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Fantasy KISMAT - EK KHEL

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Tiwari_baba

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Ohhhhh thari....... sabki mati mari...... Yo ke hoya Raj ki Rajgarh hi khatam kar diya ye to abhi shuru hi hua tha ...... Bhai ye kya horaha mood nhi ban raha kya likhne ka?? Humne socha tha kuchh raaj khulenge past janege.... Kya hua tha kya nhi.... Ab ye satpura jayege waha nayi duniya bsayege.... Tab to inki saktiyan bhi chalo jayegi.... Issse achha to in ko apni purani life me hi lauta dete jaha ye insaano me cm ban ke rah raha tha balveer..... Pata nhi koun saa turn diye ho... Lekin dimag jarur ghuma diye ho
 

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Ohhhhh thari....... sabki mati mari...... Yo ke hoya Raj ki Rajgarh hi khatam kar diya ye to abhi shuru hi hua tha ...... Bhai ye kya horaha mood nhi ban raha kya likhne ka?? Humne socha tha kuchh raaj khulenge past janege.... Kya hua tha kya nhi.... Ab ye satpura jayege waha nayi duniya bsayege.... Tab to inki saktiyan bhi chalo jayegi.... Issse achha to in ko apni purani life me hi lauta dete jaha ye insaano me cm ban ke rah raha tha balveer..... Pata nhi koun saa turn diye ho... Lekin dimag jarur ghuma diye ho
Bhai Maafi caahunga aapko confuse karne ke liye par adal zindagi mai sab same hi rhega cm sab ki life waisi hi hogi


Aap keh rahe uss past life kaa dhikhaau par agar raj wahi raha toh socha nahi ki yaha kaa kaya hoga uss par vichar kariyi bhai

abb sabke toh maa baap waha rajgadh mai nahi hai naa aur dekha kaise woh sameer usski ganag uss duniya kaa rasata dudh rahi thi

Raj waha kaa raja rahega par woh log apni zindagi jiye raj apni tk jwerllers wahi tk hai jisnai raj ke company mai partnership ki hai etana naa ghumiye aap bhai

Sorry par aap aise hi har update mai thoda thoda confuse kar rahe hai

jaise phele raj ki maa aur bol rahe ussko kaise paida kiyaa par waha chiz likhi abb woh aage jaayenge waha abb yaha waha baar baar duniya ki chage hoti toh aur confuse hotee

Aur picchale mai meera mai confuse hue thoda saa dhyaan dijiye aage yeh request hai bus baaki kuch gaalt bola ho toh maafi 🙏
 

Dev the lover

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Mitr mitr me bhed nahi bhai
Maafi mat maangiye bade bhai
Aapne itne sammaan ke kabil samjha aapka hridey se shukriya dost

Aanand bhai ki jhalak dikhti hai aapki lekhni me jo ek aadarsh lekhan kala darshaati hai dost
Gudri ke laal ho bhai aap har pahlu ko alankrit kar dete ho pal bher me
Shukriya bhai aapka enn bade sabdo ke liye abb yeh nahibpata usske layak hu yaa nahi

Waise ananad bhai toh bahut writer hai apna utana kuch nahi bhai

ABB AAGE KE CHIZE DEKHATE HAI WAISE AGAR KOI BAAT SAMAJH NAAYE AAYE TOH PUCHIYEGA JAROOR ....
 

Tiwari_baba

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Bhai Maafi caahunga aapko confuse karne ke liye par adal zindagi mai sab same hi rhega cm sab ki life waisi hi hogi


Aap keh rahe uss past life kaa dhikhaau par agar raj wahi raha toh socha nahi ki yaha kaa kaya hoga uss par vichar kariyi bhai

abb sabke toh maa baap waha rajgadh mai nahi hai naa aur dekha kaise woh sameer usski ganag uss duniya kaa rasata dudh rahi thi

Raj waha kaa raja rahega par woh log apni zindagi jiye raj apni tk jwerllers wahi tk hai jisnai raj ke company mai partnership ki hai etana naa ghumiye aap bhai

Sorry par aap aise hi har update mai thoda thoda confuse kar rahe hai

jaise phele raj ki maa aur bol rahe ussko kaise paida kiyaa par waha chiz likhi abb woh aage jaayenge waha abb yaha waha baar baar duniya ki chage hoti toh aur confuse hotee

Aur picchale mai meera mai confuse hue thoda saa dhyaan dijiye aage yeh request hai bus baaki kuch gaalt bola ho toh maafi 🙏

Maafi nhi mafi to bilkul nahi . .... Maa wali baat me meri galti thi, main samjha tha woshuru se hospital me hai or rahi mira ki baat to maine ye kaha ki uski ankh me ansu hai.... Kahi usko bhi raaj se pyaar vyaar wala lafda to nhi hai yaa sach me bhabhi milne ki khushi ke ansu hai... Itna hi to kaha tha maine..... Uss party me mila tha jo Raj ko us ka naam tk tha yaad nhi hai .... Chalo ye thik hai sab waisa hi rahega to.... Ab kahe ka rajya jab waha us ka raja or praja hi naa ho...... Khair tum meri baat ko negetive comnts me samjhe ho bhai kii baat nhi... Kintu parantu bandhu... Lekhak aap ho to sawal to puchhe jayege hi
 

Dev the lover

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Maafi nhi mafi to bilkul nahi . .... Maa wali baat me meri galti thi, main samjha tha woshuru se hospital me hai or rahi mira ki baat to maine ye kaha ki uski ankh me ansu hai.... Kahi usko bhi raaj se pyaar vyaar wala lafda to nhi hai yaa sach me bhabhi milne ki khushi ke ansu hai... Itna hi to kaha tha maine..... Uss party me mila tha jo Raj ko us ka naam tk tha yaad nhi hai .... Chalo ye thik hai sab waisa hi rahega to.... Ab kahe ka rajya jab waha us ka raja or praja hi naa ho...... Khair tum meri baat ko negetive comnts me samjhe ho bhai kii baat nhi... Kintu parantu bandhu... Lekhak aap ho to sawal to puchhe jayege hi
Kaya bhai aap bhi har chiz ko positive lene ko bol ke apni baat ko negative keh rahe

maine aapki bat bikul waise li jaisw aap nai bola

abb yeh mat sochata yeh jada bhaav kaah raha bhai aap aur tin log hai jinke comment aate roz ess mai kaya negative le lunga mujhe bus aisa thoda halasa laga ki kuch kuch miss hoo jaa rahe saayad aapsai aapki baat sahi hai ki woh meera scene kaa bhi


meera ke aakho sai thode aashu nikalte the par saayad woh ess baar kushi ke aashu the joh usske bhai ke kushi ke liye the

Yeh likha thaa ess liye mai yeh nahi samjha taha ki confuse kyu ho gaye aur rahi baat negative ki toh bhai aap gaali bhi doge toh bura naa manaene wala mai abb khair agar aap mujhe bhai nahi writer hi samajh rahr joh jhujhala gaya swaal sai toh sayad lage aapko aisa aur aapko laga 😭
 

Tiwari_baba

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Kaya bhai aap bhi har chiz ko positive lene ko bol ke apni baat ko negative keh rahe

maine aapki bat bikul waise li jaisw aap nai bola

abb yeh mat sochata yeh jada bhaav kaah raha bhai aap aur tin log hai jinke comment aate roz ess mai kaya negative le lunga mujhe bus aisa thoda halasa laga ki kuch kuch miss hoo jaa rahe saayad aapsai aapki baat sahi hai ki woh meera scene kaa bhi
Sorry bhai itna feel nhi karne ka.... Aap kuchh bhi likho main to padhunga hi......
 

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UPDATE 23

Tk verma apana matha pakade bethe hue the ek sofe pe

Tiwari - haa toh seth kaise hua yeh sab

Tk verma - Ji mujhe pata woh toh mai ussko kudh hi dekh leta

Tiwari - app kaya kar lete ess par baad mai baate karnenge abhi lut ke baare mai saari detail do aur haa businessmen nahi hokar balki ek choro sai maare hue adami ki tarah

Tk verma thoda dar ke - ji thik hai

Tiwari - haa wahi sahi bhi hoga sabke liye Naik esska Statement le le jaldi sai

Naik jakar statement lene lag jata hai

Tiwari Bhar aata aur dekha waha saurav nahi hai

Nevil - sir jisko aap dudh rahe woh thoda personal kaam mai laga hua hai

Tiwari - aacha phir sai nayi londiya mil gayi hai kaya

Nevil - Haa sir bol raha ess baar serious hai woh ladaki

Tiwari paan ki ek thuk marata hua - dekh ee duniya mai bus ek hi chiz serious hai aur woh hai paisa

Nevil - Kyu sir aisa kyu

Tiwari - kyuki woh jis phone sai abhi baat kar raha apni raampayari sai woh bhi paise pe hi chlata hai aur yaha joh tuh meri respect kar raha woh bhi paise kaa khel hai warana chaar jutee marate mujhe

Nevil - aree sir kyu taang khich rahe ho aisa hum kabhi naa soch sakate aap jaisa officer humare saath hai yehi humare liye badi baat hai

Tiwari kuch soch ke usski ess baat kaa jawab nahi deta hai

Aur unnko sab file tayar karne bol ke waha sai gadi mai nikal jata hai

Tabhi ussko phone aata hai

Tiwari - haa thik thik arre chinata naa karo ussko kuch naa hoga

Thodi der mai tiwari tezi sai car chalata hua ek ghar ke bahar pahuchta hai

Gate pe dekh ke ussko

Tiwari - yaha kyu betha hai tuh

Jayesh - chacha ji woh didi pata nahi kaha gayab ho gayi hai

Tiwari - chal andar chal bhabhi sai kuch puch leta phir dudhwata hu usse

Haa yeh Saumya kaa chacha hai

Thodi der apni bhabhi yani saumya ke mom sai baat karke tiwari bahar aata hai aur bolata hai

Tiwari - Toh sab massale ke jad yeh raj hai saumya par usska kabhi aisa koi record toh raha nahi aur saumya usski dost phele sai thi phir woh ussko kyu kidnap karega

Edhar Saumya ess baat sai anjaan yaha raj ki goad mai sir daaleleti hui thi ek nadi ke kinare

Raj ussko baalo mai ungliya ghumata hua bus ussko dekh raha thaa

Saumya akhe band kiye hue - raj kahi yaha ke logo ko yeh naa lage badi jaldi mila diya upperwaale nai hume

Raj - accha abb ek janam bit gaya aur kitana time caahiye ennko haa

Saumya has di

Raj - kaya hua

Saumya - kal maine dekha thaa sapne mai ki tumnai mere garadan pe kiss kiya aur yeh sab tab shuru hua

Saumya bol ke hati hi thi ki raj nai apne hoth usske gardan pe chipaka diye

Saumya jhatke sai aakhe khol ke uthane ko hui par raj nai usse uthane nahi diya aur usske gardan ko che rakaha

Saumy - kaya kar rahe ho raj chhodo mujhe

Aakhir raj nai chhod diya

Saumya - ek din nahi hua mile aur tum behakana chalu ho gaye

Raj - abb tumhari khoobsurati ke aage mera rukana muskil thaa

Saumya - accha ji tab kaha the jab mai tumhare aas pass mandra rahi thi tab kaya khoobsurat nahi lagati thi

Raj sochani laga hai

Saumya ghur ke - kaya soch rahe ho

Raj - soch raha tab chum lena caahiye thaa etna din wait naa karna padata sapne kaa mujhe

Saumya payaar waale ghusse mai ussko dhakka dekar uth jaati hai

Raj - saumya aree ruko toh

Tabhi waha ek bahavishwani hui

‘’ Raj abb tumhe yeh raya chhodana hoga enn do duniyao ke biche chupe rasate aur chamatkari rashaya kahtam ho jaayenge abb prithvi pe aise shkatiyo ka hona bhaut nukasan pahucha sakata hai prakarti ko ess liye tumhe aadesh diya jaata hai abb yeh rajya chhod ke apne logo ko lekar Simbpuri Jaao pirthvi par joh tumhe satpura ke junglo mai milega ‘’

Raj nai haath jod ke naman kiya aur tabhi saumya nai akar usska haath pakad liya

Saumya - yeh sab kyu ho raha hai

Raj - samaye jaante hai kab unnko kaya karana hume unnki baato kaa adar karana caahiye aur jaisa unnhonai bola waise karana caahiye aur satpura kaa jungle humare yaha saia jada dur hai bhi nahi

Saumya - jaisa tumhe thik lage par abb mai tumhe chhod ke nahi jaaungi

Raj - mai tumhe kabhi nahi chhodunga aree ess sai yaad aaya tum waha ghar pe bata ke aayi ho sabko ki nahi

Saumya nai naah mai shir hila diya

Raj thoda tention mai aaya par abhi ussko joh kaam karana thaa woh ess sai jada jaruri thi

Aur Saumya hi yadaas ki woh kadi thi jis mai raj ki yadaas bandhi hui thi joh abb vapas aa chuki thi aur pichale time kaa kuch bhi past abb story mai matter nahi karta toh usska abb koi pehalu vapas nahi aayega abb Raj gadh ki kahani yeh samapt hoti hai

Ess ke aage jaisa bahvishye vaani mai thaa raj apne raj ke sabko lekar yaha sai batayi hui jagah pahucha deta hai jismai kuch din aur bit jaate raj saumya ko jaane ko bolata ghar par abb woh ess rajya ke logo ki rani thi toh kaise jaa sakati thi toh ussnai saaf inkar kar diya

Abb Jaisa aap log Mere style ko thoda jante hai mai power ko jada time nahi rakhata apni story mai taaki real waali thodi feeling mare aur ess liye part wise rakhata warana maza bahut kahrab ho jaata khair abb agali baar milenge satpura ke jungalo sai Simbpuri mai

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Shukriya
Fantastic update
 
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