Fantasy KISMAT - EK KHEL

[Dev the lover]

Sumitra ki sari kadwi baatein, jo bhi meera aur raj ko leke bol rahi thi wo sab meera ne raj ko bata di...
waise raj ke dil pe beete rahi hogi ye sab sun ke.... ek maa hoke apne hi bachho apamanit kare ... beijjati kare....

isliye, isliye main keh rahi thi ki Dev the lover sahab...aap jald se jald tiwaari aur sumitra ki shaadi karwa dijiye... par aap hai ki sunte hi nahi... dekhiye kitna ddukhi ho gaya raj....

Udhar sameer, amar & gang ke ajeeb chouchle.... inki itni jalti raj se kya hi kahu...
Khair dair saber in logo ko inki aukaat dikha dega raj...

Dusri taraf..... itne Jaddojahad aur bhagadori ke baad aakhir kar wo hamla karne wala pakad mein aa hi gaya... waise raj nahi hota to aaj bhi bach ke bhaag nikalta....
btw tiwaari bahot gusse mein.... lagta hai us bike wale ki khair nahi aaj
shayad maar maar ke maar hi daale usko...

waise gaur talab baat ye hai ki wo waha police station ke paas kya kar raha tha bike rok ke... itna bewakoof nahi ho sakta ki jaake jalti aag mein hi hath daal de... to phir...
Kahi wo hamla karne wala na hoke kahi dusra admi to nahi...tiwaari & party gumraah karne ke liye...

Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Sumitra ki kadwi baate toh sabko pareshan kar rahi keval ussmai raj hi nahi hai

waise mohatarma aap bus sabki shaadi hi karwa ke bus phir unnke baacho ke laane kaa intazaam karne mai lagi ho par mujhe pata jahi dikh kyu nahi raha aap joh keh rahi ho

waise bike walai ki kaya khair hui kaa nahi woh toh aap jaanogi par haa aapka thoda kuch kuch andaza sahi laga hai kaafi had tak

Thanks for the lovely fantastic comment on every situation wheter is in story or Not

 

[Dev the lover]

UPDATE 28

PREVIOUS

Raj Nai ek laat maari usski bike pe aur woh gir paya

Thodi der mai tiwari apni logo ke saath pahuch gaya

Tiwari uss adami ki garadan pakad ke - aa gaya haath saale chal ki har jagah maine bandar jaisi laal nahi kar di toh mera naam tiwari nahi

ABB AAGE

Raj - sir thik hai phir mai chalata hu

Woh gunda mudkar - saale agali baar teri gardan uda dunga

dhaaye ek goli jakar uss gunde ki taang mai lagi

Woh chillata aur tiwari gun ko shug ke - saale tuh kaya samajha mai koi majakiya police wala hu joh bus joke maarunga mai kab kisi ess gun sai maar lu meri gun bhi nahi jaan paati hai

Raj - sir toh mai abb chalu naa

Tiwari - aram sai jaana aur haa ek baat yaad rakhana agar saumya royi toh teri halat bhi aisi kar dunga

Raj jhutti hasi hasate hue - nahi nahi Ok Sir bye

Tiwari raj toh etna tezz jaate dekh thoda man mai muskurate hue uss gunde ke jakam ko pair sai masala aur aakhe bande karke tezz sai smile karata hai

Tiwari ke baaki saath abb aage nahi gaye kyuki unnki pata jab tiwari ke haath mai gun hoti hai toh woh ek sanaki sai kam kuch nahi hai

udhar raj nikal pada apne rasate aur kaafi time baad woh waha pahuch bhi gaya woh

Par Jaise hi Raj apne simbpuri mai ghus raha thaa ussk pair kis nai pakad liya aur

Aur raj ko bike sai gira diyaa

Raj apne kapdate saaf karata hua kadha hua

Raj - kon hai be kon hai waha bahar aaa

Dheere Dheere usske samani black dress mai ek Parchayi si aa gayi

Raj darate hue - Kon ho tum Jaao yaha sai yeh private property hai

Woh - Mai tunhare hi kaam sai aaya hu raj

Usski awaaz sun ke raj kaa jaise sir fat jataa

Raj apna shir pakad leta kaan band kar leta hai

Woh - essi karan mai tumsai milane aaya hu kyuki tum bhi woh sab sun sakate ho keval meri awwaaz sai

Raj - aah bus band karo yeh etnai chike dars bhari chike kiski hai mai aur nahi seh sakata yeh sab

Woh - Yeh Hai asali dard narak kaa dard raj

Raj - kaya narak kaa dard

Woh apna shir sai kapada hata detaa hai

Raj - tumm......mmmmmm... toh devil ho

Devil - haa mai devil hu aur tum mere saathi yaa kaho dost abb sai

Raj - kaya bakawas hai yeh mai tumhara saathi aur dost kaise maine etnai bhi bure kam nahi kiye hai

Devil - karo yaa naa karo par tum meri wajagh sai aaj zinda ho

Raj - yeh sab faltu ki baate band karo

Devil - yehi sach hai 10-11 saal phele joh sab kuch hua woh asali sach tha tum shraap sai mar chuke the kyuki tumnai etnai saare logo ke sharap sai mukt kiya par woh shraap kisi naa kisi ko toh lekar marata naa so tum mare

Raj apne kaan sai haath hata ke - toh mai abb kaise zinda hu

Devil apna haath àage karke usske haath mai ek dil kaa tukada saa tha ussnai usse dabaya toh raj ke seene mai dard hone laga

Raj - ahh mujhe chhod do nahi yeh dard ahhh maaaa chhodo mujhe

Devil woh hisa chhoda - abb samajhe tumhari yeh zindagi meri di hui hai agar mai yeh hisa tumhe de do toh tum etnai shakti shaali ho jaaoge ki tumhe koi asani sai naa hara paayega naa tumhare ghar waalo naa tumhari saumya ko

Raj dard sai abhi bhi pasine pasine ho raha thaa dars usski bardaast sima sai bahar tha - mujhe woh hisssss......saa dddddeeeee .... doooo.....

Devil - phele meri shrat maano

Devil etna bol paya tha ki usski haath pe kuch laga aur woh hisa uchal ke jakar raj ke haath mai gira raj ussko pakadate hi muh mai daal liya aur ek baar ussnai ek mantra padha aur haath dil pe rakaha aur woh hisa raj ke dil mai jud gaya

Devil sai udhar dekha jaha sai usske haath pe danda laga

Meera - maine sab sun liya tuh mere bhai ko fasane aaya thaa abb lee koi shrat nahi teri

Devil hasata hai tezzz saai - ha ha ha ha ha ha kaya bevkoof ladaki hai mera kaam asaan kar diya mai toh essko aur dard deta ki yeh apni marzi sai woh hisa le le tune toh ek jhatke mai sab kar diya hai

Raj abb dard sai nikal chuka thaa kaya - kaya matalab mai abb bikul thik hu aur tere pass blackmail karne ko kuch nahi bacha hai

Devil ghusse mai tha abb usski aakhi sai aag nikal rahi thi - tuh kaya mujhe baacha samajh raha hai haa tere jaiso ko mai kaat kaat ke latkata rehata hu samajha mai naam kaa nahi asal kaa devil aur abb ess duniya kaa devil tuh hai joh ess duniya ko barbaad karegaa mere liyee haa ha ha haa ha

Etna bol ke woh vaps jamin mai chala gaya

Meera bhagati hui raj ke pass aati hui - bhaiya aap thik toh ho yeh sab kaya thaa

Raj - meera yeh humare kisi ki hui kartut hai ess sai aacha mujhe mara rehane dete

Meera dar ke matalab puchati hai

Raj - meera kisi nai meri jaan bachane ke liye devil sai sauda kiyaa hoga tabhi aisa hoga warana devil kudh sai aisa kuch nahi karate hai

Meera - humare ghar mai kahi mom toh nahi naa par unnki baato sai nahi

Raj - aur naa hi dad ke tumnai toh kahi

Meera - kaya bhiaya mai toh mehal sai bahr hi nahi aayi aur mai aapko devil thodi banan Caahungi

Raj - Esska matalab Didi nai kiya yeh sab aur jara bhanak bhi lagane di unnhonai mujhe naa kisi ko par kyu woh inssan hai unnhe kaise pata yeh sab

Meera - saumya bhabhi bhi ho sakati hai

Raj - haa woh bhi kar sakatai hai mujhe bachane ko par baat yeh ki dono mai sai kisi ko abhi tak kuch pata nahi phir kaise aur kon hai

Meera - kaya pata devil jhutt bol raha aap kahi sai devil nahi lag rahe aap bilkul thik ho

Raj - haa ho sakata chalo yaha sai waise hi dimag kaa bhurji baap ban gaya hai mujhe woh picche kaa sab kaam chalu karana hai

usske baad dheere dheere din bit rahe the aur raj apni coal industry ko dheere dheere uchayi pe le jaa raha aur wahi saath saath woh apni simbpuri ko bhi pura badal ke ek city jaisa bana rha jismai ek gaow waali feel aur kushboo ho

Essi bich yeh bhi pata chala ki tiwari jisko pakad ke le gaya woh toh thaa hi ek jaal aur jab woh log pahuche the station waha aag lag chuki thi aur sab file documents jal ke raakh ho gaye halaki koi naa jahakmi hui naa hi mara

Par tiwari samajh gaya thaa yeh chori bhaut jada hi ulajhi hui hai koi mamuli chori nahi jitna Tk dhikha raha thaa

Aur Abb aage yeh koi matalab nahi ki kaha kaya hone wala main baat yeh ki abb logo ko raj sai bachana padega yaa raj kudh hi logo ko kudh sai bachata hai Kaya woh keval logo ke liye hi Devil hoga yaa apni Saumya Meera Deepti Girish Sumitra ke liye bhi

 

[Luffy]

UPDATE 28

PREVIOUS

Raj Nai ek laat maari usski bike pe aur woh gir paya

Thodi der mai tiwari apni logo ke saath pahuch gaya

Tiwari uss adami ki garadan pakad ke - aa gaya haath saale chal ki har jagah maine bandar jaisi laal nahi kar di toh mera naam tiwari nahi

ABB AAGE

Raj - sir thik hai phir mai chalata hu

Woh gunda mudkar - saale agali baar teri gardan uda dunga

dhaaye ek goli jakar uss gunde ki taang mai lagi

Woh chillata aur tiwari gun ko shug ke - saale tuh kaya samajha mai koi majakiya police wala hu joh bus joke maarunga mai kab kisi ess gun sai maar lu meri gun bhi nahi jaan paati hai

Raj - sir toh mai abb chalu naa

Tiwari - aram sai jaana aur haa ek baat yaad rakhana agar saumya royi toh teri halat bhi aisi kar dunga

Raj jhutti hasi hasate hue - nahi nahi Ok Sir bye

Tiwari raj toh etna tezz jaate dekh thoda man mai muskurate hue uss gunde ke jakam ko pair sai masala aur aakhe bande karke tezz sai smile karata hai

Tiwari ke baaki saath abb aage nahi gaye kyuki unnki pata jab tiwari ke haath mai gun hoti hai toh woh ek sanaki sai kam kuch nahi hai

udhar raj nikal pada apne rasate aur kaafi time baad woh waha pahuch bhi gaya woh

Par Jaise hi Raj apne simbpuri mai ghus raha thaa ussk pair kis nai pakad liya aur

Aur raj ko bike sai gira diyaa

Raj apne kapdate saaf karata hua kadha hua

Raj - kon hai be kon hai waha bahar aaa

Dheere Dheere usske samani black dress mai ek Parchayi si aa gayi

Raj darate hue - Kon ho tum Jaao yaha sai yeh private property hai

Woh - Mai tunhare hi kaam sai aaya hu raj

Usski awaaz sun ke raj kaa jaise sir fat jataa

Raj apna shir pakad leta kaan band kar leta hai

Woh - essi karan mai tumsai milane aaya hu kyuki tum bhi woh sab sun sakate ho keval meri awwaaz sai

Raj - aah bus band karo yeh etnai chike dars bhari chike kiski hai mai aur nahi seh sakata yeh sab

Woh - Yeh Hai asali dard narak kaa dard raj

Raj - kaya narak kaa dard

Woh apna shir sai kapada hata detaa hai

Raj - tumm......mmmmmm... toh devil ho

Devil - haa mai devil hu aur tum mere saathi yaa kaho dost abb sai

Raj - kaya bakawas hai yeh mai tumhara saathi aur dost kaise maine etnai bhi bure kam nahi kiye hai

Devil - karo yaa naa karo par tum meri wajagh sai aaj zinda ho

Raj - yeh sab faltu ki baate band karo

Devil - yehi sach hai 10-11 saal phele joh sab kuch hua woh asali sach tha tum shraap sai mar chuke the kyuki tumnai etnai saare logo ke sharap sai mukt kiya par woh shraap kisi naa kisi ko toh lekar marata naa so tum mare

Raj apne kaan sai haath hata ke - toh mai abb kaise zinda hu

Devil apna haath àage karke usske haath mai ek dil kaa tukada saa tha ussnai usse dabaya toh raj ke seene mai dard hone laga

Raj - ahh mujhe chhod do nahi yeh dard ahhh maaaa chhodo mujhe

Devil woh hisa chhoda - abb samajhe tumhari yeh zindagi meri di hui hai agar mai yeh hisa tumhe de do toh tum etnai shakti shaali ho jaaoge ki tumhe koi asani sai naa hara paayega naa tumhare ghar waalo naa tumhari saumya ko

Raj dard sai abhi bhi pasine pasine ho raha thaa dars usski bardaast sima sai bahar tha - mujhe woh hisssss......saa dddddeeeee .... doooo.....

Devil - phele meri shrat maano

Devil etna bol paya tha ki usski haath pe kuch laga aur woh hisa uchal ke jakar raj ke haath mai gira raj ussko pakadate hi muh mai daal liya aur ek baar ussnai ek mantra padha aur haath dil pe rakaha aur woh hisa raj ke dil mai jud gaya

Devil sai udhar dekha jaha sai usske haath pe danda laga

Meera - maine sab sun liya tuh mere bhai ko fasane aaya thaa abb lee koi shrat nahi teri

Devil hasata hai tezzz saai - ha ha ha ha ha ha kaya bevkoof ladaki hai mera kaam asaan kar diya mai toh essko aur dard deta ki yeh apni marzi sai woh hisa le le tune toh ek jhatke mai sab kar diya hai

Raj abb dard sai nikal chuka thaa kaya - kaya matalab mai abb bikul thik hu aur tere pass blackmail karne ko kuch nahi bacha hai

Devil ghusse mai tha abb usski aakhi sai aag nikal rahi thi - tuh kaya mujhe baacha samajh raha hai haa tere jaiso ko mai kaat kaat ke latkata rehata hu samajha mai naam kaa nahi asal kaa devil aur abb ess duniya kaa devil tuh hai joh ess duniya ko barbaad karegaa mere liyee haa ha ha haa ha

Etna bol ke woh vaps jamin mai chala gaya

Meera bhagati hui raj ke pass aati hui - bhaiya aap thik toh ho yeh sab kaya thaa

Raj - meera yeh humare kisi ki hui kartut hai ess sai aacha mujhe mara rehane dete

Meera dar ke matalab puchati hai

Raj - meera kisi nai meri jaan bachane ke liye devil sai sauda kiyaa hoga tabhi aisa hoga warana devil kudh sai aisa kuch nahi karate hai

Meera - humare ghar mai kahi mom toh nahi naa par unnki baato sai nahi

Raj - aur naa hi dad ke tumnai toh kahi

Meera - kaya bhiaya mai toh mehal sai bahr hi nahi aayi aur mai aapko devil thodi banan Caahungi

Raj - Esska matalab Didi nai kiya yeh sab aur jara bhanak bhi lagane di unnhonai mujhe naa kisi ko par kyu woh inssan hai unnhe kaise pata yeh sab

Meera - saumya bhabhi bhi ho sakati hai

Raj - haa woh bhi kar sakatai hai mujhe bachane ko par baat yeh ki dono mai sai kisi ko abhi tak kuch pata nahi phir kaise aur kon hai

Meera - kaya pata devil jhutt bol raha aap kahi sai devil nahi lag rahe aap bilkul thik ho

Raj - haa ho sakata chalo yaha sai waise hi dimag kaa bhurji baap ban gaya hai mujhe woh picche kaa sab kaam chalu karana hai

usske baad dheere dheere din bit rahe the aur raj apni coal industry ko dheere dheere uchayi pe le jaa raha aur wahi saath saath woh apni simbpuri ko bhi pura badal ke ek city jaisa bana rha jismai ek gaow waali feel aur kushboo ho

Essi bich yeh bhi pata chala ki tiwari jisko pakad ke le gaya woh toh thaa hi ek jaal aur jab woh log pahuche the station waha aag lag chuki thi aur sab file documents jal ke raakh ho gaye halaki koi naa jahakmi hui naa hi mara

Par tiwari samajh gaya thaa yeh chori bhaut jada hi ulajhi hui hai koi mamuli chori nahi jitna Tk dhikha raha thaa

Aur Abb aage yeh koi matalab nahi ki kaha kaya hone wala main baat yeh ki abb logo ko raj sai bachana padega yaa raj kudh hi logo ko kudh sai bachata hai Kaya woh keval logo ke liye hi Devil hoga yaa apni Saumya Meera Deepti Girish Sumitra ke liye bhi

Superb update

 

[Sauravb]

UPDATE 27

PREVIOUS

Meera - woh toh chhodnai gaye hai

Naina muh dhak ke - haaaa haaa

Meera - aeee pagal chhodnai matalab yaha sai unnke ghar lekar gaye hai tuh yaha reha ke kaisi ashleel ho gayi hai

Naina - bus bus meeru majak thaa

Meera bhi has padati hai aur naina bhi

ABB AAGE

Raj - kaya saumya tumnai bina baat ke ruka liya waha sab pareshan ho rahe honge

Saumya apne phone sai number milaya aur raj ko diya

Raj - yeh kiska number hai

Saumya - maine diya thaa meera ko tum baat karo

Raj - haa hello

Meera - bhaiya Kaha ho aap aaye kyu nahi

Raj Ussko saari baate dheere dheere batata chala jata hai raj ussko baate bata raha aur saumya raj ko dekhate dekhate jhapki leti aur uth jaati

Raj - toh yeh sab hua aaj

Meera - Jada chhot toh nahi aayi naa

Raj - saari baat bata di etnai der sai abb puch rahi ha chhot aayi ki nahi

Meera - aapsai ek baat kehani hai

Raj - haa bol naa kayaa huaa

Meera usske baad saari baate ussko batati hai ki waha kaya kaya hua deepti sumitra aur girish sab kuch raj saayad yeh sab seh gaya par saumya need ko sehan nahi kar paayi yaa roak nahi paayi aur raj ke raj mai usske upper sir rakhe so gayi

Raj - chalo Joh ho gaya ho gaya abb kaya kar sakate hai hum dono bhai bhen chor hi sahi saath mai hi sab kar lenge

Meera - haa hum bhi jarurat nahi aise mom dad ki joh aise ho

Raj - chal chhod aur yeh bata waha kaa sab kaisa ghumi ki nahi

Meera - bhaut aacha hai sab jungle bahut sundar hai

Raj - accha chal kal pahuchata hu saumya baate sunate sunate so gayi yehi

Meera - thik hai bhaiya

udhar

Aman - kaya faaltu ki baat ho rahi hai

Dimgiha - yaar yeh raj vapas aa gaya hai sehar mai aur uss hamala humare alawa kisnai kiyaa

Sameer - Mujhe kaya pata meri taraf mat dekh mai etna hutiya nahi akela yeh sab karu

Rizazi - tum log shaant ho jaao aur mat lado samajhe

Khabari - sir woh hamala raj pe nahi tiwari pe thaa

Sameer - abe lull adami phele nahi bata sakata kaya

Rizazi - aree tum log chup ho tab toh kuch bole woh

Khabari - yes mam par mam woh raj simburi kaa maalik ban gaya hai aur woh koi aam adami yeh dekhiye news mai woh cm girish singh kaa beta hai

Dimgiha - yeh achanak sai kaya ho raha

Aman - aree dekha nahi woh kaha gayab ho gaya kahi ussko koi khajana toh nahi mil gaya naa

Rizazi - haa pata toh lagana hoga jarur sai

Udhar

Tiwari gate ko laat maar ke - sala kon tha harami joh mere pe haath utharne kaa socha ussnai

Nevil - sir bhaut dudha par pata nahi lag raha

Saurab - sir yeh kahi hum jis case pe hai uss sai related hamala toh nahi

Tiwari abb table pe haath maar ke - esski maa kaa jaa uss tk ki file lekar aa bee

usski baad file sai check karte hai sab

Aur aise hi yeh raat kat jaati hai

Aur subah raj uth ke chal pada apne simbpuri ki taraf

Par usske dimag mai yeh toh thaa ki aakhir kaya hua joh usski maa aise badal si gayi

Kaya unnhonai kabhi ussko apna beta maana ki nahi

Raj apna dimag vapas hila ke joh hua jaane do kaya hoga soch ke

Raj Tiwari ke station sai gujar raha tha ki usska dhyaan gaya ek bike pe aur woh apni bike side mai laga ke station mai gaya

aur phir

Tiwari aakhe malata hua - ek chai laao bee mere liyee

Naik - sir phele sai rakhi hui hai

Saurab angdayi lete hue - sir sahreer akad gaya hai puraa

Raj - aree sir abhi tak soo rahe ho kaya

Tiwari - aree raj tum aao betho chai piyo

Raj - sir usska time nahi hai aap par jisnai hamala kiya wahi bike bahar kadhi hai

Tiwari apni gun uthate hue - esski maa kaa pakad re saale ko

Aisi bhaag daud maachi waha ki jaise kaya hi ho gaya

par uss sai phele hi bike ki whroom ki awwaz aa gayi

Tiwari - agar yeh bhaga toh sabke muh mai unnki hi goto kaa tel pilwaunga

thodi der mai road pe horn ki awaaz hi thi

Raj Bhi tiwari ki gaadi ke saath apni bike laga ke chal raha tha

Tiwari - yeh saare kaah kaah ke dhille ho gye hai raj jaa bike sai ussko pakad naa

Raj - ok sir

Raj bike tezz karta hai aur thodi der mai uss bike waale ke saath mai

Raj - gaadi roak bee

Bike wala - jaa naa ******

Raj Nai ek laat maari usski bike pe aur woh gir paya

Thodi der mai tiwari apni logo ke saath pahuch gaya

Tiwari uss adami ki garadan pakad ke - aa gaya haath saale chal ki har jagah maine bandar jaisi laal nahi kar di toh mera naam tiwari nahi

Amazing update..meera aur raj ko unki maa nehni pehchan rahi.Raj ki dushman log iss bat se tension me he ki wo CM ka beta nikla.Tiwari me kisne attack kiya pata nehni chala..

 

[Sauravb]

UPDATE 28

PREVIOUS

Raj Nai ek laat maari usski bike pe aur woh gir paya

Thodi der mai tiwari apni logo ke saath pahuch gaya

Tiwari uss adami ki garadan pakad ke - aa gaya haath saale chal ki har jagah maine bandar jaisi laal nahi kar di toh mera naam tiwari nahi

ABB AAGE

Raj - sir thik hai phir mai chalata hu

Woh gunda mudkar - saale agali baar teri gardan uda dunga

dhaaye ek goli jakar uss gunde ki taang mai lagi

Woh chillata aur tiwari gun ko shug ke - saale tuh kaya samajha mai koi majakiya police wala hu joh bus joke maarunga mai kab kisi ess gun sai maar lu meri gun bhi nahi jaan paati hai

Raj - sir toh mai abb chalu naa

Tiwari - aram sai jaana aur haa ek baat yaad rakhana agar saumya royi toh teri halat bhi aisi kar dunga

Raj jhutti hasi hasate hue - nahi nahi Ok Sir bye

Tiwari raj toh etna tezz jaate dekh thoda man mai muskurate hue uss gunde ke jakam ko pair sai masala aur aakhe bande karke tezz sai smile karata hai

Tiwari ke baaki saath abb aage nahi gaye kyuki unnki pata jab tiwari ke haath mai gun hoti hai toh woh ek sanaki sai kam kuch nahi hai

udhar raj nikal pada apne rasate aur kaafi time baad woh waha pahuch bhi gaya woh

Par Jaise hi Raj apne simbpuri mai ghus raha thaa ussk pair kis nai pakad liya aur

Aur raj ko bike sai gira diyaa

Raj apne kapdate saaf karata hua kadha hua

Raj - kon hai be kon hai waha bahar aaa

Dheere Dheere usske samani black dress mai ek Parchayi si aa gayi

Raj darate hue - Kon ho tum Jaao yaha sai yeh private property hai

Woh - Mai tunhare hi kaam sai aaya hu raj

Usski awaaz sun ke raj kaa jaise sir fat jataa

Raj apna shir pakad leta kaan band kar leta hai

Woh - essi karan mai tumsai milane aaya hu kyuki tum bhi woh sab sun sakate ho keval meri awwaaz sai

Raj - aah bus band karo yeh etnai chike dars bhari chike kiski hai mai aur nahi seh sakata yeh sab

Woh - Yeh Hai asali dard narak kaa dard raj

Raj - kaya narak kaa dard

Woh apna shir sai kapada hata detaa hai

Raj - tumm......mmmmmm... toh devil ho

Devil - haa mai devil hu aur tum mere saathi yaa kaho dost abb sai

Raj - kaya bakawas hai yeh mai tumhara saathi aur dost kaise maine etnai bhi bure kam nahi kiye hai

Devil - karo yaa naa karo par tum meri wajagh sai aaj zinda ho

Raj - yeh sab faltu ki baate band karo

Devil - yehi sach hai 10-11 saal phele joh sab kuch hua woh asali sach tha tum shraap sai mar chuke the kyuki tumnai etnai saare logo ke sharap sai mukt kiya par woh shraap kisi naa kisi ko toh lekar marata naa so tum mare

Raj apne kaan sai haath hata ke - toh mai abb kaise zinda hu

Devil apna haath àage karke usske haath mai ek dil kaa tukada saa tha ussnai usse dabaya toh raj ke seene mai dard hone laga

Raj - ahh mujhe chhod do nahi yeh dard ahhh maaaa chhodo mujhe

Devil woh hisa chhoda - abb samajhe tumhari yeh zindagi meri di hui hai agar mai yeh hisa tumhe de do toh tum etnai shakti shaali ho jaaoge ki tumhe koi asani sai naa hara paayega naa tumhare ghar waalo naa tumhari saumya ko

Raj dard sai abhi bhi pasine pasine ho raha thaa dars usski bardaast sima sai bahar tha - mujhe woh hisssss......saa dddddeeeee .... doooo.....

Devil - phele meri shrat maano

Devil etna bol paya tha ki usski haath pe kuch laga aur woh hisa uchal ke jakar raj ke haath mai gira raj ussko pakadate hi muh mai daal liya aur ek baar ussnai ek mantra padha aur haath dil pe rakaha aur woh hisa raj ke dil mai jud gaya

Devil sai udhar dekha jaha sai usske haath pe danda laga

Meera - maine sab sun liya tuh mere bhai ko fasane aaya thaa abb lee koi shrat nahi teri

Devil hasata hai tezzz saai - ha ha ha ha ha ha kaya bevkoof ladaki hai mera kaam asaan kar diya mai toh essko aur dard deta ki yeh apni marzi sai woh hisa le le tune toh ek jhatke mai sab kar diya hai

Raj abb dard sai nikal chuka thaa kaya - kaya matalab mai abb bikul thik hu aur tere pass blackmail karne ko kuch nahi bacha hai

Devil ghusse mai tha abb usski aakhi sai aag nikal rahi thi - tuh kaya mujhe baacha samajh raha hai haa tere jaiso ko mai kaat kaat ke latkata rehata hu samajha mai naam kaa nahi asal kaa devil aur abb ess duniya kaa devil tuh hai joh ess duniya ko barbaad karegaa mere liyee haa ha ha haa ha

Etna bol ke woh vaps jamin mai chala gaya

Meera bhagati hui raj ke pass aati hui - bhaiya aap thik toh ho yeh sab kaya thaa

Raj - meera yeh humare kisi ki hui kartut hai ess sai aacha mujhe mara rehane dete

Meera dar ke matalab puchati hai

Raj - meera kisi nai meri jaan bachane ke liye devil sai sauda kiyaa hoga tabhi aisa hoga warana devil kudh sai aisa kuch nahi karate hai

Meera - humare ghar mai kahi mom toh nahi naa par unnki baato sai nahi

Raj - aur naa hi dad ke tumnai toh kahi

Meera - kaya bhiaya mai toh mehal sai bahr hi nahi aayi aur mai aapko devil thodi banan Caahungi

Raj - Esska matalab Didi nai kiya yeh sab aur jara bhanak bhi lagane di unnhonai mujhe naa kisi ko par kyu woh inssan hai unnhe kaise pata yeh sab

Meera - saumya bhabhi bhi ho sakati hai

Raj - haa woh bhi kar sakatai hai mujhe bachane ko par baat yeh ki dono mai sai kisi ko abhi tak kuch pata nahi phir kaise aur kon hai

Meera - kaya pata devil jhutt bol raha aap kahi sai devil nahi lag rahe aap bilkul thik ho

Raj - haa ho sakata chalo yaha sai waise hi dimag kaa bhurji baap ban gaya hai mujhe woh picche kaa sab kaam chalu karana hai

usske baad dheere dheere din bit rahe the aur raj apni coal industry ko dheere dheere uchayi pe le jaa raha aur wahi saath saath woh apni simbpuri ko bhi pura badal ke ek city jaisa bana rha jismai ek gaow waali feel aur kushboo ho

Essi bich yeh bhi pata chala ki tiwari jisko pakad ke le gaya woh toh thaa hi ek jaal aur jab woh log pahuche the station waha aag lag chuki thi aur sab file documents jal ke raakh ho gaye halaki koi naa jahakmi hui naa hi mara

Par tiwari samajh gaya thaa yeh chori bhaut jada hi ulajhi hui hai koi mamuli chori nahi jitna Tk dhikha raha thaa

Aur Abb aage yeh koi matalab nahi ki kaha kaya hone wala main baat yeh ki abb logo ko raj sai bachana padega yaa raj kudh hi logo ko kudh sai bachata hai Kaya woh keval logo ke liye hi Devil hoga yaa apni Saumya Meera Deepti Girish Sumitra ke liye bhi

Devil ne Raj me sama gaya.sayad ye devil ki chal thi jhut bolke sab kuch kar gaya.meera is my favorite character in this story.Fantastic update...

 

[Nevil singh]

UPDATE 27

PREVIOUS

Meera - woh toh chhodnai gaye hai

Naina muh dhak ke - haaaa haaa

Meera - aeee pagal chhodnai matalab yaha sai unnke ghar lekar gaye hai tuh yaha reha ke kaisi ashleel ho gayi hai

Naina - bus bus meeru majak thaa

Meera bhi has padati hai aur naina bhi

ABB AAGE

Raj - kaya saumya tumnai bina baat ke ruka liya waha sab pareshan ho rahe honge

Saumya apne phone sai number milaya aur raj ko diya

Raj - yeh kiska number hai

Saumya - maine diya thaa meera ko tum baat karo

Raj - haa hello

Meera - bhaiya Kaha ho aap aaye kyu nahi

Raj Ussko saari baate dheere dheere batata chala jata hai raj ussko baate bata raha aur saumya raj ko dekhate dekhate jhapki leti aur uth jaati

Raj - toh yeh sab hua aaj

Meera - Jada chhot toh nahi aayi naa

Raj - saari baat bata di etnai der sai abb puch rahi ha chhot aayi ki nahi

Meera - aapsai ek baat kehani hai

Raj - haa bol naa kayaa huaa

Meera usske baad saari baate ussko batati hai ki waha kaya kaya hua deepti sumitra aur girish sab kuch raj saayad yeh sab seh gaya par saumya need ko sehan nahi kar paayi yaa roak nahi paayi aur raj ke raj mai usske upper sir rakhe so gayi

Raj - chalo Joh ho gaya ho gaya abb kaya kar sakate hai hum dono bhai bhen chor hi sahi saath mai hi sab kar lenge

Meera - haa hum bhi jarurat nahi aise mom dad ki joh aise ho

Raj - chal chhod aur yeh bata waha kaa sab kaisa ghumi ki nahi

Meera - bhaut aacha hai sab jungle bahut sundar hai

Raj - accha chal kal pahuchata hu saumya baate sunate sunate so gayi yehi

Meera - thik hai bhaiya

udhar

Aman - kaya faaltu ki baat ho rahi hai

Dimgiha - yaar yeh raj vapas aa gaya hai sehar mai aur uss hamala humare alawa kisnai kiyaa

Sameer - Mujhe kaya pata meri taraf mat dekh mai etna hutiya nahi akela yeh sab karu

Rizazi - tum log shaant ho jaao aur mat lado samajhe

Khabari - sir woh hamala raj pe nahi tiwari pe thaa

Sameer - abe lull adami phele nahi bata sakata kaya

Rizazi - aree tum log chup ho tab toh kuch bole woh

Khabari - yes mam par mam woh raj simburi kaa maalik ban gaya hai aur woh koi aam adami yeh dekhiye news mai woh cm girish singh kaa beta hai

Dimgiha - yeh achanak sai kaya ho raha

Aman - aree dekha nahi woh kaha gayab ho gaya kahi ussko koi khajana toh nahi mil gaya naa

Rizazi - haa pata toh lagana hoga jarur sai

Udhar

Tiwari gate ko laat maar ke - sala kon tha harami joh mere pe haath utharne kaa socha ussnai

Nevil - sir bhaut dudha par pata nahi lag raha

Saurab - sir yeh kahi hum jis case pe hai uss sai related hamala toh nahi

Tiwari abb table pe haath maar ke - esski maa kaa jaa uss tk ki file lekar aa bee

usski baad file sai check karte hai sab

Aur aise hi yeh raat kat jaati hai

Aur subah raj uth ke chal pada apne simbpuri ki taraf

Par usske dimag mai yeh toh thaa ki aakhir kaya hua joh usski maa aise badal si gayi

Kaya unnhonai kabhi ussko apna beta maana ki nahi

Raj apna dimag vapas hila ke joh hua jaane do kaya hoga soch ke

Raj Tiwari ke station sai gujar raha tha ki usska dhyaan gaya ek bike pe aur woh apni bike side mai laga ke station mai gaya

aur phir

Tiwari aakhe malata hua - ek chai laao bee mere liyee

Naik - sir phele sai rakhi hui hai

Saurab angdayi lete hue - sir sahreer akad gaya hai puraa

Raj - aree sir abhi tak soo rahe ho kaya

Tiwari - aree raj tum aao betho chai piyo

Raj - sir usska time nahi hai aap par jisnai hamala kiya wahi bike bahar kadhi hai

Tiwari apni gun uthate hue - esski maa kaa pakad re saale ko

Aisi bhaag daud maachi waha ki jaise kaya hi ho gaya

par uss sai phele hi bike ki whroom ki awwaz aa gayi

Tiwari - agar yeh bhaga toh sabke muh mai unnki hi goto kaa tel pilwaunga

thodi der mai road pe horn ki awaaz hi thi

Raj Bhi tiwari ki gaadi ke saath apni bike laga ke chal raha tha

Tiwari - yeh saare kaah kaah ke dhille ho gye hai raj jaa bike sai ussko pakad naa

Raj - ok sir

Raj bike tezz karta hai aur thodi der mai uss bike waale ke saath mai

Raj - gaadi roak bee

Bike wala - jaa naa ******

Raj Nai ek laat maari usski bike pe aur woh gir paya

Thodi der mai tiwari apni logo ke saath pahuch gaya

Tiwari uss adami ki garadan pakad ke - aa gaya haath saale chal ki har jagah maine bandar jaisi laal nahi kar di toh mera naam tiwari nahi

Gajab ka update mitr
Aakhir pakad me aa hi gaya bike waala Tiwari babu ke haath ab pata nahi kahan kahan se laal ho ga bhai yeh to Tiwari babu hi jaane

 

[Nevil singh]

UPDATE 28

PREVIOUS

Raj Nai ek laat maari usski bike pe aur woh gir paya

Thodi der mai tiwari apni logo ke saath pahuch gaya

Tiwari uss adami ki garadan pakad ke - aa gaya haath saale chal ki har jagah maine bandar jaisi laal nahi kar di toh mera naam tiwari nahi

ABB AAGE

Raj - sir thik hai phir mai chalata hu

Woh gunda mudkar - saale agali baar teri gardan uda dunga

dhaaye ek goli jakar uss gunde ki taang mai lagi

Woh chillata aur tiwari gun ko shug ke - saale tuh kaya samajha mai koi majakiya police wala hu joh bus joke maarunga mai kab kisi ess gun sai maar lu meri gun bhi nahi jaan paati hai

Raj - sir toh mai abb chalu naa

Tiwari - aram sai jaana aur haa ek baat yaad rakhana agar saumya royi toh teri halat bhi aisi kar dunga

Raj jhutti hasi hasate hue - nahi nahi Ok Sir bye

Tiwari raj toh etna tezz jaate dekh thoda man mai muskurate hue uss gunde ke jakam ko pair sai masala aur aakhe bande karke tezz sai smile karata hai

Tiwari ke baaki saath abb aage nahi gaye kyuki unnki pata jab tiwari ke haath mai gun hoti hai toh woh ek sanaki sai kam kuch nahi hai

udhar raj nikal pada apne rasate aur kaafi time baad woh waha pahuch bhi gaya woh

Par Jaise hi Raj apne simbpuri mai ghus raha thaa ussk pair kis nai pakad liya aur

Aur raj ko bike sai gira diyaa

Raj apne kapdate saaf karata hua kadha hua

Raj - kon hai be kon hai waha bahar aaa

Dheere Dheere usske samani black dress mai ek Parchayi si aa gayi

Raj darate hue - Kon ho tum Jaao yaha sai yeh private property hai

Woh - Mai tunhare hi kaam sai aaya hu raj

Usski awaaz sun ke raj kaa jaise sir fat jataa

Raj apna shir pakad leta kaan band kar leta hai

Woh - essi karan mai tumsai milane aaya hu kyuki tum bhi woh sab sun sakate ho keval meri awwaaz sai

Raj - aah bus band karo yeh etnai chike dars bhari chike kiski hai mai aur nahi seh sakata yeh sab

Woh - Yeh Hai asali dard narak kaa dard raj

Raj - kaya narak kaa dard

Woh apna shir sai kapada hata detaa hai

Raj - tumm......mmmmmm... toh devil ho

Devil - haa mai devil hu aur tum mere saathi yaa kaho dost abb sai

Raj - kaya bakawas hai yeh mai tumhara saathi aur dost kaise maine etnai bhi bure kam nahi kiye hai

Devil - karo yaa naa karo par tum meri wajagh sai aaj zinda ho

Raj - yeh sab faltu ki baate band karo

Devil - yehi sach hai 10-11 saal phele joh sab kuch hua woh asali sach tha tum shraap sai mar chuke the kyuki tumnai etnai saare logo ke sharap sai mukt kiya par woh shraap kisi naa kisi ko toh lekar marata naa so tum mare

Raj apne kaan sai haath hata ke - toh mai abb kaise zinda hu

Devil apna haath àage karke usske haath mai ek dil kaa tukada saa tha ussnai usse dabaya toh raj ke seene mai dard hone laga

Raj - ahh mujhe chhod do nahi yeh dard ahhh maaaa chhodo mujhe

Devil woh hisa chhoda - abb samajhe tumhari yeh zindagi meri di hui hai agar mai yeh hisa tumhe de do toh tum etnai shakti shaali ho jaaoge ki tumhe koi asani sai naa hara paayega naa tumhare ghar waalo naa tumhari saumya ko

Raj dard sai abhi bhi pasine pasine ho raha thaa dars usski bardaast sima sai bahar tha - mujhe woh hisssss......saa dddddeeeee .... doooo.....

Devil - phele meri shrat maano

Devil etna bol paya tha ki usski haath pe kuch laga aur woh hisa uchal ke jakar raj ke haath mai gira raj ussko pakadate hi muh mai daal liya aur ek baar ussnai ek mantra padha aur haath dil pe rakaha aur woh hisa raj ke dil mai jud gaya

Devil sai udhar dekha jaha sai usske haath pe danda laga

Meera - maine sab sun liya tuh mere bhai ko fasane aaya thaa abb lee koi shrat nahi teri

Devil hasata hai tezzz saai - ha ha ha ha ha ha kaya bevkoof ladaki hai mera kaam asaan kar diya mai toh essko aur dard deta ki yeh apni marzi sai woh hisa le le tune toh ek jhatke mai sab kar diya hai

Raj abb dard sai nikal chuka thaa kaya - kaya matalab mai abb bikul thik hu aur tere pass blackmail karne ko kuch nahi bacha hai

Devil ghusse mai tha abb usski aakhi sai aag nikal rahi thi - tuh kaya mujhe baacha samajh raha hai haa tere jaiso ko mai kaat kaat ke latkata rehata hu samajha mai naam kaa nahi asal kaa devil aur abb ess duniya kaa devil tuh hai joh ess duniya ko barbaad karegaa mere liyee haa ha ha haa ha

Etna bol ke woh vaps jamin mai chala gaya

Meera bhagati hui raj ke pass aati hui - bhaiya aap thik toh ho yeh sab kaya thaa

Raj - meera yeh humare kisi ki hui kartut hai ess sai aacha mujhe mara rehane dete

Meera dar ke matalab puchati hai

Raj - meera kisi nai meri jaan bachane ke liye devil sai sauda kiyaa hoga tabhi aisa hoga warana devil kudh sai aisa kuch nahi karate hai

Meera - humare ghar mai kahi mom toh nahi naa par unnki baato sai nahi

Raj - aur naa hi dad ke tumnai toh kahi

Meera - kaya bhiaya mai toh mehal sai bahr hi nahi aayi aur mai aapko devil thodi banan Caahungi

Raj - Esska matalab Didi nai kiya yeh sab aur jara bhanak bhi lagane di unnhonai mujhe naa kisi ko par kyu woh inssan hai unnhe kaise pata yeh sab

Meera - saumya bhabhi bhi ho sakati hai

Raj - haa woh bhi kar sakatai hai mujhe bachane ko par baat yeh ki dono mai sai kisi ko abhi tak kuch pata nahi phir kaise aur kon hai

Meera - kaya pata devil jhutt bol raha aap kahi sai devil nahi lag rahe aap bilkul thik ho

Raj - haa ho sakata chalo yaha sai waise hi dimag kaa bhurji baap ban gaya hai mujhe woh picche kaa sab kaam chalu karana hai

usske baad dheere dheere din bit rahe the aur raj apni coal industry ko dheere dheere uchayi pe le jaa raha aur wahi saath saath woh apni simbpuri ko bhi pura badal ke ek city jaisa bana rha jismai ek gaow waali feel aur kushboo ho

Essi bich yeh bhi pata chala ki tiwari jisko pakad ke le gaya woh toh thaa hi ek jaal aur jab woh log pahuche the station waha aag lag chuki thi aur sab file documents jal ke raakh ho gaye halaki koi naa jahakmi hui naa hi mara

Par tiwari samajh gaya thaa yeh chori bhaut jada hi ulajhi hui hai koi mamuli chori nahi jitna Tk dhikha raha thaa

Aur Abb aage yeh koi matalab nahi ki kaha kaya hone wala main baat yeh ki abb logo ko raj sai bachana padega yaa raj kudh hi logo ko kudh sai bachata hai Kaya woh keval logo ke liye hi Devil hoga yaa apni Saumya Meera Deepti Girish Sumitra ke liye bhi

Raajdaar update bhai
Ab vo soudagar koun hai jo jo Raj ke liye Devil se souda kar gaya bina parinaam jaane

 

[Naina]

Sumitra ki kadwi baate toh sabko pareshan kar rahi keval ussmai raj hi nahi hai

waise mohatarma aap bus sabki shaadi hi karwa ke bus phir unnke baacho ke laane kaa intazaam karne mai lagi ho par mujhe pata jahi dikh kyu nahi raha aap joh keh rahi ho

waise bike walai ki kaya khair hui kaa nahi woh toh aap jaanogi par haa aapka thoda kuch kuch andaza sahi laga hai kaafi had tak

Thanks for the lovely fantastic comment on every situation wheter is in story or Not

 

[Naina]

lagta hai us devil se sauda saumya ne ki ho... actually aaj jo devil ke order follow karne pe majboor hai raj..iske piche saumya hi hai...
dekho to kaha fansha diya raj ko....
isliye raj ko anita se hi shaadi karni chahiye na ki saumya se

well.. udhar police station mein wohi hua jiska dar tha.... ye pehle se chali gayi chaal thi kisi khatarnaak planning ke tahat.... lagta kuch bahot jaruri information ya saboot the waha station pe jishe jala di station sahit....


Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Shanu]

Fabulous update bhai