Thriller khaamoshiya...Ek Rahasya (Completed)

[Siraj Patel]

Thread Title Changed On Ts's Request.

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Siraj Patel

 

[Ankitarani]

Thansk for comen frnd

 

[Ankitarani]

Thread Title Changed On Ts's Request.

Regards
Siraj Patel

Thankss

 

[Ankitarani]

Vaishali hero hai kahani ki. Kaand toh kuch gehra hai Ankitarani ji. Abhi toh usko jakhmi Bhai bhi samjhega bahot kuch aur ye Delhi Wala pariwar anjaane he fans gaya.

Haa kaand to hai...lekin vaishali hero ya villian ye abhi hm decide nhi kr skte ..lekin ha...vaishali ki acting mujhe v psnd hai...dmdar to hai wo

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

nice update ..ravi ne rajni ko pregnent kiya tha ya nahi pata nahi ,par vaishali ne maa ka naam lekar sahi se bhatkaya rajveer ko aur bhag gayi ..
ravi ke to kya kehne sapne me bhi maut hi dikhti hai ..
rajveer ka rona bhi sahi hai ek beti marr gayi aur dusri psycho bankar khoon karne jaa rahi thi aur ab ghar se bhi chali gayi ..

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

vaishali ne bahut chalakhi se disha ke ghar me entry li hai aur doodh ka fatna bhi apshakun ( andhvishwas ko badhawa nahi deta me par kahani me sab jayaj hai ) .

vaishali ke roop me hi apshakun aaya hai unke ghar ..aur vaishali ne bhi jhoothi kahani batayi waha pe ..jarur uska koi plan hoga ..

agar desai ko promotion chahiye tha to wo mujrim ko pakadkar milega par aisa nahi hua ..to uska khooni hona galat lagta hai aur phir uske khilaaf 2 gawaah bhi ho jaate ek vaishali aur uski saathi ..

rajveer bhi nahi warna wo rota nahi ghar me aur uska koi fayda bhi nahi honewala in sabse ..
shayad inme se koi bhi na ho par agar kahani me itne log hai to unme se hi ho sakta hai ..

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

par itne jaldi kaise mujrim mil sakta hai shayad vaishali ne gumraah karne ke liye waha aisa kaha ho

****** Vaishali-to aapne pta lga hi liya ki mene maara hai didi ko...to suno...maine didi ko kyu maara...didi se meri achhi khaasi banti rhi...lekin ek din didi ne..


ye reason pata chal hi nahi paaya ki ek din kya hua tha ..shayad kiya bhi ho khoon nisha ka ..par uski dost bhi uske hi umar ki hogi to club me pehechanne wala tha nisha ka ...nisha usse friendly baat kar rahi thi ..

 

[parkas]

For completed 10k views on your story thread.....

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Blockbuster movie ki tarah story chal rahi hai. Vaishali ka kirdar to " Gupt " movie ki ' Kajol ' ki yaad dila raha hai. Aur sach me Vaishali ka kirdar mughe bhi jabardast lag raha hai.

Lekin abhi bhi mughe nahi lagta ki usne Apni bahan ka khun kiya hoga. Shayad wo apne bahan ke katilon ko khud hi saza dena chahti hai.

Rajbir ko sabse pahle to Vaishali ke kamre ki achhi tarah se talashi leni chahiye....Diwalo pe tange hue chadar ka matalab samaghna chahiye. Vaishali ka swabhav 3 saalo se kyon change hua... eska pata karna chahiye.

Vaishali ka Delhi Vijay ke ghar jana koe etafaaq nahi hai....ye uske mission ka hissa hi hoga.

Outstanding n fabulous writing skill Ankita Rani ji.

 

[prkin]

I am really liking this story.