Arjun Singh 72
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Purane update ki apeksha bade update aa rahe hai.Doston update de diya hai. Ye update bhi keerti ke janamdin se hi juda hua hai. Is update me ami nimi ki vajah se keerti aur punnu ke bich ladai ke bij bo diye hai. Dekhte hai ki aage jakar kya hota hai. Ummid hai ki ye update aapko pasand aayega. Story se jude rahne ke liye aur apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye aap sabka bahut bahut dhanyawad.![]()
Thanks anirudhdha bhai, aapki ye baat abhi hi puri kiye deta hu.Bhai 2 update to daily de diya kro . Tabhi story jaldi se present me ayegi

Thanks rage bhai, update pasand karne aur sath bane rahne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad.Nice update

Thanks rohan bhai, update pasand karne aur sath bane rahne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad.Dada zabardast update

Thanks akki bhai, is baar story jarur puri hogi aur rahi roj update dene ki baat to, story ka 2nd part pura hone dijiye. Story ke update ki sankhaya bhi 5 ke karib aa jayegi.Bhot ache pritam da,,,, isi trah daily update dete raho bhai ji,,, bas is baar story complete honi chahiye bhai ji,,,, best of luck

Kashmkash mein hai donon....
Dil mein kuchh aur hai lekin kah nahi paa rahe hain...
Ya yun kahen ki unko khud hi abhi tak apne dil ki baaten samajh na aayee hai....
Nice Update....
Thanks sunil bhai, ye kashmkash hi aage chal kar bahut kuch story me fer badal karne wali hai. Ye baat aapse chhupi nahi hai. Fir bhi mai ye hi kahuga ki, ye kashmkash punnu ko duba hi degi. Baki aap logon ki marji ki aap log punnu ka dubna pasand karte hai ya fir dubne se bachna pasand karte hai.Waiting for Next....

Thanks chintu bhai, ye picnik sach me hi punnu ki jindagi me gahra asar chhodne wali hai. Rahi baat picnik me punnu ke gul khilane ki to, mujhe nahi lagta ki wo koi gul khila sakta hai. Fir aage dekh lete hai ki kya hota hai.Piknik kya rang laati hai, inki life me ye dekhana hoga,
Kirti punnu nitika Mehul Sab ki dosti Lazwab hai.
Kirti aur Mehul ki baatchit sun kar maza aa gaya.
Ami nimmi ke hote punnu picnic me kya gul khilata hai dekhana hai.

Thanks arjun bhai, lekin punnu ka mood kharab hona hi tha. Uski ladliyon ko sath jaate dekh kar keerti ne apna chehra utar liya tha. Aise me keerti to kya koi bhi hota, punnu ka mood kharab ho hi jata. Lekin fikar mat kijiye. Is update me mai uska wo bigada hua mood sahi kar duga. Lekin uske mood ke sath mai is update bhi fir aisa hi kuch karne wala hu.Awesome update
Ye Kya bhai sab mond hi karab ho gaya
Keep posting

Thanks ajam bhai, update pasand karne aur sath bane rahne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad.Awsm update to gud

Thanks rishabh bhai, update pasand karne aur sath bane rahne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad.Behad hi shandar or jabardast update sir jii.
Bahut khoob superb.
Aage ka intjaar

Abhi bhai, aapka kahna sahi hai. Asal me story ke pahle aur dusre bhag me kuch sudhar karna hai. Baki ke bhag me thoda bahut sudhar karna chal jayega. Isliye story mere hisab se story ke 2nd part ke bad, teji se aage bhagegi aur jo pdf me hai wo hi rahegi. Isliye stroy ke dusre bhag ke bad update aane me jyada samay nahi lagega. Lekin aap bhool rahe hai ki naye update 223 update ke bad aana hai. Kyoki baki ke 2 update pdf me bhi nahi hai jo mujhe fir se likhna padege. Ummid hai ki tab tak aap log mujhe jhel payege.Purane update ki apeksha bade update aa rahe hai.
Lagta hai 200 update se hi naye update aane lagenge
