Adultery Khel Khel Mein...

[THE_PHENOM]

Yes bro. I do agree. Raashi ne cheating ki but readers ko samjhna chahiye tha ki story adultry he na ki romantic. Agar Romantic hota toh mein bhi logic dhundta for sure.

Ha dost, but reader bhi kya kare, unko vikram accha dikhaya gaya hai ab tak, aur writter hi baar-baar bol raha ki rashi usse behad pyaar karti hai

But saayad wo bhool gaye ki jaha pyaar hoga waha sirf hawas kabhi nhi ho sakti,

But yaha to, khair main kya bolu, aapne khud hi padha hai, sab characters ko bhi samjha hoga

To aap hi bolo, ye trap tha, masoomiyat thi, pyaar tha ya dhokha tha,

Ya khuleaam chutiya banana ?

 

[THE_PHENOM]

Mai bhi Aapki bat se Sahmat hu,

RASHI kisi Trap me nahi fasi, wo to MAZE kar rahi thi, usi Douran CHUD bhi gayi.

aur sath me Apni Galti accept bhi nahi ki aur Apne so-called PYAR ko CHUTIYA bhi bana rahi hai.

Ha, Writer ka Mantility ke anusar Apne PYAR ko Dhoka dekar Sabse CHUDWATE rahna hi
Ladkiyon / Mahilao ko Mardo ke saman Barabar dikhane ke tarika hai to wo hi Khus rahe.

Baat sex ki hai hi nhi dost, wo to pata hi tha ki sex hoga aur gair se hi hoga, pakja tha ye


Baat hai vikram ke character ki aur uske sath jo ho raha , uski

Hume vikram accha dikhaya gaya to hum uske sath humdardi dikhane lage, ye human nature hai , kya kare, hum sab galat hota dekh yahi sochte hai ki uske sath galat karne wale ka bura ho, use gaali dete hai

Bas yahi ho raha yaha

I thibk writter ko jyada mind na kar ke aage badna chahiye, aur aisa end dena chahiye, taki end sabko sahi aur nyaaysangat lage, baki unki marji, dekhte hai

 

[SamFisher]

Ha dost, but reader bhi kya kare, unko vikram accha dikhaya gaya hai ab tak, aur writter hi baar-baar bol raha ki rashi usse behad pyaar karti hai

But saayad wo bhool gaye ki jaha pyaar hoga waha sirf hawas kabhi nhi ho sakti,

But yaha to, khair main kya bolu, aapne khud hi padha hai, sab characters ko bhi samjha hoga

To aap hi bolo, ye trap tha, masoomiyat thi, pyaar tha ya dhokha tha,

Ya khuleaam chutiya banana ?

I also agree with u. Na hi trap tha, masumiyat thi na hi un dono se pyar. Raashi ne vikram ka chutiya bhi bana diya. Aap ko yaad hoga vikram ne kaha tha jese chaho apni life jiyo masti karo Raashi ne use double meaning mein lekar aage badh gayi. Itna sab karne ke baad jab vikram se uski physical 2baar fail hui toh 3siri baar karwahi li. Ise meine itna jyada mind nehin kiya kyunki ye Adultry he story. Ye toh hona hi tha.

Mere hisab se abhi tak story mein 2hi flaws hein
1. Writer ne ye dikhaya he ki Raashi ko sex ke baare mein kuch pata hi nehin jabki woh ek Doctor he.
2. Kishore ne bahut mehnat kiya Raashi ke saath flirt karne mein but usman ko free mein mil gayi ye baat mein pehle bhi kaha tha writer ne bole the uska reason aage pata chalega.

Maybe future mein woh vikram ko villian bana de kya pata. Sabkuch unke upar depend he.

 

[Ezio Auditore]

ohh sabse pahle to dil se sorry un readers ko jinke liye ye story bakwas ho gyi...mai koi itna bda writer nhi hu aur abhi abhi likhna shuru kiya hai..to aisa hona lazimi tha

Par comments dekh k dil khush ho gya...

yaha rashi ne bhawanao me bah k ek galti kya kr di to sab hath me candle le k aa gye vikram ko insaaf dilaane...

yaha forum pe top ki bahut si stories hai jinme male dusro ki wifes/gf, aur incest category me jaha mohabbat se bhi bda rishta hota hai..waha apni fantasy ka aatank machata hai to waha taaliya bajti hai..kyu?

kyuki wo male hai na..wo to paida hi esliye hua hai...ki wo apne hathiyar ko apni fantasy k chalte ghr pariwar, bahar kahi bhi use kr sakta hai...par agar ek female apni jajbaato me bah kisi 2 rascals k trap me fas k kuch kar gujre to uski maafi nhi......kyuki usne supreame male ko hurt kr diya.....aur wo bhale hi bahar jo marzi krta rahe..

bhai ye itna discrimination kyu??????..kya male bhagwan ki special creation hai kya? aur usne uske andar hi jajbaat aur fantasy daali hai..aur aurat ek bejubaan murat jiska male jab chahe kaise bhi use kr sakta hai....

female ka 1 se jyada affair to wo slut
male ki 4-5 girlfriend to wo king...gajab ki soch hai

real life me to women ko ab tak male k brabar haq ni mila..aur na hi shayad mile aisi soch ke chalte...par kam se kam ek adult forum pe to usko ek male k brabar dekh sakte hai..ki uske andar bhi sensation , fantasy hai..aur wo bhi jajbaato me bah sakti hai...

aisi hi soch k chalte ek state ka cm bolta hai rape k baare me ki..ladko se galti to ho jaati hai..koi badi baat nhi

wahi agar kisi ladki ka rape raat k 9 baje k baad ho gya to..uski hi galti nikalte hai ki isko 9 baje k baad bahar nhi jana chahiye tha

disgusting soch.. tabhi to yaha rashi jab 2 rascals k trap me fas k kuch kar gujri aur apne pyar ko bhi bachaane ki koshish kr rhi..toh ye sab kuch readers digest ni kr paa rhe..wo to es slut ko saza dilaane pe tule hai... ... jabki real life me ye kaarnaame ek males k liye aam hai..kaise wo roj apni biwi/gf ka bewakoof bnata hai..ye sab male k liye normal hai..because he is king

mai maanta hu ki mai bakwas witer hu
meri kahaani bakwas hai

par koi iske baare me nhi bola..sabko to bas rashi ki galti dikhi..ab wo kin paristhithi ya circumstances me hue unse unko koi matlab nhi..ya phir they are not mature enough to understand that becouse of this thinking..ya samjhana hi nhi chahte kyuki unke according ek female aisi himmat kaise kr sakti hai

to mera un readers se nivedan hai ki es story ko unfollow kr de..kyuki aage bhi aise hi update aayenge..kyuki ab to ye story bilkul bhi band nhi hogi...jo aapko aur hurt kr sakte hai..so dont waste your precious time here

kyuki ye story complete ho k hi band hogi.... haan agar aapki admin k sath jaan pehchan ho to shayad band ho jaaye complete hone se pahle...aapko nhi psand ..koi baat nhi..sabka apna apna taste hota hai..jinko acchi lag rhi hai mai unke liye hi likh rha hu


aur aapke comments se mujhe aapka taste pta lg gya aur mere es comment se aapko meri mansha..to ummed krta hu ki ab aage ispe koi discussion nhi hoga

agar phir bhi aapko apni frustration nikalni hai toh..you are free to post comment...jaise mai free hu apni kahaani ko jaise marzi likhne k liye ...but aage ispe discussion k liye mere ans ki ummeed na rakhe... kyuki wo faltu ka time waste hoga.....

Happy Holi and Have Fun

Bhai kahani aapka hai to aapko apni tarike se hi kahani ko likhna chahiye. hum readers ko itna to haq banta hai ki ye kahe kahani accha laga ya bura. agar kisi reader ko kahani bura laga aur unka comment dekh kar aap kahani likhna bandh kar denge ya fir aapka dimag kharap ho jaye to wo aapka weakness hai. yaha par koi writer Shakespeare nahi hai aur hum kuch readers jo kahani ke plot ke liye kahani padte hai, unka expectation bhi utna jyada nahi hai. par kuch logic to hona chahiye. kuch readers hai jo sirf hilane ke liye ate hai unko kahani mai sirf chudai chahiye. aur aap koi bakwas writer nahi ho. aapka story accha hai, aapka narration excellent hai. hum jaise kuch readers ko isliye bura laga kiuki hum kahani ke characters se jud gaye the.

ye sach hai ki is site par sabse popular story incest hai jinme kahani ka main male character kahani mai maujud almost sabhi aurto ko chodta hai. mai personally aisa kahani pasand nahi karta. aur aise mard ko bhi nahi jo apni gf/wife ko dhoka de. mai pure love par biswas rakhta hun. mujhe mainly romantic story jyada pasand hai jinme main male aur female character ke bich koi nahi ata. aapke is baat se mai agree karta hun ki aurton ko ek se jyada mard se chudbate dekh log jyada hi react karte hai. par mera negative comment karne ka karan shayad aapko abtak samajh agaya hoga.

aapne kaha ki rashi ne ek galti kardi. ye sach nahi hai. usne ek galti barbar karti rahi. agar aap kahenge ki isme bhi rashi koi galti nahi, sirf usman aur kishore ki galti hai to rashi koi dudh piti bacchi nahi hai. wo sab samajhti hai. aur sabkuch jan bujh kar karti rahi. aur jab jan bujh kar kai ekhi galti barbar karte rahe to wo sirf galti nahi rehta usse bhi jyada kuch hojata hai.

itna drama hone ke bad aap keh rehe hai ki kahani aise hi chalti rahegi. aapko ye bat kahani ke shuru mai hi bol dena chahiye tha ki ye kahani cuckold category ka hai. agar aap aisa karte to itna drama nahi hota. mera expectation ye tha ki rashi ko apni galti ka ehsas hoga, vikram ko sab pata chal jayega, rashi vikram se mafi mang legi aur ek happy ending dekhne ko milega. agar aap pehle hi keh dete ki cuckold story hai to expectation nahi rakhta. wese bhi mai jis type ka expectation rakhta hu us type ki story is site par bahot hi kam hai.

aapka story hai aap thande dimag se likhte rahiye. negative comments shayad aage bhi ayenge. sabhi readers ko khush karna possible nahi hai.

 

[THE_PHENOM]

ohh sabse pahle to dil se sorry un readers ko jinke liye ye story bakwas ho gyi...mai koi itna bda writer nhi hu aur abhi abhi likhna shuru kiya hai..to aisa hona lazimi tha

Par comments dekh k dil khush ho gya...

yaha rashi ne bhawanao me bah k ek galti kya kr di to sab hath me candle le k aa gye vikram ko insaaf dilaane...

yaha forum pe top ki bahut si stories hai jinme male dusro ki wifes/gf, aur incest category me jaha mohabbat se bhi bda rishta hota hai..waha apni fantasy ka aatank machata hai to waha taaliya bajti hai..kyu?

kyuki wo male hai na..wo to paida hi esliye hua hai...ki wo apne hathiyar ko apni fantasy k chalte ghr pariwar, bahar kahi bhi use kr sakta hai...par agar ek female apni jajbaato me bah kisi 2 rascals k trap me fas k kuch kar gujre to uski maafi nhi......kyuki usne supreame male ko hurt kr diya.....aur wo bhale hi bahar jo marzi krta rahe..

bhai ye itna discrimination kyu??????..kya male bhagwan ki special creation hai kya? aur usne uske andar hi jajbaat aur fantasy daali hai..aur aurat ek bejubaan murat jiska male jab chahe kaise bhi use kr sakta hai....

female ka 1 se jyada affair to wo slut
male ki 4-5 girlfriend to wo king...gajab ki soch hai

real life me to women ko ab tak male k brabar haq ni mila..aur na hi shayad mile aisi soch ke chalte...par kam se kam ek adult forum pe to usko ek male k brabar dekh sakte hai..ki uske andar bhi sensation , fantasy hai..aur wo bhi jajbaato me bah sakti hai...

aisi hi soch k chalte ek state ka cm bolta hai rape k baare me ki..ladko se galti to ho jaati hai..koi badi baat nhi

wahi agar kisi ladki ka rape raat k 9 baje k baad ho gya to..uski hi galti nikalte hai ki isko 9 baje k baad bahar nhi jana chahiye tha

disgusting soch.. tabhi to yaha rashi jab 2 rascals k trap me fas k kuch kar gujri aur apne pyar ko bhi bachaane ki koshish kr rhi..toh ye sab kuch readers digest ni kr paa rhe..wo to es slut ko saza dilaane pe tule hai... ... jabki real life me ye kaarnaame ek males k liye aam hai..kaise wo roj apni biwi/gf ka bewakoof bnata hai..ye sab male k liye normal hai..because he is king

mai maanta hu ki mai bakwas witer hu
meri kahaani bakwas hai

par koi iske baare me nhi bola..sabko to bas rashi ki galti dikhi..ab wo kin paristhithi ya circumstances me hue unse unko koi matlab nhi..ya phir they are not mature enough to understand that becouse of this thinking..ya samjhana hi nhi chahte kyuki unke according ek female aisi himmat kaise kr sakti hai

to mera un readers se nivedan hai ki es story ko unfollow kr de..kyuki aage bhi aise hi update aayenge..kyuki ab to ye story bilkul bhi band nhi hogi...jo aapko aur hurt kr sakte hai..so dont waste your precious time here

kyuki ye story complete ho k hi band hogi.... haan agar aapki admin k sath jaan pehchan ho to shayad band ho jaaye complete hone se pahle...aapko nhi psand ..koi baat nhi..sabka apna apna taste hota hai..jinko acchi lag rhi hai mai unke liye hi likh rha hu


aur aapke comments se mujhe aapka taste pta lg gya aur mere es comment se aapko meri mansha..to ummed krta hu ki ab aage ispe koi discussion nhi hoga

agar phir bhi aapko apni frustration nikalni hai toh..you are free to post comment...jaise mai free hu apni kahaani ko jaise marzi likhne k liye ...but aage ispe discussion k liye mere ans ki ummeed na rakhe... kyuki wo faltu ka time waste hoga.....

Happy Holi and Have Fun

Kuch baat aur rah gai thi, aapne bola ki story end ho kar rahegi, to hum bhi wahi chahte hai, adhura chhod kar jana hi mat, halaki end kuch samjh aa chuka, but dekhte hai ki kya dikhate ho

Dusri aur main baat, dost hum XF par tabhi aate hai jab humare paas faltu time hota hai, to time waste ka sawaal hi nhi, hum sab yaha time waste karne hi aate hai

Khud hi dekh lena, jab aap real life me busy hoge, to yaha ke liye time manage nhi karege, halaki jab free hoge tabhi likhoge, read karoge ya post karoge

To time ki tention hi nhi,

Aur ek baat, hum ghar ki ijjat ek female ko hi bolte hai, maa,behen, biwi, beti, mardo ko nhi


Ab aise me agar hum females ki jyada chinta ya nigrani karte hai, to galat kya hai, khud hi socho, beta raat ko late aaye to koi problem nhi, but beti 1 ghante late ho jaaye to dil ghabrata hai, ye sabke ghar hota hai , to dono ko barabar karne ki socho bhi mat, ye mumkin nhi,

Aur ek baat, choot me seal hoti hai, jo uske pure hone ya na hone ka batati hai, mardo ko aisa kuch nhi hota

To saayad uperwala hi chahta hai ki aourat ek ki hi ho, aur agar galat kare bhi, to pakdi jaaye , right

To jab wo barabari nhi kar raha to hum tucch insaan dono ko kya khaak barabar kar payge,

Waise main dono ki barabri ke khilaaf nhi, but fact yahi hai ki abhi bhi dono ko barabar hone ka haq milne me kafi wawt lagega

 

[THE_PHENOM]

I also agree with u. Na hi trap tha, masumiyat thi na hi un dono se pyar. Raashi ne vikram ka chutiya bhi bana diya. Aap ko yaad hoga vikram ne kaha tha jese chaho apni life jiyo masti karo Raashi ne use double meaning mein lekar aage badh gayi. Itna sab karne ke baad jab vikram se uski physical 2baar fail hui toh 3siri baar karwahi li. Ise meine itna jyada mind nehin kiya kyunki ye Adultry he story. Ye toh hona hi tha.

Mere hisab se abhi tak story mein 2hi flaws hein
1. Writer ne ye dikhaya he ki Raashi ko sex ke baare mein kuch pata hi nehin jabki woh ek Doctor he.
2. Kishore ne bahut mehnat kiya Raashi ke saath flirt karne mein but usman ko free mein mil gayi ye baat mein pehle bhi kaha tha writer ne bole the uska reason aage pata chalega.

Maybe future mein woh vikram ko villian bana de kya pata. Sabkuch unke upar depend he.

Bilkul, justify karne ke liye kuch to hoga hi dimaag me, villion or any other plan , dekhte hai

Waise end to baad me aayga, filhaal to rashi ki aish hogi, fullon pilaai, dono taraf se , kya pata 2-3 se ek sath bhi, kyoki tention to khatm ho gai eo so called pyaar wali, wo to sab sach maan hi gaya abhi, right

 

[Ezio Auditore]

Bilkul, justify karne ke liye kuch to hoga hi dimaag me, villion or any other plan , dekhte hai

Waise end to baad me aayga, filhaal to rashi ki aish hogi, fullon pilaai, dono taraf se , kya pata 2-3 se ek sath bhi, kyoki tention to khatm ho gai eo so called pyaar wali, wo to sab sach maan hi gaya abhi, right

Ekdam thik kaha. Ab tak kahani ke sath ek tarah ka attachment tha. Ab aur nahi rahega. Dekhte hai age kya hota hai. Shayad vikram bhi cheater niklega ya fir cuckold ban jayega

 

[RayABuncle]

Bhai kahani aapka hai to aapko apni tarike se hi kahani ko likhna chahiye. hum readers ko itna to haq banta hai ki ye kahe kahani accha laga ya bura. agar kisi reader ko kahani bura laga aur unka comment dekh kar aap kahani likhna bandh kar denge ya fir aapka dimag kharap ho jaye to wo aapka weakness hai. yaha par koi writer Shakespeare nahi hai aur hum kuch readers jo kahani ke plot ke liye kahani padte hai, unka expectation bhi utna jyada nahi hai. par kuch logic to hona chahiye. kuch readers hai jo sirf hilane ke liye ate hai unko kahani mai sirf chudai chahiye. aur aap koi bakwas writer nahi ho. aapka story accha hai, aapka narration excellent hai. hum jaise kuch readers ko isliye bura laga kiuki hum kahani ke characters se jud gaye the.

ye sach hai ki is site par sabse popular story incest hai jinme kahani ka main male character kahani mai maujud almost sabhi aurto ko chodta hai. mai personally aisa kahani pasand nahi karta. aur aise mard ko bhi nahi jo apni gf/wife ko dhoka de. mai pure love par biswas rakhta hun. mujhe mainly romantic story jyada pasand hai jinme main male aur female character ke bich koi nahi ata. aapke is baat se mai agree karta hun ki aurton ko ek se jyada mard se chudbate dekh log jyada hi react karte hai. par mera negative comment karne ka karan shayad aapko abtak samajh agaya hoga.

aapne kaha ki rashi ne ek galti kardi. ye sach nahi hai. usne ek galti barbar karti rahi. agar aap kahenge ki isme bhi rashi koi galti nahi, sirf usman aur kishore ki galti hai to rashi koi dudh piti bacchi nahi hai. wo sab samajhti hai. aur sabkuch jan bujh kar karti rahi. aur jab jan bujh kar kai ekhi galti barbar karte rahe to wo sirf galti nahi rehta usse bhi jyada kuch hojata hai.

itna drama hone ke bad aap keh rehe hai ki kahani aise hi chalti rahegi. aapko ye bat kahani ke shuru mai hi bol dena chahiye tha ki ye kahani cuckold category ka hai. agar aap aisa karte to itna drama nahi hota. mera expectation ye tha ki rashi ko apni galti ka ehsas hoga, vikram ko sab pata chal jayega, rashi vikram se mafi mang legi aur ek happy ending dekhne ko milega. agar aap pehle hi keh dete ki cuckold story hai to expectation nahi rakhta. wese bhi mai jis type ka expectation rakhta hu us type ki story is site par bahot hi kam hai.

aapka story hai aap thande dimag se likhte rahiye. negative comments shayad aage bhi ayenge. sabhi readers ko khush karna possible nahi hai.

Thanks, thanks esliye ki aapne apni baat ko itni genuinely rakha aur maine es topic pe dubara reply nhi krna tha but aapne jo girls k baare me baat boli wo mujhe acchi lagi esliye vivash ho k reply kr ha hu

Es story me mere liye khushi aur dukh wali baat dono hai...jaise reader characters k sath jud gye.. dekh k accha lga but wahi rashi ki harakat ne unko bura feel kara diya....par mera core aim es story ko likhne ka yahi tha ki sacche pyaar me bhi gray side ho sakti hai...aur story me koi loophole ho jaise..ladki bf se satisfied nahi hai, wo ganda aadmi hai..ya wo cheater hai...aise easy plot pe mera likhne ka mann nhi krta

esliye esme rashi ka loophole yhi dikhaya tha ki uske liye sab new hai.. bhale hi wo doctor hai..usko sab pta hai...lekin sex k baare me pta hona..aur usko pahli baar feel krna dono me zameen aasmaan ka antar hota hai..ye aapko bhi pta hoga...esliye starting me bhi btaya tha ki rashi aur iski friend dono chanchal thi but study k chalte wo sab wahi stop ho gya tha.. par 2 male character k aate hi wo sab phir se activate hone lga tha...

for example vishwamitra hamare yaha k sabse bade rishi muni the par unki bhi tapasya menka ne bhang kr di thi..to jab itne bade rishi muni bhatak sakte hai..to ye to ek mamuli doctor hai..ye kyu nhi bhatak sakti..yhi simple sa logic tha isme but shayad readers ko jo maine upar mention kiye wahi logic samajh aate hai...aur ye samjhane me nakaam rahe ya mai samjhaane me...hum sab aurat ho ya mard insan esliye hi hai ki hamara apni bhawanao pe control nhi hota...aur usme fas kr galat rah pe chal padte hai kabhi kabhi...wo mard ho ya aurat usme itna discrimination nhi hona chahiye

aur rahi baat bhai aapke concern ki to mai khud cuckold ya incest ka fan nhi hu..aur na hi ye story es category me aane wali thi..isme aise hi up down aane the aur ek din rashi k paap ka ghada bharta to sab clear ho jaata..

par yaha to readers pahle hi twist pe bilbila uthe...aur aapke comment se feel hua ki aage ki updates aur bura feel kra sakti hai...nhi to baaki log to apni frustration aur ut patang logic de rhe the... ab jaise ki aap aur sab yhi chahte the ki ab story happy ending ki aur jaani chahiye to ab yahi hoga...kyuki mai yaha logo ko entertain karne aaya tha bura feel kraane nhi

aur jo readers abhi aur action chahte the to unke liye yaha aisi story bahut si hai...esliye es bahas ko yhi khatam krte hai aur sabko khush karte hai...

aur bhai ye na sochna ki mai story ko jabardasti wrap up kr rha hu..happy ending wali update me kuch bhi dramatic nhi hoga....bas jo beech me updates aani thi wo short sentance me describe hogi aur phir aage ending wali update...

 

[mgaya]

Logo ke kehne par story ka flow kyun change kar rahe ho...logic dundhne walo k sath tumhari writing pasand karne vale bhi bahot hai yahan..unka socho..
I am waiting to see new episodes the way you planned.. if not due to certain someone ...please upload them on your blog.. i will willingly read that!!

 

[Shikari_golu]

Thanks, thanks esliye ki aapne apni baat ko itni genuinely rakha aur maine es topic pe dubara reply nhi krna tha but aapne jo girls k baare me baat boli wo mujhe acchi lagi esliye vivash ho k reply kr ha hu

Es story me mere liye khushi aur dukh wali baat dono hai...jaise reader characters k sath jud gye.. dekh k accha lga but wahi rashi ki harakat ne unko bura feel kara diya....par mera core aim es story ko likhne ka yahi tha ki sacche pyaar me bhi gray side ho sakti hai...aur story me koi loophole ho jaise..ladki bf se satisfied nahi hai, wo ganda aadmi hai..ya wo cheater hai...aise easy plot pe mera likhne ka mann nhi krta

esliye esme rashi ka loophole yhi dikhaya tha ki uske liye sab new hai.. bhale hi wo doctor hai..usko sab pta hai...lekin sex k baare me pta hona..aur usko pahli baar feel krna dono me zameen aasmaan ka antar hota hai..ye aapko bhi pta hoga...esliye starting me bhi btaya tha ki rashi aur iski friend dono chanchal thi but study k chalte wo sab wahi stop ho gya tha.. par 2 male character k aate hi wo sab phir se activate hone lga tha...

for example vishwamitra hamare yaha k sabse bade rishi muni the par unki bhi tapasya menka ne bhang kr di thi..to jab itne bade rishi muni bhatak sakte hai..to ye to ek mamuli doctor hai..ye kyu nhi bhatak sakti..yhi simple sa logic tha isme but shayad readers ko jo maine upar mention kiye wahi logic samajh aate hai...aur ye samjhane me nakaam rahe ya mai samjhaane me...hum sab aurat ho ya mard insan esliye hi hai ki hamara apni bhawanao pe control nhi hota...aur usme fas kr galat rah pe chal padte hai kabhi kabhi...wo mard ho ya aurat usme itna discrimination nhi hona chahiye

aur rahi baat bhai aapke concern ki to mai khud cuckold ya incest ka fan nhi hu..aur na hi ye story es category me aane wali thi..isme aise hi up down aane the aur ek din rashi k paap ka ghada bharta to sab clear ho jaata..

par yaha to readers pahle hi twist pe bilbila uthe...aur aapke comment se feel hua ki aage ki updates aur bura feel kra sakti hai...nhi to baaki log to apni frustration aur ut patang logic de rhe the... ab jaise ki aap aur sab yhi chahte the ki ab story happy ending ki aur jaani chahiye to ab yahi hoga...kyuki mai yaha logo ko entertain karne aaya tha bura feel kraane nhi

aur jo readers abhi aur action chahte the to unke liye yaha aisi story bahut si hai...esliye es bahas ko yhi khatam krte hai aur sabko khush karte hai...

aur bhai ye na sochna ki mai story ko jabardasti wrap up kr rha hu..happy ending wali update me kuch bhi dramatic nhi hoga....bas jo beech me updates aani thi wo short sentance me describe hogi aur phir aage ending wali update...

Are yaar....fir se tumhare thread par bolne wala hu....halaki maine ab tak story puri nhi padhi....par ye comment dekh kar socha ki kuch bol du.....Kuch bura bhi lagega..aur kuch acha bhi...ok

Dekho...pahle to ye boluga...ki kisi bhi haal me apna concept mat badalna....wahi likhna jo socha tha....

Ending happy ho ya nhi....bas sahi ho to maza aa jayga....but bilkul bhi mat badalna..


Comment karna....apni baat rakhna.....ye readers ka haq hai.....

But writter ko bhi apni story apne hisaab se likhne ka haq hai....for ex - khud main...hahaha.....

Meri stories par bhi log gussa hote.....bura kahte....but main unhe galat nhi bolta....

Unko reply deta hu aur likhta wahi hu jo likhna tha.....baki end hote hi sab samjh jate hai ki kya hua tha aur kyo hua tha....

To likhna mat badalna.....wahi likho jo socha tha......


Ab character ke baare me abhi kuch nhi bol sakta....kyoki pura padha hi nhi...par aapke example ka bolta hu...

Mana menka ne tapsya bhang ki....par use shraap bhi bhugatna pada....bahut bada....to wo bhi jaroori hai na yaar...hai ki nhi....shraap bhi hona hi chahiye....

Aur vishwambharntra ko bhi bahut kuch khona pada tha....to ye bhi jaroori hai....samjh rahe ho na.....

Aur wo ek baar bhatke...fir line par bhi aaye the....to kya yaha line par aai...ya aaygi.....main padhuga tab kuch aage boluga...ok...

Aur ha......aapne sahi kaha ki bhavnaao me bah kar hum galat raste chal padhte gai....

par ye bhi sach hai ki hume us raste par jane ki bhaari keemat chukani hoti hai...

Aur agar hume samay rahte pata chale ki hum galat raste oar hai...to hum rasta chhod bhi yo dete hai....infact kosis to karte hai......ab isme kya hua.....ye aap hi jano...main padhuga..fir boluga....ok..

Main ye story isliye padhne aaya...kyoki mere ek xf frnd ne tareef ki thi....par aapke aise comment dekh kar bura feel hua...as a writter.....

Abhi bhi yahi kahuga....wahi likhna jo socha tha.....aur happy ending ke chakkar me mat rahna.....bas kosis karna ki end padh kar sab yahi bole....ki jiske sath jo hua....wo sahi hua...

main apni story me yahi karta hu.....puri story me koi kuch bhi samjhe.....last me sab chup rahte hai....kyoki wajah hoti hi aisi hai...

Ek baar fir se kahuga....dont giv up....do whatever u want to do.....

Ok frnd...
Keep writting......