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Thriller khaamoshiya...Ek Rahasya (Completed)
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Hi ankitarani welcomeDisclamer-is kahani ke sabhi patra or ghatnaye kalpnik hai...kisi bhi insan ya ghatna se iska koi sambandh nahi hai...
Khaamoshiya...Ek Rahasya..
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20/01/2015
6pm ..
Nisha-Nahi yar...bahot time ho jaega...hame ab chalna chahiye...
Anchal-como on kuch nahi hoga...bs 15min me ham log nikal jayege...
Nisha-wo baat nahi hai yr...mai phle kbhi is trh ke night club me nahi aayi..
Anchal-to kya hua...har insan hr kaam pahli baar to krta hi hai na...or isme bura kya hai....ham koi drink nhi kar rhe...koi ladke ka chakkar nhi hai....so
Nisha-haa par...papa ko pta lga to bahut panga ho jayega...u know na...unki kitni jaan pahchan hai...or wo aksar esi jagah raid daalne aate rahte hai..
Anchal smile karte hue-chinta mat kr...aaj ke bad tujhe yaha club me aane ki jarurt hi nahi pdegi...
Nisha-matlab...
Anchal-matlb ye ki...jislie ham yha aaye hai...wo kaam khatam.. to yha anaa nhi hoga na...
Or anchal ek smile kr deti hai...
Tabhi achank club me andhera ho jaata hai.......
1am
Maine kaha na...ki jo bhi ho jaye mujhe meri beti kisi bhi keemat pr mere ghar chahiye...
Rajveer chillakr or dri hui awaj me phon pr chilla chillakr baat kr rha tha...
""Haa sir...hm puri kosis kr rhe hai...jaise hi pta lgega...ham sbse pahle aapko inform krege...pr bs aap ghar se bahr mat nikaliyega..."dusri taef se inspector ne rajveer ko samjhate hue kaha...
Rajveer-tum sb log mujhe aane se ku rok rhe ho...
"Sir ...ho sakta hai ye raghav ka kaam ho...or aapke na rhne se..wo apki family ko hurt kr skta hai..so please aap unke paas rahiyega..."
Rajveer-haa thik hai pr...
"Kyaaaaa....nahi ye nahi ho sakta.....meri beti hame chhodkr nahi jaa sakti.."
Achank rajveer ko apni biwi ke rone ki awaaj sunai deti hai...or uske hath se phon gir jaata hai....
Introduction-
Rajveer commissionor of police hai...jisse achhe achhe gunde drte hai...adha crime to inke naam se hi khtm ho gya hai...jaha bhi joining hua smjho crime ke lie musibt bn gye..
Uma-rajveer ki biwi or ek house wife
Nisha-Rajveer ki beti.....or hotel mgmt ki study kr rhi hai...kuch hi mahine me shadi hone wali thi..
Arun-rajveer ka beta...school me pdhta hai..
Vaishali- sbse chhoti beti
Ye sb introduction ke lie tha...i know bht sare questions honge aap logo ke mind me...sbke jvab update ke sath sath mil jayege...
Ye ek thriller suspanse story hogi.....aap sbko bahut pasnd aayegi...bss update me thoda bht late ho skta hai...kafi readers ke msg aate the ki koi story start kru...chahe to update hafte me ek du....jldi dene ki kosis kia krugi...baaki aaplog support krna..i promise apko nirasha nhi hogi...your...Ankita rani
i am your big friend i am very happy to see you again.
For completed 2.50lk views on your story thread.....
غمگین
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غمگین
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BobaT zabardast update par plz ankita g hindi fonts me mat likha karo plzzzzz
غمگین
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Wow awesome update par yaar aab plzzz aap varsha ka role aacha banao na ki ek villain varsha ka aacha banna story me aur zayda maza degaUpdate was nice
Chori wala scene kafi funny tha
Cricket session ke dauran kuch error hain unhe correct kar lijiye for ex- ampire nahi umpire
Vaishu ko shweta aur neha ke relation ke bare me sab pata chal chuka hai aur wo usko marne wali hai
Arun ka neha ki safety ke liye Varsha ke against khada hona acha laga
let's see what happens next
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Sahi baat hai aap bas apni soch ke hisab se story aage badao kamaal ka likhti ho aap lagta hi nahi ki yeh story hai ek dam reality jesi lagti hai aapki stories really appreciate you you are a true genius on xfourm
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Alfaaz nahi aapki tareef karne ko wah ankitarani g aap kamaal ho aapki jese kahani koi likh hi nahi sakta mind blowing
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As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section. Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits. And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC "Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world. Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time. And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.
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