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Bosskhatri

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City me ek bade se ghar me 18-19 saal ki ladki apni maa se bolti hai " Maa , apko kitna time lagega ek toh apne mijhe itni jaldi ready kara diya aur aap hai ki abhi tak ready nhi hue". jisper uski Maa ne apne room se bahar aate hue kha 'main bhi bas ready ho chuki hu aur tum ne kya gift le liya' jisper ladki ne haste hue kha "maa , maine gift le liya hai ab jaldi chale". fir vo dono niche hall me chale gye.
Ye dono koi aur nahi Monu ki bua Rati devi aur unki beti Kajal thi. Niche hall me Rati devi ke pati Saurabh ji pahle se bethe hue the unhone niche aati dono maa betiyon ki taraf dekte hue kha "main toh nahi japaunga Tum hi driver ke sath chali jao" yeh sun Kajal ne sad se face banate hue kaha "kyu papa, aap nhi jayenge toh me bhi nahi jaungi" Jisper Ratidevi ne gusse se kajal ko kaha 'tum kyo rahi ja rhi aur fir Saurabh ji se kaha aap fikre na kare hum driver ke sath chale jayenge' Fir Rati ji kajal ka hath pakad ke parking ki taraf chali gyi. jab unhone driver se car nikalne ko kaha toh driver ne kaha 'Madam, car me petrol toda kam hai aap kahe toh main bharva ke le aata hu' jisper Rati ji ne irrited hote bole 'Tum petrol bhi nahi bharva sakte ab jaldi jao' driver jaldi se car ko leker gar se nikala. Car ko abhi Ghar se nikle toda hi time hua tha ki dono maa- beti ko jor ki avaj sunai di jise dono gabra gayi aur bahar ki taraf bhagi vahi avaj ko sunkar Saurabhji bhi bahar aa gye the, unhone bahar aake dekha toh vaha par unki car ka accident ho chuka tha car ki halath bahut buri thi unhone jaise taise driver ko Rati-kajal ki maddad se bahar nikala aur use car me lekar hospital ki aur nikal gye unke sath Rati ji aur kajal bhi hi.
hospital pahuch ke Kajal ne jab apne pass kadi ambulance me dekha toh voh vahi jam gyi. Ambulance ke ander Monu tha aur usme se khoon nikal raha tha kajal ne badi himmat kar ke apni maa ko hilaya aur stretcher ki taraf ishara kiya jisper monu pada hua tha. Rati devi ne jab Stretcher par dekha toh ve ander tak darr gyi Saurabh ji iss vakt driver ko admit karane ke liye ander gye the. Rati ji monu ko esi halath me dekh kar uski taraf bhagi.
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tusri taraf haveli me Shaliniji ne shishi ko Rakeshji ke juice me mila diya aur apni soch me boli maaf karna Rakesh me yeh karna koh nahi chahti par yehi karna hoga, fir muskarati hue vo juice Rakesh ko dene ke liye chali gayi. Rakesh ji abhi dining hall me bethe hue the Anjana devi aur Harsh-Rahul bhi apna kam-kriya katm karke dinning hall me aa chuke the. Abhi sab dining hall me baith kar shalini ji ka intejar kar rahe the. Shalini ji juice lete hue aayi aur apne pati Rakesh ji ko dete hue boli "lijiye apka juice" Rakesh ji ne bhi Juice ka glass le liya aur use pine ke liye muh se lagaya hi tha ki unka phone bhaj udha. Rakesh ji ne tusre hath se apna phone udaya toh usme unki bahan ka number show ho rha tha, Rakesh ji ne apni bahan ka number dekh use receive kar liya jaise ji unhone apni bahan ke baat suni unke haath se juice ka glass chuth gya. Yeh Dekh shaliniji sameth sabki ankhe badi ho gyi. unhe esha hone ki umid nahi thi.
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Aage ki kahani next update me.
Kitna chota update hai
 
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MAD DEVIL

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City me ek bade se ghar me 18-19 saal ki ladki apni maa se bolti hai " Maa , apko kitna time lagega ek toh apne mijhe itni jaldi ready kara diya aur aap hai ki abhi tak ready nhi hue". jisper uski Maa ne apne room se bahar aate hue kha 'main bhi bas ready ho chuki hu aur tum ne kya gift le liya' jisper ladki ne haste hue kha "maa , maine gift le liya hai ab jaldi chale". fir vo dono niche hall me chale gye.
Ye dono koi aur nahi Monu ki bua Rati devi aur unki beti Kajal thi. Niche hall me Rati devi ke pati Saurabh ji pahle se bethe hue the unhone niche aati dono maa betiyon ki taraf dekte hue kha "main toh nahi japaunga Tum hi driver ke sath chali jao" yeh sun Kajal ne sad se face banate hue kaha "kyu papa, aap nhi jayenge toh me bhi nahi jaungi" Jisper Ratidevi ne gusse se kajal ko kaha 'tum kyo rahi ja rhi aur fir Saurabh ji se kaha aap fikre na kare hum driver ke sath chale jayenge' Fir Rati ji kajal ka hath pakad ke parking ki taraf chali gyi. jab unhone driver se car nikalne ko kaha toh driver ne kaha 'Madam, car me petrol toda kam hai aap kahe toh main bharva ke le aata hu' jisper Rati ji ne irrited hote bole 'Tum petrol bhi nahi bharva sakte ab jaldi jao' driver jaldi se car ko leker gar se nikala. Car ko abhi Ghar se nikle toda hi time hua tha ki dono maa- beti ko jor ki avaj sunai di jise dono gabra gayi aur bahar ki taraf bhagi vahi avaj ko sunkar Saurabhji bhi bahar aa gye the, unhone bahar aake dekha toh vaha par unki car ka accident ho chuka tha car ki halath bahut buri thi unhone jaise taise driver ko Rati-kajal ki maddad se bahar nikala aur use car me lekar hospital ki aur nikal gye unke sath Rati ji aur kajal bhi hi.
hospital pahuch ke Kajal ne jab apne pass kadi ambulance me dekha toh voh vahi jam gyi. Ambulance ke ander Monu tha aur usme se khoon nikal raha tha kajal ne badi himmat kar ke apni maa ko hilaya aur stretcher ki taraf ishara kiya jisper monu pada hua tha. Rati devi ne jab Stretcher par dekha toh ve ander tak darr gyi Saurabh ji iss vakt driver ko admit karane ke liye ander gye the. Rati ji monu ko esi halath me dekh kar uski taraf bhagi.
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tusri taraf haveli me Shaliniji ne shishi ko Rakeshji ke juice me mila diya aur apni soch me boli maaf karna Rakesh me yeh karna koh nahi chahti par yehi karna hoga, fir muskarati hue vo juice Rakesh ko dene ke liye chali gayi. Rakesh ji abhi dining hall me bethe hue the Anjana devi aur Harsh-Rahul bhi apna kam-kriya katm karke dinning hall me aa chuke the. Abhi sab dining hall me baith kar shalini ji ka intejar kar rahe the. Shalini ji juice lete hue aayi aur apne pati Rakesh ji ko dete hue boli "lijiye apka juice" Rakesh ji ne bhi Juice ka glass le liya aur use pine ke liye muh se lagaya hi tha ki unka phone bhaj udha. Rakesh ji ne tusre hath se apna phone udaya toh usme unki bahan ka number show ho rha tha, Rakesh ji ne apni bahan ka number dekh use receive kar liya jaise ji unhone apni bahan ke baat suni unke haath se juice ka glass chuth gya. Yeh Dekh shaliniji sameth sabki ankhe badi ho gyi. unhe esha hone ki umid nahi thi.
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Aage ki kahani next update me.
Shalini ne shishi me bhre liquid ko juice me Mila ke Rakesh ko dedia lekin afsos to usko bi hai but Bina kisi reaction ke Shalini chli gy Rakesh ko juice Dene
Kher
Juice lete he Rakesh ka phone bja usme apni bhen ka number dekhte he phone utha lia or kuch sun ke jhtka lga jisse juice ka glass gir gya
Dosre trf
Rati jo ki Monu ki bua hai apni beti Kajal ke sath gift leke shyad Monu ke ghr ki trf jane ke lye tyaar hai or accident ke chalte ambulance me usne strecher me Monu ko dekha or uski trf chli gy
Jane ky ho e wala hai
But
Suspense abi bna hua hai ki Monu jinda hai ya mar gya hai
Ky hoga Monu ke mrne se
Ky Shalini ko pta hai
Ya fir
Shalini shyad uski real Maa ni hai
Ya
Real Maa hai to ky hoga reaction Shalini ka ky wo bardasht kr paygi apne Bete ke sath jo hua ya fir in sb baato se anjaan ni hai
.
Bhot bda suspense hai bhai
Update intresting hai kafi brother
Keep it up bhai
Pl
Suspense ko clear kro bhai
 

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Premkumar65

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Introduction
Heeralal tiwari ne Tiwari Construction Compony(TCC) ko start kiya tha. Unki do biwiya thi radha devi aur Suhani devi. heeralal ki maut 15 saal pahle ho chuki hai.
heeralal aur radha devi ki do santane hai;ek beta aur ek beti
1. Rakesh tiwari (umr- 45 saal)
Pita ki maut ke baad saari sampathi bade bete hone ki vajah se Rakesh ke naam ho gayi thi. parantu 10 saal pahle hue ek accident me vo apahiz ho gya.
Patni-Shalini devi(umr- 42 saal); shaliniji aur rakesh ki love marriage hui thi. in dono ke teen bachhe hai.
Ritika Tiwari (umr-24 saal)- filhal ye hi TCC ki MD hai.
Manik(monu) Tiwari (umr-21 saal)- mandhbudi hai
Niharika Tiwari(umr-18 saal)
2. Rati devi(umr-43 saal).
Pati- Saurabh Kumar
in ki ek beti hai kajal(umr- 20 saal). kajal abhi collage me hai.
Suhani devi(umr-58 saal)
Rati devi ke janm ke bad radha devi ki maut ho jati toh heeralal ne suhani devi se dusari shadi kar li. inke do bete hai.
1. Rajesh tiwari( umr- 40 saal)
Patni- Ratna devi(umr- 39 saal)
inka ek hi beta hai- Harshit(umr- 20 saal) kajal ke sath usike collage me hai.
2. Rohit tiwari (umr- 38 saal)
Patni- Anjana devi( umr-36 saal)
inka ek beta hai- Rahul(umra-19 saal) Niharika aur Monu ke sath padta hai.
yeh sirf short into hai pura intro aage kahani me hi ayega.
Good start.
 
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