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[Mahi Maurya]

Nhi wo sab vampire ne sambhala h
Humne to bakchodi peli h

ये भी एक गुण है। जो विरासत में नहीं मिलता महोदय,
बकचोदी पेलने लिए मेहनत करके अपना एक अलग मुकाम बनाना पड़ता है।।

 

[Qaatil]

Badhiya shuruaat!
Starting padh kar lagta hai Aksh ne qatl kiya hai kayi logo ka aur usne ye sab kisi kaaranvash kiya hai.
Kahani fir past se shuru hoti hai, jisme baal avastha ko lekhak ne darshaya hai. Format setting script form hai, narration badhiya hai, pehla update padhne ke baad itna samajh aa gaya ki kahani me feelings ko acche se darshaya jaega.
Aksh aur Sakshi ka conversation padh ke mujhe apni kahani ke Rahul aur Taniya ki yaad aa gayi haha!
Keep up the good work!!

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Precious Feedback
Feels very good jab hume unki compliment milti he jis se humne apni Shuruwati samay me madat li ho... Meri first story ke waqt aapse mili wo mahatwapurn tips mujhe us story ko pura karne me kaam ayi. Again Thank You So Much. Keep Reading And Keep Supporting

 

[Qaatil]

anant to giyo
Btw itna kuch ulat palat Sakshi & aksh ki life hota hi nahi... agar aksh khubsurat aurat k...k...k.. Kiran se Shaadi karke do teen bachhe paida kar leta to
bichari Kiran... bad bhery bhery bad... feeling sad

Mujhe lagta he Kiran ko hi is Story ka main character banana chahiye tha....

 

[Werewolf]

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Precious Feedback ❤❤
Feels very good jab hume unki compliment milti he jis se humne apni Shuruwati samay me madat li ho... Meri first story ke waqt aapse mili wo mahatwapurn tips mujhe us story ko pura karne me kaam ayi. Again Thank You So Much. Keep Reading And Keep Supporting ❤❤

Haha! Thanks a lot bhai!
Aap bas aise hi likhte raho aur readers ko entertain karte raho.
Wishing you good luck!

 

[mashish]

Waiting

 

[Qaatil]

Guys No Update Tonight, subah se sar dard kar raha he to Update me kuch kami reh gayi. Kal dhamakedar Update ke saath milta hu. Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting
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[Sanju]

Intazar rahega bhai update ka

 

[parkas]

Guys No Update Tonight, subah se sar dard kar raha he to Update me kuch kami reh gayi. Kal dhamakedar Update ke saath milta hu. Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤
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Take care your health..
Intezaar rahega kal ke update ka...

 

[Naina]

Mujhe lagta he Kiran ko hi is Story ka main character banana chahiye tha....

Ab kaha deri huyi hai... abhi bhi bana sakte
Khubsurat aurat k k k Kiran aur aksh ki Jodi..... Hot hotter hottest
Kyun Mahi Maurya maidam thik hai na...

 

[Qaatil]

Ab kaha deri huyi hai... abhi bhi bana sakte
Khubsurat aurat k k k Kiran aur aksh ki Jodi..... Hot hotter hottest
Kyun Mahi Maurya maidam thik hai na...

To Mahi Maurya is story ka ek dusra part hi shuru kar dein.... Laal Ishq - Hottest Edition Ft. Aksh And Kiran