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Fantasy KD- IN Search of family(journey begins)

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Black water

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Section A.....from here ...
family intro comes in section B
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ek parivar m behas chl rhi thi.....

woh bhi ek andhvishwas k krn....joh jura tha ek Masum aur nirdosh navjaat sissu s....

Aurat- babu ji...aesa maat kijiye ....dekhiye hum isse itna pyar denge ki y kbhi birati k sath nhi dega....y mera beta h....babu ji.....app k chota pota h y.....mann jaye.....

budha- dekho bahu iss baat m kisi ki nhi sununga.....gurudev n keha h.....y duniya k vinash k sathi bange ....isse mrna hee hoga....isse gurudev k hawle krna hee hoga ....woh hee isse khtm kr skte h..... Tum khud dekho.....issko....y jnm s hee ek hath s biklang h....

bahu- isska krn bhi aap sb ko pta h....jb mera beta mere kokh m tha ....tb ....app k dushmano n app s dusmani nikle k liye mujhe jhr diya tha.....pr sukr h uss bhgvn k joh mujhe aur mere bache ko bacha liya pr ....mere bache ko kamzor kr diya ....pr kiya hu....iske bhai behen h n....aur inn sb s jda m hu ....n....m iska dusra hath bn k humesa iske sath rhungi....pr plz isse mujh s durr mt kro...

Y kehte hue
...aurat behosh hoo gyi...rote rote .....whi uss k behosh hone k wdd....uss bache ko uss budhe insan n...

ek naukr k hath.....gurudev k pass bhejawa diya.....woh naukr bhala insan tha....par apne malik s drta bhi bahut tha.....pr uss bache k masumiyat n ...use ....iss tarh mrne nhi diya......woh uss bache ko dusre gaon m ek jdh rkh aaya .....aur ghr aa k...y bataya ki....jngle s jte smye....ek janwr n uss p hmla kiya tha.....usse bachne k liye bhgte smye.....bacha kaali pahari s niche girr gya....
....idhar jb y log nischint the....ek bache ko usske maa bap s chinn k toh wahi dusri taraf.......woh bacha .....kahi aur sass l rha tha.....

Udhar...

adhi raat k smy tha.....bewara nshe m dhuut ....dgmagte hue ....chla j rha tha.....shyd koi gna bhi Gunn gunn rha tha...."

Barsaat ke mausam main
Tanhai ke aalam main
Barsaat ke mausam main
Tanhai ke aalam main
Main ghar sey nikal aaya
Botal bhi utha laaya


Abhi zinda hoon to jee leney jee leney do
Bhari barsaat main pee leney do
Barsaat ke mausam main
Tanhai ke aalam main
Barsaat ke mausam main
Tanhai ke aalam main
Main ghar sey nikal aaya
Botal bhi utha laaya

Abhi zinda hoon to jee leney jee leney do
Bhari barsaat main pee leney do
Mujhey tukado main nahi jeena hai
Katra katra toh nahi peena hai
Katra katra toh nahi peena hai

Ho ... aaj paimaaney hata do yaaron
Saara maikhana peela do yaaro
Maikadon main to piya karta hoon
Maikadon main to piya karta hoon

Chalti rahon main bhi pee leney do

Abhi zinda hoon to jee leney jee leney do
Bhari barsaat main pee leney do"

Abhi woh gunn hee rha tha ki...ek bache k rone ki awz aayi ....jb uss n gna bnd kr k ...ass pas .dekha toh usse kuch n dikha shyd nshe k asr tha....y smjh k aage brh gya ....aur samne wle ghr k darwaza pitne lga ....andr ek aurat soo rhi thi....woh arm s uthi ...shyd usse pta tha...ki kon hoga ...
..j k uss n jb gate khola toh samne uss k pati tha....wahi sarbi....par koi keh nhi skta tha.....ki kisi srbi ki itni khubsurat biwi bhi hoo mill skti h....

dono andr a k phir s psr gye ....lgbhg Subha....surya dev ki phli kirn n ....hawao....m apne hone k ahesas diya tha....ki tabhi ek bache ki rone ki awz s m...uss srbi ki neend tuti ....iss br y awz bahut Tezz aa rhi thi....uss n ass pass dekha ....usse kuch samjh nhi aaya ....usne apni biwi ko utha k ....usse batayi....bache ki rone ki awz aabhi bhi aa rhi thi.....dono jb dhiyan s suna....toh uss ki biwi ko lga awz bhr s aa rha tha.....woh apne pati ko leke bhr gyi toh....pass hee rkhe kurre k dher s y awz aa rhi. Thi....woh uss awz ki tarf barhte gye........
.....to be continued
Nice update bhai
Bhai update thoda bada diya karo
 
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update 21
as you already read previous updt....so let's move to further journey.....

aab aage
Kurre k dher m ek bacha roo rha tha ....
uss dampti n usse utha k aass pass dhund ki shyd uske maa-baap mil jye ....pr wha koi tha hee nhi .....chro taraf kuuto ki rone ki awz aa rhi thi....joh iss andheri raat ko aur darvana baana rha tha....

jbb koi nhi milaa toh woh log usse leke andr aa gye ....

woh aurat uss bache ko leke ek room m gyi aur usse ache s saaf kr k.....usse dhudh pilane lgi...

jb woh bacha soo gya ...toh usse whi bistr p lita k ....bhr apne pati k pass aa gyi ...

Admi- bacha soo gya .. puspa.....

puspa-ji soo gya...bara pyra bacha h....pta nhi kon h honge aese maata-pita ....joh itne pyre bache ko choor k chle gye.....

admi- hmm shi kheti hoo...toh kia kehti hoo abb hum kia kre...

puspa- m toh kehti hu.....shyd isske maa baap ko iski jrurt nhi h....hum isse pl lete h....waise bhi m app ko ....bacha nhi d skti app jnte h........shi ....mahakal n humri bache ki murrad puri krne k yhi tarika nikla hoo ...

admi- pr kia y shi rhega....


puspa-ji..app chinta kiu krte h....y mahakal ki icha h ...bhala woh glt kaise hoo skte h....hum isse kl hee adopt kr lenge legally ...

admi- thik h ......jb mahakal ki yhi icha h toh .....hum Kaun hote h usse nkr n wle....

puspa- thik h toh phir chliye soo jaiye .....

admi-- hmmm thik h chlo....

Puspa j k bache k pass soo gyi ....pr woh admi ...rt bhr jgta rha ...

agle Subha dono j k...uss bache ko legally adopt kr liye.....pr jb woh usse adopt krne gye toh wha unhe pata chala...ki.....y bacha k ek hath ..... paralyzed h ......y apna ek hath hee istmal kr skta h....apna right hand k hi istemal nhi kr pyega ...
par isse bhi unn dono n mahakaal ki ichaa mn k manjur kr liya...

.....
Dusri taraf....

dur kahi ek ghupp adhere nagri m....ek aesa shr ...y kahu ek aea nagr joh andhere m dubba hua tha.....uss andhere ko aur bhayanak banata h.....woh k rhne wle log....joh ki insan toh katai nhi the......woh kuch aur the....

Itne bhayanak itne drwne ....jaise koi dnv .....ussi nagri k ek andhere m dubbe.....mhl m ....rjdrbr m....ek shihasan rkha tha....joh achnk chmk utha tha....joh uske dekh bhal krne ble ko smjh nhi aa rha tha.... issiliye woh sb s chle gye ...guru ji k bullane aur unke aane tk sb bhr khre the...

jb 2 prhar k bad guru ji aaye toh woh sidha uss sinahasn k pas gye .....ki tbhi woh sinahasn bol utha..

"...akhir kr mere malik k tisre aur akhri dost naya jnm hoo chuka h....woh jld hee ane wle h.....tyri suru kr doh sb .....tum sb k malik aa rhe h .....mere malik aa rhe.....h jld hee ......iss br iss puri duniy ko apni takt k niche lake rhenge mere malik....haa haaa..woh jld hee ayeneg....haa haa.."

phir woh sinahasn any hoo gya aur chmk n bhi bnd kr diya ....guru ji bhr sb ko jhuti kheni keh k tal diya ...unhe woh sach nhi baatye ....aur kahi bilupt hoo gye ....
 

Black water

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Fantastic update bhai
 

Avinashraj

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update 21
as you already read previous updt....so let's move to further journey.....

aab aage
Kurre k dher m ek bacha roo rha tha ....
uss dampti n usse utha k aass pass dhund ki shyd uske maa-baap mil jye ....pr wha koi tha hee nhi .....chro taraf kuuto ki rone ki awz aa rhi thi....joh iss andheri raat ko aur darvana baana rha tha....

jbb koi nhi milaa toh woh log usse leke andr aa gye ....

woh aurat uss bache ko leke ek room m gyi aur usse ache s saaf kr k.....usse dhudh pilane lgi...

jb woh bacha soo gya ...toh usse whi bistr p lita k ....bhr apne pati k pass aa gyi ...

Admi- bacha soo gya .. puspa.....

puspa-ji soo gya...bara pyra bacha h....pta nhi kon h honge aese maata-pita ....joh itne pyre bache ko choor k chle gye.....

admi- hmm shi kheti hoo...toh kia kehti hoo abb hum kia kre...

puspa- m toh kehti hu.....shyd isske maa baap ko iski jrurt nhi h....hum isse pl lete h....waise bhi m app ko ....bacha nhi d skti app jnte h........shi ....mahakal n humri bache ki murrad puri krne k yhi tarika nikla hoo ...

admi- pr kia y shi rhega....


puspa-ji..app chinta kiu krte h....y mahakal ki icha h ...bhala woh glt kaise hoo skte h....hum isse kl hee adopt kr lenge legally ...

admi- thik h ......jb mahakal ki yhi icha h toh .....hum Kaun hote h usse nkr n wle....

puspa- thik h toh phir chliye soo jaiye .....

admi-- hmmm thik h chlo....

Puspa j k bache k pass soo gyi ....pr woh admi ...rt bhr jgta rha ...

agle Subha dono j k...uss bache ko legally adopt kr liye.....pr jb woh usse adopt krne gye toh wha unhe pata chala...ki.....y bacha k ek hath ..... paralyzed h ......y apna ek hath hee istmal kr skta h....apna right hand k hi istemal nhi kr pyega ...
par isse bhi unn dono n mahakaal ki ichaa mn k manjur kr liya...

.....
Dusri taraf....

dur kahi ek ghupp adhere nagri m....ek aesa shr ...y kahu ek aea nagr joh andhere m dubba hua tha.....uss andhere ko aur bhayanak banata h.....woh k rhne wle log....joh ki insan toh katai nhi the......woh kuch aur the....

Itne bhayanak itne drwne ....jaise koi dnv .....ussi nagri k ek andhere m dubbe.....mhl m ....rjdrbr m....ek shihasan rkha tha....joh achnk chmk utha tha....joh uske dekh bhal krne ble ko smjh nhi aa rha tha.... issiliye woh sb s chle gye ...guru ji k bullane aur unke aane tk sb bhr khre the...

jb 2 prhar k bad guru ji aaye toh woh sidha uss sinahasn k pas gye .....ki tbhi woh sinahasn bol utha..

"...akhir kr mere malik k tisre aur akhri dost naya jnm hoo chuka h....woh jld hee ane wle h.....tyri suru kr doh sb .....tum sb k malik aa rhe h .....mere malik aa rhe.....h jld hee ......iss br iss puri duniy ko apni takt k niche lake rhenge mere malik....haa haaa..woh jld hee ayeneg....haa haa.."

phir woh sinahasn any hoo gya aur chmk n bhi bnd kr diya ....guru ji bhr sb ko jhuti kheni keh k tal diya ...unhe woh sach nhi baatye ....aur kahi bilupt hoo gye ....
Nyc update
 

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Update 20
Section A.....from here ...
family intro comes in section B
......
ek parivar m behas chl rhi thi.....

woh bhi ek andhvishwas k krn....joh jura tha ek Masum aur nirdosh navjaat sissu s....

Aurat- babu ji...aesa maat kijiye ....dekhiye hum isse itna pyar denge ki y kbhi birati k sath nhi dega....y mera beta h....babu ji.....app k chota pota h y.....mann jaye.....

budha- dekho bahu iss baat m kisi ki nhi sununga.....gurudev n keha h.....y duniya k vinash k sathi bange ....isse mrna hee hoga....isse gurudev k hawle krna hee hoga ....woh hee isse khtm kr skte h..... Tum khud dekho.....issko....y jnm s hee ek hath s biklang h....

bahu- isska krn bhi aap sb ko pta h....jb mera beta mere kokh m tha ....tb ....app k dushmano n app s dusmani nikle k liye mujhe jhr diya tha.....pr sukr h uss bhgvn k joh mujhe aur mere bache ko bacha liya pr ....mere bache ko kamzor kr diya ....pr kiya hu....iske bhai behen h n....aur inn sb s jda m hu ....n....m iska dusra hath bn k humesa iske sath rhungi....pr plz isse mujh s durr mt kro...

Y kehte hue
...aurat behosh hoo gyi...rote rote .....whi uss k behosh hone k wdd....uss bache ko uss budhe insan n...

ek naukr k hath.....gurudev k pass bhejawa diya.....woh naukr bhala insan tha....par apne malik s drta bhi bahut tha.....pr uss bache k masumiyat n ...use ....iss tarh mrne nhi diya......woh uss bache ko dusre gaon m ek jdh rkh aaya .....aur ghr aa k...y bataya ki....jngle s jte smye....ek janwr n uss p hmla kiya tha.....usse bachne k liye bhgte smye.....bacha kaali pahari s niche girr gya....
....idhar jb y log nischint the....ek bache ko usske maa bap s chinn k toh wahi dusri taraf.......woh bacha .....kahi aur sass l rha tha.....

Udhar...

adhi raat k smy tha.....bewara nshe m dhuut ....dgmagte hue ....chla j rha tha.....shyd koi gna bhi Gunn gunn rha tha...."

Barsaat ke mausam main
Tanhai ke aalam main
Barsaat ke mausam main
Tanhai ke aalam main
Main ghar sey nikal aaya
Botal bhi utha laaya


Abhi zinda hoon to jee leney jee leney do
Bhari barsaat main pee leney do
Barsaat ke mausam main
Tanhai ke aalam main
Barsaat ke mausam main
Tanhai ke aalam main
Main ghar sey nikal aaya
Botal bhi utha laaya

Abhi zinda hoon to jee leney jee leney do
Bhari barsaat main pee leney do
Mujhey tukado main nahi jeena hai
Katra katra toh nahi peena hai
Katra katra toh nahi peena hai

Ho ... aaj paimaaney hata do yaaron
Saara maikhana peela do yaaro
Maikadon main to piya karta hoon
Maikadon main to piya karta hoon

Chalti rahon main bhi pee leney do

Abhi zinda hoon to jee leney jee leney do
Bhari barsaat main pee leney do"

Abhi woh gunn hee rha tha ki...ek bache k rone ki awz aayi ....jb uss n gna bnd kr k ...ass pas .dekha toh usse kuch n dikha shyd nshe k asr tha....y smjh k aage brh gya ....aur samne wle ghr k darwaza pitne lga ....andr ek aurat soo rhi thi....woh arm s uthi ...shyd usse pta tha...ki kon hoga ...
..j k uss n jb gate khola toh samne uss k pati tha....wahi sarbi....par koi keh nhi skta tha.....ki kisi srbi ki itni khubsurat biwi bhi hoo mill skti h....

dono andr a k phir s psr gye ....lgbhg Subha....surya dev ki phli kirn n ....hawao....m apne hone k ahesas diya tha....ki tabhi ek bache ki rone ki awz s m...uss srbi ki neend tuti ....iss br y awz bahut Tezz aa rhi thi....uss n ass pass dekha ....usse kuch samjh nhi aaya ....usne apni biwi ko utha k ....usse batayi....bache ki rone ki awz aabhi bhi aa rhi thi.....dono jb dhiyan s suna....toh uss ki biwi ko lga awz bhr s aa rha tha.....woh apne pati ko leke bhr gyi toh....pass hee rkhe kurre k dher s y awz aa rhi. Thi....woh uss awz ki tarf barhte gye........
.....to be continued
Welcome back Dost
Nice update bro
 
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