Fantasy KD- IN Search of family(journey begins)

[Lalantopmunda]

Short updt posted......rst will posted today or tomorrow ...more than 3updt will be posted.....soon

 

[Alok]

Just started reading your story brother........

I find it quite interesting and full of suspense also loved the character KD.........

Please keep posting regular updates....

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Nice update

 

[Lalantopmunda]

update 23
Ab aage
ashish- nhi bhai maine tumhe nhi phechana ....tum khud hee baata doh

shera- m hu guru ji ... Shera.....ydd h ajj s kuch saal phle ....*** Gaon m....ek khusti m app n mujhe patkhni dee thi.....tbb.....mere pita k khne p....app n mujhe apna sissya bhi siwkr kiya tha....

ashish- aare h ....abb ydd aaya ....aur Shera kaise hoo...tumhre pita aur tumhre ghr m sbb thik toh h n...

shera- h sb thik h guru ji.....bs pitaji pichle saal hee chaal baase ...

ashish- jnn k bahut dhukh hua bhai .....

shera-- hmm .....bhgvn k aage kiski chli h ...joh meri chlti guru ji....

ashish- y tumne shi kha.....woh upr wla joh bhi krta h ...woh shi hee krta h ....bhle woh hume aaj smjh....n aaye...pr....ane wle kl ....uss insn ko smjh aa hee jata h...

shera- shi kha apne.....waise app yha kaise ...aur akele aaye h...k....ki bhabhi aur bache bhi aaye h...

ashish- h.....abb yhi rehna .....apne biwi aur bache k sath..

shera- bahut khusi hui app ko dekh k....acha km kiya krte h app

ashish- aare woh gaon k bhr joh construction k km chl rha h n.....whi p majduri k km krta hu abhi toh .....baki kl kisne dekha h.....

shera- shi ...kha guru ji kl kisne dekha h....waise guru ji....app itne baare phelwn app kha ....majduri krne lge....m apna ek akhra kholne k soch rha tha ....aur uss m app s acha .....guru kha s milega.....app agr h kr de toh....mujhe bahut khusi hogi....aur jitna app majduri s kmte h toh..... usse jaada heee app mere sath kma lenge ...

ashish- waise kehte toh tum thik hee hoo....pr mujhe .....y sbb chore jmna hoo gya h..

shera- aare guru ji.....Shera chahe sadiyo sikr n kre.....pr jb usse sikr Krna hota h n....toh woh bare arm s kr leta h....kiuki woh gunn uske khoon m h....jaise app k andr h.....app chliye mere sath ... aur jgha dekh lijiye ...phir kl mujhe apna faisla baata dijiyge ...

andr s ...Sameera sb sunn rhi thi....amrit ko gaod m liye ....

jaisa hee Ashish ghr k andr Sameera ko baatne aaya ki woh Shera k sath j rha waise hee usse apne smne Sameera khri milli ....

sameera- y km app kr lijiye.....isse humre bache k bhavisya bhi sudhr jayega....

Ashish- hmm shyd tum shi keh rhi hoo....chlo thik h....m usse haa bol dunga...abhi m aaata hu kuch dair m..

y keh k ...Ashish nikl gya Shera k sath.....aur idhr amrit rone lga....toh sameera apne pyaare s bache ko chupp krne m lg gyi..

after 4 year...

ek bacha schl dress pehn k Tyr hoo rha tha...pr usse apna kpre pehne m muskil hoo rhi thi....tbhi ek admi aandr aaya...

"Toh humra sher schl jne k liye Tyr hoo rha h...."

uss admi n dekh uska beta kaise preshn hoo rha h...kpre phenne k liye......kiuki uska ek hath bachpn s ...hee km nhi krta isliye ....ussee bahut muskil hoo rhi thi kpra pehnne m...

woh admi ko cross krte hue....ek aurat aage gyi ....aur uss bche k....kpre phenne m mdd krne lagi....

"app itne bare phelwn h aur apne hee bete ko iu presn hote dekh rhe h ....""

"Sameera ....agr ajj humne iski mdd ki toh y kl bhi hume hee dhunde g....kisi musibt m parega toh......isse iu choti moti chizo s....preshn nhi hona h....y mera beta h.....y kmzor nhi hoo skta ....h...isse kl s m....apne sre dau pech sikaunga"

Sameera- koi jrurt nhi h....mere phool s bache ko prshn krne ki...y aesa hee thik h....

ashish- smjho sameera ajj y sirf kpr k bajhe s preshn h .....toh tum mdd krne lagi ...kl ko...agr y hum s durr ho gya aur kisi musibat m fss gya toh....kun hoga iski mdd k liye.....isse khud skchm bnn hoo g....

sameera- nhi m ....isse apne s kbhi durr nhi krungi ....khi nhi jne dungi m isse.....y mera bacha h....m isse nhi jne dungi....aur waise bhi jb tk humd dono ....h koi isse hath toh lga j dikhye ....

ashish- sameera tum baat ko smjh nhi rhi hoo..

Sameera- aur mujhe smjh n bhi nhi h....abb htye mujh apne bache ko nasta Krna h....phir schl bhi jna h isse...

Ashish- hmm...ab kia kahu.....dekh....lo....umid krta hu tumhe jld smjh aa jyega ki m kiya kehna chahat hu........

idhr sameera apne hatho s ....amrit. Ko khna khila rhi thi....phir usse schl chorne bhi gyi thi.....
......idhr Ashish ....apne bete k bhavisya k liye preshn tha .....
.....to be continued

 

[Shahrukh]

Awesome update bhai keep posting

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Excellent update

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

update 22

ab aage....
jindagi k ab ek naya rup smne aaya tha unn dono pati patni k liye...

ek nayi aas.....uss ....ek nayi kirn k sath ek nayi suruvat hui thi dono k jindagi k....

woh dono woh gaon chor k dusre gaon m aagye......iss gaon k nam....tha...RAVPUR....
....KHA JAATA KISI JMNE M YHA EK RAKSHAK RAAJ HUA KRTA THA ......USSI K NM P ISS GAON K NM PARA THA ......

yha inn dono ek nyi jindagi ki suruvat ki thi ...uss bache k sath....

Yha aate hee ...ekk ghar khridh liya tha.uss admi n

short intro time...:-
1)Ashish Patel- ek phelwan jaisi sarir wle.....ek hastpust insan......y ek phelwan tha.....iske dao pech k mukabla ass k kai gaon tal koi nhi kr sakta tha....

2)Sameera Patel- ek khubsurat aur tez dimag ki aurat.....y apne pati s bahut pyaar krti.h....usi k liye isne apna ghar-vr sb chor diya tha.....dono k love marriage bhi gjb thi....kher uski baat nhi krte h ...

3)woh bacha jiska nm ....innhone .....amrit rkha tha......y nm issiliey rakh tha kiuki dono k manana tha ki y bacha unke liye kisi vardan ki tarh unhe milla h....kiuki .....Sameera maa....nhi ban sakti h....par phir bhi Ashish aur Sameera ka pyaar hee aesa h...ki kabhi unko kisi ki jrurat hee mehsus nhi hui .....Ashish n bhi iss ko siwakr kr liye tha.....bas issi gmm m.... Ashish ...n....nasha krna suru kr diya tha.....

par ab jb uske jindagi m .....ek bacha ....uska beta bn k aa gya h....toh woh sbb kuch choor k abb wps ....apne shi s jindgi jine lga h...apne parivar k liye mehnat krne laga tha....iss gaon m ek aur pehlwan rehta tha...joh kisi jmne m....Ashish s patkhani kha chuka tha nmm tha shera.....use jb pta chala ki.....Ashish pehlwan uske gaon m rehne aaya h toh turnat uske pass k liye nikl gya ....

idhar

ashish phir s apne km p nikl rha tha....woh pass hee ban rhe ek bridge m....majudri k km krta tha.....

tabhi bahr s awz aayi...

"re pehlwn .... Ashish pehlwan....kha ho .....bhr aao..."

sameera- Kaun aagya ji ab....

ashish- tum amrit k sath raho m dekhta hu...

ashish jb bhr nikla toh ....smne shera khra tha....

ashish usse pehchne ki kosis kr rha tha.....

shera- kiu re phelwan pehchana.....mujhe...

ashish- nhi bhai ...Kaun hoo tum ....

shera- aare aese kaise nhi pehchane ...ydd kro .....hum phele bhi mill cukke h ....socho ...

ashish kosis krta h ...pr usss kuch ydd nhi aata h .....kiuki inn dono k uss khusti k match k elwa khi milna nhi hua tha.....aur kusti hue bhi bahut samay hoo chuka tha....

bakt k dimag n...... ashish k yd ko dhundli kr dee thi.....

Mast update bro

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

update 23
Ab aage
ashish- nhi bhai maine tumhe nhi phechana ....tum khud hee baata doh

shera- m hu guru ji ... Shera.....ydd h ajj s kuch saal phle ....*** Gaon m....ek khusti m app n mujhe patkhni dee thi.....tbb.....mere pita k khne p....app n mujhe apna sissya bhi siwkr kiya tha....

ashish- aare h ....abb ydd aaya ....aur Shera kaise hoo...tumhre pita aur tumhre ghr m sbb thik toh h n...

shera- h sb thik h guru ji.....bs pitaji pichle saal hee chaal baase ...

ashish- jnn k bahut dhukh hua bhai .....

shera-- hmm .....bhgvn k aage kiski chli h ...joh meri chlti guru ji....

ashish- y tumne shi kha.....woh upr wla joh bhi krta h ...woh shi hee krta h ....bhle woh hume aaj smjh....n aaye...pr....ane wle kl ....uss insn ko smjh aa hee jata h...

shera- shi kha apne.....waise app yha kaise ...aur akele aaye h...k....ki bhabhi aur bache bhi aaye h...

ashish- h.....abb yhi rehna .....apne biwi aur bache k sath..

shera- bahut khusi hui app ko dekh k....acha km kiya krte h app

ashish- aare woh gaon k bhr joh construction k km chl rha h n.....whi p majduri k km krta hu abhi toh .....baki kl kisne dekha h.....

shera- shi ...kha guru ji kl kisne dekha h....waise guru ji....app itne baare phelwn app kha ....majduri krne lge....m apna ek akhra kholne k soch rha tha ....aur uss m app s acha .....guru kha s milega.....app agr h kr de toh....mujhe bahut khusi hogi....aur jitna app majduri s kmte h toh..... usse jaada heee app mere sath kma lenge ...

ashish- waise kehte toh tum thik hee hoo....pr mujhe .....y sbb chore jmna hoo gya h..

shera- aare guru ji.....Shera chahe sadiyo sikr n kre.....pr jb usse sikr Krna hota h n....toh woh bare arm s kr leta h....kiuki woh gunn uske khoon m h....jaise app k andr h.....app chliye mere sath ... aur jgha dekh lijiye ...phir kl mujhe apna faisla baata dijiyge ...

andr s ...Sameera sb sunn rhi thi....amrit ko gaod m liye ....

jaisa hee Ashish ghr k andr Sameera ko baatne aaya ki woh Shera k sath j rha waise hee usse apne smne Sameera khri milli ....

sameera- y km app kr lijiye.....isse humre bache k bhavisya bhi sudhr jayega....

Ashish- hmm shyd tum shi keh rhi hoo....chlo thik h....m usse haa bol dunga...abhi m aaata hu kuch dair m..

y keh k ...Ashish nikl gya Shera k sath.....aur idhr amrit rone lga....toh sameera apne pyaare s bache ko chupp krne m lg gyi..

after 4 year...

ek bacha schl dress pehn k Tyr hoo rha tha...pr usse apna kpre pehne m muskil hoo rhi thi....tbhi ek admi aandr aaya...

"Toh humra sher schl jne k liye Tyr hoo rha h...."

uss admi n dekh uska beta kaise preshn hoo rha h...kpre phenne k liye......kiuki uska ek hath bachpn s ...hee km nhi krta isliye ....ussee bahut muskil hoo rhi thi kpra pehnne m...

woh admi ko cross krte hue....ek aurat aage gyi ....aur uss bche k....kpre phenne m mdd krne lagi....

"app itne bare phelwn h aur apne hee bete ko iu presn hote dekh rhe h ....""

"Sameera ....agr ajj humne iski mdd ki toh y kl bhi hume hee dhunde g....kisi musibt m parega toh......isse iu choti moti chizo s....preshn nhi hona h....y mera beta h.....y kmzor nhi hoo skta ....h...isse kl s m....apne sre dau pech sikaunga"

Sameera- koi jrurt nhi h....mere phool s bache ko prshn krne ki...y aesa hee thik h....

ashish- smjho sameera ajj y sirf kpr k bajhe s preshn h .....toh tum mdd krne lagi ...kl ko...agr y hum s durr ho gya aur kisi musibat m fss gya toh....kun hoga iski mdd k liye.....isse khud skchm bnn hoo g....

sameera- nhi m ....isse apne s kbhi durr nhi krungi ....khi nhi jne dungi m isse.....y mera bacha h....m isse nhi jne dungi....aur waise bhi jb tk humd dono ....h koi isse hath toh lga j dikhye ....

ashish- sameera tum baat ko smjh nhi rhi hoo..

Sameera- aur mujhe smjh n bhi nhi h....abb htye mujh apne bache ko nasta Krna h....phir schl bhi jna h isse...

Ashish- hmm...ab kia kahu.....dekh....lo....umid krta hu tumhe jld smjh aa jyega ki m kiya kehna chahat hu........

idhr sameera apne hatho s ....amrit. Ko khna khila rhi thi....phir usse schl chorne bhi gyi thi.....
......idhr Ashish ....apne bete k bhavisya k liye preshn tha .....
.....to be continued

Nice update bro

 

[Vk248517]

Nice update bro

 

[Winsam20]

Awesome update bhai waiting for next