Adultery LLL- Love , Life & Luck (tragedy of life)

[A.B.KING]

Waiting for next update

 

[The Thinker]

Excellent update

Awesome updates

Wow bhai kya update tha aur raju ko main kya samajta tha magar his tarah observation kiya woh out of level tha sayad avi ke sath rehane ka ashar ho


Waiting for new update bhai

Comedy prabha ki.. fighting avi ki.. samjdari shivraj ki.. emotionally rohit ki.. sab mil gaya bas ek ko chhod ke pyaar... waiting next Update

Fabulous update

Bahut badhiya likh rhe ho bhai....kahani bahut achchi ja rhi h ...bs aapse ke request thi ..pahle jaise daily ek ya do update de hi dete the vaise hi de diya karo.....kuch karanvas mai review nhi de paya ab se dena start kar dunga......bs is request me thoda dhyan dena ...kyoki is story me jaan h aur wait karna muskil ho jata h next update ke liye

Bhai mere abhi waqt kam mil.raha hai isliye nahi de paa rha ...jaise waqt milta h update likh deta hu ...vaise kahani ruk ruk ke nahi chalegi ...aage time batayega ... thank u


dhanyawad mitron bahut aabhar

 

[The Thinker]

Lo bhai maine reply walo me ek nam aur badha diya ab ....ek aur update is khusi me aaj de dena

Bhai mauj kardi

Nice updates

Thanks

Nice update bhai is update me comedy imotion 1 chota sa action sab kuch tha lagta he ki aane wale update me action hone wala he avi apani bhabhi ko lene jayega shayad waiting for next update

Thanks dost ...abhi waqt lagega ...

Ok mitr
Jish karye se kahani ki mule bhavna me jayada parivartan na aye
Aur joh aapka nishchhal man kahe vo kijiye mitr
Har dil me rab basta

Ji bhai ..yahi keh rha tha main ...kahani ko aise likhna hai jo kadiyan jude aur maja aaye ...abhi batata hu -- naina ki shadi ke din teen kaam hone hai jisme avi per jara bhi shaq nahi jaayega lekin baat bahut tagdi bigdegi ... jisme avi ko nuksaan hoga ...

Adbhut update bro

Dhanyawad

Bohot hi umda update.

Thanks

Story bhut achhi h ,bhai daily update aa jaye to aur bhi achha lagega hamein , baise aap apna dekh lo. Bas kahaani rukni nahi chahiye

Kahani nahi rukegi thanks dost

Awsum update bro

Thanks

Thik hai bhai to hme bhi add kr lo reply dene valo me story gajab ki hai plot sandar hai update jabarjast hain or writing skill awesome hai ..

Are welcome dude ...

Bhabhi se bahut jaldi lagaw ho gaya avi ko, itni fikar dekhe ke bhabhi bhi nihal ho rahi hai, Avi ke bhi life mein ginti ke log hain, uski maa aru doosra uska bhai, behen hain lekin kabhi saath rahe nahin, toh lagaw bhi utna na ho saka. Aur baap ke hone na hone barabar hain, sivay paiso kee aur koi farz pura na kiya kabhi.

Ab dilbaag toh thehra nira jahandu admi, yeh bhi na pata kiya uske admi ne sahi se apna kaam kiya kee nahin, sidha chal diye dhamkane, bhai DM ko dhamka rahe ho koi aire-gaire ko nahin. Waise thori bhi der ho jaati phone uthane mein toh DM saheb ne toh haath khare kar dene the.

Khair Bhaan singh bare krodhit maloom par rahe hain, avi se ek mamuli takkar ne unhe sochne pe majboor kar diya, ab wo jante nahin kee wo bas khel raha tha, aur yeh usse khelne ka soch rahe hain.

Radha aur seema ka characha ka mukhya kendra in dono avi hee hain, jane-anjane un dono ke man ke taar chher diye hain, radha ko seema se jalan ho rahi hai, bhale hi wo kisi aur se pyar karti ho, lekin avi se ek mulakat ne hi uske man mein halchal paida kar diye, aur seema didi toh khul ke apne jajbaat jahir kar rahi hain, kahir dekhte hain inke kismat mein behen ban ke milna likha hain ya phir mashook.

Rajni memsab toh nishabd ho gayee hain, jis insan kee unhone tauheen ke usne unki zindagi bacha ke jaise bemaul unhe khareed liya, aaj iss mulakat mein uski juban ko jaise tala lag chuka tha, jo ekant mein apne prem ka izhar karne tak ka soch rakhhi thee, samne aane pe muk ho gayee. Khair usne apne prem ko niyati ke bharoshe chhor dee hain, dekhte hai idhar seema bhi uski mulakat ke liye bechain hain aur rajni bhi.

Kajal bhi jaise insan ko bara gehra avlokan karti hain, jis prakar se usne avi ke abhi tak ke mulakat mein usse samjha hain utna toh koi aur na kar paya, aur dosti kee baat keh ke rajni ke dil ko bechain bhi kar diya--- khair inki mulakat ek accident mein hi hoti hain, chahe jitni baar bhi yeh mile hain, samanya paristithi mein toh kadapee nahin mile, phir milenge kisi akasmat ghatn mein, dekhte hain agli baar kaun apne hosh barkrar rakhta hain.

Ab bhaiya-bhabhi toh apne prem prasang mein aage badhna shuru kar diye hain, iss baat se anjan kee ek aisa sach hain jo inki zindagi mein bhoochal lane wala hain. Khair anjane mein hi sahi avi wala kissa chher ke unhone rohit ko bechain kar diya hain, wo bechara bhi kya kare jis bhai kee jeevan bhar chinta karta aaya hain, achanak se toh uske liye chinta chhor na shakta, bhale hee wo kitna bhi saksham ho jaye.

Lekin bharosha hain, apne bhai pe kee kuchh bhi akaran wo na karta hain, aur aaj aaveg mein ek chhupa hua sach samne aate-aate rah gaya, bhabhi ne bari samajhdari se baat palat dee, lekin kya wakai mein avi ne gaur na kiya hoga, jitni teji se wo badal raha hain, utna toh hame bhi andaja nahin hain kee uske sochne kee kshamata kya hain.

Kabhi pariwar bhi insan ko aise jimmedari de deta hain jo usse na chahte hue bhi nibhana parta hain, omkar ko bhi galat na keh shakte hain, wo bas ek sukoon kee zindagi jeena chahta, hain jisme aman ho chain ho, lekin usse yeh nahin pata kee chahat toh kayee rakhte hain lekin usse pura karne ke liye kurbani bhi deni parti hain, wo na pariwar se door hona chahte hain, na hi uski jimmedario ko uthana chahta hain.

Shivraj ne sachhai kee beera uthaya hain, aur uski keemat bakhubi bhi unhone chukai hain, apne bachho kee balidan de ke, larai mein toh aksar log marte hain, kuchh dost toh kuchh dushman, aane wala wakt mein khud ko wo tayaar kar chuke hain, kyunki sandhi kaal jalad hi samapt hone wala hain, aur bheriya-geedar, nochne ke liye ghaat lagaye baithe hai, aur shero kee shankhya kam hai, ab yeh jo shanti iss pradesh ne dekha hain wo kitni bari toofan ko samete hue hain.

Meri jaan gajab ...

 

[The Thinker]

Fine update mitr

Thanks

SuperB update

Thanks

Superb update

Thanks

Wao! Aalu bhai sandar revo diye ho

Haan

Lagta he avi ka bada action scene ane wala he

Hoga hoga ...wait karte raho ...mast action aane wala hai ... dheere dheere badhega ... apne bhaiyo se bhi to ladna hai

mast update bhai keep it up and running story

Thanks

Awesome fabulous update Bhai superb

Thanks

Nice update

Thanks

nice update ..aashu ko phir ek baar dho daala abi ne ..
raju bhi yahi aa gaya kyunki uske baap ne usko ghar se nikal diya ..
raju ekdam mast character hai ..
aur ek sachcha dost bhi ..

naina ki shadi tay kar di hai uske gharwalo ne isliye wo rohit se rishta todne ki baat karke chali gayi ..
raghubir ko avi me shivraj ki parchhayi dikhayi deti hai aur uska aankhe niche karna ye batata hai ki avi ne wo baate kitne aatmvishwas se kahi thi ..

Dhanyawad dost ...

 

[The Thinker]

Bhaiyo yaar aisi taisi ho gai ....update likha tha saala pehle se kuch aur copy tha clipboard me ...jaise hi maine update select kiya to copy ki jagah paste per hath laga aur saara update khatam ...yaar bahut bada update likha tha ...wait karlo yaar ...gussa bhi aa rha hai itni mehnat se likha tha saala ...

 

[A.B.KING]

Bhaiyo yaar aisi taisi ho gai ....update likha tha saala pehle se kuch aur copy tha clipboard me ...jaise hi maine update select kiya to copy ki jagah paste per hath laga aur saara update khatam ...yaar bahut bada update likha tha ...wait karlo yaar ...gussa bhi aa rha hai itni mehnat se likha tha saala ...

Ok

 

[aalu]

Update-18
Toh sher ke bachhe ne apne purwajo ko khojne kee tawakat shuru kar dee thee, lekin bare bhai ne wakt ka takaja de ke uski khoj ko wahee viram laga diya, yeh toh alp kaal ke liye hii usko rok payega, lekin jo ghatnaye jitni teji se uske aas pass ho rahi hain, dar hai kaheen sach khud ba khud usko khojte na pahunch jaye.

Are wah yeh subah sawere avi ke param mitra Raju bhaiya padhare hai, matlab peecha na chhorna hain, iska bhi baapu kameena nikla, khud toh ghar se nikala, sala ristedaro ko bhi mana kar diya. Chalo ab in dono kee jori haryana mein kya gul khilati hain.

Yeh Aashu bina laat khaye sudharne se raha, avi ne toh rail bana dee, aaj radha-seema se mila bhi toh kuchh baat na ho saki, akhir khoon-khoon ko pehchan hi leta hai, snenvas hi sajjan singh khud ko rok na sake, kya pata thori der aur saath mein rah jaate toh, inka rista bhi ujagar ho jata.

Yaar Rajni kya kam thee jo uski maa ek alag hi nasl kee prani nikli, beti teekhi mirchi, toh maa popat, ek baar shuru hoti hain toh jaise usne rukna hi na sikha. Aaj toh laga tha kee beti ka haath de kee hi manti, lekin avi kee taleem ne jaise kuchh sankoch mein daal dee thee, perfect family, har tarah ke namuno se bharpoor.


O teri, yeh juma-juma 2-4 din hi hue the mile, abhi toh sahi se pyar bhi na shuru hua tha aur khatma bhi ho gaya, bechara rohit le de ke ek larki hi toh usse pasand aaye thee, lekin wo bhi uska saath na de saki, akhir wo kaise apne pariwar se lare, jisse larne kee himmat wo umra bhar na kar payee ho, jab baat uske pyar kee jaan kee ho, toh insan aur kamjor ho jata hain.

Aur saath dene wala bhi koi na, agar koi humdard hota toh kam se kam dil behla leti, ya phir madad bhi maang shakti thee, lekin usne yeh pyar toh apne pariwar waalo se chhupa ke kiya tha, toh ab jaye bhi kiske passs.

Kya rohit bas hatash aise hi baitha rahega, apne pyar ko harta dekhega, jab pyar karne kee kuwat rakhta hain toh usse paane ke liye toh jalna toh parega hee, wo pyar hi kya jo aasani se mil jaye, wo ashiq hi kiya jo dard mein na tarpe.

Lekin yeh wakt faisla karne ka hain, ya toh baith ke rote rahna, ya phir unke ghar jaa ke uska haath mangna. aaj rohit ko avi kee sabse jyada jaroorat hai, jeevan bhar wo avi ko sambhalte aaya hain, lekin aaj pyar ke aage wo khud ko hara hua mehsoos kar raha hain, ab kya avi apne bhai ka wo himmat ban payega.

Doobte ka khevanhara...

 

[aalu]

Bhaiyo yaar aisi taisi ho gai ....update likha tha saala pehle se kuch aur copy tha clipboard me ...jaise hi maine update select kiya to copy ki jagah paste per hath laga aur saara update khatam ...yaar bahut bada update likha tha ...wait karlo yaar ...gussa bhi aa rha hai itni mehnat se likha tha saala ...

koi nahin bhai jab aapko wakt mile itminan se likh ke post kare. khud kee mehnat jaya hote dekh ke gussa toh aata hee hain.

 

[Indrajeet]

Waiting bro..jaldi se update dedo yaar ab

 

[The king]

Bhaiyo yaar aisi taisi ho gai ....update likha tha saala pehle se kuch aur copy tha clipboard me ...jaise hi maine update select kiya to copy ki jagah paste per hath laga aur saara update khatam ...yaar bahut bada update likha tha ...wait karlo yaar ...gussa bhi aa rha hai itni mehnat se likha tha saala ...

Koi Baat nahi bhai kabhi kabhi ho jata he aap tension mat lo fir se likh ke aaram se do par jyada intazar mat karvana