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Thriller khaamoshiya...Ek Rahasya (Completed)

Ankitarani

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स्टोरी बेहतरीन जा रही है । शुरुआत के दोनों अपडेट में बहुत कुछ देखने को मिला ।
वैशाली का इतना अधिक गुस्सा करना.... क्या कारण हो सकता है ? क्या वो अपनी बड़ी बहन को मिस कर रही है ? पुरे कमरे के दिवाल को कपड़े से क्यों ढककर रखी है ?
मुम्बई के बाद कहानी दिल्ली के एक परिवार से भी जुड़ गया है.... मालती , विजय , प्रिती , दिशा और तन्नु ।
अंकिता रानी जी... यहां पर जब तक स्टोरी के पन्द्रह , बीस अपडेट नहीं हो जाए तब तक रीडर नहीं जुड़ते हैं.... वो सोचते हैं कि पांच सात अपडेट के बाद राइटर स्टोरी अधूरा छोड़ कर भाग जायेगा ।
आप स्टोरी कंटिन्यू रखिए...लोग धीरे धीरे जुड़ते जायेंगे ।
मुझे पुरा यकिन है ये स्टोरी यहां के सबसे बेहतरीन स्टोरी में एक होगी ।
Thanks for coment...isi trh utsah bdhaate rhiye....orr...rhi baat vaishali ke gusse ki to...wo bhi jald pta lg skta hai....prr uske gusse se wo bht khrtank si lg rhi h...itna gussa achha n hota...dekhkte hai uska ye gussa use kis mukam tak pahuchaata hai....orrrr....deLhi wala priwar jo ek hasi khushi jindgi jee rha hai...dekhte hai unki khushi ese hi bne rhegi ya wha bhi kuch mod aayega....
 
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parkas

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nice and superb update....
Delhi and Mumbai in dono city ke family me kuch relation hai ha nai kuch pata nai chala...
please aap clear kar do to accha rahega....
 
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Ankitarani

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Update 3
2020
After 5yr...in police station...

Rajveer-desai...jra wo...akram wali file dena...
Desai dhundne lgta hai...
Desai file dhundkr rajveer ko deta hai...
Rajveer- kaha hoga ye akram....

Desai-Jb se jail se bhaaga hai..iska kuch ata pta nhi h...1saal se kisi ne ise dekha tk nhi...logo ka kahna hai ki ya to wo mr gya ya fr desh chhod diya hoga...

Rajveer sigrate jlaakr ek kash lgake muh se dhua chhodte hue-hmmm....
Sahi salamt hota to...ab tk hmare kbje me hota...bhla kisi ki kya mjaal ki hmare samne tik ske..

Mumbai police is best police....
Desai-haa sir...mumbai police best hai...aajtak hmne kisi ko nhi chhoda...bss..
Ek ko chhod diya...


Rajveer kuch sochte hue-desai...us case ko mt yad dilao...tum jaante ho na...kitni mehnt ki thi hm sbne...
Rajveer kursi se uthkr desai ke paas jaata hai...or uske kandhe pr haath rkhkr..

"Desai...hm sb kuch nhi h ..hmse kahi jaada intelligent log mojud h....hr sher ka ek swa sher hota h...wo to bs...khud ko motivate krne k lie ...khud ki tareef krni pdti hai..."

Desai-nahi sir....ek khuni kanoon se intelligent nhi ho skta ...or hona bhi nahi chahiye...aisa hone lge to...aam insano ka to jeena mushkil ho jayega...

Rajveer-Tum thk kahte ho desai...bahut si baate aisi hai...jo us case ke bare me muje jvaab nhi mile the..
Desai utsukta se-wo kya sir..

Rajveer marker uthakr white board pr likhta hai. .

"Wo ye desai ....ki...
No 1-ye bs movies me hota hai...wrna india me itni intelligent ldki nhi hoti...
I mean hoti hai...prrr wo ese kaam me involve n hoti...jis trh se wo sb kia gya tha..wo kisi aam aadmi ka kaam n tha...wo koi peshewar khuuni kr skta hai...or india me...peshewar khuuni ...ldki.....baat kuch hajam n hoti...yha india ki ldkia bs 3 baate sochti h...


Desai-wo kya sir ..
Rajveer-shadi karke kaise priwar chlayegi.
Use sundr kaise dikhnaa hai ....orr jo pdhai krti hai unhe success kaise hona hai...
Lekin is trh ka case ab tk samne nhi aaya...

Rajveer white board pr or likhta hai...

"Tumhe yaad hai desai...postmaartem me...forensic lab me ye tak pta n lga tha ki...glaa kaata kis hathiyar se gya hai..."

Rajveer-tum bhi achhe se jaante ho...ki hr chij apne andr ke kuch particle thoda bht chhodti h...agr wo kahi bhi touch ho to...
Desai-ha sir...
Rajveer-forensic lab me btaya gya ki...wha kisi lohe...steel...kanch...lkdi....pathhar...kisi bhi chij ka koi surag nhi mila...mtlb gle kisi bhi chij ne nhi kaata gya...lekin...kta hua saaf dikh rha hai ...doctors ne btaya ki bs...gle pr nisha ke hi hath ke nishan the...jo usne khud ko protect krne k lie use kie the.....


Desai bdi dhyan se sun rha tha...
Desai-iska mtlb usne sucide kia tha..
Rajveer-sucide....murder ki trh...
desai murder sucide ki trh kia jaata hai...na ki sucide murder ki trh.. or wo sucide kyu kregi bhla...club ki lite bnd krke...koi bhi logic nhi hai desai...
Desai-sir...beti kis hostel me thi..
Rajveer-Chandigarh...lekin isse kya lena dena...
Desai-ho sakta hai ki...hostel se hi koi connection ho...
Rajveer-wha mene pta to kia tha...kuch n pta lg paya...lekin chandigar yha se bhut dur hai...murder yha hua hai...chandigarh se koi mtlb nhi hai....


Desai-sir kabtak is case me uljhe rhege...jb bhi is case ke bare me sochta hu sr drd hi hota hai...
Rajveer-tumhara bs sr drd hota hai desai...mere sr ke sath dil me bhi drd hota hai ..

Desia-mai samjh skta hu sir...lekin...is case ke bare me jb sochte hai...kuch n milta...bs ulajh kr rah jaate hai.....

Rajveer-nahi desai.....aisa nahi hai...galti hm hi kr rhe hai kahi...kuch to miss kr rhe hai.....
Baat sirf meri beti ki nhi h...mai nahi chahta ki ese shaatir criminal smaaj me rhe...ye pure smaaj k lie khtra hai...


Desai- haa sir...or islie hm mahine me ek bar to is case pr najr maarte hi hai...wo bhi unofficialy...

Rajveer-officialy to ab kuch kr hi n skte...lekin...ese kbhi kbhi discuss krne se...shayd kuch smjh aajaye....




Delhi
8march2020

Morning
8am
""Bhabhiiiiiiiii....ye kyaa kiya apne....mummy dekho bhabhi ko...sone nhi deti hai...."

Disha khud ke upr paani daalne se ...cheekhti hui bolti hai...

Preity muskurati hui-apko kya lgta hai madam....mai subah subah uth jau or tumhe sone du...
Disha muh sa bnate hue-whatt....to kya...ye apki sasural hai...apko yha jaagna hi hoga...

"Ji nahi ye bhi hmari bahu ka ghar hi hai...kbhi sasural mt bolna..."
Darvaje pr khadi malti dono ko dekhte hue bolti hai...

Disha-haa thik hai...par mujhe to sone do na...
Preity-madam 9baj rhe hai...ye konsa time hai sone ka...
Disha geeli chadar ko niche fekti hai...or dusri chadar uthake niche farsh pr bichakr let jaati hai...
"Aaj sunday hai..."


Malti-ye ldki hmesha apni hi karti hai...chlo beti...apna kaam krte hai...sone do ise...
Preity-aaj khana nhi dugi isko...
Disha-I dont need...mai khud se bna lugi...or aapse tasty bnaati hu...

Preity kaam krne lgti hai...or bathroom me jaise hi jaati hai...
Uffff
Bathroom me
Vijay naha rha tha...pura nanga...
Preity ekdm se dekhkr gate bnd kr deti hai...
Preity-apko sharm nhi aati kya...kmsekm gate to band kr lete..
Vijay-are...tum to aise ghbra rhi ho jese muje pahle kbhi nanga dekha hi na ho...

Pretiy drvaje pr kaan lgaakr dhire se bolti hai...
"Dekha hai...2saaal se dekh rhi hu...lekin ...meri jagah koi or hota to..."
Vijay-kon ho sakta hai...mummy hmare kamre me aati nhi...papa office hai..disha so rhi hoti h istime...or tannu istime coaching me hoti hai...so..."

Preity-very funny....
Or achank gate khulta hai vijay preity ko andr kheech leta hai..
Preity-kyaa kr rhe ho...chhodo muje...koi bhi aaskta hai...
Vijay nanga hi preity ko apni Banho me bhr leta hai...or uski gardan pr kiss krne lgta hai...
Preity-kyaa kr rhe ho...mai geeli ho jaugi...
Vijay-to ho jao na jaan....chlo kpde nikalo...
Preity-tum pagal ho gye ho kya....chhodo muje...

Preity jor lgakr chhutne ki kosis kr rhi thi..
Lekin vijay ki majbut banho se niklana bahut hi mushkil tha...

Akhir vijay ek gym trainer tha...
Uska khud ka gyn tha...ab trainer hai to...body to achhi khaasi hogi hi...
V shape kamar...or 22inch biceps....
Chest bahr ki taraf or pet andr...
Aisi body ki...pdos ki kai ldkiya use dekhkr aah bharti rhi...

Jaha se bhi niklta tha logo ki najar uspr tik jaati thi...
Har jagah centre of attrecttion rahta tha...
Preity-plss presan mt kro...aah...mummy aajayegi...
Vijay bina kuch sune bs preity ke gardan ko choome jaa rha tha...
Ab preity bhi bahakne lgi thi...or uske hath ab vijay ki kamar pr jaa chuke the...
Vijay gardan ke bad....preity ke honto ko anguthe se sahlata hai...
Preity ke shriir me bijli si dod gyi...preity ab apne honth vijay ke honto or rakhti hai....

"Preity......kaha hai beta..."
Achank preity ke kaano me malti ki awaaj pdti hai...
Prety khud ko smbhalti hui-vijay...mummy aarhi hai...
Or preity bathroom se baahr nikal jaati hai...

Vijay nahadhokar apne gym me pahuch jata hai...

Gym me vijay ne tshirt or lower pahna tha or kisi ko kuch bta rha tha..
Samne exersice kr rhi 2ldkiya aaps me baate kr rhi thi...
1st-yaar ye vijay sir hitne hot hai na..
2nd vijay ko dekhti hui-kya tu bhi...
1st-haa yar...dekh kitni ksi hui body...kya dole shole hai...inki wife ke to bde mje honge..

2nd-mai to sochti hu ki...inka..wo..
kaisa hoga ..
1st-sahi kaha....soch ye nange kaise lgege....
2nd-line maar..kaam ho gya to dekh lena kaise dikhege nange ye...
1st-kitni to line di hai inhe...lgta hai jaada hi patnivrata hai...

Or dono is baar pr hsne lgti hai...
2nd-ek baat bta...jb wo tujhe training
de rhe the....kuch to feel kia hoga na tune...

1st-kuch kya...lower me ubhar to saaf dikhai deta hai....maine to bahut chance diye...kai baar unko touch bhi kia pr..wo kuch responce hi nhi dete...

2nd-Delhi ki hjaro ldkiya marti hai inpr...wo tujhe hi kyuu line de...tujhme hai hi kya..
1st-saaali...tujhse to achhi hi hua...tu to chusa hua aam h...orr..
2nd-haa bhai....or tere to aam hi ab chusne layak hue hai...hahaha..



Mumbai...
6am...
"Good morning papa..."
Rajveer park me betha newspaper padh rha tha...
Rajveer-very good morning beta...aaj jaldi...koi khas baat...

Arun -haa papa...maine socha hai ki...ab mai bhi jldi utha kruga....akhir jldi uthne se sehat achhi rhti hai na...
Rajveer-ooho....kya bat h...aaj achank sehat ki chinta.....
Arun-haa papa...aaajse mai roj jaldi uthuga...
Rajveer-hmm...vashali uthi.....

Arun-nahi papa...pr mai uthaata hu use...
Arun vaishali ke kamre ki trf chal deta hai...
Arun jaise hi vaishali ke gate ko knock krta hai...gate khud se khul jaata hai...

Or samne ka njaara dekhkr arun ki ankhe fat jaati hai...
Deewar pr har trf chadar ltki hui thi...
Arun charo trf najre ghumakr dekhta hai...deewar ka ek kona tak nhi dikh rha tha...
"Ye kya hai....ye akhir....chadar ...yha kyu hai...kya isne inhe sukhaya hua hai...ye kya krti hai kuch samjh nhi aata..."

Arun itna ajib najara dekhkr soch me pd jaata hai...tbhi achank vaishali uth jaati hai...or arun ko dekhkr chiilla deti hai..
"Arun.... Ye kya bkwas hai...tu yha kya kr rha hai...."

Arun piche mudta hua-hey...mai bs tujhe jagane aaya tha...prrr ye sb...ye chadar ese kuu ltkaayi hai...
Vaishali-ye mera kmra hai...mai jo bhi kru...tujhe kya.....get out of my house...
Arun-teri problm kya hai...tu hmesa chillati ku rhti hai.....kbhi pyar se baat n kr skti kya...
Vaishali-pyaar ......my foot...you get out wrna mai sr fod dugi tera...

Arun-hey...look...mai tera bhai hu.....tu normal sisters ki trah kuu nhi rahti hai...
Vaishali bed se uthkr arun ke samne aakr uske coller pkd leti hai...

Vaishali-mera koi bhai...koi baap ...koi maa nhi hai...smjha tu...m alone...totally alone...khun kr dugi sbka...wrna nikal ja yha se...

Arun vaishali ki ankho me gussa dekhkr dr jaata hai...or bina kuch kahe kamre se baahr aajata hai.....
Arun jaanta tha ki vaishali bahut gusse wali hai...pr aaj uska gussa itna bhyank tha....arun ne socha bhi nhi tha...

Bahar use uma dikhai deti hai...
Uma-kya hua...tu itna gusse me ku hai...
Arun-iski problm kya hai mom...ye kbhi pyar se baat ku n kr skti....

Uma-kya kru beta...usne to presan kr diya hai sbko...kisi se bnakr nhi rakhti...hmesa gusse me rhti hai...pta ye iska gussa ise kaha le jayega...


At breakfast table...

Rajveer-kyaa baat hai...itna sannata ku hai...
Uma vaishali ki taraf ishara krti hai...
Rajveer-kya hua vaishu...
Vaishali-mujhe aajtk kuch hua hai kya...jo ab hoga.....


Arun-hmesha ulta jvaab hi rahta hai iska...
Rajveer-kya baat hai beta....ku hmesa gusse me rhti ho...kuch problm hai to hme btao...hm tumhare parents hai....
Vaishali-kya yha mujhe koi khana khane dega..yaa fr mai chalu...

Arun-ek bahan ko bhgwan ne chheen lia...or ek ye hai....kbhi kbhi lgta hai...ki...meri koi bahan hi nhi hai...na kbhi pyar se baat...na hasna ...na bolna...

Vaishali-pyaar chahiye tujhe...ye le...
Vaushali apne khaane ko arun ki plates me daal deti hai...
Vaishali-kha pyar...apne hisse ka khana tujhe de diya...or kitna pyar chahiye...

Or vaishali uthkr jane lgti hai...
Rajveer-vaishu...ye kya btmeeji hai.....akhir tumhe chaiye kya...
Vaishali rukkar-bs 3chije chahiye...de sakte ho aap...

Rajveer-kya...
Vaishali palatkr dining table pr haath markr.

Pahla-i dont want anybody come in my room...dusra mujjhe koi swal jvab nhi chaiye....or teesra..aagr aap ye nhi kr skte to..mujhe baahr nikal dijiye ghr se...baahr job krugi or araam se rhugi.....
Or itna kahkr vaishali apne kamre ki trf chl deti hai...

Rajveer-iske kamre me kon gya tha...
Arun-papa...mai...prr ...mene to bs itna pucha ki...ye kya kia hua hai..

Rajveer-matlb..
Arun-uske kamre me hr diwar pr chaadar latki hui hai...wo mujhe ajib lga...
Rajveer-paagal hai wo...wo ajib to uske kam bhi ajib...uske kamre me koi nhi jayega...smjhe...

Arun-ji papa.....prr aisa kya hai...wo rokti ku hai sbko...
Uma-kyuki use sfaai bahut pasand hai...uske kamre me koi jaaye uska farsh ganda ho jaye use biklul achha nhi lgta ...

Arun-prrrr maine pucha to boli ki...mera koi nhi hai...mai sbka khun kr dugi....
Rajveer-what .....lgta hai kisi psycatrist ko dikhana pdega...iski dimaaki halat muje thk nhi lgti...

Mai jldi hi doc se meating fix krta hu...or dikhaate hai isko...




Next update will be soon...
nice and superb update....
Delhi and Mumbai in dono city ke family me kuch relation hai ha nai kuch pata nai chala...
please aap clear kar do to accha rahega....
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Thnkss coment k lie...kya pta in dono families me kuch relation hai ya nhi....relation ho bhi sakta hai...or aisa bhi ho skta hai...ki dono story alg alg chle...isse aapko bhi double story ka mjaa milegaa....dekhte hai kya hota hai...
 

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Welcome Ankita Ji and congrats for your new story. The start of this story is look awesome and seems to be superb suspense thriller. The incest part we know you are one of the best incest writer thats proves with your story AAAHHH…SISAK JAWANI KI.

Ankita ji aap to aapki story AAAHHH…SISAK JAWANI KI complete nahin kar payi lekin Makin Ji ne aapki story ko continue kiya lekin aapki tarah nahin likh paarehe hain. Aapki lekhni aur unki lekhni mai bahut farq hai. Mere hisaab se to Manik Ji ne aapki story ki to band baja diye aur story ko kahan se kahan legaye. Ab uss story mai koi maja nahin raha jaise aapki lekhni mai rehta tha aur hum besari se update ka intjar karte the. Mujhe lagta hai ab iss story super hit hogi aur hum besabri se update ka wait karenge.
 

Ankitarani

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Welcome Ankita Ji and congrats for your new story. The start of this story is look awesome and seems to be superb suspense thriller. The incest part we know you are one of the best incest writer thats proves with your story AAAHHH…SISAK JAWANI KI.

Ankita ji aap to aapki story AAAHHH…SISAK JAWANI KI complete nahin kar payi lekin Makin Ji ne aapki story ko continue kiya lekin aapki tarah nahin likh paarehe hain. Aapki lekhni aur unki lekhni mai bahut farq hai. Mere hisaab se to Manik Ji ne aapki story ki to band baja diye aur story ko kahan se kahan legaye. Ab uss story mai koi maja nahin raha jaise aapki lekhni mai rehta tha aur hum besari se update ka intjar karte the. Mujhe lagta hai ab iss story super hit hogi aur hum besabri se update ka wait karenge.
Thanks frnd...is sotry se bhi aapko khushi hogi...and plsss ek nivedan hai kisi bhi writter ko esa n bolte...manik ji ne bhi achha likha...hota ye h ki aap logo ke dimak me meri story...mera trika hai...islie apko unka story ajib lgi ye natural h...agr mai unki kisi story ko aagr bhdau to unke reader ko meri story bekar lge...har kisi ka trika alg to hota hi h...mai to unhe thanks bolti hu...ki story aage bdhai...baaki sbki psnd hoti h apni apni...or isme bhi incesr part apko achha lgega...thans
 

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आपके कहानी लिखने का स्टाइल अलग है. अच्छा लगा.

और कहानी अभी तक की भी सही है.
 
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