Thriller khaamoshiya...Ek Rahasya (Completed)

[DARK WOLFKING]

Nahi bs...jaada lmbi nhi.....jo aap chah rhe ho wo sb bhi hoga...

yaha maine isliye puchha ki aapne kaha tha ..waise thrill aur suspense kahani me mujhe sex pasand nahi hai ..
(Frdns sex k lie koi jldi baaji ke lie mt kahna...ye incest hai...or sb hoga...bs thoda sa plot bnne do...and yes...plss jo bhi read kre achhe se read krna...bad me ye kesa hua wo kese hua ..ye mt puchna...sb kuch story me hi hai....)

 

[Ankitarani]

yaha maine isliye puchha ki aapne kaha tha ..waise thrill aur suspense kahani me mujhe sex pasand nahi hai ..
(Frdns sex k lie koi jldi baaji ke lie mt kahna...ye incest hai...or sb hoga...bs thoda sa plot bnne do...and yes...plss jo bhi read kre achhe se read krna...bad me ye kesa hua wo kese hua ..ye mt puchna...sb kuch story me hi hai....)

Yha psnd aayega apko bs...bs bne rhe..

 

[manikmittalme07]

Thanks frnd...is sotry se bhi aapko khushi hogi...and plsss ek nivedan hai kisi bhi writter ko esa n bolte...manik ji ne bhi achha likha...hota ye h ki aap logo ke dimak me meri story...mera trika hai...islie apko unka story ajib lgi ye natural h...agr mai unki kisi story ko aagr bhdau to unke reader ko meri story bekar lge...har kisi ka trika alg to hota hi h...mai to unhe thanks bolti hu...ki story aage bdhai...baaki sbki psnd hoti h apni apni...or isme bhi incesr part apko achha lgega...thans

Thanks ankita ji samajhne ke liye...aap wakai mein bahut achhi writer ho. main aapke mukable 1% bhi nahi hun is baat ka mujhe ehsaas hai. par mujhe wo story bahut achhi lagi thi aur mujhe laga ke use aage badhana chahiye to maine apne hisab se use aage badhaya. bahut tarah ke response mile kuchh positive kuchh negative. main hamesha hi critics ko bhi utna hi samman deta hun jitna appreciate karne walon ko. halanki critism bahut achhi baat hai par in bhai sahib ne to ekdam se aise bol diya ke samajh mein nahi aata ke kya kahun. chalo khair sabki apni samajh hoti hai. yeh log yeh baat nahi sochte ke inke aisa karne se us insaan ke dil par kya bitegi jo itna samay lagakar kuchh likhta hai.

ab aate hain aapki current story par. Ise main itni utsukta ke saath padh raha hun ke aajkal mere pass audits ki wajah se time bahut kam hai par main aapki story jarur padhta hun kyunki yeh wakai mein bahut achhi hai. aap please aise hi likhte rahiye aur haan is story ko poora jarur kijiye warna readers mein bechaini si ho jaati hai. many many congratulations for your story.

 

[Ankitarani]

Thanks ankita ji samajhne ke liye...aap wakai mein bahut achhi writer ho. main aapke mukable 1% bhi nahi hun is baat ka mujhe ehsaas hai. par mujhe wo story bahut achhi lagi thi aur mujhe laga ke use aage badhana chahiye to maine apne hisab se use aage badhaya. bahut tarah ke response mile kuchh positive kuchh negative. main hamesha hi critics ko bhi utna hi samman deta hun jitna appreciate karne walon ko. halanki critism bahut achhi baat hai par in bhai sahib ne to ekdam se aise bol diya ke samajh mein nahi aata ke kya kahun. chalo khair sabki apni samajh hoti hai. yeh log yeh baat nahi sochte ke inke aisa karne se us insaan ke dil par kya bitegi jo itna samay lagakar kuchh likhta hai.

ab aate hain aapki current story par. Ise main itni utsukta ke saath padh raha hun ke aajkal mere pass audits ki wajah se time bahut kam hai par main aapki story jarur padhta hun kyunki yeh wakai mein bahut achhi hai. aap please aise hi likhte rahiye aur haan is story ko poora jarur kijiye warna readers ein bechaini si ho jaati hai. many many congratulations for your story.

 

[Ankitarani]

Thanks ankita ji samajhne ke liye...aap wakai mein bahut achhi writer ho. main aapke mukable 1% bhi nahi hun is baat ka mujhe ehsaas hai. par mujhe wo story bahut achhi lagi thi aur mujhe laga ke use aage badhana chahiye to maine apne hisab se use aage badhaya. bahut tarah ke response mile kuchh positive kuchh negative. main hamesha hi critics ko bhi utna hi samman deta hun jitna appreciate karne walon ko. halanki critism bahut achhi baat hai par in bhai sahib ne to ekdam se aise bol diya ke samajh mein nahi aata ke kya kahun. chalo khair sabki apni samajh hoti hai. yeh log yeh baat nahi sochte ke inke aisa karne se us insaan ke dil par kya bitegi jo itna samay lagakar kuchh likhta hai.

ab aate hain aapki current story par. Ise main itni utsukta ke saath padh raha hun ke aajkal mere pass audits ki wajah se time bahut kam hai par main aapki story jarur padhta hun kyunki yeh wakai mein bahut achhi hai. aap please aise hi likhte rahiye aur haan is story ko poora jarur kijiye warna readers mein bechaini si ho jaati hai. many many congratulations for your story.

Thanks...for like my story...and us baat pr aap presan mt hoiye..aap whritter ho..jaante ho hr trh ki baate hoti h...anyway...aap apni jagah sahi hai...or mai apni jagah...koi km ya jaada nhi hota...u story pr apke bhut writter hai...use cmplt kijiye...

 

[parkas]

For completed 5k views on your story thread.....

 

[Enigma]

Romanchak aur vishesh. Aapko fir se dekh Kar bahot Khushi Hui Ankitarani ji. Kaafi samay baad wapsi bhi ek jabardast kahani ke sath. Jiwan me kabhi samay mile toh sisak jawani ki kahani ko bhi disha dikhaiyega. Wo ek behtareen rachna thi jiske sath sirf aap he nayaye Kar sakti hai.

 

[Ankitarani]

For completed 5k views on your story thread.....

Thnks....

 

[Ankitarani]

Romanchak aur vishesh. Aapko fir se dekh Kar bahot Khushi Hui Ankitarani ji. Kaafi samay baad wapsi bhi ek jabardast kahani ke sath. Jiwan me kabhi samay mile toh sisak jawani ki kahani ko bhi disha dikhaiyega. Wo ek behtareen rachna thi jiske sath sirf aap he nayaye Kar sakti hai.

Thnks frd...and soryy ab us story ko n touch kr paaugi kuki us story ko kai writter ne shuru kia tha....ab use touch krna sahi nhi ..

 

[Obsessed]

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