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Abhi to Nashta bhi nahin kiya hai...
Aapki bhookh hadtal ki baat sunkar, mujhe sach me bhookh lag aayi hai. Kam se kam aadha ghanta to bhookh hadtal ki baat na ki hoti.To Bhookh Hadtaal ki Dhamki bhi nahin de sakta yaar...
Abhi to Nashta bhi nahin kiya hai...
Aapki bhookh hadtal ki baat sunkar, mujhe sach me bhookh lag aayi hai. Kam se kam aadha ghanta to bhookh hadtal ki baat na ki hoti.To Bhookh Hadtaal ki Dhamki bhi nahin de sakta yaar...
Dr. sahab aisa kuch nahi hai. Ye kahani puri tarah se kalpnik hai. Incest story padte padte mujhe un story me dikhaye jaane wale incest se boriyat si hone lagi thi. Bas isliye mai is tarah ki story lekar aaya hu. Haan isme keerti ke kirdar me jarur maine apni jindagi se judi kuch ladkiyon ki khubiyon aur buraiyon ko dikhane ke liye istemal kiya hai. Iske siwa kahi kisi bhi kirdar ya kisi wakye ka kisi ki jindagi se koi lena dena nahi hai.lagta hai ki aapke pariwar me bhi koi aisa hai jo ladkiyo ke uper gandi najr rakhta hai aur aap chahte hue bhi use nahi rok sakte ...
aisa mere pariwar me bhi hai , hai do ristedar lekin ghar ki bahu betiyo par bhi buri najr rahati hai , jab ham chhote the to uski ye harkat dekhkar gussa to aata tha lekin kuch bol nahi pate the, bade hone ke bad uski maa bahn karna shuru kar diye ab jab hamare ghar ke ladke bade hone lage to wo bhi sidha hone laga...
aapki story se mere dimag me fir se us aadami ki chhavi nikhar kar samne aa gayi , aur sath hi ye ahsas bhi hua ki aapne bhi ise bade hi dhyan se dekha hai warna aisa bina experiance ke likh pana mere khayl se sambhaw nahi hota, creation kahi na kahi hamare jivan se hi nikal kar aata hai
aapka har update bahut lamba aur detailed rahta hai pata nahi is story ko kahtm karne me mujhe kitana din lagega ...
kash mere pas pahle ki tarh samy hota , kabhi isi story ko maine sirf 2 din me pura padh liya tha xp par , din rat jagkar , ab dubara padhne me bhi samy lag rha hai , ek din me 5 update bhi nahi padh pata ...fir bhi koshis jari hai
Thanks mahesh bhai, update pasand karne aur sath bane rahne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad.Dada bahut badiya update he
Bas aaj ke bad is kaam se chhutti lene ki koshish kar raha hu.Yr aap jitna comments ka replay dete ho utne me to 2y3 update chaap do.
Aap ki is baat ka jabab aapko do ya teen update bad mil jayega. Fir dekhte hai ki, aapka ye anuman kitna sahi hai.Pritam dada mujhe lagta he student bharti ke rap cash ka isme kuch sambandh he vani didi isko solb kargi sayd
Mehul aur shilpa ke rishte se judi baat ek baar fir aane wale update me aapke samne aane wali hai. Rahi rahul ki baat to is baare me mai abhi se kuch nahi kah sakta. Lekin fir bhi rahul me kuch to baat hai.Hn bhai mehul and shilpa ke saath achchha toh hua hai par yeh confirm hai ki is achchhe ko best banane ke darmiyaan in dono ki haalat sab milkar kharaab karne wale hain....
Aur inse bhi zyada buri band punnu priya keerti ki bajegi
And rahul... Lagta hai inhein story ka khalnaayak toh nahin banaya jaane wala hai other than amarnaath roy....
Thanks sam bhai, mai apni taraf se aisa karne ki puri koshish karuga.koi baat nahi dada ,kahani jaise bhi chal rahi hai bilkul sahi ja rahi hai. Aap ho sake to roj update dene ki kosis kijiye
Kamdev bhai, mai aapki baat se sahmat hu. Mai aaj tak ke update ke commets kar deta hu. Uske bad se sirf un comments ka reply karuga. Jinme kisi tarah ka sawal kiya gaya ho. Baki ke comments ka reply fursat ke samay me kar diya karuga.
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pritam dada
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dada........... बहुत तड़पा रहे हो...............
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Pritam ji kaha hai aap please give update sir ji
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De do update .. kafi time ho gaya aaj to
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