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Fantasy Khamoshi - The Angel & Devil

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Update – 3
Ab tk aapne padha ki apne priye angel Samuel ko uttpan krne k baad baghwan ne 4 heavens (swarg) ka nirman kiya aur saath hi ek aur angel gabriyel ko uttpan liya….
Ab aage……….
Gabriyal ek pankhon vaala bachcha tha, jo samuel ki tarah praakrtik prakash se rahit tha, lekin vah lagabhag utana hee sundar aur paripoorn tha, keval usake baalon ne apane bhai (Samuel) ke kaale rang ke bajaay khud ko ek sunahare naram aur patale baalon ke roop mein prastut kiya.
Aur phir gebriyal ne udaan bhari, prabhu ki stuti ko sabase komal chhandon mein gaate hue, jo srshti ke chaaron konon mein goonj utha.
Gabriyal ke baad Nathanael, Camael and Matraton. Aur sabse aakhiree, aag kee tarah laal aankhon ke saath ek pari.
Sabhee, mool saanche kee vividhata, pratyek naya svargadoot jo ki samuel ki poornata se thoda door chala gaya tha.
Lekin wo sab bhi ab kam shaanadaar nahin the.
"ab ek bhayaanak aur mahatavpurn jimmedaari aapake kandhon par tiki hui hai, mere samuel," bhagavaan ne kaha.
“prabhu ke doot ke roop mein apane bhaiyon ka netrtav karana aur nirdesh dena aap par nirbhar hai. aapakee shikshaen unke dvaara agli pidhi ko di jayngee. ” bhagavaan ne kaha.
"mai abhi kaise seekha skta hu jab abhi mujhe hi bhut kuch sikhna hai?" samuel ne bhaghvaan se poocha.
“buddhi ke saath jo maine tumhen di hai. Yahi ek hai jo aapaka maargdarshan karegi. Samay aa gaya hai ki aap apani puri kshamata ka paryog kre mere pyaare bete. Mainne aapako keval pooja karane ke lie hi nahin, balki apane pankhon se udane ke lie bhi banaaya hai. ” bhagavaan ne Samuel se kaha.


"main aapko nirash nahin karoonga, mere bhagavaan," samuel ne kaha, bhagavaan ke bharose par garv se, bhale hee usakee aavaaj mein chinta poorvavat thee.
"apane bhaiyon ki achchhee dekhabhaal karo."
samuel ne un chaaro bachchon ke saath silver city ki sthaapana kee, jabki bhagavaan apane beton ki pahunch se door, upar oonchaiyon par chale gaye.
Samuel ka pehla kaam apne bhaiyon ke lie aavaas khojana tha. Itana chhote hone ke naate, samuel ne unhe usi kamre mein rakhane ka phaisala kiya. aur yahee unkee samasyaon mein se pahala tha.
Samuel ke vipreet, bhagavaan ke shareer par aaraam karane ke aadee, chhote svargadooton ko doosare prakaar kee neend ke samarthan kee aavashyakata hogee, aur ye manjil use sabse achchha vikalp nahin lag rhi thi.
madad ke lie bhagavaan ki or mudane mein asamarth, samuel ne apane dimaag ko ek samadhaan ke peechhe majboor kar diya. Unkee rachanaatmak shakti, pahale kabhee istemaal nahin hui thi, karay karne mein thoda samay laga, lekin achaanak ek chhavi usake oopar aa gaee.
"mere lie yahaan ruko," samuel ne bachchon ko bataaya. "main abhee vaapas aaoonga." Aur samuel ne chauthe svarg ki or prasthan kiya, jo sundar aur thande jangalon mein tha.
ek haath mein unhonne jo unmein sabase bade mote tane aur gaharee jadon ka ek ped tha wo nikaala aur use jameen par phenk diya aur shaakhaon ko apni adbhut chapalata ke saath baahar nikaalana shuru kar diya aur us bhaaree nange tane ko vaapas shahar mein le gaya.
Wo lagabhag bina soche-samajhe sab kaary karte ja rhe the, jaise ki ek rahasyamay aantarik shakti dvaara sanchaalit ho, samuel ne ek kaaryashaala ke pharsh par apaar mote tane jama krr diye.
Jald hi, unhone chauthe svarg ki ek aur yaatra ko karne ka phaisala kiya.

Krra safar shuru uss parmatma ne ek ujale se,
Aage dekhte hai kya milta hai iss ujale se.

Abhi k liye itna hi... (agar samay mila to aaj raat lo bhi ek update mil jayega)
 
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ankuraggar said:
Update – 3
Ab tk aapne padha ki apne priye angel Samuel ko uttpan krne k baad baghwan ne 4 heavens (swarg) ka nirman kiya aur saath hi ek aur angel gabriyel ko uttpan liya….
Ab aage……….
Gabriyal ek pankhon vaala bachcha tha, jo samuel ki tarah praakrtik prakash se rahit tha, lekin vah lagabhag utana hee sundar aur paripoorn tha, keval usake baalon ne apane bhai (Samuel) ke kaale rang ke bajaay khud ko ek sunahare naram aur patale baalon ke roop mein prastut kiya.
Aur phir gebriyal ne udaan bhari, prabhu ki stuti ko sabase komal chhandon mein gaate hue, jo srshti ke chaaron konon mein goonj utha.
Gabriyal ke baad Nathanael, Camael and Matraton. Aur sabse aakhiree, aag kee tarah laal aankhon ke saath ek pari.
Sabhee, mool saanche kee vividhata, pratyek naya svargadoot jo ki samuel ki poornata se thoda door chala gaya tha.
Lekin wo sab bhi ab kam shaanadaar nahin the.
"ab ek bhayaanak aur mahatavpurn jimmedaari aapake kandhon par tiki hui hai, mere samuel," bhagavaan ne kaha.
“prabhu ke doot ke roop mein apane bhaiyon ka netrtav karana aur nirdesh dena aap par nirbhar hai. aapakee shikshaen unke dvaara agli pidhi ko di jayngee. ” bhagavaan ne kaha.
"mai abhi kaise seekha skta hu jab abhi mujhe hi bhut kuch sikhna hai?" samuel ne bhaghvaan se poocha.
“buddhi ke saath jo maine tumhen di hai. Yahi ek hai jo aapaka maargdarshan karegi. Samay aa gaya hai ki aap apani puri kshamata ka paryog kre mere pyaare bete. Mainne aapako keval pooja karane ke lie hi nahin, balki apane pankhon se udane ke lie bhi banaaya hai. ” bhagavaan ne Samuel se kaha.


"main aapko nirash nahin karoonga, mere bhagavaan," samuel ne kaha, bhagavaan ke bharose par garv se, bhale hee usakee aavaaj mein chinta poorvavat thee.
"apane bhaiyon ki achchhee dekhabhaal karo."
samuel ne un chaaro bachchon ke saath silver city ki sthaapana kee, jabki bhagavaan apane beton ki pahunch se door, upar oonchaiyon par chale gaye.
Samuel ka pehla kaam apne bhaiyon ke lie aavaas khojana tha. Itana chhote hone ke naate, samuel ne unhe usi kamre mein rakhane ka phaisala kiya. aur yahee unkee samasyaon mein se pahala tha.
Samuel ke vipreet, bhagavaan ke shareer par aaraam karane ke aadee, chhote svargadooton ko doosare prakaar kee neend ke samarthan kee aavashyakata hogee, aur ye manjil use sabse achchha vikalp nahin lag rhi thi.
madad ke lie bhagavaan ki or mudane mein asamarth, samuel ne apane dimaag ko ek samadhaan ke peechhe majboor kar diya. Unkee rachanaatmak shakti, pahale kabhee istemaal nahin hui thi, karay karne mein thoda samay laga, lekin achaanak ek chhavi usake oopar aa gaee.
"mere lie yahaan ruko," samuel ne bachchon ko bataaya. "main abhee vaapas aaoonga." Aur samuel ne chauthe svarg ki or prasthan kiya, jo sundar aur thande jangalon mein tha.
ek haath mein unhonne jo unmein sabase bade mote tane aur gaharee jadon ka ek ped tha wo nikaala aur use jameen par phenk diya aur shaakhaon ko apni adbhut chapalata ke saath baahar nikaalana shuru kar diya aur us bhaaree nange tane ko vaapas shahar mein le gaya.
Wo lagabhag bina soche-samajhe sab kaary karte ja rhe the, jaise ki ek rahasyamay aantarik shakti dvaara sanchaalit ho, samuel ne ek kaaryashaala ke pharsh par apaar mote tane jama krr diye.
Jald hi, unhone chauthe svarg ki ek aur yaatra ko karne ka phaisala kiya.

Krra safar shuru uss parmatma ne ek ujale se,
Aage dekhte hai kya milta hai iss ujale se.

Abhi k liye itna hi... (agar samay mila to aaj raat lo bhi ek update mil jayega)
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good update
 
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Ab tk aap ab ne paha ki samuel apne bahiyon k rehne ki vayavastha krte hai aur anay sawargo mein jakr un sbke liye saaman lana shuru kr dete hai....

ab aage....

Update- 4

Jab tak pahadon mein se kisi ek ko nishana nahin banaaya, tab tak samuel ne un svargadooton ki aankhon se un jameenon ko noch daala.
Usane teji se gota lagaaya, pahaad ke dakshinee deevaar se hote hue, thos chattaan kee vibhinn paraton ko paar karate hue, aur pahaad k shikhar se baahar nikalakar usane shahar mein udaan bharee.
Samuel ek forge ke neeche chala gaya. Vaha prr usane apne andar vidyaman brahmaand kee aanch ko badhaaya, aur apne bayen haath se ek teevr lau ko chhod diya, jisane ek aag ko prajvalit kiya.
Dhaatu ke hathauda ka nirmaan karane ke lie garmee aur apni mutthee ka upayog karate hue, samuel ne apane naakhoonon ke saath tej karate hue, pahale blade ko tayar kiya.
Samuel ne hi pehli kulhaadee banai thi. Vaapas forge mein jakar unhone naakhoonon aur lakadee ke slaits ke nirmaan kee anumati dee, jiske saath unhone chaar chhote bed banaye.
Jab unhone ye bed apne chotte bhaiyon lo dikhaye to svargadoot chakit rah gae. ve krtagyata se aur anand se so gye.
samuel ne apane chhote bhaiyon ke bagal mein aaraam karane aur unhen apanee neend mein rakhane ke lie khud ke lie ek bistar sthaapit kiya.
samuel ne apani pahalee vaastavik pariksha ko ataant hi sulabh tareeke se jeeta tha aur wahi bhagavaan kee aankhon mein bhi ek apnepan ki jeet thi.
Samuel ne saabit kar diya tha ki wo yeh sab bhi banaane mein saksham the. Utsaah ke saath, unhone khud ko un chhote praaniyon ko shikshit karane ka jo kaam diya tha use mein samarpit prashikshu ki tarah saabit hue.
Unhonne apane bhaiyon ko silver city ki vibhin suvidhaon se parichit karaya. vah unhen doosare svarg ke jal mein snaan karane ke lie le gaya; teesare ke atulaneey phalon ka svaad lena; aur chauthe ke kshetron ka pata lagaen k liye leker gye.
Samuel ne khanijo ke lie chattaanon ke andar kee jaanch karne k lie apni aankhon ko prashikshit karane ka abhyaas shuru kiya jo upayogee ho sakatee hai.
Jaise-jaise paath chalata raha, aur usake bhai badhate gai, samuel ko un sab ke beech ke matabhedon se gahara aashchary hua, jo shaareerik aur mansik badalaavon mein nazar aane lga.
Unhone kabhi bhi un sbse vyaktitv star par khud ko alag karane kee apeksha nahin kee thi.
Gabriyal un sab mein buddhimaan aur shaant saabit tha.
Nathanael, sabase majedaar aur kathin seekhane ke liye. Camael kathin aur vyaavahaarik savaalon mein se ek aur Matraton, haalaanki, imanadari se apane kartavyon ko poora kar raha hai, hamesha chup aur door rehkar.

Shurat ho gyi hai badlav ki,
intezar hai to waqt ka,
kis karavat legi ye kahani,
dekhna hai aage hota hai kya.
 
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