Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

[Ahmadsk]

Chapter 1 - The Early Life

Update 2

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Word Count: 3112
Estimated Reading Time: 00:15:00


Subah ke 7 baje hue the, Aksh besudh sa, ulta soya hua tha or Sakshi uske upar apne haath per dale soyi thi. Radha apna kaam adhura chhod kar dono ko jagane ke liye ajati he. Lekin wo dono to uthne ka naam hi nahi le rahe the. Radha ne akhir kar dono ko nind se jaga diya Aksh to uth kar beth gaya lekin Sakshi bethe bethe hi apni aakhe band kare soyi thi.


Radha: Deva.... kitni badi aalsi ladki he dekho ye? Bethe bethe bhi sone lagi? Sakshi..... Jaldi uthja.....
Wo Sakshi ko hila kar uski nind todte hue kehti he.
Sakshi: ahhh.. mujhe nahi jana School.....
Wo roti hui shakal bana kar kehti he or itna kehkar wo apne upar firse chadar odh kar so jati he.
Radha: hmm..... To fir Gola Akele Aksh ko hi milega tujhe nahi.....
Wo Aksh ke sar pe haath fer kar kehti he. Or uski baat ka asar Sakshi par ho jata he or wo jhat se uthkar beth jati he.
Sakshi: nahi... nahi... Mujhe bhi chahiye..... Mujhe bhi chahiye.....
Wo bed par khadi ho kar gusse me uchalte hue kehti he.
Radha: hmm to ab utho jaldi....
Fir dono fresh ho jate he, Aksh ne kapde pehen liye the or Radha Sakshi ki choti bana rahi thi, Aksh Sakshi ke samne use dekhte hue khada ho jata he, Sakshi apna muh banate hue use chidha rahi thi.

Aksh: Aai..... Ye chipkali Choti me kitni acchi dikhti he na?
Usne kafi pyaar se ye baat kahi jis se Radha or Sakshi ke chehre par muskurahat ajati he.
Radha: accha? To fir chipkali kyu bulata he ise humesha?
Aksh: kyu ke wo chipkali he... Lekin kabhi kabhi acchi dikhti he.
Sakshi: accha? To me bhi tujhe Bandar or kutta isliye hi bolti hu ke tu to har waqt waisa hi dikhta he.
Radha: bas bas.... Ab subah subah shuru mat ho jao tum dono.... Chalo ho gaya ab nashta karo or School jao... Or yaad hena late hue to...
Wo dono ko ungli dikhate hue warn karti he. Fir dono breakfast kar ke Santosh ke saath School ke liye nikal jate he. Santosh dono ko school ke gate tak chhod deta he or dono ko kuch paise de kar chala jata he. Dono bhai behen bhi khushi khushi apni class me chale jate he, kuch period ke baad ab inka khelne ka waqt agaya tha, sare bacche School ground me chale aye. Aksh, Sakshi, Neha or Soham ek taraf pakdam pakdayi khelne lage the. Sakshi baki tino ko pakad rahi thi, or ye tino us se bach kar bhaag rahe the, tabhi waha khel raha ek ladka bhagti hui Sakshi ke samne ajata he, Sakshi us se takra kar gir jati he or uske ghutne par kafi chott ajati he. Sakshi ab rone lagi Aksh ye dekh kar ruk gaya or Sakshi ke paas bhagte hue ajata he, jis ladke ki wajah se Sakshi giri thi wo un sab se 2-3 saal bada tha. Aksh jaldi se akar Sakshi ke ghutne se khun saaf karne lagta he.


Ladka: aye.... pagal ladki Tu dekh kar nahi bhaag sakti, agar mujhe lag jata to bahot pita hota tujhe mene..

Wo unchi awaaz me Sakshi ko dekh kar kehta he, lekin uski baat se Aksh ka gussa satve asman par chala jata he or wo uth kar us ladke ki collar pakad leta he or uske muh par ek do ghuse maar deta he lekin Aksh is ladke se 2-3 saal Chota tha, to us ladke ne Aksh ko ek dhakke me niche gira diya or uske upar ake Aksh ko marne laga, ab ye sab dekh kar Sakshi uth jati he or piche se us ladke ke baal pakad kar piche khinch kar gira deti he, tabtak Aksh uth kar use marne lagta he ab Sakshi or Aksh milkar us ladke ki tagdi dhulayi karne lage the. Tabhi ek teacher waha ajati he or wo unka jhagda rok deti he.


Is waqt Aksh or Sakshi ke kapdo ki halat kharab ho chuki thi. Wo log apna muh niche kar ke teacher ke samne khade the.


Teacher: kya chal raha he ye sab? Ha? Tum dono milkar use kyu maar rahe ho?
Wo gusse se Aksh or Sakshi ko puchti he.
Aksh: ma'am isne Sakshi ko dhakka diya tha or us se ulti baat bhi ki....
Teacher: to fir tum dono koi gunde ho kya jo is tarah kisi ko marne pitne lag jao.
Sakshi: lekin isne Aksh ko mara tha to....
Teacher: kyu jhut bol rahi ho? Mene dekha yaha tum dono use buri tarah se maar rahe the.
Aksh: ma'am....
Teacher: basss.... Tum is hi waqt ghar jaoge.... Or ha... Kal apne parents ko le kar hi ana school... Jao ab...
Wo bahot hi gusse me kehti he fir Aksh or Sakshi ghar jane ke liye nikal jate he. Raste me dono dare hue the kyu ke ab ghar pe Radha dono ki buri halat karne wali thi. Aise hi chalte hue wo dono us Gole wale ke yaha se guzarte he, use dekh Sakshi achanak se wahi ruk jati he.

Aksh: kyu ruk gayi?
Wo piche mud kar Sakshi se puchta he.
Sakshi: Gola kha kar jate he na....
Usne kafi masumiyat se kaha lekin Uski baat se Aksh use ek tak dekhne lagta he.
Aksh: ghar jane ke baad Aai kitna dantegi hume, me wo soch raha hu, or tujhe gola khana he?
Sakshi: ha to.... Ab Aai to hume ghar pe gola dene nahi wali yahi kha kar jate he na...
Wo roti hui shakal bana kar Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: tu pagal....
Wo is se aage kuch kehta ke Sakshi uska haath pakad leti he or use khinch kar Gola khane le jati he. Sakshi ke haath me Gola ate hi uske chehre par wo khushi, wo pyari hasi wapis ajati he, lekin Aksh to Radha ki dant se darr raha tha, tabhi Aksh ki nazar Sakshi par padti he jo bina kisi darr, khushi khushi Gola khane me lagi thi, use dekh kar Pata nahi kyu lekin Aksh ke chehre par bhi ek muskurahat ajati he, or wo bhi Gole ki chuskiya lene lagta he, Gola khatam hote hi dono firse apne raste chal padte he.


Ghar pe Radha ke sab kaam ho chuke the, or wo aram se TV dekhte hue bethi thi. Tabhi darwaze se Aksh or Sakshi dare, sehme se andar apni gardan niche kiye ajate he. Dono ko itni jaldi ghar ate or unki halat dekh kar Radha thodi heran thi.


Radha: tum dono itni jaldi.... Or ye... Ye kya halat bana li he?
Lekin Aksh or Sakshi uski baat ka koi jawaab nahi dete.
Radha: Bolo..... Or ye kya Sakshi.... Tumhare ghutne par chot kese lagi?
Wo Sakshi ke ghutno ki chot dekh kar chintit lehze me puchti he.
Aksh: Aai, wo.... Ma'am ne Kal tumhe... Bulaya he...
Wo ladkhadate hue kehta he.
Radha: zarur kuch karname kar ke aye ho tum dono.... Jaldi se batao warna....
Wo dono ko ungli dikha kar gusse me kehti he.
Sakshi: Aai, humari galati nahi he.... Wo ladka hi mujhse takraya tha or sorry bolne ki jagah mujhpar gussa kiya usne, to Aksh ne or mene milkar use pitt diya.. ..
Wo apna muh fula kar kafi gusse se kehti he.
Radha: wahhh... Matlab To ab gunda gardi karne lage tum dono... Teacher ko nahi bata sakti thi?
Aksh/Sakshi: Sorry Aai....
Wo dono apna muh niche karte hue kehte he.
Radha: Sorry? Din ba din shaitaniya badh rahi he tum dono ki, ab jao andar or kapde badal kar khana khane aajao....
Wo dono ko andar room me janeka ishara karte hue gusse me kehti he. Dono jaldi se andar ajate he.

Aksh: ohh... Bach gaye aaj to.....
Wo andar bed par beth kar chain ki saas lete hue kehta he. Lekin Sakshi to abtak udas lag rahi thi.
Aksh: kya hua chipkali?
Uski baat par Sakshi bas use gusse se dekhti he.
Aksh: kya hua bata na....
Sakshi: ab Aai se Gola kese mange? Wo nahi dene wali hume Gola....
Wo apni school bag niche dalte hue udasi se kehti he.
Aksh: oye pagal ladki..... Abhi to khaya na humne, or ab firse chahiye tujhe?
Sakshi: ha wo to bahar khaya tha, mujhe ghar pe bhi khana he...
Wo roti hui shakal bana kar Aksh ke bagal me beth jati he, tabhi Aksh ki nazar uski chot par chali jati he.
Aksh: Sakshi tujhe dard nahi ho raha na?
Sakshi: kya nahi ho raha? Kitni jalan ho rahi he mujhe...
Wo bahot hi masumiyat se kehti he, tabb Aksh uske samne niche zameen pe apne ghutno par beth jata he or Sakshi ki chot par fook lagane lagta he.

Aksh: ab thik he?
Wo fook marte hue Sakshi se puchta he.
Sakshi: ha thoda thik lag raha he....
Tabhi Radha Sakshi ke chot par lagane ke liye Dawai le kar andar ajati he.
Radha: Aksh tum kapde badal lo jaldi....
Fir Aksh uthkar washroom chala jata he, or Radha Sakshi ki chot par dawai lagane lagti he.

Kuch der baad Tino milkar khana shuru kar dete he, bich bich me Sakshi Aksh ko ishara kar rahi thi ke Aai se Gola maang, lekin Aksh use mana kar raha tha.

Radha: kya ishare bazi chal rahi he tum dono ki?
Wo dono ko ishare se baat karta dekh kar puchti he. Radha ki baat sunkar dono thoda hadbada jate he.
Aksh: n...... nahi Aai... Kuch nahi....
Sakshi: Aai.... Wo Aksh na mujhe Tumse Gola mang ne ko keh raha tha...
Wo apna ilzaam Aksh par dalte hue kehti he, lekin uski baat se Aksh ka muh khula ka khula reh jata he.
Aksh: kitna jhut bolti he chipkali...... Khud kabse mujhe keh rahi he ke Aai se Gola maang... or ab....
Wo gusse me Sakshi ko kehta he.
Radha: koi Gola nahi milne wala dono ko, pehle to School me gunda gardi kar ke aye ho or chahte ho ke tumhe gola du? Bilkul bhi nahi milega.... Khana khao chup chap...

Wo sakht lehze me dono se kehti he. Dono hi chup chap khana khane lagte he, khane ke baad Aksh or Sakshi Cartoon dekh rahe the lekin dono hi udas the, Radha dono ko dekh leti he or fridge me se Barf nikal kar use crush kar ke uspe kal Santosh ne laye syrups daal kar gola bana deti or use le kar dono ke paas ajati he.


Radha: ye lo.....
Wo dono ke samne gola dete hue kehti he. Aksh or Sakshi ki to jese lottery lag gayi. Dono khushi khushi Radha ke haath se Gola le kar khane lagte he. Radha bhi unke bagal me beth jati he.
Radha: dekho aaj maaf kar diya mene dono ko, lekin agli baar aisi harkat nahi honi chahiye... Thik he?
Aksh/Sakshi: thik he Aai....
Or wo dono apna Gola khane me busy ho gaye, kuch der baad Santosh ghar agaya tha uski aaj jald hi chutti ho chuki thi.

Sham ke kareeb 6 baje hue the, puri Joshi family saath bethe baate kar rahi thi.
Radha: kal aap dono ke teacher se mil lena me to nahi jane wali, mujhe pata he ye dono fir se kuch na kuch gadbad karenge school me.
Santosh: tum chinta mat karo me jaunga kal, bacche he shaitani to karte hi rahenge na....
Wo Aksh or Sakshi ki side lete hue kehta he. Tabhi Sakshi akar uske gale laga leti he.
Sakshi: Baba, Thank You aapne humari problem door kar di....
Wo Santosh ke gale lag kar uchalte hue kehti he.
Santosh: konsi problem?
Wo Sakshi ko apne se alag kar ke herani se puchta he
Sakshi: are... ab roz roz bahar Gola nahi khayege, ghar pe akar dher sara gola khate rahenge wo bhi free....
Wo bahot khushi se kehti he.
Santosh: accha? To fir me kal se tum dono ko paise nahi dunga....
Sakshi: kyu nahi doge paise?
Wo kafi chintit lehze me puchti he.
Santosh: are bhai jab tum dono ka kaam ghar me hi ho jata he, to fir paise ki kya zarurat he?
Sakshi: nahi... nahi.... Hume paise bhi chahiye.... Agar kabhi Aai ne hume Gola dene se mana kiya to?
Santosh: Aai kyu mana karegi Gola dene se?
Sakshi: mujhe kuch nahi pata, roz paise bhi dene padenge matlab dene padenge....
Wo gusse me apne per patakte hue kehti he.
Santosh: are.... Thik he, thik he... dunga paise bhi..... bas?
Sakshi: thank you baba....
Wo Santosh ko kas ke gale lagate hue Kehti he.
Santosh: accha chalo park me khelne jana he?
Aksh/Sakshi: ha.... Jana he....
Fir wo charo milkar paas hi ke park me chale jate he. Waha ja kar Santosh or Radha ek bench par beth gaye, Sakshi or Aksh dono waha khelne lage. Kuch der ke baad waha par Aksh ki hi umar ka ek ladka aya jiske paas ek choti cycle thi. Wo ladka us cycle ko kafi khushi ke saath chala raha tha, ab Aksh ko bahot iccha hui ke uske paas bhi waisi cycle honi chahiye thi. Wo bas ek jagah khada ho kar us cycle ko dekh raha tha. lekin Sakshi aage baag chuki thi, jab wo piche mudkar dekhti he to pati he ke Aksh waha khada he.

Sakshi: kya hua Aksh?
Wo Aksh ke paas akar puchti he, Lekin Aksh uski baat ka jawab diye bina apne parents ki taraf bhaag jata he, Sakshi bhi uske piche chali ati he.
Aksh: Baba.... Baba...
Wo chillate hue bhaag kar Santosh ke paas akar kehta he.
Santosh: Kya hua beta?
Aksh: Baba, mujhe bhi waisi cycle chahiye....
Wo us ladke ki cycle ki taraf ungli karte hue kehta he.
Santosh: waisi cycle? Lekin Tumhe kaha ati he cycle beta?
Aksh: Baba me kuch nahi janta, mujhe bhi waisi cycle chahiye....
Wo gusse me apne per patakte hue kehta he.
Radha: beta meri baat....
Aksh: mujhe chahiye wo cycle bas.....
Wo Radha ki baat kaat te hue kehta he.
Santosh: accha... Thik he dila dunga.....
Aksh: sach Baba?
Wo kafi khush hokar kehta he.
Santosh: ha lekin tumhe uske liye agle mahine tak intezar karna hoga.
Aksh: nahi.... Mujhe kal hi wo cycle chahiye....
Santosh: beta kal ke kal cycle nahi mil sakti, mene kaha na me agle mahine tumhare liye waisi cycle le aunga....
Aksh: Baba......
Radha: Aksh..... Bas ho gaya.....
Wo kafi gusse me akar unchi awaaz me kehti he.
Radha: ek baar kaha samajh nahi ata? Or koi cycle nahi milegi....
Wo bahot hi gusse me kehti he jis se Aksh ke akho me asu ajate he.
Santosh: Radha, gussa kyu kar rahi ho? Beta me me tumhe jald se jald waisi cycle la kar de dunga... Thik he?
Wo Aksh ke asu saaf karte hue kehta he. Lekin Aksh apne kadam tez chalate hue waha se nikal jata he. Fir tino bhi uske piche piche hi ghar ajate he. Ghar ane ke baad Aksh sidha andar ke kamre me ja kar bed par let kar rone lagta he. Santosh or Radha apne kamre me chale jate he, Sakshi jese hi andar ati to usne dekha ke Aksh bed par lete hue Ro raha he. Wo Aksh ke paas ja kar beth jati he.

Sakshi: Dada kya hua?
Aksh: kuch nahi hua... Ja yaha se....
Wo kafi gusse me Sakshi se kehta he.
Sakshi: Baba ne kaha na ke wo Cycle le kar denge, to fir ab kyu ro rahe ho?
Aksh: mujhe tujhse baat nahi karni.... ja yaha se...
Sakshi: dekhna fir kabhi baat nahi karungi me....
Aksh: ha to mat kar.....
Sakshi: Sachme nahi karungi....
Lekin Aksh koi jawab nahi deta tab Sakshi uski pith ke upar chad ke uski kamar me gudgudi karne lagti he. Sakshi ke aisa karne se kuch hi seconds me Rota hua Aksh hasne lagta he.

Aksh: Chipkali.....
Jab Sakshi us se alag ho kar side me beth jati he to Aksh us se kehta he.
Sakshi: Bandar......

Or fir wo dono aise hi bethe hue baate karte he, thodi der baad dinner ka time ho gaya tha, Charo saath milkar khana kha rahe the, Aksh ab bhi thoda udas tha khane ke baad wo apne kamre me chala jata he Sakshi bhi kuch der TV dekhne ke baad kamre me ja kar so jati he.


Radha apna sara kaam khatam kar ke Santosh ke saath hall me beth jati he.

Radha: dekha na Aksh ko? Kitna ziddi ho gaya he?
Santosh: Radha wo baccha he, zidd to karega hi na?
Radha: or aap kya mana nahi kar sakte use? Hum log koi Ambani ke pariwar se nahi he jo uski sari farmayishe puri kar sake...
Santosh: Radha use ye baat kese samjhegi? Wo thodi na janta he ke aaj ke samay me ye paisa akhir kitni badi chiz he. Jab wo Bada hoga tab samajh jayega... Or tum chinta mat karo, me bank me jo saving he usme se kuch paise nikal kar uske liye cycle la dunga....
Radha: jesa aap thik samjhe....
Fir wo dono bhi apne kamre me chale jate he, lekin un dono ki baate Aksh ne sun li thi, darasal jab wo washroom jane ke liye waha aya to dono ki baate usne sun li.

Aksh(man me): Aai Baba to bahot pareshan lagg rahe the, matlab paise bahot mushkil se ate he? To fir me Baba ko bol dunga ke mujhe cycle nahi chahiye... Ha.. ye thik he... lekin ye Ambani kon he? Or Aai ne kyu aisa kaha ke hum Ambani ke pariwar se nahi he?

Wo apne mann me kayi sare swal le kar washroom chala jata he or fir bed par akar so jata he


Or is tarah aaj ka din nikal jata he, jaha baccho ki zidd ke samne ek baap har wo chiz karne ke liye tayar he jis se uske bacche ke chehre par khushi aye.


To doato ye tha is story ka pehla mega Update jaha se hum ye ke sakte he ki ab Aksh ki zindagi me change ane ki Shuruwat ho chuki he, kyu ke is masum se bacche ke dil me ek bahot bada sawal paida ho chuka tha ke Akhir life me paise ki importance itni zyada kyu he. Ab bas is sawal ka jawab Aksh ko kis tarah milta he ye dekhna interesting hoga.

Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

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Sakshi: Aai, humari galati nahi he.... Wo ladka hi mujhse takraya tha or sorry bolne ki jagah mujhpar gussa kiya usne, to Aksh ne or mene milkar use pitt diya.. ..
Wo apna muh fula kar kafi gusse se kehti he.

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[Ahmadsk]

Chapter 1 - The Early Life


Update 3​

Word Count: 2501
Estimated Reading Time: 00:12:00

Ek chehekti subah me is matlabi duniya se bekhabar Aksh Or Sakshi besud se apni sapno ki duniya me gum the, lekin unki nind todne ke liye waha Radha ajati he. Kafi mashakkat karne ke baad akhir kaar Radha dono ko nind se jaga hi deti he. Dono jaldi se ready ho jate he, aaj Santosh ko dono ke teacher se milna tha, to wo tino ghar se nikal jate he.


School pahoch kar Santosh teacher se milta he, Staff Room me is waqt Teacher, Santosh, Aksh or Sakshi the.

Teacher: dekhiye mujhe in dono se padhai ke mamle me koi pareshani nahi he, kyu ke dono padhai me acche he, lekin ye mar pitai acchi baat nahi he, baki dono bahot hi samjhdar he.
Santosh: ji me firse aapse maafi chahta hu, bacche he galtiya to karte hi he.
Teacher: hmm.... Aksh Sakshi..... Is baar maaf kar rahi hu, agli baar aisa kuch nahi hona chahiye, Okay?
Wo dono ko warn karte hue kehti he.
Aksh/Sakshi: okay ma'am....

Fir tino staff room se bahar ajate he. Aksh to kal se bas kahi gum sa tha.

Santosh: chalo me chalta hu, shaam ko milenge
Wo dono ke sar pe haath ferte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Aise kese jaoge? Paise kon dega?
Santosh: are haa... Ye lo.... Tumhare paise...
Wo dono ko kuch paise de deta he or waha se apne kaam par jane ke liye nikla hi tha ke piche se Aksh use rok deta he.

Santosh: kya baat he Aksh?
Aksh: Wo....wo Baba mujhe cycle nahi chahiye.....
Santosh: kya? Lekin kyu?
Aksh: bas... Mujhe nahi chahiye.... Aap mere liye cycle mat lana.
Santosh: beta mene kaha na me tumhare liye cycle jald se jald le aunga....
Wo niche jhuk kar Aksh ka chehra apne hatho me thamkar kehta he.
Aksh: nahi Baba... Mujhe sachme cycle nahi chahiye...
Santosh: lekin.....
Aksh: please Baba..... Jab mujhe chahiye hogi tab me aapse maang lunga.....
Santosh: accha thik he.... To ab me jau?
Aksh ha me sar hila deta he, fir Santosh waha se apne kaam par chala jata he. Aksh or Sakshi bhi apni class attend karne ke liye chal padte he.

Sakshi: Aksh Tune kyu mana kar diya cycle lene se?
Aksh: bas mujhe nahi chahiye thi cycle....
Sakshi: jhute kahi ke... Sach kyu nahi bata rahe ho?
Aksh: or kya sach batau? Mujhe nahi chahiye cycle bas.. Or ab tu chup chap chal class me..
Or fir dono apni class Tak pahoch jate he. Aksh aaj pure waqt bas kuch khayalo me duba hua tha. Kuch period khatam ho gaye the, lekin Aksh ab bhi Radha or Santosh ki kal raat ki baate yaad kar raha tha, or Teacher ne Aksh ko dekh liya.

Teacher: Aksh.... Aksh.....
Wo thodi unchi awaaz me kehta he tab ja kar Aksh apni khayalo ki duniya se bahar ajata he or uth kar khada ho jata he.
Teacher: chalo batao mene abhi kya padhaya?
Uske sawal par Aksh hadbada jata he or koi jawab nahi de pata.
Teacher: kaha dhyan tha tumhara? Ha?
Aksh: S.. sorry sir....
Wo apna sar niche jhuka kar kehta he.
Teacher: koi sorry nahi... Chalo class ke bahar jao or murga ban kar khade ho jao...
Wo kafi sakht lehze me kehta he. Jis se Aksh turant bahar ajata he lekin wo murga nahi bana tha bas aise hi apni sapno ki duniya me duba khada tha. Kuch der baad teacher sabko kuch likhne ko kehta he or ek baar Aksh ko dekhne ke liye bahar ajata he to waha Aksh khade khade kuch soch raha tha.

Teacher: are..... Tumhe murga ban ne ke liye kaha tha na mene?
Wo Aksh ke samne ate hue kehta he.
Aksh: Sorry Sir...
Wo apni soch se bahar akar Ghabrate hue kehta he.
Teacher: aaj kya ho gaya he Aksh tumhe?
Aksh: sir wo...... wo Ambani kon he?
Uska sawal sunkar teacher kuch samajh nahi pata.
Teacher: kyu? tumhe kyu jaan na he?
Aksh: nahi sir mene to bas aise hi pucha..
Teacher: hmmm.... to Ambani India ke sabse paise wale insaan he...
Aksh: kya? Sabse paise wale? To itne paise unke paas kese kya aye?
Wo kafi heran sa rehkar teacher se puchta he.
Teacher: kyu ke wo ek kabil business man he, unka bahot hi bada karobaar he.
Aksh: kya? To fir me bhi Ambani jese hi banunga.... or ek kabil business man banunga...
Wo teacher ka jawab sunkar kafi khush ho jata he.
Teacher: thik he bann jana, lekin abhi murga bano, thik he.....
Wo Aksh ke sar se haath ferte hue kehta he. Fir Aksh murga bann jata he, or Teacher firse class ke andar chala jata he, kuch der me Class khatam hone ke baad Teacher bahar Aksh ke paas ajata he.


Teacher: Aksh ab bas, jao andar class me..
Aksh: okay sir...
Wo sidha khada hote hue kehta he. Or class me jane lagta he lekin tabhi Teacher use rok deta he, Aksh uski taraf mudkar ruk jata he.
Teacher: waise Aksh ek baat yaad rakhna, Ambani bann na katayi asaan nahi hota, uske liye tumhe bahot mehnat karni hogi.. paisa kamane ke liye kafi mehnat lagti he or sirf mehnat hi nahi tumhe bahot hoshiyaari se kaam bhi lena padega, tab kahi jaa kar tum Ambani ki tarah ban paoge...
Wo thoda niche jhuk kar Aksh ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kehta he.
Aksh: ha sir me bahot mehnat karunga... Or ek din Ambani ki tarah ban kar dikhaunga....
Wo kafi josh ke saath jawab deta he, Teacher uski baat par muskurate hue waha se chala jata he.

Recess ke waqt sablog milkar khana kha rahe the. Lekin Aksh to ab bhi apne sapne ki duniya me khoya tha.

Sakshi: Aye bandar.... subah se Kya soch raha he?
Wo Aksh ko ek gehri soch me duba dekh kar puchti he.
Aksh: chup chap khana kha.... Chipkali....
Wo gusse me Sakshi se kehta he, lekin is se Sakshi ka chehra hi utar jata he.
Sakshi: to itna kyu gussa kar rahe ho? Bas aise hi puch liya na mene...
Wo muh fula kar apna sar jhuka ke Aksh se kehti he. Aksh ko kafi hurt hota he ke uski wajah se Sakshi udas ho gayi.
Aksh: Sorry.... Sorry.... Sakshi...
Wo apne kaan pakad kar Sakshi ke gaal par kiss karte hue kehta he, jis se Sakshi ke Chehre par ek pyari si muskurahat wapis ajati he.
Sakshi: to bata, kya soch rahe the?
Aksh: thik he, lekin pehle mujhe promise kar ke tu meri ye baat kisi ko nahi batayegi, Aai Baba ko bhi nahi...
Sakshi: are promise kisi ko nahi bataungi...
Aksh: to sunn... Me na bada ho kar Ambani ki tarah banunga or....
Sakshi: Ambani.... Ye kon he?
Wo Aksh ki baat adhe me hi kaat te hue puchti he.
Aksh: are Ambani humari country ke sabse paise wale insaan he, me bhi unki tarah banunga or fir humare paas bhi bahot sara paisa hoga jis se hum jo chahe wo kharid sakte he na....
Sakshi: sacchi? Hum Jo chahe wo kharid sakte he?
Wo kafi utsukta ke saath puchti he.
Aksh: ha.... Lekin ye baat kisi se mat kehna thik he?
Sakshi: nahi Dada..... Me kisi ko bhi nahi bataungi...
Aksh: hmm, to ab khana kha...
Or fir dono hi khushi khushi khana kha lete he.

Dopehar ko School ki chutti hote hi Aksh or Sakshi apne raste jane lagte he. Ghar akar Aksh sabse pehle apne kamre me rakha ek gullak nikal leta he jispar kafi dhul padi thi, kyu ke Aksh humesha apni jeb me hi kuch paise bacha kar rakhta tha. lekin pata nahi kyu aaj se usne apne sare paise gullak me jama karne ka faisla liya. Jab wo gullak me paise daal raha tha to Sakshi ne use dekh liya.

Sakshi: kya hua Aksh? Tu apne paise gullak me kyu daal raha he?
Piche se Sakshi ki awaz sunn kar Aksh hadbada jata he.
Aksh: ha... ha wo... me wo... ab se me apne sare paise is gullak me jama karunga... or ek din in paiso se hi apne liye cycle kharid lunga....
Uski baat Sakshi bilkul nahi samajh pati, Aksh to gullak rakh kar washroom chala jata he, lekin Sakshi wahi khade ho kar us gullak ko dekh rahi thi, or aise hi dekhte hue wo aage badhti he or apne paise nikal kar us gullak me daal deti he or aisa karne se Sakshi ke chehre par ek pyaari si muskurahat ajati he. Fir wo bhi fresh ho jate he or Radha ke saath milkar lunch kar lete he, uske baad Tino saath milkar gola kha lete he, Aksh or Sakshi kuch der TV dekh rahe the. Kuch der TV dekhne ke baad wo dono apna homework Complete karne me lag jate he. Homework Complete karne ke baad Sakshi turant So jati he, lekin Aksh ki aakho se nind koso dur thi, wo to bas Sakshi ke bagal me leta tha, achanak Uski nazar soti hui Sakshi par padti he, uska masum sa chehra or uspar bikhre baal use Kisi pari jesi Khubsurati de rahe the, use dekh kar Aksh ke chehre par bhi ek muskurahat ajati he, or wo apne haatho se Sakshi ke Chehre se baalo ko hata deta he.

Aksh(man me): chipkali..... Jab jagi hoti he to kitna satati he mujhe.... Or ab itni bholi lag rahi he......

Wo Sakshi ko dekhte hue apne man me soche ja raha tha or aise hi sochte hue uski bhi aakh lag gayi. Shaam ke waqt Radha ne dono ko badi hi mushkil se jagaya, Santosh kuch der baad ghar agaya tha, Sakshi or Aksh baramde me khel rahe the, Santosh or Radha Andar hall me bethe hue the.

Santosh: waise Radha tum keh rahi thi na Aksh kafi ziddi he, aaj usne School me mujhse kaha ke use cycle nahi chahiye...
Radha: kya? Aisa kyu kaha usne?
Wo badi herani se puchti he.
Santosh: pata nahi.... lekin me fir bhi use Cycle le kar dunga...
Radha: dekhiye me use cycle le kar dene se mana nahi kar rahi hu, lekin ab wo cycle nahi lene ke liye bhi maan gaya he to aap thode thode paise bacha kar uske liye cycle le ayiye... Apne saving se kyu paise nikal rahe ho? Ye sab saving to hum un dono ke ane wale kal ke liye hi bacha rahe he na?
Wo Santosh ke haath pe apna haath rakhte hue kehti he.
Santosh: thik kaha tumne... Hum to zyada padh nahi paye... Bas me chahta hu ke ye dono acche se padh likh kar samaj me apna naam kamaye.....
Radha: sahi kaha aapne.... Me Bas chahti hu ke jo mushkilo se hum guzre he, waisi mushkile in dono ki zindagi me kabhi na aye..
Is baat ko kehte hue Radha ki aakhe num ho jati he, Santosh Mahol ko bhari hota dekh uska dhyan bhatkane ki sochta he or uthkar Radha ka haath pakad kar use Room me le jane lagta he.

Radha: kya hua? Aise andar kyu le jane lage?
Santosh: are chalo bhi, bacche bahar khel rahe he, hum apna kaam kar lete he na...
Wo Radha ke ekdum nazdeek akar aakh marte hue kehta he.
Radha: besharam... Hato.... Na waqt na kuch.... kahi bhi kuch bhi bolte rehte ho...
Wo apna haath Santosh se chuddate hue kehti he.
Santosh: yaar kisne kaha ke pyaar karne ka waqt hota he? Chalo bhi ab...
Wo Radha ki kamar ko pakad kar kehta he.
Radha: hato..... Mujhe bahot se kaam pade he...
Wo Santosh ke changul se azad ho kar kitchen ki taraf jate hue kehti he.
Santosh: ek kaam karta hu na, Sadhu hi ban jata hu me....
Radha: jo bann na he bano, mujhe kaam karne do chup chaap....
Aise hi hasi mazak karte hue raat ho jati he, Sab milkar khana kha lete he or TV dekhne lagte he.

Raat ke kareeb 9 baje hue the, Kal Sunday tha isliye Aksh or Sakshi ko School me chutti thi.

Radha: Baccho ab jao sone.. kafi der ho gayi he...
Sakshi: Aai dekhne do na TV thodi der, kal to chutti he na hume....
Wo roti hui shakal bana kar kehti he.
Radha: chutti he to kya puri raat TV dekhte rahoge? Chalo jao jaldi....

Or wo uthkar TV band kar deti he, ab Sakshi or Aksh majburan apne kamre me ajate he. Dono apne bed par lete hue the lekin dono ko nind nahi arahi thi.

Sakshi: waise Aksh, Baba to tujhe cycle le kar de rahe the na... To tune mana kyu kar diya?
Wo Aksh ku taraf mudkar puchti he.
Aksh: are Paise kamane ke liye bahot mehnat karni padti he or mene kal raat Aai Baba ko is bare me baat karte hue bhi suna tha, to mene aaj isi liye baba se cycle lane se mana kar diya.... Or jo paise Baba mujhe roz dete he me usi se cycle kharidunga, Baba ko meri cycle lane ke liye zyada mehnat nahi karni padegi
Sakshi: accha.... Ye baat he...
Aksh: ha... Or ab tu bhi meri baat sun.... Ab se tu bhi Baba ke paas koi bhi chiz lene ki zidd nahi karegi siwaye baba jo hume school jate hue paise dete he uske.. samjhi?
Sakshi: are ye kya baat hui? To Fir mujhe khilone or baki sab kon laa kar dega?
Wo apna muh fula kar Aksh se puchti he.
Aksh: are pagal me bada hokar bahot sare paise kamaunga.... Fir tujhe jo chahiye me tujhe la kar dunga... Lekin baba ko pareshan nahi karna....
Sakshi: sachme jo me kahungi wo laa kar doge na mujhe?
Wo Aksh ko ungli dikhate hue puchti he.
Aksh: are ha tu jo kahegi wo la kar dunga me tujhe....
Sakshi: to thik he... Abse me Kisi bhi chiz ke liye Baba se zidd nahi karungi....
Aksh: ye hui na baat...

Or aise hi dono kuch der tak baate karne lagte he or fir gehri nind ke agosh me chale jate he.

Is tarah inka ye din nikal jata he, humne dekha ke Aksh ko apne sawal ka jawab to mil gaya, or ab usne mann hi mann than liya tha ke use aage jakar kuch bahot bada karna he, wahi humne Sakshi ka ek bahot hi Kindness se bhara Act dekha jab usne apne paise bhi Aksh ke Gullak me daal diye the, jis se pata nahi kyu lekin use kafi khushi hui, jaha Aksh ke dil or dimag me ye Paisa naam ki chiz enter kar chuki thi, Ab ye aage ja kar Aksh or baki logo ki zindagi me kya baldav lane wali thi ye to waqt ane par pata chal hi jayega.

Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

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Story Line ​

Word Count - 1133

To dosto sidha aate he story par, to Laal Ishq me aapko Incest, Action, Thriller or Romance ka ek tagda Rectangle milega jispe Emotions ka ek zhonk bhi padega, ye kahani he Mumbai ke rehne wale Ek bhai behen ki, dosto Inka pariwar koi amir background se nahi he, kehte he na insan ko survive karne ke liye 3 chize chahiye hoti he "Roti, Kapda or Makan" or ye tino chize inke paas thi, or jesa ke hume pata he, Zyadatar middle class family apne baccho ko bas padhana likhana chahte he, use bas ek 9-5 job ke liye prepare karwate he. Is pariwar me bhi kuch aisa hi mahol tha. Maa baap apne bete beti ko acchese padha likha na chahte the. Lekin Character to apne dil o dimag me kuch or hi sapne lekar betha hua tha.

Ab Aap sochiye, Ek tuta dil, khali jeb or bade sapne milkar kya kar sakte he? Ye sab milkar puri zindagi me tufan la sakte he. To bas is tufan me shamil ho jayiye, or dekhte he ye tufan kesa keher dhata he. Jab ye tufan thamega tab uska after impact kya hota he?

CHARACTERS INTRODUCTION: ​

1) Aksh Joshi(Main Character):
Aksh is story ka pehla ehem kirdar he..... Aksh dikhne me koi hero to nahi he, lekin smart zarur he. To hum Aksh ke bare me kuch bate jaan lete he. Aksh ki soch ek middle class ladke se kuch alag he. Usne 12th ke baad apni padhayi rok di thi, kyu ke use padhai me bilkul intereste nahi tha. Uske marks humesha se hi kam rahe the, use bas kisi tarah ek safal business man bann na he, lekin ye itna asaan to katayi nahi tha. Or is wajah se uske parents uske is decision se bilkul khush nahi the. Lekin sirf ek hi insaan tha is pariwar me jo Aksh ko har mamlo me support karta. Wo insaan or koi nahi Aksh ki behen thi. Usne Aksh ko har mamle me support kiya tha. Aksh ek introvert ladka he, use kisi se zyada baat karna pasand nahi he, wo bas apne me hi khoya rehta. Lekin ye apni behen ko apni sar aakho par bitha ta he, hala ke wo Aksh se thoda darr ke rehti he.

2) Sakshi Joshi(Main Character):
to ye he Aksh ki ek lauti behen Sakshi. Or is kahani ki sabse ehem kirdar. Iska janm Aksh ke kuch der baad hi hua tha. Ye dikhne me bahot pyaari or masum he. Sakshi Abhi Second Year B.cs kar rahi he, Sakshi padhai me kafi hoshiyaar he, humesha se school me top karte ayi thi or ab college me bhi top karti he. Sakshi ke bas kuch gine chune dost he, Sakshi ladko se kam hi baat karti he. Ye Aksh ko humesha har baat me Support karti ayi he. Sakshi ke liye apne pariwar se badh kar kuch bhi nahi he. Waise to Aksh or Sakshi ki acchi jamti he, lekin Aksh me jo badlav aye the use dekh kar to kabhi kabhi to Sakshi bhi darr jati thi.

3) Radha Joshi:
Ye he Aksh or Sakshi ki maa Radha, ye koi padhi likhi aurat nahi he, lekin Radha bas chahti he ke is samaj me uske dono baccho ka naam ho, lekin Radha Aksh ke liye bahot pareshan rehti he. Radha chahti he ke Aksh padhai kar ke ek acchi si naukri kare. Lekin Aksh to iske ulta hi soch kar betha he, jis wajah se Aksh or uske parents ke bich ek tanav bana rehta he.

4) Santosh Joshi:
ye he Aksh or Sakshi ke Pita... Ye ek mehnati or imandar insaan he, ye ek company me chote se level ka kaam karte he. inhone bhi apna bachpan is Middle class soch me hi guzara he, or ye bhi chahte he ke Aksh padh likh kar ek accha insaan bane. Or inka bhi Aksh ke saath tanav bana hi rehta he.



5) Mansi Virani(Main Character):
Mansi dikhne me bahot hi Khubsurat ladki he, apne maa baap ki ek lauti santaan. Mansi apne family ke saath Surat me rehti he. Mansi kafi shararati ladki he, masti mazak karna Mansi ki fitrat he. Lekin ye dil ki bahot hi saaf ladki he. Mansi First Year B.ba kar rahi he ise apne Papa ka Business sambhalne me kafi dilchaspi he. Or aage ja kar Mansi ko hi Uske Papa ka Business sambhalna he.

6) Aman Virani:
Surat ke safal business man, Virani Industries ke malik. ye apni fitness par bahot dhyan dete he. India ke shayad har naamchin logo se inki pehchan he, Apni ek lauti beti se jaan se zyada pyaar karte he. Inki or Mansi ki kafi jamti he. Doni humesha ek dost ki tarah rehte he.

7) Kiran Virani:
ye Mansi ki Maa he, Kiran ek khule mijaz ki Aurat he, sabse ghul mil kar baat karti he. Kiran Mansi ke liye humesha se overprotective Rahi he, or Kiran ek Housewife he.

8) D.G.P. Abhinav Roy:
Abhinav 50 Saal ke ek hatte katte or tandarust Officer he, jab baat dimag se kaam lene ki ho to inke samne shayad hi koi tik sakta he, or inka Intro mene is liye diya kyu ke story me inka bhi ek ehem role hone wala he.


To dosto ye the kuch characters jinke aspas ye kahani chalegi, or kuch bahot hi interesting characters he jo aapko aage kahani me pata chal hi jayenge. Agar intro accha laga ho to like karna or Comment kar ke batana ke Intro kesa laga.

Dusri baat, dosto mujhe yaha story likh kar koi sona chandi to nahi milta, or wo mujhe nahi chahiye, me bas aap sab se ek hi chiz mangta hu, or apne pure dil se mangta he, or wo he aapke comments… please dosto har Update me apna review zarur diya kijiye, me ye nahi keh raha hu ke sirf tarifo ke phool bandhiye, jo aapko lagta he wo mere saath zarur share kare, ke is Update me ye accha laga, is update me ye kami thi… ise is tarah se sudhara ja sakta tha etc…. jis se me apne aap ko or zyada correct kar pau, Or ha.... Is Story ka pehla Update 2nd December 12 P.M. ko Post ho jayega. Or dosto me week me 3-4 Update dunga… i know ye zyada nahi he, lekin kya karu, ab sab kuch back to normal life achuka he, apne kaam waam bhi dekhna hota he, jese hi time milta he likhne beth jata hu, or har Update 2500-4000 words ka hoga, agar me update kam de raha hu to har Update ki Length to acchi khasi rakh hi sakta hu na to bas Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤

Nice start bro

 

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Nice update waiting for next

Bahut badhiya @qaatil bhai... Middle class pariwar ki ek acchi rekha samne rakhi he apne, great job bhai

Great job bhai ji.... Maza agaya dono ka pyaar dekh kar, ab to aksh ne sakshi se wada kar diya he ke wo uski sari wish puri karega. Dekhte he aage bhai, waiting for next Update

Intjaar

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Most beautiful scene of this Update ❤

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Nice start bro

Thank You So Much Dosto
Next Update aaj raat ko 9 baje Ayega.. Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting

 

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Chapter 1 - The Early Life


Update 4​

Word Count: 4135
Estimated Reading Time: 00:18:00


Aaj thi Sunday ki subah, sab log aaj aram se so rahe the, kyu ke aaj hi wo din tha jiska intezar baccho se le kar bade bhi karte he.


Yaha Aksh or Sakshi besudh se soye hue the, or waha Santosh bhi apne kamre me nischint sa so raha tha, lekin Radha to ghar ki aurat he or uske liye Sunday koi mayne nahi rakhta tha, wo to hafte ke saato din bas ghar ko sambhalne me hi lagi rehti thi. W uthkar pure ghar ka kaam karne me jut jati he.

Subah ke 9 baje hue the, Santosh fresh ho kar hall me akar beth jata he.

Santosh: Are Radha.... Ye dono so rahe he abtak?
Wo kitchen me kaam karti Radha se puch leta he.
Radha: ha bas abhi ja hi rahi thi me un dono ko jagane....
Santosh: tum rehne do, me jaga deta hu dono ko...
Itna kehkar wo Aksh or Sakshi ke kamre me chala jata he, jaha Aksh or Sakshi bahot hi gehri nind me, apne haath per ek dusre ke upar dale soye the. Santosh aage akar dono ko awaaz lagata he lekin dono par koi farak nahi padta, dono to ghode bech kar soye hue the.


Santosh: Aksh.... Sakshi.... Utho jaldi..... Aaj me tum dono ko bahar ghumane le jane wala hu....
Uski baat sun kar Sakshi jhat se uth kar beth jati he.
Sakshi: Sach me Baba?
Wo apni adhi khuli ya aisa bhi kehna galat nahi hoga ke aadhi band aakhe le kar puchti he.
Santosh: are me sach keh raha hu.... pehle Jaag jao nind se...
Wo Sakshi ke sar me halke se marte hue kehta he. Lekin Aksh to ab bhi sapno ki duniya me hi tha.
Santosh: Aksh.... Jaldi uthja beta....
Wo Aksh ko hila kar uthane ki koshish kar raha tha lekin wo nakamyab raha.
Sakshi: Baba ye bandar aise nahi jagega... Ek minute....
Or Ye kehkar wo ulte soye hue Aksh ki pith par beth jati he, or zor zor se uske baal khinch ne lagte he.

Santosh: Sakshi.... Ye kya kar rahi he.... hatt ja.....
Wo Sakshi ko Aksh ke upar se hata deta he, lekin tabtak Sakshi ne to Aksh ki nind bigad di thi, Aksh bechara aadhi nind me uth kar beth jata he. Use pata hi nahi tha ke abhi abhi hua kya. Wo to bas apna sar sehla raha tha. Sakshi uski halat par apni hasi daba rahi thi.

Santosh: Chalo ab jaldi se tayar ho jao, fir hum bahar ghumne jayenge.....

Or fir wo kamre ke bahar chala jata he, Sakshi or Aksh bhi jaldi jaldi tayar ho jate he. Puri family milkar breakfast kar rahe the.


Sakshi: Baba.... Aap kaha le kar jaoge hume?
Wo aaj ghumne jane ki baat se bahot khush thi.
Santosh: hmmm... to hum aaj circus dekhne jayenge.... Yaha kuch duri par hi ek circus shuru hua he....
Circus ka naam sunte hi Sakshi or Aksh bahot khush ho jate he.
Sakshi: kya? Circus.... To Chalo na jaldi se....
Wo adha khana chhod kar hi uth jati he. or Santosh ka haath pakad kar use uthane ki koshish karne lagti he.
Radha: pehle pura khatam kar lo... Abhi jane me waqt he.....
Sakshi: mera ho gaya, aap sab jaldi chaliye na....
Wo circus jane ke liye bahot hi utsuk thi.
Santosh: beta pehle pura khatam karo fir hi jayenge warna circus jana cancel....
Sakshi: nahi... Nahi...... Me abhi khati hu.....
Or wo jaldi se niche beth kar apna breakfast khatam karne lagi.

Kuch der baad sab log circus jane ke liye nikal gaye. Pure Raste Sakshi or Aksh kafi khush nazar arahe the. Thodi der me wo log circus pahoch gaye andar kafi khel hue jise dekh Sakshi bahot khush thi tabhi waha ek Aadmi Bandar ka show dikhane ke liye ajata he.


Sakshi: Aai Baba, wo Dekho Aksh waha kya kar raha he? Aksh...... Aksh......
Wo us bandar ki taraf dekh kar Aksh ka naam pukar rahi thi jis se Santosh or Radha ki bhi hasi chutt gayi.
Aksh: chup kar chipkali..... Bhagwaan ne insaan banane ke chakkar me Bandariya bana di.... Huhhh
Sakshi: ha khud to Jese hero hi he na? Bandar.....
Radha: Deva...... Tum dono kabhi nahi sudhruge.... Bilkul Chup... Warna ghar chale jayenge yahi se...
Wo dono ko chup karate hue kehti he. Fir dono hi chup ho jate he or circus dekhne lagte he.

Circus khatam hone ke baad wo log bahar ajate he or waha se market me tehelte hue jane lagte he. Sakshi Santosh ka haath pakde hue chal rahi thi or uske bagal me Aksh ka haath Radha thame chal rahi thi. Aise hi chalte hue Sakshi ki nazar ek gift shop me rakhi Doll set par padti he, use dekh kar Sakshi ke Chehre par ek muskurahat ajati he, lekin Aksh ne ye sab dekh liya tha.


Sakshi: Baba... Mujhe wo.......
Wo Santosh se us Doll set ko lene ki baat karna chahti thi lekin uske bich me hi Aksh uska haath zor se jakad leta he or use gardan hila kar mana kar deta he. Sakshi ko bhi kal ki baat yaad ajati he or wo Doll na mangne ka faisla karti he.

Santosh: Kya hua?
Sakshi: n...nahi kuch nahi.....
Santosh: are.... Abhi kuch kehne wali thi na tum?
Sakshi: nahi to.... Me to kuch bhi nahi keh rahi thi....

Wo kisi tarah baat ko sambhal leti he. Fir wo sab aage badh jate he lekin Sakshi bahot udas ho chuki thi. Aksh ne use Udaas dekh liya tha lekin wo bhi kya kar sakta tha, aaj pura din ghumne firne ke baad wo log ghar ajate he. Ab raat dhal chuki thi or wo sab khana bhi kha kar aye the to sab apne kamre me chale jate he.


Sakshi or Aksh bed par lete hue the Sakshi ab bhi kuch udas si lagg rahi thi.


Aksh: Kya hua Sakshi?
Wo Sakshi ko udas sa dekh kar puch leta he. Lekin Sakshi bas Naa me gardan hilati he.
Aksh: Mujhe pata he, tujhe wo Doll set chahiye tha na?
Sakshi: ha.....
Aksh: Sorry Sakshi, Meri wajah se tu....
Sakshi: nahi.. nahi.. teri wajah se kuch nahi hua, me samajh gayi hu ke paise kamane ke liye bahot mehnat karni padti he, or Baba bhi bahot mehnat karte he, to me bhi abse Baba ke paas faltu ki zidd nahi karungi....
Aksh: dekhna Sakshi, jab me paise kamane lagunga na, to tujhe waisi 100 Doll set la kar dunga.....
Wo uthkar beth te hue Sakshi ka haath thamkar kehta he, jis se Sakshi ke Chehre se udasi hawa ho jati he, fir dono kuch baate karte hue so jate he.

Aise hi ek ke baad ek din nikalte ja rahe the, Aksh roz Santosh ne diye paise bina kharch kiya gullak me daal diya karta tha, wahi Sakshi bhi use bina pata chale apne paise Aksh ke Gullak me daal ti thi, use bahot mann karta tha ke wo un paiso se apne liye chocolate, toffee kharide lekin wo har roz apna mann maar kar paise Aksh ke gullak me daal diya karti thi, or pata nahi kyu lekin Sakshi ko aisa karne se bahot hi khushi ho rahi thi.


Lekin Dusri taraf Aksh din ba din gehri soch me duba ja raha tha, uska behavior bhi kafi change ho chuka tha, Aksh ab padhai me bhi piche padne laga, jis se uske parents ne use kafi danta bhi, lekin Aksh to is dal dal me fase hi ja raha tha.


Aise hi Kuch mahine nikal gaye, ab 2 din baad Raksha Bamdhan tha, raat ke kareeb 11 baje hue the Sakshi to gehri nind me thi lekin Aksh ko nind nahi arahi thi, wo uthkar beth jata he or uske dimag me pata nahi kya agaya, or wo uthkar apna Gullak haath me le leta he. Gullak ab kafi wazan daar ho chuka tha jis se Aksh ko kafi khushi hoti he.

Aksh(man me): isme to kafi paise jama ho gaye he.... lekin ab bhi itne paise nahi he ke me is se cycle le saku...
Wo nirasha se apne mann me soch raha tha.
Aksh(mann me): kya me Gullak ko khol kar dekh lu kitne paise jama ho gaye he? Ha chalo dekh hi leta hu.

Or wo Gullak ko kholne ka faisla karta he, jese hi usne niche se gullak khola to usme kafi paise jama ho gaye the, Aksh ek ek karke sare paise gin leta he lekin ginti khatam hote hi use herani ho jati he. Kyu ke paise uske ummid se zyada the.

Aksh(mann me): ye kya? Ye to zyada he, jabse mene Gullak me paise dalna shuru kiya he tabse to isme itne paise nahi hone chahiye the....
Wo Gullak me zyada paise pane par thoda chonk gaya tha.
Aksh(mann me): ye kese......
Wo kuch soch hi raha tha ke uski nazar Sakshi par padti he. Or use kuch waqt pehle ki baat yaad ajati he. Jab Aksh Sakshi se puchta he kya uske paas toffee lane ke liye paise he, to Sakshi mana kar deti he or kehti he ke usne to aaj un paise se Chocolate kharid li, lekin Sakshi school se ane ke baad pure din ghar se bahar gayi hi nahi thi, jis se Aksh ko kuch ajib laga lekin tab usne is baat par zyada dhyaan nahi diya tha. Lekin ab Aksh ko kuch gadbad lag rahi thi.

Aksh(mann me): kahi ye Sakshi bhi to mere Gullak me paise nahi dalti? Kya me use abhi puch lu? Nahi kal subah puch leta hu....

Or wo itna sochte hue sare paise Gullak me wapis daal deta he or apni soch me duba gehri nind me chala jata he.


Dusri din Aksh school jane se pehle apne kamre me Sakshi se is bare me puchta he.

Aksh: Sakshi.... Kya tu tere paise bhi is Gullak me dalti he?
Uske sidhe sawal se Sakshi thoda hadbada jati he.
Sakshi: n...nahi..... M..me kyu Tere Gullak me paise dalu.... Cycle to tujhe leni he na?
Aksh: Lekin.....
Sakshi: ab jaldi chal.... Baba ruke he bahar.....
Aksh aage kuch kehta Ke Sakshi itna bol ke apna school bag utha kar bahar bhag jati he.

Ab Aksh tehra ek chota baccha use kuch samajh nahi aya or usne bhi is baat ko chhod diya.


Sakshi: Baba, Kal Raksha Bandhan he na, to aap is bandar ki taraf se mujhe kya tofa dene wale ho?
School jate waqt Bike par aage bethi Sakshi Santosh se puch ti he.
Santosh: are ye kya baat hui bhala? Tofa aise batate thodi na he....
Sakshi: batao na Baba....
Santosh: bilkul nahi bataunga..... Kal hi dekh lena...
Or aise hi bate karte hue wo school pahoch jate he. Apni class me bethe hue Aksh kuch soch raha tha.

Aksh(mann me): humesha Raksha Bandhan par Baba hi Sakshi ko Gift dete he.... Is baar to mere paas kafi paise he.... Kya me hi Sakshi ko Gift de du? Haa.... Ye thik hoga, lekin use kya du me? Are haa... Sakshi ko ek baar wo Doll set pasand aya tha na... Wahi le kar de deta hu use.... Ha ye thik he...
Ye sab sochte hue uske chehre par hasi ajati he, Sakshi use is Tarah hasta dekh leti he.
Sakshi: Aye Bandar..... Kyu has raha he?
Wo Aksh ko kohni se marte hue puchti he.
Aksh: n....nahi kuch nahi.....
Wo hadbadate hue jawab deta he tabhi class teacher andar ajati he.

School se ghar jane ke baad Sab khana kha lete he, aaj bhi Sakshi ne chupke se Aksh ke Gullak me Paise Daal diye. Aaj Aksh Santosh ka besabri se intezar kar raha tha. Sham ke 5 baje Santosh ghar ajata he Aksh ko us se baat karni thi lekin Sakshi bhi wahi thi to wo kuch baat nahi kar paya, kuch der baad Radha or Santosh apne kamre me chale gaye, Sakshi TV dekhne me gum thi, Aksh ne moke ka fayda uthaya or chupke se Santosh ke paas chala gaya.


Aksh: Baba..... Baba.... Chaliye jaldi.....
Wo tezi se kamre me akar Santosh ka haath pakad kar use khichte hue kehta he.
Santosh: are kya baat hui? Batao to sahi....
Aksh: Baba kal Raksha Bandhan he to Sakshi ke liye Gift lene chalte he na....
Santosh: ha wo me le aunga..... Kuch der baad tumhare Mama ko lene ke liye ja raha hu na station tab ate hue le aunga Sakshi or Anu (Mama ki Beti) ke liye gift....
Aksh: nahi Baba.... Aap nahi laoge me launga...
Radha: kya matlab tum laoge?
Wo dono Aksh ki baat ko samajh nahi pate.
Aksh: wo Baba mene na Gullak me paise jama kare he, to me un paiso se hi Sakshi ke liye gift lunga.... Or aap Sakshi ko mat batana....
Uski baat sunke Dono heran ho jate he, wo dono hi apne bete par naaz kar rahe the.
Radha: bada samjhdar ho gaya mera beta to....
Wo Aksh ka matha chumkar kehti he. Fir Aksh Santosh ke saath market chala jata he or jaha Sakshi ko wo Doll set pasand aya tha usi shop se Doll set kharid leta he. Uske paas ab bhi kuch paise bache hue the, jis se wo Anu ke liye bhi ek Gift le leta he. Fir wo dono ghar ajate he, Santosh ne uska Gift apne kamre me rakh diya tha, thodi der baad wo Aksh ke Mama or Mami ko lene station chala jata he. Jab Santosh unko le kar ghar aya to sab bahot khush ho gaye.


Sakshi: Mama.... Mami......
Wo Dono ko darwaze par dekhte hi unki taraf dod padi or ja kar unke gale lag gayi. Aksh bhi jaldi se unke paas ajate he.
Rohan: are meri jaan..... kese ho tum dono?
Wo dono ka sar sehla te hue kehta he.
Sakshi: aap kabhi ate kyu nahi ho mama humse milne?
Wo apna muh fula kar puchti he.
Rohan: are sorry beta.... lekin ab agaya hu na, or kuch din hum yahi rehne wale he.
Wo Sakshi ka chehra apne hatho me thamkar kehta he. Jise sunkar Sakshi or Aksh kafi khush ho jate he.

Fir sablog milkar khana kha lete he, khana hote hi Anu, Sakshi Or Aksh khelne lagte he.

Radha: chalo baccho ab sone jao..... Bahot der ho chuki he....
Sakshi: Aai... Khelne do na thodi der....
Anu: Ha Bua khelne dijiye na..... Please...
Radha: are tum ab kuch din yahi ho na to aram se khelna... Itni raat ho gayi he ab jao, Subah jaldi uthna he sabko...

Or wo tino ko andar Sone ke liye bhej deti he. Aksh, Sakshi or Anu ek kamre me soye the, ya ye kehna galat nahi hoga ke kamre me dhum macha rahe the. Kafi der khel kud karne ke baad tino so hi jate he.

aaj Raksha Bandhan ka din tha, subah subah pure ghar me in tino baccho ka hi shor macha hua tha, tino ek saath khel rahe the.

Radha: Anu, Sakshi..... Ab Raakhi Bandhogi bhi ya pura din bas khelna hi he?
Anu: Bua Aksh kaha bhaga ja raha he, khelne do na....
Radha: tum logo ka khelna to kabhi khatam hi nahi hoga... Chalo jaldi pehle Raakhi bandho fir khel lena....

Or fir wo sab hall me ikhatta ho jate he. Radha apne bhai ko raakhi bandh ti he, Anu or Sakshi Aksh ko Raakhi bandh dete he.

Sakshi: Baba.... Mera Gift...
Santosh: beta me to Gift laya hi nahi....
Uska jawab sun kar Sakshi ka chehra hi utar jata he. Uske aakho se bas Asu ana reh gaya tha.
Sakshi: Kyu nahi laye?
Santosh: are mene to tumhare liye gift lane wala tha, lekin Aksh ne mujhe mana kar diya....
Ab Sakshi Aksh ko kha jane wali nazro se dekhne lagti he.
Santosh: Are Are.... Aise mat dekho use, mera matlab he ke Tumhare liye Gift me nahi laya, lekin Aksh ne khud tumhare liye Gift liya he.

Is baat par Sakshi thoda heran si reh jati he, Tabhi Radha us Doll set ko Aksh ke paas de deti he.

Aksh: Ye le tera Gift...
Wo Gift Sakshi ke haath me dete hue kehta he. Sakshi nasamjhi ki halat me hi us se Gift le leti he or use kholne lagti he, jese hi Wo Doll set Sakshi ke samne aya to uske hosh ud jate he. Doll set dekh kar Uske chehre par bahot hi pyaari Muskurahat ajati he. Wo jaldi se us Box ko open kar ke Dolls apne haatho me le leti he. Or ye Doll set pane ki khushi me wo ye bhul jati he ke akhir ye Gift Aksh kese laya. Anu apne Gift ke liye Aksh ko thank you kehti he or fir Santosh or Radha ko.

Radha: beta hume Thank You mat kaho, ye Gift Aksh apne paiso se laya he.
Ab ye baat Sunkar Sakshi thoda alert si ho jati he.
Rohan: matlab?
Radha: are Aksh khud paise bacha kar use jama karta gaya, or kal usne khud Sakshi or Anu ke liye Gifts kharide.

Sacchayi samne ate hi Sakshi ka dil to jese tut sa jata he. Uski Akho me Aansu ajate he. Or wo Doll set ko wahi niche Dalkar Aksh ki taraf badhti he or use khinch kar thappad marti he. Sakshi ki is harkat par sab heran se reh gaye the, Aksh apna gaal par haath rakh ke Sakshi ko dekhe ja raha tha.


Aksh: Kitna bura he Aksh tu..... In paiso se to apne liye cycle lene wala tha na? Fir kyu kharch kiye tune apne paise?
Wo rote hue bahot hi Chillakar Aksh se puch rahi thi, Aksh ke paas is sawal ka koi jawab nahi tha.

Radha: Sakshi ye kya tarika he….
Wo Sakshi ko piche khinch te hue kehti he. Lekin Sakshi to bas roye ja rahi thi.
Sakshi: mujhe nahi chahiye koi Gift…. Le jao ise yaha se…
Wo chillate hue kehti he or us bikhre doll set ko laat maar ke bhag kar apne kamre me chali jati he. Radha or baki sab use chup karane ke liye andar chale jate he, bahar Aksh akela khada tha, wo aage badh kar us Doll set ko uthata he, us box me se Sari Dolls or baki sab niche gir gaya tha. Aksh sabkuch samet kar Box me daal deta he, or Box ko apne Parents ke kamre me rakh deta he, or khud ghar se bahar chala jata he.


Yaha ghar me sabne Sakshi ka rona band karwa diya tha.

Radha: beta aise gussa hona acchi baat nahi he, Aksh ne itne pyaar se tunhare liye gift layi wo bhi apne paise bacha kar.. or tum ne aisa kiya, use kitna bura laga hoga ab.

Wo Sakshi ke bagal me beth kar uske sar pe haath ferte hue Sakshi ko samjha rahi thi. Sakshi ko bhi ab realize ho gaya ke usne galat kiya.

Sakshi: Sorry Aai……
Wo apne kaan pakad kar Radha se mafi mangti he.
Radha: mujhse nahi, Aksh se maafi mango… or itne pyaare tofe ke liye use Thank You bhi kaho….
Sakshi: thik he Aai… me abhi Aksh se Sorry bol deti hu…
Or ye kehkar wo bahar Hall me ajati he, lekin Aksh to waha tha hi nahi, sablog bhi uske piche piche hi hall me agaye the.

Sakshi: Aksh….. Aksh…..
Wo kabse Aksh ko pukarti he lekin Aksh to ghar ne hi nahi tha.
Radha: kaha chala gaya ye ladka? Aap dekhiye na jaldi se bahar use..
Wo ghabrayi si Santosh se kehti he.
Santosh: are tum ghabrao mat… me dekhta hua use….

Fir Santosh or Rohan Aksh ko dekhne ke liye bahar ajate he. Sakshi ko ab darr lag raha tha ke Aksh kaha chala gaya.


Dusri taraf Aksh ghar se nikal kar bas Raste se guzar raha tha.


Aksh(mann me): yaar mene to socha Sakshi wo Gift dekh kar khush ho jayegi… lekin usne to mujhe hi thappad maar diya…. Pagal ladki he ek number ki….. huhhh….. koi baat nahi uska gussa shant hone ke baad us se baat karunga….

Wo bas aise hi sochte hue chal raha tha or chalte chalte wo main Road par agaya, tabhi waha ek Supercar ajati he, Aksh to us car ko bas dekhta hi reh gaya. Tabhi wo car samne ke Car Showroom me ruk jati he. Aksh jaldi se waha chala jata he. Waha ja kar wo gate se hi us car ko dekhne lagta he, us car ko dekhte waqt Aksh ke chehre par kafi khushi nazar arahi thi. Lekin tabhi piche se 2 log guzarte he wo Aksh ko dekh rahe the.

Aadm: are ye ladke ko to dekh…. Aise gaadi ko dekh raha he jese ke ye car wo kharidne wala he hahahah….
Wo apne saath chal rahe aadmi se kehta he or dono hi Aksh par Hasne lagte he. Aksh ka dil to is se tut sa jata he. Fir wo us jagah se nikal jata he or apne Ghar ke raste chal padta he. Aadhe Raste me Santosh or Rohan use dikhte he. wo dono jaldi se Aksh ke paas ajate he.


Santosh: Aksh…. Kaha chala gaya tha beta?
Wo Aksh ke sar pe haath ferte hue puchta he.
Aksh: Baba me to wo apne Dost Soham ke paas gaya tha lekin wo to ghar pe nahi tha…
Santosh: kam se kam bata kar jana chahiye tha na beta…
Wo Akah ka chehra apne hatho me thamkar kehta he.
Aksh: Sorry Baba….
Wo apni nazre jhuka kar kehta he.
Rohan: ab chalo jaldi ghar…. Wo sab chinta kar rahe honge….
Fir wo dono Aksh ko le kar ghar ajate he.

Ghar pe Sakshi to apni nazre darwaze par hi tikaye ruki thi. Jese hi Aksh use ata dikhayi deta he to wo Dod kar Aksh ke paas jati he or uske Gale lag jati he.


Sakshi: Sorry Dada…… Sorry….. lo tum bhi mujhe maro…..
Wo rote hue Aksh se alag hoti he or uska haath pakad kar apne gaal par marne lagti he.
Aksh: are ye kya kar rahi he tu?
Wo Sakshi se apne haath chuddate hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Sorry Aksh…. Tum gussa to nahi ho na mujhpar?
Aksh: Nahi to…. Me kyu gussa honga….. or ek minute ruk yahi….
Itna kehkar wo apne parents ke kamre me chala jata he or us Doll set ko le kar bahar Sakshi ke samne aake khada ho jata he.


Aksh: hmm… ye le… ab firse fekna mat ise….
Wo Doll set ko Sakshi ke hatho me dete hue kehta he. Sakshi us se Doll set le leti he, or wo kafi khush bhi lag rai thi.
Sakshi: Thank You Dada….
Wo Aksh ko gale laga kar kehti he.

Fir sab kuch pehle jesa Normal ho jata he. Sakshi or Anu to Aksh ne di Doll set ke saath khelte thak hi nahi rahe the.

Raat ko Sablog so rahe the. Lekin Aksh ko nind hi nahi arahi thi, uske dimag me bas us Aadmi ki hi baate ghum rahi thi. Aksh ko us baat se hurt bhi hua tha, wo bas soch raha tha ke use bhi waise hi car leni he. Kafi der tak karwate badalne ke baad uski aakh lag hi jati he.


Or is tarah se inka din nikal jata he. jaha Aksh ke dimag se pehle wali chiz gayi bhi nahi thi ke ab us aadmi ki baat bhi Aksh ke dil o dimag me chap si gayi thi. Kuch samay baad jab Aksh ka birthday tha, tab Santosh ne use Cycle gift lar di, lekin pehli baar Aksh ko Santosh ne diya gift pasand nahi aya. Kuch mahino baad dono ka result tha, Aksh ke grades kafi kam ho chuke the, jis se Santosh or Radha ne use danta bhi lekin ye sil sila kuch saalo tak jari raha, har saal Aksh ke grades kam ate, har Saal Sakshi padhayme hoshiyaar ho rahi thi. Aksh ab kafi chup chup sa hone laga tha, ab Aksh or Sakshi 10th me chale gaye, or ab unka results tha. Dekhte he inka results aage kya mod lata he.


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Chapter 1 - The Early Life


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Aaj thi Sunday ki subah, sab log aaj aram se so rahe the, kyu ke aaj hi wo din tha jiska intezar baccho se le kar bade bhi karte he.


Yaha Aksh or Sakshi besudh se soye hue the, or waha Santosh bhi apne kamre me nischint sa so raha tha, lekin Radha to ghar ki aurat he or uske liye Sunday koi mayne nahi rakhta tha, wo to hafte ke saato din bas ghar ko sambhalne me hi lagi rehti thi. W uthkar pure ghar ka kaam karne me jut jati he.

Subah ke 9 baje hue the, Santosh fresh ho kar hall me akar beth jata he.

Santosh: Are Radha.... Ye dono so rahe he abtak?
Wo kitchen me kaam karti Radha se puch leta he.
Radha: ha bas abhi ja hi rahi thi me un dono ko jagane....
Santosh: tum rehne do, me jaga deta hu dono ko...
Itna kehkar wo Aksh or Sakshi ke kamre me chala jata he, jaha Aksh or Sakshi bahot hi gehri nind me, apne haath per ek dusre ke upar dale soye the. Santosh aage akar dono ko awaaz lagata he lekin dono par koi farak nahi padta, dono to ghode bech kar soye hue the.


Santosh: Aksh.... Sakshi.... Utho jaldi..... Aaj me tum dono ko bahar ghumane le jane wala hu....
Uski baat sun kar Sakshi jhat se uth kar beth jati he.
Sakshi: Sach me Baba?
Wo apni adhi khuli ya aisa bhi kehna galat nahi hoga ke aadhi band aakhe le kar puchti he.
Santosh: are me sach keh raha hu.... pehle Jaag jao nind se...
Wo Sakshi ke sar me halke se marte hue kehta he. Lekin Aksh to ab bhi sapno ki duniya me hi tha.
Santosh: Aksh.... Jaldi uthja beta....
Wo Aksh ko hila kar uthane ki koshish kar raha tha lekin wo nakamyab raha.
Sakshi: Baba ye bandar aise nahi jagega... Ek minute....
Or Ye kehkar wo ulte soye hue Aksh ki pith par beth jati he, or zor zor se uske baal khinch ne lagte he.

Santosh: Sakshi.... Ye kya kar rahi he.... hatt ja.....
Wo Sakshi ko Aksh ke upar se hata deta he, lekin tabtak Sakshi ne to Aksh ki nind bigad di thi, Aksh bechara aadhi nind me uth kar beth jata he. Use pata hi nahi tha ke abhi abhi hua kya. Wo to bas apna sar sehla raha tha. Sakshi uski halat par apni hasi daba rahi thi.

Santosh: Chalo ab jaldi se tayar ho jao, fir hum bahar ghumne jayenge.....

Or fir wo kamre ke bahar chala jata he, Sakshi or Aksh bhi jaldi jaldi tayar ho jate he. Puri family milkar breakfast kar rahe the.


Sakshi: Baba.... Aap kaha le kar jaoge hume?
Wo aaj ghumne jane ki baat se bahot khush thi.
Santosh: hmmm... to hum aaj circus dekhne jayenge.... Yaha kuch duri par hi ek circus shuru hua he....
Circus ka naam sunte hi Sakshi or Aksh bahot khush ho jate he.
Sakshi: kya? Circus.... To Chalo na jaldi se....
Wo adha khana chhod kar hi uth jati he. or Santosh ka haath pakad kar use uthane ki koshish karne lagti he.
Radha: pehle pura khatam kar lo... Abhi jane me waqt he.....
Sakshi: mera ho gaya, aap sab jaldi chaliye na....
Wo circus jane ke liye bahot hi utsuk thi.
Santosh: beta pehle pura khatam karo fir hi jayenge warna circus jana cancel....
Sakshi: nahi... Nahi...... Me abhi khati hu.....
Or wo jaldi se niche beth kar apna breakfast khatam karne lagi.

Kuch der baad sab log circus jane ke liye nikal gaye. Pure Raste Sakshi or Aksh kafi khush nazar arahe the. Thodi der me wo log circus pahoch gaye andar kafi khel hue jise dekh Sakshi bahot khush thi tabhi waha ek Aadmi Bandar ka show dikhane ke liye ajata he.


Sakshi: Aai Baba, wo Dekho Aksh waha kya kar raha he? Aksh...... Aksh......
Wo us bandar ki taraf dekh kar Aksh ka naam pukar rahi thi jis se Santosh or Radha ki bhi hasi chutt gayi.
Aksh: chup kar chipkali..... Bhagwaan ne insaan banane ke chakkar me Bandariya bana di.... Huhhh
Sakshi: ha khud to Jese hero hi he na? Bandar.....
Radha: Deva...... Tum dono kabhi nahi sudhruge.... Bilkul Chup... Warna ghar chale jayenge yahi se...
Wo dono ko chup karate hue kehti he. Fir dono hi chup ho jate he or circus dekhne lagte he.

Circus khatam hone ke baad wo log bahar ajate he or waha se market me tehelte hue jane lagte he. Sakshi Santosh ka haath pakde hue chal rahi thi or uske bagal me Aksh ka haath Radha thame chal rahi thi. Aise hi chalte hue Sakshi ki nazar ek gift shop me rakhi Doll set par padti he, use dekh kar Sakshi ke Chehre par ek muskurahat ajati he, lekin Aksh ne ye sab dekh liya tha.


Sakshi: Baba... Mujhe wo.......
Wo Santosh se us Doll set ko lene ki baat karna chahti thi lekin uske bich me hi Aksh uska haath zor se jakad leta he or use gardan hila kar mana kar deta he. Sakshi ko bhi kal ki baat yaad ajati he or wo Doll na mangne ka faisla karti he.

Santosh: Kya hua?
Sakshi: n...nahi kuch nahi.....
Santosh: are.... Abhi kuch kehne wali thi na tum?
Sakshi: nahi to.... Me to kuch bhi nahi keh rahi thi....

Wo kisi tarah baat ko sambhal leti he. Fir wo sab aage badh jate he lekin Sakshi bahot udas ho chuki thi. Aksh ne use Udaas dekh liya tha lekin wo bhi kya kar sakta tha, aaj pura din ghumne firne ke baad wo log ghar ajate he. Ab raat dhal chuki thi or wo sab khana bhi kha kar aye the to sab apne kamre me chale jate he.


Sakshi or Aksh bed par lete hue the Sakshi ab bhi kuch udas si lagg rahi thi.


Aksh: Kya hua Sakshi?
Wo Sakshi ko udas sa dekh kar puch leta he. Lekin Sakshi bas Naa me gardan hilati he.
Aksh: Mujhe pata he, tujhe wo Doll set chahiye tha na?
Sakshi: ha.....
Aksh: Sorry Sakshi, Meri wajah se tu....
Sakshi: nahi.. nahi.. teri wajah se kuch nahi hua, me samajh gayi hu ke paise kamane ke liye bahot mehnat karni padti he, or Baba bhi bahot mehnat karte he, to me bhi abse Baba ke paas faltu ki zidd nahi karungi....
Aksh: dekhna Sakshi, jab me paise kamane lagunga na, to tujhe waisi 100 Doll set la kar dunga.....
Wo uthkar beth te hue Sakshi ka haath thamkar kehta he, jis se Sakshi ke Chehre se udasi hawa ho jati he, fir dono kuch baate karte hue so jate he.

Aise hi ek ke baad ek din nikalte ja rahe the, Aksh roz Santosh ne diye paise bina kharch kiya gullak me daal diya karta tha, wahi Sakshi bhi use bina pata chale apne paise Aksh ke Gullak me daal ti thi, use bahot mann karta tha ke wo un paiso se apne liye chocolate, toffee kharide lekin wo har roz apna mann maar kar paise Aksh ke gullak me daal diya karti thi, or pata nahi kyu lekin Sakshi ko aisa karne se bahot hi khushi ho rahi thi.


Lekin Dusri taraf Aksh din ba din gehri soch me duba ja raha tha, uska behavior bhi kafi change ho chuka tha, Aksh ab padhai me bhi piche padne laga, jis se uske parents ne use kafi danta bhi, lekin Aksh to is dal dal me fase hi ja raha tha.


Aise hi Kuch mahine nikal gaye, ab 2 din baad Raksha Bamdhan tha, raat ke kareeb 11 baje hue the Sakshi to gehri nind me thi lekin Aksh ko nind nahi arahi thi, wo uthkar beth jata he or uske dimag me pata nahi kya agaya, or wo uthkar apna Gullak haath me le leta he. Gullak ab kafi wazan daar ho chuka tha jis se Aksh ko kafi khushi hoti he.

Aksh(man me): isme to kafi paise jama ho gaye he.... lekin ab bhi itne paise nahi he ke me is se cycle le saku...
Wo nirasha se apne mann me soch raha tha.
Aksh(mann me): kya me Gullak ko khol kar dekh lu kitne paise jama ho gaye he? Ha chalo dekh hi leta hu.

Or wo Gullak ko kholne ka faisla karta he, jese hi usne niche se gullak khola to usme kafi paise jama ho gaye the, Aksh ek ek karke sare paise gin leta he lekin ginti khatam hote hi use herani ho jati he. Kyu ke paise uske ummid se zyada the.

Aksh(mann me): ye kya? Ye to zyada he, jabse mene Gullak me paise dalna shuru kiya he tabse to isme itne paise nahi hone chahiye the....
Wo Gullak me zyada paise pane par thoda chonk gaya tha.
Aksh(mann me): ye kese......
Wo kuch soch hi raha tha ke uski nazar Sakshi par padti he. Or use kuch waqt pehle ki baat yaad ajati he. Jab Aksh Sakshi se puchta he kya uske paas toffee lane ke liye paise he, to Sakshi mana kar deti he or kehti he ke usne to aaj un paise se Chocolate kharid li, lekin Sakshi school se ane ke baad pure din ghar se bahar gayi hi nahi thi, jis se Aksh ko kuch ajib laga lekin tab usne is baat par zyada dhyaan nahi diya tha. Lekin ab Aksh ko kuch gadbad lag rahi thi.

Aksh(mann me): kahi ye Sakshi bhi to mere Gullak me paise nahi dalti? Kya me use abhi puch lu? Nahi kal subah puch leta hu....

Or wo itna sochte hue sare paise Gullak me wapis daal deta he or apni soch me duba gehri nind me chala jata he.


Dusri din Aksh school jane se pehle apne kamre me Sakshi se is bare me puchta he.

Aksh: Sakshi.... Kya tu tere paise bhi is Gullak me dalti he?
Uske sidhe sawal se Sakshi thoda hadbada jati he.
Sakshi: n...nahi..... M..me kyu Tere Gullak me paise dalu.... Cycle to tujhe leni he na?
Aksh: Lekin.....
Sakshi: ab jaldi chal.... Baba ruke he bahar.....
Aksh aage kuch kehta Ke Sakshi itna bol ke apna school bag utha kar bahar bhag jati he.

Ab Aksh tehra ek chota baccha use kuch samajh nahi aya or usne bhi is baat ko chhod diya.


Sakshi: Baba, Kal Raksha Bandhan he na, to aap is bandar ki taraf se mujhe kya tofa dene wale ho?
School jate waqt Bike par aage bethi Sakshi Santosh se puch ti he.
Santosh: are ye kya baat hui bhala? Tofa aise batate thodi na he....
Sakshi: batao na Baba....
Santosh: bilkul nahi bataunga..... Kal hi dekh lena...
Or aise hi bate karte hue wo school pahoch jate he. Apni class me bethe hue Aksh kuch soch raha tha.

Aksh(mann me): humesha Raksha Bandhan par Baba hi Sakshi ko Gift dete he.... Is baar to mere paas kafi paise he.... Kya me hi Sakshi ko Gift de du? Haa.... Ye thik hoga, lekin use kya du me? Are haa... Sakshi ko ek baar wo Doll set pasand aya tha na... Wahi le kar de deta hu use.... Ha ye thik he...
Ye sab sochte hue uske chehre par hasi ajati he, Sakshi use is Tarah hasta dekh leti he.
Sakshi: Aye Bandar..... Kyu has raha he?
Wo Aksh ko kohni se marte hue puchti he.
Aksh: n....nahi kuch nahi.....
Wo hadbadate hue jawab deta he tabhi class teacher andar ajati he.

School se ghar jane ke baad Sab khana kha lete he, aaj bhi Sakshi ne chupke se Aksh ke Gullak me Paise Daal diye. Aaj Aksh Santosh ka besabri se intezar kar raha tha. Sham ke 5 baje Santosh ghar ajata he Aksh ko us se baat karni thi lekin Sakshi bhi wahi thi to wo kuch baat nahi kar paya, kuch der baad Radha or Santosh apne kamre me chale gaye, Sakshi TV dekhne me gum thi, Aksh ne moke ka fayda uthaya or chupke se Santosh ke paas chala gaya.


Aksh: Baba..... Baba.... Chaliye jaldi.....
Wo tezi se kamre me akar Santosh ka haath pakad kar use khichte hue kehta he.
Santosh: are kya baat hui? Batao to sahi....
Aksh: Baba kal Raksha Bandhan he to Sakshi ke liye Gift lene chalte he na....
Santosh: ha wo me le aunga..... Kuch der baad tumhare Mama ko lene ke liye ja raha hu na station tab ate hue le aunga Sakshi or Anu (Mama ki Beti) ke liye gift....
Aksh: nahi Baba.... Aap nahi laoge me launga...
Radha: kya matlab tum laoge?
Wo dono Aksh ki baat ko samajh nahi pate.
Aksh: wo Baba mene na Gullak me paise jama kare he, to me un paiso se hi Sakshi ke liye gift lunga.... Or aap Sakshi ko mat batana....
Uski baat sunke Dono heran ho jate he, wo dono hi apne bete par naaz kar rahe the.
Radha: bada samjhdar ho gaya mera beta to....
Wo Aksh ka matha chumkar kehti he. Fir Aksh Santosh ke saath market chala jata he or jaha Sakshi ko wo Doll set pasand aya tha usi shop se Doll set kharid leta he. Uske paas ab bhi kuch paise bache hue the, jis se wo Anu ke liye bhi ek Gift le leta he. Fir wo dono ghar ajate he, Santosh ne uska Gift apne kamre me rakh diya tha, thodi der baad wo Aksh ke Mama or Mami ko lene station chala jata he. Jab Santosh unko le kar ghar aya to sab bahot khush ho gaye.


Sakshi: Mama.... Mami......
Wo Dono ko darwaze par dekhte hi unki taraf dod padi or ja kar unke gale lag gayi. Aksh bhi jaldi se unke paas ajate he.
Rohan: are meri jaan..... kese ho tum dono?
Wo dono ka sar sehla te hue kehta he.
Sakshi: aap kabhi ate kyu nahi ho mama humse milne?
Wo apna muh fula kar puchti he.
Rohan: are sorry beta.... lekin ab agaya hu na, or kuch din hum yahi rehne wale he.
Wo Sakshi ka chehra apne hatho me thamkar kehta he. Jise sunkar Sakshi or Aksh kafi khush ho jate he.

Fir sablog milkar khana kha lete he, khana hote hi Anu, Sakshi Or Aksh khelne lagte he.

Radha: chalo baccho ab sone jao..... Bahot der ho chuki he....
Sakshi: Aai... Khelne do na thodi der....
Anu: Ha Bua khelne dijiye na..... Please...
Radha: are tum ab kuch din yahi ho na to aram se khelna... Itni raat ho gayi he ab jao, Subah jaldi uthna he sabko...

Or wo tino ko andar Sone ke liye bhej deti he. Aksh, Sakshi or Anu ek kamre me soye the, ya ye kehna galat nahi hoga ke kamre me dhum macha rahe the. Kafi der khel kud karne ke baad tino so hi jate he.

aaj Raksha Bandhan ka din tha, subah subah pure ghar me in tino baccho ka hi shor macha hua tha, tino ek saath khel rahe the.

Radha: Anu, Sakshi..... Ab Raakhi Bandhogi bhi ya pura din bas khelna hi he?
Anu: Bua Aksh kaha bhaga ja raha he, khelne do na....
Radha: tum logo ka khelna to kabhi khatam hi nahi hoga... Chalo jaldi pehle Raakhi bandho fir khel lena....

Or fir wo sab hall me ikhatta ho jate he. Radha apne bhai ko raakhi bandh ti he, Anu or Sakshi Aksh ko Raakhi bandh dete he.

Sakshi: Baba.... Mera Gift...
Santosh: beta me to Gift laya hi nahi....
Uska jawab sun kar Sakshi ka chehra hi utar jata he. Uske aakho se bas Asu ana reh gaya tha.
Sakshi: Kyu nahi laye?
Santosh: are mene to tumhare liye gift lane wala tha, lekin Aksh ne mujhe mana kar diya....
Ab Sakshi Aksh ko kha jane wali nazro se dekhne lagti he.
Santosh: Are Are.... Aise mat dekho use, mera matlab he ke Tumhare liye Gift me nahi laya, lekin Aksh ne khud tumhare liye Gift liya he.

Is baat par Sakshi thoda heran si reh jati he, Tabhi Radha us Doll set ko Aksh ke paas de deti he.

Aksh: Ye le tera Gift...
Wo Gift Sakshi ke haath me dete hue kehta he. Sakshi nasamjhi ki halat me hi us se Gift le leti he or use kholne lagti he, jese hi Wo Doll set Sakshi ke samne aya to uske hosh ud jate he. Doll set dekh kar Uske chehre par bahot hi pyaari Muskurahat ajati he. Wo jaldi se us Box ko open kar ke Dolls apne haatho me le leti he. Or ye Doll set pane ki khushi me wo ye bhul jati he ke akhir ye Gift Aksh kese laya. Anu apne Gift ke liye Aksh ko thank you kehti he or fir Santosh or Radha ko.

Radha: beta hume Thank You mat kaho, ye Gift Aksh apne paiso se laya he.
Ab ye baat Sunkar Sakshi thoda alert si ho jati he.
Rohan: matlab?
Radha: are Aksh khud paise bacha kar use jama karta gaya, or kal usne khud Sakshi or Anu ke liye Gifts kharide.

Sacchayi samne ate hi Sakshi ka dil to jese tut sa jata he. Uski Akho me Aansu ajate he. Or wo Doll set ko wahi niche Dalkar Aksh ki taraf badhti he or use khinch kar thappad marti he. Sakshi ki is harkat par sab heran se reh gaye the, Aksh apna gaal par haath rakh ke Sakshi ko dekhe ja raha tha.


Aksh: Kitna bura he Aksh tu..... In paiso se to apne liye cycle lene wala tha na? Fir kyu kharch kiye tune apne paise?
Wo rote hue bahot hi Chillakar Aksh se puch rahi thi, Aksh ke paas is sawal ka koi jawab nahi tha.

Radha: Sakshi ye kya tarika he….
Wo Sakshi ko piche khinch te hue kehti he. Lekin Sakshi to bas roye ja rahi thi.
Sakshi: mujhe nahi chahiye koi Gift…. Le jao ise yaha se…
Wo chillate hue kehti he or us bikhre doll set ko laat maar ke bhag kar apne kamre me chali jati he. Radha or baki sab use chup karane ke liye andar chale jate he, bahar Aksh akela khada tha, wo aage badh kar us Doll set ko uthata he, us box me se Sari Dolls or baki sab niche gir gaya tha. Aksh sabkuch samet kar Box me daal deta he, or Box ko apne Parents ke kamre me rakh deta he, or khud ghar se bahar chala jata he.


Yaha ghar me sabne Sakshi ka rona band karwa diya tha.

Radha: beta aise gussa hona acchi baat nahi he, Aksh ne itne pyaar se tunhare liye gift layi wo bhi apne paise bacha kar.. or tum ne aisa kiya, use kitna bura laga hoga ab.

Wo Sakshi ke bagal me beth kar uske sar pe haath ferte hue Sakshi ko samjha rahi thi. Sakshi ko bhi ab realize ho gaya ke usne galat kiya.

Sakshi: Sorry Aai……
Wo apne kaan pakad kar Radha se mafi mangti he.
Radha: mujhse nahi, Aksh se maafi mango… or itne pyaare tofe ke liye use Thank You bhi kaho….
Sakshi: thik he Aai… me abhi Aksh se Sorry bol deti hu…
Or ye kehkar wo bahar Hall me ajati he, lekin Aksh to waha tha hi nahi, sablog bhi uske piche piche hi hall me agaye the.

Sakshi: Aksh….. Aksh…..
Wo kabse Aksh ko pukarti he lekin Aksh to ghar ne hi nahi tha.
Radha: kaha chala gaya ye ladka? Aap dekhiye na jaldi se bahar use..
Wo ghabrayi si Santosh se kehti he.
Santosh: are tum ghabrao mat… me dekhta hua use….

Fir Santosh or Rohan Aksh ko dekhne ke liye bahar ajate he. Sakshi ko ab darr lag raha tha ke Aksh kaha chala gaya.


Dusri taraf Aksh ghar se nikal kar bas Raste se guzar raha tha.


Aksh(mann me): yaar mene to socha Sakshi wo Gift dekh kar khush ho jayegi… lekin usne to mujhe hi thappad maar diya…. Pagal ladki he ek number ki….. huhhh….. koi baat nahi uska gussa shant hone ke baad us se baat karunga….

Wo bas aise hi sochte hue chal raha tha or chalte chalte wo main Road par agaya, tabhi waha ek Supercar ajati he, Aksh to us car ko bas dekhta hi reh gaya. Tabhi wo car samne ke Car Showroom me ruk jati he. Aksh jaldi se waha chala jata he. Waha ja kar wo gate se hi us car ko dekhne lagta he, us car ko dekhte waqt Aksh ke chehre par kafi khushi nazar arahi thi. Lekin tabhi piche se 2 log guzarte he wo Aksh ko dekh rahe the.

Aadm: are ye ladke ko to dekh…. Aise gaadi ko dekh raha he jese ke ye car wo kharidne wala he hahahah….
Wo apne saath chal rahe aadmi se kehta he or dono hi Aksh par Hasne lagte he. Aksh ka dil to is se tut sa jata he. Fir wo us jagah se nikal jata he or apne Ghar ke raste chal padta he. Aadhe Raste me Santosh or Rohan use dikhte he. wo dono jaldi se Aksh ke paas ajate he.


Santosh: Aksh…. Kaha chala gaya tha beta?
Wo Aksh ke sar pe haath ferte hue puchta he.
Aksh: Baba me to wo apne Dost Soham ke paas gaya tha lekin wo to ghar pe nahi tha…
Santosh: kam se kam bata kar jana chahiye tha na beta…
Wo Akah ka chehra apne hatho me thamkar kehta he.
Aksh: Sorry Baba….
Wo apni nazre jhuka kar kehta he.
Rohan: ab chalo jaldi ghar…. Wo sab chinta kar rahe honge….
Fir wo dono Aksh ko le kar ghar ajate he.

Ghar pe Sakshi to apni nazre darwaze par hi tikaye ruki thi. Jese hi Aksh use ata dikhayi deta he to wo Dod kar Aksh ke paas jati he or uske Gale lag jati he.


Sakshi: Sorry Dada…… Sorry….. lo tum bhi mujhe maro…..
Wo rote hue Aksh se alag hoti he or uska haath pakad kar apne gaal par marne lagti he.
Aksh: are ye kya kar rahi he tu?
Wo Sakshi se apne haath chuddate hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Sorry Aksh…. Tum gussa to nahi ho na mujhpar?
Aksh: Nahi to…. Me kyu gussa honga….. or ek minute ruk yahi….
Itna kehkar wo apne parents ke kamre me chala jata he or us Doll set ko le kar bahar Sakshi ke samne aake khada ho jata he.


Aksh: hmm… ye le… ab firse fekna mat ise….
Wo Doll set ko Sakshi ke hatho me dete hue kehta he. Sakshi us se Doll set le leti he, or wo kafi khush bhi lag rai thi.
Sakshi: Thank You Dada….
Wo Aksh ko gale laga kar kehti he.

Fir sab kuch pehle jesa Normal ho jata he. Sakshi or Anu to Aksh ne di Doll set ke saath khelte thak hi nahi rahe the.

Raat ko Sablog so rahe the. Lekin Aksh ko nind hi nahi arahi thi, uske dimag me bas us Aadmi ki hi baate ghum rahi thi. Aksh ko us baat se hurt bhi hua tha, wo bas soch raha tha ke use bhi waise hi car leni he. Kafi der tak karwate badalne ke baad uski aakh lag hi jati he.


Or is tarah se inka din nikal jata he. jaha Aksh ke dimag se pehle wali chiz gayi bhi nahi thi ke ab us aadmi ki baat bhi Aksh ke dil o dimag me chap si gayi thi. Kuch samay baad jab Aksh ka birthday tha, tab Santosh ne use Cycle gift lar di, lekin pehli baar Aksh ko Santosh ne diya gift pasand nahi aya. Kuch mahino baad dono ka result tha, Aksh ke grades kafi kam ho chuke the, jis se Santosh or Radha ne use danta bhi lekin ye sil sila kuch saalo tak jari raha, har saal Aksh ke grades kam ate, har Saal Sakshi padhayme hoshiyaar ho rahi thi. Aksh ab kafi chup chup sa hone laga tha, ab Aksh or Sakshi 10th me chale gaye, or ab unka results tha. Dekhte he inka results aage kya mod lata he.


Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

 

[Qaatil]

For staring new story thread...

Congratulations for new story..bhai

Congratulations bro waiting for update
For new story

Congratulations for new story Qaatil bro

Jabardast introduction.bhai❤

For Starting New Story Thread

...for new story ...

Nice intro waiting for update

Bhai comments bharpoor milega...tum agla update post karo

Welcome back Qaatil bhai.........

Introduction padke hi aisa lagta hai story bahut hi faadu hone wali hai......

Update ka intezar mein.....

Fantasy me story dali h

Koi magic vagic aisi h kya story bhai

Congratulations for new thread

Fir thik h
Kyuki magic wali story apne matlab ki nhi

Nice introduction..

Sabse pehle new story ke liye apko bdhai aur apka shukriya hume ek aur khani dene ke liye



Gajab intro to bdiya rha
Is bar matlab story me teen character h lead role, triangle
Aksh, sakshi, mansi


Dar ke rehti h, aise kya badlaav aa gye aksh me interesting

Waiting for first update

Qaatil bta to dety laga di hy shuru atory

nice update

Kya hi baat bhai isme love triangle dikh raha he, or love triangle me to dard milna hi he dekhte he ab ye dard kise milta he, waiting for 1st Update.

nice intro

Bahut khub Qaatil Bhai, the intro ekdum dhasu he, mumbai se Surat ye kya soch rahe ho bhai? Eagerly waiting for updates

for the new story. I am sure this will much better than earlier story.

Congratulations for new thread Bhai & waiting for first update.

Congratulations bro for new story

Intro is fantastic

Keep writing we always with you

Ek nayi kahani shuru karne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad bhai aapka.
Ye kahani apne anjaam tak pahunche iske liye anant shubhkamnaye....

Baat introduction ki....
Aapne hero ka naam sabse hatkar rakha h अक्ष waah or jo do main character h unke nam bhi lajawab h साक्षी और मानसी .
Anoothe naam.
Behtareen raha introduction.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Congratulations bro

Congratulations Qaatil bro for new story, ab ayega maza bhai ki new story Updates ka besabri se intzar rahega.

This time I liked your writing better than before. This story is about brother and sister. I liked the way you introduced us to the characters in the story. Now I eagerly await the first update of the story.
Thank You...

Bohot achha update bhai Waiting for next update ♥

lovely update

first update shandaar hai lekin aapne update ke suruaat me hi sad ending ki jalak dikhai hai ab kya kahun samjh na aa raha

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Update ki shuruaat badi hi khatarnaak tarike se hui.
or fir bachpan se.
Aksh or sakshi ki badmashiyon ko aapne bahut hi sundar tarike se dikhaya h .
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah

"
Ghayal Kar Ke Mujhe Usne Poochha,
Karoge Kya Phir Mohabbat Mujhse,
Lahoo-Lahoo Tha Dil Mera Magar
Honthon Ne Kaha Beintha-Beintha....
"
Lazavab Shurvath....Congratulation for the story

Bang on nice start, Characters Introduction well narrated, roles wisely chosen, jo kami (Narration ki) apke pehle story me thi, wo apne is story bahuth bakubi cover up kiya hai umeed hai aage bhi aise hi updates ayenge. Aur story ke pehle update se hi apna hero lime light me aachuka hai is ki waja uska character hai. Dekthe yeh story kya rang dikhati hai.....
Aur ek baath, ek chota sa suggestion personally i hate tragedy stories, movies etc., aur agar aap is story ko tragedic bannane ka soch rahe ho tho please meri request hai ki is story ko tragedy mat bannana.
Jab bhi mein kio stories ya fir koi movies dekhtha hun tho mein us story ke character ko apne aap se jod detha hun pata nahi yeh meri buri addat hai ya fir kuch aur but mein aise karne se apne aap ko rokh nahi saktha aur is ka natiza yeh hota hai ki jab koi tragedy scene ya fir story ko dektha ya fir padtha hun tho mujhe bahuth zada dard hota hai isliye mein aap se sirf request kar saktha hun kyun ki aapne is story pe bahuth mehanat kar ke likha hai aur changes shayad is story ki destiny badal sakthi jo shayad is story ke liye accha na ho so.
aur keep it up.....
Wating for the update

are Qaatil Bhai aapne to qatl kar diya
mind-blowing Start, yaar apne na middle class family ki ek baat bahut hi acche dhang se dikhayi he, ke ek middle class parents apne baccho ke liye koi taj mehel to nahi banwa sakte lekin unki choti si icchao ko pure dil se pura karte he jese yaha par Santosh ne apne baccho keliye jo gola banane ke liye Syrups laye.... Ye dikhata he the beauty of a Middle class Parents ❤
aise hi likhte rehna bhai, waiting for next Update

Nice update bro...

Just superb

Awesome update

Aise Update dete rehna bro Story bich me mat chhod dena bas

Aaj start Kiya h read Kar ke review deta hu

Gajab update bhai ji, pyara update tha
aksh ke rone ne to emotional kar diya

Middle class family ki life,pareshani,tangi bdiya tarike se describe ki h apne

Update jaldi khtm ho gya


Bache kya jane ab is bare me , agle mahine bol diya lekin aksh ko aaj hi chaiye

Lekin isiliye to unhe bache kehte h


Yha se hi aksh business man banne ka sochega


Jo ye conversation h na aksh aur sakshi ki, bas kya khu mujhe bhut jyada pyari lagti h
Meri story padne ki ye khas vjah h
Aise updates padkar jo sakoon milta h, pucho mat

Eagerly waiting for next update

Bhut shandar update biradar. Story track par aa rhi ha

Fabulous start
Keep posting

Childhood is very good and sweet, I miss my childhood while reading the story, we have no worries, playing and having fun all day long. From now on, Aksh and Sakshi are supporting each other, will have more fun later. I have also eaten a lot of ice balls during my school time and still eat occasionally. I liked the thinking of Aksh and some things are understood at the right time.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

Yaar Qaatil bhai kya hi likh rahe ho aap
Aapki writing pehle se zyada imrove hui he, keep it up bhai

Or aaj ke Update ki baat kare to kamal update tha, dono ka kisi ladke ko milkar marna
Sakshi ka itni buri halat me bhi gole ke liye pyaar ❤
Or wahi Aksh ke saaf dil par is pesa jesi khichad ki bunde lagg jana, ye bahut galat hua, dekhte he ab age kya hoga, eagerly waiting bhai.

Pyaara Update maza aya padhkar, or jo dono ne milkar us ladke ko mara bahut sahi kiya sare moments bahut hi pyare the, or ab aksh ke andar ye sawal agaya he, pata nahi kya hota he aagey waiting for next Update

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aksh or sakshi ka milkar apne se bade ladke ko pitna or ghar me ma ki dant sunkar bachpan ke din yaad aa gye.
Aap itna kamal ka update likhte ho ki main khud se jod leta hoon use.
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Lovely update ek bahuth hi masumiyat see bara update or ek bahuth gheri baat bi pata chalti hai is update se ki maa baap ka pyaar tyag, samarpan, ki tulna kisi bhi cheez se nahi ho sakthi.. Aur kya is mamsum see ladke k man mein umad rahe swalon ka jawab melega ya nahi dekthe hai aage kya hot hai
Good waiting for next

Nice update bro

waiting for next update

Bahut hi pyara or masumiyat bhara Update

Awesome update

aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update

Achcha update hai koi baat hoti hai jo life me sab badal deti hai yahan paise ki baat aa gayi matlab bachpan gaya inka dekhte kya hota

Guys Update 4 Posted, Check Out

 

[Alok]

I think base of the story ends here.

Now it will be interesting to see what happens next....

Good one Qaatil bhai......

 

[uttu7887]

Super se bhi uper update

 

[Pta nhi]

Awesome update