Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

[Qaatil]

Mast update bhai sakshi qaaatil ke piche pada hai.. Akash rana ke piche pada hai.... Aur anant kiya karne chaha raha hai.. Kahi aisa to nahi akash rana ko mar dega aur sakshi use pakad ke phirse jail me band kar dega dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Beautiful Comment
Baki kiske dimag me konsa khel chal raha he ye to waqt se pehle aap nahi samjh paoge..... Lekin is chapter ke khatam hote hote kuch baate to samne aho jayengi...
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[Qaatil]

Fantastic update .........
Sakshi ne CBI join krr hi lii abb dekhte hai jab usko pta chalega k jiss Qaatil ko voh pakad ne kii koshish krr rhi hai voh koi or nahi Aksh jii hai toh kya hoga......
Or Aksh or Sakshi ne kya action kiya hihihi mzaa aa gya abb dekhte hai jab dono aamne samne aayenge toh kya hogaa writer sir jaldi se abb inko aamne saamne bhi le aayo mujhe inka reaction dekhna hai ....
Or jldi se Aksh or Sakshi ko ekk krdo kitni der se m wait krr rhi hu plzzzzzz........
Now dekhte hai aage kya hoga eagerly waiting for nxt update☺☺☺☺☺

Thank You So Much For Your Precious Review
Wait khatam hoga, kis andaz me hoga ye jaan ne ke liye to thoda intezar karna hoga. The only hint i can give you is Soon......
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[Qaatil]

Qaatil bhai kafi dilchasp update tha....

Bahut kuch ek saath ho raha hai Sakshi Qaatil ke peeche hai, Aks Rana ke peeche hai aur Anant kya khel khel raha hai pata hi nahi chal raha hai???
Aye sab ke bawajud kahani kafi badiya aage badhe rahi hai.....

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Lovely Review
Baki aapke sare confusion jald hi dur ho jayenge.... Next Update Will Be Out Tomorrow Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

 

[Qaatil]

इसमें हम क्या कर सकते हैं महोदय,
मैडम तो हर कहानी के हर किरदार में गरमागरम फंतासी को खोज लेती हैं। फिर वो कहानी कैसी भी क्यों हो।

इस कहानी में भी किरण के रूप में उन्हें एक बकरी हलाल करने के लिए मिल गई है
अब बकरी उन्हें मिली है तो अगर हलाल भी वही करें तो ज्यादा आनंद आएगा।

नैना मैडम, निकालिए अपनी मासूमियत का धारदार हथियार और कर दीजिए हलाल किरण को अक्ष के साथ।।

Wo humko Top Notch Erotic Stories nahi likhni aati na ... Aap best ho, Go Ahead. Royalty de dijiyega bass humko

 

[Qaatil]

meko bole Qaatil sahab... Naina aisi baatein na bolo... aksh aise kaise Kiran ko pyar kare, jabki aksh Sakshi ka pyar amar hai....
to readers dekh liyo... writer sahab ke khud ke karname....Sakshi ko CBI officer banake aksh ke piche hi laga diya....
Wo bhi bechari writer sahab ki is chaalaki se anjan hath per muh dhoke aksh ke piche padi hai
Par Qaatil to khud writer sahab hai.... to usko pakadne ki jagah aksh ko pakadne ke liye kahe chul macha rahi hai..
Par dono jab ek dusre ke samne honge, saari baat clear hogi, jab khasKar Sakshi ko ehsaas hoga ki ye sab writer sahab Matlab Qaatil sahab ki chaal thi... tab aapka kya hoga Qaatil sahab
Btw is udhari khake paisa na lautane wale anant ka kissa khatam karo yaar
Well.. narrations mein aapne kamaal kar diya hai ....shabdon ka aisa kamaal kaafi kam dekhne ko milte hai...har shabd ke andar bhaavnaye koot koot ke bhari hui hai ..har kisi ke bas ki baat nahin hoti bhaavanao ko pradarshit karana jo ki aapne behatareen dhang se kiye hai...
The way you describes and narrates the situations is damn damn too good and marvelous....
What a mesmerizing update! It is really wonderful and fantastic update.
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills Qaatil sahab

Thank You So Much Ji For Your Mesmerizing Revo

The Way You Encourages The Writer Is Really appreciating Will Like To See Your Constructive Criticism.... Because us se galatiya sudharne ka mauka milega.... Again Thank You So Much For Your Revo.... Next Update Will Be Out Tomorrow Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

[Qaatil]

meko bole Qaatil sahab... Naina aisi baatein na bolo... aksh aise kaise Kiran ko pyar kare, jabki aksh Sakshi ka pyar amar hai....
to readers dekh liyo... writer sahab ke khud ke karname....Sakshi ko CBI officer banake aksh ke piche hi laga diya....
Wo bhi bechari writer sahab ki is chaalaki se anjan hath per muh dhoke aksh ke piche padi hai
Par Qaatil to khud writer sahab hai.... to usko pakadne ki jagah aksh ko pakadne ke liye kahe chul macha rahi hai..
Par dono jab ek dusre ke samne honge, saari baat clear hogi, jab khasKar Sakshi ko ehsaas hoga ki ye sab writer sahab Matlab Qaatil sahab ki chaal thi... tab aapka kya hoga Qaatil sahab
Btw is udhari khake paisa na lautane wale anant ka kissa khatam karo yaar

Nahi nahi Naina ji..... Aapko koi rok sakta he kya kisi Character ki dhajjiya udane se.... Aap to yaha ke Members takk ko nahi chhod ti, to ye story ke kirdar kya chiz he

Or humari kono sazish nahi he..... Ye sab Anant ka kiya dhara he.... Kar dijiye tabah use shayad agle Update me thoda thanda padd jaye.....​

 

[Qaatil]

महोदय जी।
पहले आपकी कहानी समाप्त हो जाए फिर इसके बारे में सोचा जा सकता है, क्योंकि अगर अभी तो ये कहानी चलने लगेगी तो पाठक कंफ्यूज़ हो जाएंगे।।

वैसे Naina मैडम इस तरह की कहानी लिखने में माहिर हैं।।

Are Naina to sari chizo me mahir he.... Hum dono ki kahaniya bhi ek saath chala de wo....

 

[Qaatil]

To Der kis baat ki... jald se jald suru kijiye kahani.. kasam se hazar hazar words wale Revo se aisi ki taisi karni dono kirdaaro ki
is story pe koi wajah nahi mil rahi roast karne ke liye..

 

[Qaatil]

Story is very good with emotional touches but mansi should be alive

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Interest In My Story
Baki Story to abhi apni 3rd phase me he.... Aage bahot si baate samne ani he. Next Update Will Be Out Tomorrow Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

[Qaatil]

Guys Update aaj hi Late Night Post kar dunga 10:30-11 baje takk. actually Office se ghar araha tha, to bike fisal gayi. Chot to nahi lagi lekin handle chest me lagg gaya to us se kafi dard ho raha tha. Update ready he, lekin humesha post karne se pehle use edit karta hu, ab kuch behtar lagg raha he, to edit kar ke post kar dunga. Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​