Fantasy Khamoshi - The Angel & Devil

[mashish]

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[ankuraggar]

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[mashish]

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[ankuraggar]

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1. Invincible - Too strong too defeat (Running - 4 update given)
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[Black water]

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[Naik]

UPDATE -1

PART – I : THE PERFECT ANGEL

CHAPTER 1: The light and the serpent

Samay se pahale, anant kaal tha. aur isake ant mein, yah sab bacha rahega. anant kaal ke lie ek bhagavaan ka samay hai. usaka saar aur usaka vaas. aur shaashvat shoonyata aur andhakaar mein, bhagavaan shuddh aur sabase shaktishaalee roop mein jaanate the ki ye do taakaten kabhee bhee astitv mein theen, ek doosare se khud ko mukt karane ke lie prabhu ke dil mein yuddh ladate hue.
brahmaand ka bhaagy, abhee tak banaaya jaana tha, is pradhaan ladaee mein tay kiya gaya tha, jab achchha ant mein majaboot saabit hua aur prabal hua. is prakaar, bhagavaan ne khud ke bheetar se buraee ko bhula diya aur use apane baen haath mein majabootee se kaid kar liya taaki vah kabhee bach na jae. ghrna aur niraasha kee ek tarkaheen chhaaya, judaee se kamajor aur haar se apamaanit, ek hee ichchha ke saath bhagavaan kee ungaliyon ke beech chupake. badala.
buraee se mukt, bhagavaan shakti aur prem mein badhe. lekin usake lie pyaar karane ke lie kuchh bhee nahin tha. tab usane apana daahina haath oopar uthaaya, aur usamen se roshanee aaee. ek phlaish itana teevr tha ki prabhu kee aankhen band ho gaeen, yah samay ka janm tha jaisa ki ham jaanate hain. prakaash ke lie, jise shaashvat hona chaahie, shaant ho gaya. aur isake mool bindu par, bhagavaan ke daahine haath kee vishaal hathelee par, ab sabase sundar chhota praanee tha. srshtikarta ke samaan siddh. ek naajuk bachcha, kaale baalon vaalee naaliyon ke saath aur khud ke naram prakaash mein lipate hue. vah apane sarvashaktimaan pita kee chhavi aur samaanata mein tha, usane apanee peeth par kie gae naajuk pankhon kee jodee ko chhodakar, ek saphed ke pankhon ke saath itanee ujjval hai ki ve chamakate dikh rahe the.
chhote ne nirmal prem kee muskaan mein apanee aankhen kholeen aur bhagavaan ko aanand se rote dekha. ek khushee jise unhonne nahin socha tha vah sambhav tha. nyoophaund bhaavana se aage badhakar, prabhu ne apane pahale shabdon ko, pyaare bete ko apana pavitr naam prakat kiya. bhagavaan kee krpa se usake dil mein baadh aa gaee, bachche ne pahalee baar apane chhote pankhon ko haraaya aur ud gaya. unhonne golee maaree, phusaphusae, chadh gae, aur khushee ke unmatt nrty mein utar gae. unhonne prem ke nirvivaad roop se prashansa mein, bina ruke prabhu ka naam doharaaya. vah hamesha ke lie apane bhagavaan ke chaaron or udana chaahata tha.
aur vah ud gaya aur samay beetane ke saath ud gaya aur vah paripakv ho gaya, bachche ko ek ladake mein badalane ke lie. bhagavaan ke lie, yah ek bachche ke roop mein khud ko dekhane jaisa tha.
prabhu kee aseemata par udate hue, achaanak pankhon vaale ko pyaar kee tulana mein ek alag bhaavana ka anubhav kiya gaya tha, jise vah ab tak jaanata tha. ek andhere aur damanakaaree chhaaya us par ek labaade kee tarah utaree.
oopar dekhate hue, unhonne dekha, ek aseem dooree par, bhagavaan ke vishaal haathon mein se ek ne ek kaalee aatma ko pakad liya jo khud ko mukt karane ke lie ek avishvasaneey sangharsh mein jhijhak aur hil gaya.
ladaka vahaan khada tha, acharaj mein tairata hua, us ash‍leel roop ke saath aashchary aur ajeeb aakarshan ke mishran mein.
"yah jaanavar hai jo mere bheetar ghir gaya," bhagavaan ne khulaasa kiya. "isase daro mat, kyonki main ise tumhen chot nahin pahunchaane doonga."
"aisa bhala kaise srshtikarta ke bheetar ho sakata hai, jo keval achchhaee, kaaran aur sundarata hai?"
"bhagavaan kee prakrti aapakee samajh se pare ek rahasy hai."
"haan, mere bhagavaan," ladake ne apana sir jhukaate hue kaha, "mainne keval us pyaar aur chinta ke lie poochha jo mere paas hai."
“yaad rakho, mera beta. meree poornata ke saath, mainne aapako gyaan diya. buraee ko pahachaanane aur rokane ke lie isaka upayog karen yadi yah kabhee bhee ise praapt karane ke lie door se hee aapake dil ya upakramon mein pravesh karata hai. mahaanatam prem aur gyaan kee shaktiyaan hain. unake khilaaph rosh aur shaury kee koee shakti nahin hai.
” ladake ne prabhu ke upahaaron ko sveekaar kiya. lekin buraee kee gavaahee mein, usane apanee maasoomiyat kho dee aur nagn hone ke lie sharm mahasoos kee. yah mahasoos karate hue, nirmaata ne use ek kaale baage ke saath pradaan kiya, jo ek naram aur majaboot kapade se bana tha, pahanane ke lie.
bhagavaan ne tab apane baen haath ko ladake kee drshti se baahar kar diya, jisane apanee shakti, buddhi aur sundarata ke sheersh par vayask banane ke lie prabhu ke chaaron or apanee udaan phir se shuroo kee.
unakee rachana se santusht hokar, bhagavaan ne unhen ek naam diya. "main aapako param snehee Samael, sabase priy putr kahoonga."
khushee ke aansoo rone ke lie samael kee baaree thee. vah apane pita ke prati garv aur aabhaaree mahasoos karata tha.

Prem prem hai koi sauda nhi,
jisne kiya whi jaane,
prabhu bhi bach paye nhi,
moh hi ye aisa jagaye.

Awesome superb

 

[Naik]

Abhi tk apne padha ki bhagwan ne brahamand ki utapati krne k liye socha aur us soch ka parinam nikla ek angel jiska naam unhone rkha samuel wahi unhone apne andar samai bura ko apne haath mein sthr krr liya aur samuel ko ashawasan diya ki wo uska ahit hi hone denge....... ab aage.........

Update - 2

Chapter - 1 : The light and the serpent (continued).....

"tum bahut shaanadaar aur samjhdar ho, meree pyaaree saamuel, aur ab mainne tumhaare jaise doosaron ko banaane ka phaisala kiya hai.

Haalaanki, ve aapakee chhav mein honge. Aap mere lie hamesha pasandeeda rahenge aur mujhe poornata ka upahaar dene vaala ekamaatr sheyar aapka hoga.

Mai unhe aapki svargadooton ki jaati bulaonga, aur ve mere or aapake saath anant kaal saajha karane ke lie dhany honge.

Namaskaar ho prabhu," namaskaar ke saath samel ne kaha.

Aur bhagavaan ne apne daahine haath ko aage kiya aur, ek hee jhapakee ke saath, ek chaandee aur chamakadaar shahar ko saamane le aaye, itana vishaal ki usane khud ke neeche maujood hawa ko bhar diya.

"yah svargadooton ka nivaas sthaan hoga. pahala svarg. saaree srshti isake neeche vidyamaan hogee. oopar, keval prabhu hee honge." Aur samuel ne silver city ke lie udaan bharee.

isakee deevaaron se ek naram aur sukhad prakaash utapan ho ha tha. aur samuel mehel k mukhy dvaar se gujara aur vishaal galiyaaron aur chamakadaar deevaaron ke vishaal baade ke paar kiya.

waha prr koi seedhiyaan nahin theen, pankhon vaale praaniyon ka unke lie koi upyog nahin tha. Imaarat ke mahima ko sankhyaon mein vyakt kiya gaya tha. Pachchees karod kamare the; vibhinn aakaaron ke aur chhah sau ninyaanabe hajaar halls; chaar sau aur ikkees hajaar storeroom; ek sau saintees hajaar kaaryashaalaen; chaudah hajaar varg; terah hajaar saarvajanik tovar; paanch hajaar aur chhah phorj; chaar hajaar aur paanch sau harbal gumbad; ek sau ikahattar sanrakshikaen; chaunsath deerghaen; baarah praant; aur ek kendreey mahal, jahaan se vahaan ki vishaal meenaaren ghoomatee hain, isake sheersh par shuddh oorja ke saat bade aur rahasyamayee muharon ka alankaran hai.

Samuel apne ghutno prr aaya, jo ki prabhu ke kaam se hairaan tha.

“utho, mere pyaare bete. abhee bhee bahut kuchh dekha jaana baakee hai. ”

Aur samuel ne shahar kee seema se pare udaan bharee aur pahale se neeche teen anay heavens, ye heavens ke astitv ko dekhakar stabdh rah gaya. ek ke baad ek, unake aayaam shahar jaise hee vishaal the.

Doosara svarg sundar hare-bhare kheton, saaph aur shaant pani ki jheelon ka ek maidaan tha.

Teesara svarg, naram saphed ret ka ek registaan, jismen thandee havayen beh rhi hotee hain aur phal aur paanee se bharapoor hote hain.

Chautha svarg, anaginat khaiyon aur prabhaavashaalee sundarata aur sadbhaav, ghane aur band jangalon aur kam taapamaan ke pahaadon kee ek mozek hai, lekin itana kam sukhad nahin hai. achambhit, samuel bhagavaan ke paas laut aaya, jo shaanadaar silver city par mandaraa rhe the. aur sarvashaktimaan ke daahine haath se doosara svargadoot aaya. aur bhagavaan ne unhen gaibriyal ka naam diya, jo sabase khoobasoorat aavaaj mein se ek thee.

Superb fantastic update brother

 

[Naik]

Ab tk aap ab ne paha ki samuel apne bahiyon k rehne ki vayavastha krte hai aur anay sawargo mein jakr un sbke liye saaman lana shuru kr dete hai....

ab aage....

Update- 4

Jab tak pahadon mein se kisi ek ko nishana nahin banaaya, tab tak samuel ne un svargadooton ki aankhon se un jameenon ko noch daala.
Usane teji se gota lagaaya, pahaad ke dakshinee deevaar se hote hue, thos chattaan kee vibhinn paraton ko paar karate hue, aur pahaad k shikhar se baahar nikalakar usane shahar mein udaan bharee.
Samuel ek forge ke neeche chala gaya. Vaha prr usane apne andar vidyaman brahmaand kee aanch ko badhaaya, aur apne bayen haath se ek teevr lau ko chhod diya, jisane ek aag ko prajvalit kiya.
Dhaatu ke hathauda ka nirmaan karane ke lie garmee aur apni mutthee ka upayog karate hue, samuel ne apane naakhoonon ke saath tej karate hue, pahale blade ko tayar kiya.
Samuel ne hi pehli kulhaadee banai thi. Vaapas forge mein jakar unhone naakhoonon aur lakadee ke slaits ke nirmaan kee anumati dee, jiske saath unhone chaar chhote bed banaye.
Jab unhone ye bed apne chotte bhaiyon lo dikhaye to svargadoot chakit rah gae. ve krtagyata se aur anand se so gye.
samuel ne apane chhote bhaiyon ke bagal mein aaraam karane aur unhen apanee neend mein rakhane ke lie khud ke lie ek bistar sthaapit kiya.
samuel ne apani pahalee vaastavik pariksha ko ataant hi sulabh tareeke se jeeta tha aur wahi bhagavaan kee aankhon mein bhi ek apnepan ki jeet thi.
Samuel ne saabit kar diya tha ki wo yeh sab bhi banaane mein saksham the. Utsaah ke saath, unhone khud ko un chhote praaniyon ko shikshit karane ka jo kaam diya tha use mein samarpit prashikshu ki tarah saabit hue.
Unhonne apane bhaiyon ko silver city ki vibhin suvidhaon se parichit karaya. vah unhen doosare svarg ke jal mein snaan karane ke lie le gaya; teesare ke atulaneey phalon ka svaad lena; aur chauthe ke kshetron ka pata lagaen k liye leker gye.
Samuel ne khanijo ke lie chattaanon ke andar kee jaanch karne k lie apni aankhon ko prashikshit karane ka abhyaas shuru kiya jo upayogee ho sakatee hai.
Jaise-jaise paath chalata raha, aur usake bhai badhate gai, samuel ko un sab ke beech ke matabhedon se gahara aashchary hua, jo shaareerik aur mansik badalaavon mein nazar aane lga.
Unhone kabhi bhi un sbse vyaktitv star par khud ko alag karane kee apeksha nahin kee thi.
Gabriyal un sab mein buddhimaan aur shaant saabit tha.
Nathanael, sabase majedaar aur kathin seekhane ke liye. Camael kathin aur vyaavahaarik savaalon mein se ek aur Matraton, haalaanki, imanadari se apane kartavyon ko poora kar raha hai, hamesha chup aur door rehkar.

Shurat ho gyi hai badlav ki,
intezar hai to waqt ka,
kis karavat legi ye kahani,
dekhna hai aage hota hai kya.

Bahot shaandaar mazedaar update dost

 

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