuman ki fauz h .......agr ussne tujhe choora h ....toh jrur.... woh jagdeep k pass gya hua hoga ....isse phele woh hum tak pahunche hum uss tk pahuch k usse maar denge .....

saka - nhi bhai .....nhi....mai nhi jaunga ......usski maujudgi hee mere sarir k andar ek daar paida kr deti h...

raka- tu bhul gya ....tere andr aur mere andr bhi aab uske jitni takat h .....hum bhi ab superhuman h bhai mere ......tu daar maat itna ....

saka- kuch bhi hoo or usski woh maujudgi hee mujhe dr s bhar deti h ....

Raka- tu fikr mt kr kl hum khud usse milenge milenge apne fauz k sath ......

saka - pr mujhe usse laada nhi jayega .....usske smne jaate hee meri faat jaati h ...

raka- tu piche baitha k taamsa dekhiyo ....kaise meri fauz uska khtma kregi....

idhar raka apni logo s pata kr liye tha ....ki jagdeep kha h ......woh bhi nikl gya apni fauz k sath ussi rat m ....

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.........to be continued

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[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update 17
jaisa ki sb ko pta chl hee gya hoga ki .....iss story k updt kaise aate h ......toh m phle hee bol deta hu ki .....jisko lgta h stry dubb gyi h.....woh stry chor skte h ......baki jinko kuch ummid h .....woh aane wle updt k liye tyr rhe h.......
(Pichle pge pr hee pichle updt h)
aab aage ....

jagdeep-- mere privr ko jne doh ravan .....g bekasur h ....joh Krna h mere sth kro pr plz inhe jne doh

raavan-- ahh y minnat bhari awaz ....y khauf tumhri awz m ......waah mujhe maaza aagya .... Maine kha tha .....mujhe wps aane p biwas mt kro ....pr tum log nhi mne .....aab tamasha dekho

Sumit- pitaji kaun h y .....ye sb kia hoo rha meri kuch smjh m nhi aa rha h ....

deepak-- meri bhi smjh nhi aa rha h .....akhir y sb log kiu jhuk gye h

KD- aare aare bap-bete ko kuch smjh nhi aaya ......kiu jgdeep tune inhe apni krni nhi baatai

jagdeep- nhi ravan inhe jaane doh....inka koi dosh nhi h.....aur n mera tha ....yakin kro....mera.....plz yakin kro mera .....y tumhra bhi parivar h .......usske liye chor doh ravan plz..

KD- parivar.....abe haat ......tune mera sb kuch chinn k mujhe wps jga diya h .....tune mujh s ....meri ruchi ko Chhinna h ......tune meri jindagi chhinna h mujh s ....aare tu. Toh itne niche gir gya ki .....apni poti ko maarwa diya ....tune meri aatma ko mujhe s chhinn liya h .....aur tu kehta h maaf kr du ......tu aaj apne kandho pr apne parivr ki lash uthayega ....teri antim kriya k liye .....koi jinda nhi bachega ....jagdeep ......aaj k iss samy k kb s intzr kr rha tha ......haa haa Aaha haaah.....akhir kr y din aa hee gya ...

awaz- shi kha ravan .....akhir kr y din aa hee gya ....

ek awz aayi ....jisse kd hazaro m phechn skta tha .....yhi awz ussne sunni thi .....uss nakb k aandr s .....jisne usski jindagi usse chhinni thi....

KD- TOH TU BHI AA GYA .....raka

raka- aaj tu nhi bache ga ......ravan dekh aaj mere pas puri fauz h tere jaise superhumans ki ......aaj tu nhi baachega....

KD piche murta h toh samne ek uniform m ....puri army khri thi...... hi-tech machine gun ki jgha ......purane jmne k jaisa ....talwar aur bhaala liye khre the ....

KD- haa haa tune toh inhe mere jaisa hee nhi banaaya balki meri tarika bhi d diya h larne k.......aare tu kl bhi baacha tha mere smne aaur aaz bhi....tu ek chinti hee h ....jisse m jb chaahu tb msl du.....

raka- inhe maine tere hee khoon k baanayi ek serum s tyr kiya h ......mujhe pata tha ....tu ek superhuman h ....kiuki tu baachpan s hee ek hath s .....biklang tha .....pr phir bhi tu itna takt br tha ......mujhe pta tha tujhe mrna kisi akele ki baat nhi .....toh dekh aaj tere smne tere jaisi ki fauz h .......bass inme ek kaami h ....ki.....y talwar aur bhala k siwa koi aur hathyr nhi chaala pte ....pr koi n .......y kaafi h

KD- haa haa ......aare yr .....tune mujhe itna saasta smjh liya .......ki y kuch log mujhe rok payenge.......maine soch tha ki .....tum dono ko kuch aur any tk jinda choor du .....pr nhi .....tujhe toh mrne k sauk h .......

saka- y 1001 ki fauz tumhe km lgti h ....y pure sahar ko tahas Nahas kr denge ....itne tktbr h .....

KD- woh .....toh y .....chuha bhi bolne lga .......

Saka kd ki awaz sunn k apne bhai k piche dubak gya.....

Raka- aaj teri maut paaki h raavan...

KD- KOI AIRA GAIRA VANVAN SAVAN .....NHI .....RAVAN HU M....

"Chetakkkkkkk""

Tbhi ek ghora ki hiinn hina n ki awz aayi .....jaise hee sb ki nazr udhr gyi toh .....ek sunhaara ghora ....daurte hue aa rha tha .....

cheetak tezi s daurte hue nikla jaisa tufan aa gya ho......ek secnd m woh kd k bagl m khra tha ....

jiske pith p.....dono wor ek ek tlwr thi

KD n chetak k grdn sehlte hue ......talwar kich li...

KD- meri saathi.......y mere sikr h tum snt rhna....

Chetak jaise smjh gya .....woh hinn hina k piche haat gya.....

KD- aahhha ......abb aayega maaza......

Dono talwar jaise chamk uthhi .....

raka- aaj tera aant nischit h ......aaj iss ravan ko ......y raka maut k ghat uttr k......kalyug k ravan k aant krega.....

KD- tu .....shyd ....bhul gya ......MAUT K FARISHTA H ......RAVANA.....

Ek kdm piche hat k .....ravan n ek chalng lagyi.....aur smne khre fauz k bicho bich uttra .....

"Aoo suru krte h ......phir s ......""

raka n Jaise hee adesh diya ab ek sath kd p tuut pr.....

raka khush hoo gya kiuki ......kisi k chilane ki awz aayi thi ......usse laga .......ravan gya .....ki tabhi .....ek mundi urr k raka aur saka paao m girra.....

saka- haa haa gya ....y toh .....itne m gya .....

raka n mundi plti tabhi smne s aawz n uska dhiyan apne taraf kich liya

""Woh RAVAN H.........USSE MAARA NHI J SKTA ........SHYD TU BHUL GYA .....SAKA...."

Jha smne wle sksh ko dekh k .....jagdeep k chehare p .....s daar km hoo gya tha ......whi saka daar gya tha ..............

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[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update 18
...so guys......y section c h aur aaj y kal tk y section k aant krta hu .....phir ......RAVANA ....K baare m jaanenge..... section A &C m.......aur y toh baata hee du ki ....agr nxt prt likhna hua toh.....woh ek dusre dimensions k upr hoga .......

aab aage ...

.saka- meera tum ....tumhe pata tha ki..... RAVANA .....JINDA h .....

meera- tum aur tumhr bhai phle bhi mnd budhi the aaj bhi mndbudhi hoo.....

raka- tmz s baat kro ....

meera- bewkuf hoo tum log....joh RAVAN s sidha bhirne aaaye hoo....woh log aa rhe h

tabhi jaise bhukamp aa gya .......ek huzum utha
...

Saka ki muh sukh gya
......usse andhesha hoo gya tha ....shyd .....

saka- y .....khi ......

meera khre khre muskra rhi thi .....

meera ki muskurahat ...saka aur raka ki becheni baarha rhi thi...

Sb ki nzr road p thi .....ki tbhi ......hazro lakho k bhir ....hatho m chaaku kuldhi gandasa .....aur naa jaane kiya kiya liye unke chro uor s gher liye ......

pure sahar ko .....inn logo n gher liya ...tha......jaise Kai gaon uth k chle aaye the.....purra sahar ....ek kile m bdl gya tha
.....chro trf .....gaon wle pure sahar ko kbza kiye hue the.....

jgdeep aur usske parivar wle bhi kmp rhe the......itne sre log.....yha kiya kr rhe h......pura chaaka jm hoo gya tha.....sre police deprtmnt ko hazro log gher k .....khre the .....unko ...kuch krne ko hee nhi mill rha tha.....unke sare hathiyar sb inn logo n kbza liya tha.....

Deepak- y ...y log ....kun h....hhh.....dada ji.....y log kun.....

jgdeep- maine kha n.....tum RAVAN KO NHI JNTE HOO......USKA ITIHAS SIRF LAASHO S BHARA HUA H......

saka- bhai ......ab kiya hoga ......

raka- tu chinta mt kr..... RAVAN toh gya .....y log ab kuch nhi krnge.....

meera- mndbudhi hoo tum ........ RAVANA.....

sre log .....bhi .....jaikr lgne lg.....RAVANA .... RAVANA ..... RAVANA ....

yha saka aur raka hss rhe the......ki tbhi ....ek sath 5 mundi unke smne aa k giri .......aur jb unki nzr smne gyii toh......ruhh kmp gyi unki.....smne RAVANA ......apna tndm dikha rha tha.....unhe smjh nhi aa rha tha ki unke super humans ko bhi kaise RAVAN maar d rrha tha ......

aur ab y log bhg bhi nhi skte the.....pura shr ko ..... RAVAN ko logo n gher rakha tha ....

udhr jaise RAVAN .....ek shaitan baan gya tha .....apne nm k arth jaise phirse smjh n p lga hua tha ........

meera- murkh hoo tum dono....tumne inko .... RAVAN k khoon s banaya h.....jiske bazha s .....inki superhumans ki kabiliyt .... RAVAN K smne kisi km k nhi ......

raka aur saka k toote urr gye y sunn k......kha woh kalyug k RAVAN MRNE AAYE THE .....aur kha inka aant njdik aa rha tha......

idhr y log lge hue the......udhr ek ek kr k.....lashe bichata hua aage behta j rha tha .......aur y akhri bande k srir k tukre kr ...k....saka aur raka k smne khra tha....RAVANA.....pura khoon s saana hua .....jaise aabhi abhi khoon k smundr s nha k nikl hoo.....

RAVAN- aab teri baari .....meri piile .......bahut jii liya ...tune ......ab tera yha k khta pura hua .....ab tujh s mulkt .......HELL m hogi.........

aur saka k dhr uske grdn s alg hoo gya ....aur issi k sth.....uss k srir k hazro tukre m bdl diya ravan n......raka rota iss phle uska haal bhi kuch apne bhai ki tarah hee hua ......

aur ab ....baari thi......

RAVAN aage brh rha tha......dono tlwr khoon s ssne hue chmk rhe the......ravan k pura srir khoon s sna hua tha ....jiss m uss k barso puaarana rup ....jagdeep aur meera ko dikh rha tha .........jagdeep kpp rha tha .......woh aur uska picha parivar piche haat rha tha .....aur RAVAN aage barhte j rha tha ......aur idhr chetak jaise .....khusi s uchaal rha tha .....jaise usse iss khoon khrbe m.....maaja aa rha tha....
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waaha ek aur parivar tha.....joh chup khre the......uss privr k sare logo....k akhono m aasu tha..........
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to be continued

Nice update

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

so guys ......let's move further in this journey......

abb aage ....

Jagdeep aur uska parivar piche haatte j rhe the......aur RAVANA unki tarf.....apni talwr liye barhte j rha tha.....uske sarir aur uske talwar p laga khoon khi gyb hoo gya tha ........jaise kuch tha hee nhi .....

RAVANA- ab teri baari ......h Jagdeep......

Jagdeep- nhi RAVANA ruk jao .....meri baat maano .....m nhi tha iss sb k piche ......maine toh ussi bakt inhe police k hawle krwa diya tha.....jb inhone meri poti aur tumhe marne k plan banya tha.....

KD- ek aur jhuut .....aur kitna jhuut bole g......tu ...

meera- ruk jaiye.....pitaji sach bol rhe h ....maine ab pta kiya tha.....y dono hee n humari jindagi tabha kiya tha......inhone hee didi ko humse duur kiya tha.....

KD- m nhi mnta ......issne joh kuch kiya h .....uss k baad mujhe ykin h y bhi doshi h...

RAVANA aage brhte j rha tha.....ki tbhi uske samne ek parivar aa k khra hoo..gya....

aurat- ruk jao beta......y sach bol rhi .....y bhi tumhara parivar h......aesa maat kro.....

KD- app bich m maat aaiye maa.....inhone joh kiya unki saaja jrur milegi.....

budha- ruk j mere bete.....tu apne dada ki baat maan k inhe choor d.......akhir y bhi tere hee parivar h.....humre jaise....

KD- parivar....
.haa haaaa haaa.....ajj app ko parivar ki yd aa gyi ......tb y baat yd nhi aayi thi.....jb apne mere maa-baap ko majbur kiya tha.....mujhe tiyg n k liye....aur aaj jb mujhe kisi ki jrurt nhi h.....toh app ko parivar ki yd aa rhi......

RAVANA ki awz ki naami s .....Meera smjh gyi thi.....ki ab usse kha kiya bolna h.....jisse RAVANA ka gussa snt hoo jye.....

meera- thik h app ko mrna h sauk s maar dijiye inhe.....pr ...y ....yaad rakhiye g.....ki didi agr hoti toh unhe kitna dukh hota iss baat k....ki app unke wajah s app phir s RAVAN baan gye .....aur apne hee privr ko khtm krne p tulle h...

KD- par woh h nhi ......aur uski wajah h y log.....

KD n apni talwr ghuma k .....ek chlng lga....Dee .jagdep ji tarf par tabhi usski kano m kisi ki awz gunji.....

Paapa............

ek dm s .....KD niche utr k piche plta gya.....jha doh choot baache .....Meera k sath khri thi..... KD kbhi Meera ko dekhta kbhi uss bachi ko....

meera- iske liye toh choor dijiye......kiya app yhi chte h ....jaisa app n bina parivar k jindagi bitayi.....waise hee app k bache bhi bitaye......

KD n apni mundi n m hilate hue Meera ki tarf barhne lga.....usne apni talwr hawa m uchl deee ...joh ek sidhe j k ......chetak k dono side lge .....apne miyn m j gusse.....

KD n iss bakt apne dono baache ko gaale lga rkha tha .....

meera- app inke liye inhe ...maf kr d.....

KD- maaf kiya.....

ki tabhi ek roshni KD p giri.....aur woh dheere dheere gyb hone lga....

meera- y ...y kiya hoo rha h app ko.....

udhr chetak k sath bhi aesa hee kuch hoo rha tha..

KD- smy hoo gya.....h....Meera ....m wps aunga......Mera intizr krna......m....wps aaunga ........sath m apni jindagi l ke aunga.....bs tum mera intizr krna....

issi k sath KD aur chetak waha s bilupt hoo gye....aur woh roshni bhi gyb hoo gyi....

yha kisi ko kuch smjh m here nhi aya ki y kiya hua ....

Idhar sb log apne hee udhar Bunn m mill gye gaon ki tarf......pure sahar s .....kbza haat chuka tha.....WOH SAARI LASSHE WAHI DHUU DHUU KR K JLNE LAGI THI......

Y raat sb k liye dukh daayi thi......sb log iss bakt......KD k dada k gaon m....uske haweli m.....the apne apne room.....par kisi ko neend nhi aa rhi...
thi sb ki apni apni wajha thi .....

bacha- didi kiya papa kbhi nhi aayenge.....baari maa ki tarh woh bhi hume choor k chle gye....

bachi- nhi bitu.....papa jarur aynege....unhone wda kiya h choti m s.....sath m mummy ko bhi leke aayenge....ab tu soo j.....

idhar y dono toh soo gye ....par ajj pura hawli k sath pura gaon jg rha tha......
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.......to be continued

Super duper update

 

[ZeeHh]

Story band??? ?

 

[Lalantopmunda]

Story band??? ?

Abhi nhi...... section A and section B....k kuch point k baare m thora sochna...h bs.... issi liye late hoo rh h.....aur waise bhi y stry kisi aur s jda....m apne liye likhte hu.....aur shyd tumne srf....updt cunt kiye h.....uske bd....rply kr diye ....mere suruwati cmnt nhi prhe h.....tumnne.....

 

[ZeeHh]

Abhi nhi...... section A and section B....k kuch point k baare m thora sochna...h bs.... issi liye late hoo rh h.....aur waise bhi y stry kisi aur s jda....m apne liye likhte hu.....aur shyd tumne srf....updt cunt kiye h.....uske bd....rply kr diye ....mere suruwati cmnt nhi prhe h.....tumnne.....

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