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Fantasy Kuch Bhi Ho Sakta Hain

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Master4uslave

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Kamana: Ye apke pati aur papa nhi hain koi behrupiya hain jo papa ka Roop lekar kisi maksad se hamare ghar aaya hain. USA se jo aaya hain wo koi aur hain aur mujhe jald jald sabhi sachai ka pta lagana hoga. Mujhe isme apki sahayata bhi chahiye.

Rupali: beta Ye tu Kya kah rhi hain agar Ye tere papa nhi hain to kaha hain aur main Teri Kya sahayata kar sakti hoon.

Kamana: maa main sach kah rhi USA Jane se pahle papa jaise the aane ke baad badal Gaye. Tumhe Badi khushkhabri bhi nhi batayi aur sath ke sath apki sari report gayab hain USA ke 7 days ke tour me kuch to hua hain jo hame pta karna hain sath sath report me jo Mila wo bhi janana. Apko bus Ye dekhna ki is papa me Kya Kya changes hain jab tak koi Kabil hame nhi mil jata jo hamare company ka na ho jis ham papa ke pichhe lga sake.

Rupali: thik hain beti.

Kamana: main hostel me thi to mujhe jyada nhi pta Lekin maya ke sath Kya hua tha.

Rupali: jyada kuch to mere samajh me nhi aaya magar mujhe yaad hain us din Teri Kavita mousi ki flight thi jisme Teri mousi Mousa, unka god liya hua beta Raj aur Anjali thi ham unhe chhod ke jaise ghar me pahuche Maya jor se Raghav chillayee aur behosh ho gayi tab se coma me hain.

Rupali kah hi rhi thi tabhi Kamana ka phone baja. Screen pe naam dekhkar muskurai aur phone uthke

Kamana: ha Anjali Bol.

Anjali: Di wo mujhe chhodkar Chala Gaya mera pyar mujhe chhodkar Chala Gaya......
 

Master4uslave

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That's really a mysterious start..

Aisa Kya pata Chala h kamana ko ki wo apne pita p doubt Kar Rahi h aur jo abtk bataya h usse lag Raha h ki daal m kch kala h..

Btw story is good and writing b but aap n theme k bare m ni bataya ki Kya theme h . I hope it's thriller one ..

Also , update shuru Karne s pehle update 1/2 likh dia Karo Bhai ya update m specially font change kardia Karo ya bold jisse update Baki cmmnts s alag dikhe.. hope u got what I meant to say..

Keep it up...
Kuch to hain tabhi to ek beti apne baap pe shak kar rhi hain aur is kahani me apko suspense har Kadam pe milega Lekin Khatm bhi hoga aur jab Khatm hoga wo ek suspense dekar jayega.

Rhi Baat theme ki to main fantacy choosi Kara hain kyoki kahani me thrilled, drama, romance, bdsm, incest, and group sex Sab hain to apko Sab milega.

Baji sath bane rahiye support karte rahe
 

John Cena

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Superb yar regular diya karo update
 

Ng_TheViper

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Hmm interesting..

Kamana k according uske real father kahi aur h aur Jo ABI h wo berupiya h but insab ko to Kafi saal ho chuke h. Kya pata realfatehr ab ho hi na ?

Maya ka scene samajh ni aaya.. wo coma m kaise gai aur raghav Kon h ?
Maya b sister h na to phir ye berupiya sirf Maya k close kyu tha?

In d end Anjali.. she said abt her love ..

Let's see Kya h ye sab..
Aur is story ka hero Kon h ye b Janna h.
 
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