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aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update
sure @Qatil99 bhai aapki story hi itni interesting hai ke banda khud ba khud juda rehta hai...keep writing bro...we readers will definitely support you.
Super update
Ye turning update h
Keep posting
Very good starting and nice script
Full paisa wasool performance.
Waiting for the next update.
Nice update waiting for next
Atulniya Update sirji
Most beautiful scene of this Update ❤
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Nice start bro
Super se bhi uper update
shandar update
𝐰𝐞𝐥𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐛𝐚𝐜𝐤 𝐛𝐡𝐚𝐢
𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐧𝐢𝐜𝐞 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠
𝐛𝐫𝐨
Lajawab update
Nice
Superb Starting bro keep it up
Ohhh sirf poster be hi mera lund kada kiya
Awesome update
Super
Bahut badhiya update bhai
Good name of story.
Me janta hu ke me bht late hu but Congratulations for the story, or kasam se bht hi shandar likh rhe ho, agle update ka intezar he.
Superb update bhai......
Fantastic update..bhai
nice update .waise santosh ne zabardasti science me daal diya aksh ko ..
aur teacher to wakai me ghatiya type tha ,pehle hi din hausla badhane ki jagah taane maarne laga aur maa baap se complain bhi kar di ..
ab aksh class change karna chahta hai isse sakshi naraj ho gayi par aksh ko ghar aane se bura kyu lagta hai .
Bdiya update bhai ji
Update padte padte kab khtm ho jata h pta nhi chalta
Bhai mere hisab se do updates ikathe diya karo to story padne me bhi dilchaspi rhegi chahe do din ke baad update do
Age apki marzi
Nice update..
Aksh does not want to study but he wants to be a successful man, that's a good thing. I have said this before and now I am saying here again that there is no fault of anyone, just need to understand each other and it is not good to have controversy again and again. Sakshi is intelligent and good, taking everyone along and caring. Send that teacher to me, I teach him. If someone says something wrong to Aksh, Sakshi does not like it, reflect her love in anger.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
Shandar Dumdar UpdateAksh Kahin per Bhi galat nahi hai, maa baap ko apne faisle kuch had tak apne baccho per thopna kam kar dene chayiye unhe apne baccho ko moivate karna chayiye saath dene chayiye agar bacche bhatag bhi jaye tho unhe sahi raaste mein lane ka kartawya bhi maa baap ka hai jo ki santosh aur radha mein nahi dekha de rahi hai aur ek taraf yeh zalim zamana to kisis ko bhi chain se zene nahi dete aksar school life mein college life mein, humhe demotivate karna aam baath hogayi log puchthe unhi ko hai zo intelegent, smart, hota hai. Aksh ke saath bhi wahi ho raha hai.
Dekthe hai Aksh ke behaviour mein kya changes aate hai....
Kya aksh apni manzil per pouch payega ya fir yunhi batag tha rahe ga.???
dekthe aage kya hota.....
Waiting for next.....
Shandar Bhai
Khubsurat Update Qaatil bhai ❤
Pyar, dard, kuch karne ka junun sabka kamal combination tha, Next Update ka intezar rahega bhai ❤
For completed 25k views on your story thread.....
hum mera manna hai baap login ko bete ki bhi sunni chahiye wo kya chahta hai kuch usko uske hisaab se bhi aage badhne dena chahiye jabardasti har baat thopna nai chahiye uspar lekin kuch mamle me jaise study me wo kya chahta hai karna kaam kya pasand usko koi bhi subject chota nai hota ok..ab aate hain nibbi par to nibbi na wo chutiya hota hai sayad
Waiting For Next Update
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb
Waiting bro
Intazar rahega bhai
Or kya chapter 2 me inke pyar ki Shuruwat hogi?
Waiting
Tu hi hai meri jeene ki ummid ,
tujhse judi hai dil ki preet.
Tu hasen to bahare gulzar ho,
Aur roye to jeena hi duswar ho.
Ho sakta hai bhavishya me akash ko kafi muskilo ka samna karna pade lekin jab tak sakshi ka hath sath fir darne ki kya baat hai.
jaise kahani ka title hai us hisab se akash aur sakshi ka rishta aage kya karwat lega ye to bhavishya ki gart me chhupa hai.
Ab kahta hu ek bhai ke point of view se ki bachpan se abtak ke jeevan ke safar me sakshi ne akas ke liye ek bahan se badhakar maa aur best friend ka hak ada kiya hai.
vaise dono bhai bahan ka prem hai adbhut.
Hum kahani aur lekhak mahodaya ke achchhe bhavishya ki kamna karte hai.
Love you dear brother
Waiting for the next update.
Superb update bro
Fabulous update bro
Good story
Fifth Update of chapter 2 posted, Don't Forget To Give Your Precious Feedback ❤❤