Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

[Qaatil]

nice update ..aksh gujrat gaya hai karim chacha ke saath ...
rana ka khas aadmi abdul wakai bahut beraham hai jisne us aadmi ko pehle dard diya aur phir sher ke saamne daal diya ...
mansi ko madad ki raste me aksh aur karim chacha ne aur ab aksh ko apna business idea mil gaya hai ..
mansi to gun leke chalti hai un 2 gundo ki hawa nikal di ..

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Beautiful Comment
Idea to mil gaya Aksh ko, ab uspar implement kese hota he ye dekhna interesting hoga, or rahi baat Mansi ki to wo koi aam ladki to he nahi, waha ke top Industries ke malik ki beti he to safety to humesha hogi hi na, Next Update Will Be Out Tomorrow, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

 

[Qaatil]

Lovely update bhai ji
Sakshi Aksh
Chlo aksh ko bhi idea mil gya isi bhane

Yhi to mai chahta hu , lekin mansi bhi aa gyi , triangle

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Precious Comment
Bhai ye triangle kya kya khel karta he ye dekhna interesting hone wala he, Next Update Will Be Out Tomorrow, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

 

[Qaatil]

I understand and totally agree with but sometimes what happens is hum toda sa scene ko ek dam emotional ya fir perfect banane ke chakkar mein scene ko imbalance kar dete hai. Mujhe apka idea samaj aagaya lekin ek feel hota hai, connect hota hai, wo nahi ho paya. That's may be due to choice of wrong words but anyway i know you will go through it once as a reader and find out where and exactly went wrong.
All the best..

Sahi kaha bhai, darasal as a writer humare dimag me ek hi scene ko alag alag way se likhne ka tarika hota he, ab meri thinking ke hisab se me koi scene likh deta hu, lekin iska matlab ye nahi kehar koi meri tarah hi soch raha ho, or yahi sabse difficult kaam hota he as a Writer, ek scene ko likhne ke kafi sare tarike he, lekin konsa best hoga.... Or me abhi tak khudko experienced writer nahi manta hu, lekin jab aap sab ke feedback padhta hu to apne aap ko behtar banane ki puri koshish karta hu, again Thank You So Much For Your Precious Feedback ​

 

[Qaatil]

Good update kuch tho hint mil raha hai k story kis mod par ja rahi hai. Mujhe aise feel ho raha hai k aksh rana ke under kam karega aur wo hi rana ke sacchi ke bare mein abhinav ko batayega jiska parinaam usiki pariwaar k mout.
Yeh scene aur start mein jo scene bataya gaya wo thoda thoda sense kar raha. Magar, mein galath bhi ho saktha hun aur i wish k mein galath hoo jaaon because i love twist and turns that makes story more readable.
Overall good update and nice thought for a startup.
Let see what's next....
Waiting.....

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Beautiful Comment
Waise aap ke guess kafi nazdeek the, lekin exact nahi, or baat twist ki he to wo is hi chapter me samne ajayenge, chapter 2 thoda lamba hoga, Next Update Will Be Out Tomorrow Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

 

[Qaatil]

Aksh and Sakshi look great in each other's arms but it happens very rarely. The effect of Sakshi is visible on Aksh. Aksh said that he has to be a life partner like Sakshi and there is no other girl like Sakshi, that means she should be a Sakshi. A new deal has been found, I pray that this work should be done well as there is more benefit in this work.
Rana's right hand is Abdul and he is also a bad man, he also needs to be punished but this task is not so easy. Nowadays there are very bad people in the society, as it happens to many people with Mansi today, she had a gun, so she survived, otherwise there would have been trouble. Aksh's idea is good but will he succeed or not.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Beautiful Review
Yes Aksh and Sakshi hugs each other rarely, but i think these hugs are memorable for both of them. Let me tell you that, ye Rana koi chota mota gunda nahi he, or is story me Rana bilkul kamzor nahi show hoga, lekin end tak aap samajh jaoge Rana ka hashr kya hone wala he. Next Update Will Be Out Tomorrow Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

 

[Qaatil]

Fantastic update. There seems to be only love between the siblings. Agar lust bhi hota toh aur bhi maza aata.
But please continue as per your story.
I am enjoying it. Thanks

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Interest In My Story.... Waise agar aapne meri pehli story padhi hogi to aap samajh jaoge ki meri Incest Story me Passionate Love Making par zyada dhyan diya jata he. Ye baat he ke is story me koi aisa scene nahi hoga ke isne usko hilate dekha, usne ungli karte.... Lekin passionate love making zarur hogi, and I'll try my best to not disappoint you. Please keep Reading, And Next Update Will Be Out Tomorrow Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

 

[JainMs]

Excellent Update bhai

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Intjaar

 

[Dangi]

Next part

 

[Arv313]

Baat karte hai update ki starting se to vyakti ke swasthaya and vyaktitva dono ke liye hi walK kafi important evam labhkari h.
Akki aur sakshi to abhi esi bhawar me hai ki vo dono ek dusre ke prati mahsoos ho rahe ehsas ko kya naam de.
Bich me jo ye crime scene aata hai ye dimag ki dahi karke rakh deta hai aur na hi abhi ye good feel kara raha hai.
Lekin lekhak mahodaya ke achchhe lekhan ki vajah se esko najar andaj kiya ja sakta hai.
Mansi ne to un ladko ki hi leli ulta ho gya shikari hi shikar ban gye.
Aur akash ke idea ki jhalaki kafi sahi thi.

Few words for someone special(Sakshi)-

Dard-e-Dil dard-e-jigar es dil me jagaya aapne
Pahle to akash pagal hi tha shayar banaya aapne,
Jeene ka dhang sikhaya marne ka matlab btaya sab aapne.
Love you dear brother
Waiting for the next update.