Fantasy Lord of devil (supernatural, insect, romance , thriller)

[Satya]

Waiting bro

 

[JigsRock]

Bro 1 baat kahna chahunga
Ki jo apne likha he vesa hum 3 ya 4 story me padh chuke he or jub hiro 6ota hota he tab uske mabaap use sbse dur kar dete he or jb hiro vapas ata he to pahle sabse gussa karta he or bad me sab se ghul mil jata he parivar me to app vesa dusri stori ki tarah mat karna bro app ku6 alg karna jese hiro ki apni mahnat se bada hona ya apne parivar se milke b na mlna ho age ap ki marji bro.....

 

[bd sharkar]

I agree with u

 

[Samar Rajput]

Bro 1 baat kahna chahunga
Ki jo apne likha he vesa hum 3 ya 4 story me padh chuke he or jub hiro 6ota hota he tab uske mabaap use sbse dur kar dete he or jb hiro vapas ata he to pahle sabse gussa karta he or bad me sab se ghul mil jata he parivar me to app vesa dusri stori ki tarah mat karna bro app ku6 alg karna jese hiro ki apni mahnat se bada hona ya apne parivar se milke b na mlna ho age ap ki marji bro.....

Agree with u bro

 

[Hatelover]

Update -4

Jaisa ki aap sab ne pichle update me pada ki pratap se suman rudra ke USA jane ki baat karti hain or pratap rudra ko bhejne ke liye tiyar ho jata hain..

Ab aage

Pratap rudra ke USA jane ki puri vyavastha kar deta hain. Vahi rudra in sab se bekabhar room me rote -rote so gaya tha.
Subah rudra ko uske naa chahte hue bhi USA bejh diya jata hain . ab rudra duniya se poori tarah se alag ho gaya tha ab vo din bhar apne me hi gum rahta Sare jaha me kya ho raha hain sab se bekhabar.
Pratap rudra ko Miami ke ek school me admission kara deta hain or vahi hostel me uske rehne ki poori vyavastha kar deta hain.
Ider jab India se USA rudra ko le jaya gaya to kahi Dooshre or ek sadhu baba ki eyes open ho jati hain jo dhayan me baite the.
Sadhu baba - (man me) ye tumne kya kiya pratap & suman tumne anjane me hi sahi par tumne vahi kiya jisse maine tum dono ko karne se roka tha.
( ji ha ye vahi gurujii hain jinhone hero ka naamkaran kiya tha)
Guruji turat uth kar kahi lupt ho jate hain or jab pratap hero ko USA chod kar vapas aata hain ussi ke dooshre din gurujii uske ghar aate hain...
In USA
Hero khoob rota hain or man me pratigya karta hain ki jis family ne usse sirf dukh diya hain wo kabhi uss family me lout ke nahi jayega
Or wo itna powerfull banega ki usske naam se hi duniya kaapne lage wo itna powerfull banega ki wo duniya ko dikha sake ki wo kya kar sakta hain. ( ye sab sochte samay uski eyes red ho chuki thi jiska pata bhi usse nahi tha)

In india
Guruji pratap ke ghar pahucte hain to unka swaagat kiya jata hain par wo iss sab ke liye mana kar dete hain or kahte hain.
Guruji -( gusse me) rudra kaha hain
Guruji kyo iss tarah gusse me dekh pratap & suman sakpaka jate hain.
Pratap - ( sambhalte hue) guruji usse to humne USA bhej diya hain padne ke liye.
Guruji- mujhe pata hain. Main ye poocha raha hu rudra kaha hain.
Pratap- guruji abhi to bataya usa me hain.
Guruji - (gusse me) phone karke pata kar ki vo kaha hain.
Suman - guruji aap ka kya matlab hain.
Guruji - matlab rudra vaha nahi hain.
!( guruji ne ye bolkar jaise un sab pe bomb phod diya)
Guruji ke bolne ke baad pratap phone lagakar poochta hain to usse bhi pata chal jata hain ki rudra la pata hain vo suman Or baki sab ko batata hain.
Suman Or kavita & komal ye shun ke rone lagti hain. Suman bhale hi rudra ko pasand nahi karti thi par thi to maa hi ab usse rudra ki yaad aane lagti hain.

Guruji - suman jiss karan tumne ye decision liya uski sacchai nahi janna chahogi.
Suman - kaise sacchai.......
Guruji - poocho apne bade bete se ki galti kiski thi. Tumahare bade bete ne pahle rudra ke haath pe bat mara tha jisse uske haath se blood niklne laga. Tab usne gusse me rohit ko mara or ek baat Maine pahle hi kaha tha jo usse chot pahuchayega uske liye accha nahi hoga...

Suman - (shock se) kya rohit ye sahi hain.
Rohit haa me gardan hila deta hain.
Guruji - Or tumne Suman ye bhi nahi dekha uske haath me chot hain tumne usse maara jiske chot uske sharir pe nahi uske aatma Or man par lagi.
( Suman rone lagti hain)
Guruji - yaad karo maine kya kaha tha tum dono se

Flaceback
Guruji - yaad rakhna tum dono isse kabhi apni betiyon Or iski bahno se alag mat karna kyoki isse abhi ye dono hi shant kar sakti hain.
Pratap - guruji essa kya hain mere bete me. Jo aap itne dare hue hain.
Guruji - samay aane pe sab pata chal jayega abhi bas itna jaan lo ki tumhare bete jaisa iss puri duniya me koi nahi hain. Ye krodh me mahakal ka shakchat roop hoga or bina krodh ke ye nirmal man ka hoga sab ki madat karega.

Back to story
Guruji - lagta hain sab batane ka sahi samay aaa gaya hain.
Pratap - kya gurujii????
Guruji - rudra tumahara beta bas issliye hain kyonki usne tumhaari patni ke garb se janam liya hain. Balki sacchai kuch or hain.
Suman & pratap - kya????
Guruji - rudra wo hain jiske adheen swayam mout hain . Jo uske charno me rahti hain. Wo lord of hell hain, wo lord Or devil hain . Wo vah hain jiske under duniya ki aseemit urja hain fir chahe vo kali ho ya white.
(Ye sunkar suman Or pratap bahut shock ho jate hain )
Guruji - vo shwam mahadev ka ansh hain wo mahadev ke roudra roop beerbadra ke saman Vidbhanskari , krodhi Or shaktishali hain.
( ye sunkar pratap Or suman ko lagbhag heart attack aaa gaya tha. Vahi baccho ki samajh me kuch nahi aaa raha tha ki ye sab kya ho raha hain )

Suman -(man me) me kitni papi hu jo mahdev ke ansh ka khyal bhi nahi rakh paayi Or na hi usse pyaar diya ek bete wala.

Pratap -( man me) ye maine kya kar diya maine itna bada paap kaise kar diya. Ab me kya karu.
Pratap - guruji ab hum kya kare.
Guruji - bas prathna karo baghwan se jo me soch raha hu vo na ho unaytha jo main soch rha hu wo hua to poore duniya me hahakar machega. Sab jagah khoon hi khoon hoga. Mout ka nanga naach hoga.
( ye sun ke prataap Or suman dar jate hain)
Pratap - guruji ab hum rudra ko kaise dhoode.
Guruji - koi kuch nahi kar sakta ab.
Pratap- to rudra milega kaise ab.?
Guruji - wo jarur lout kar aayega Or jab wo aayega sab se pehle tumhari betiyo ko hi milega tab tak kuch nahi kiya ja sakta .
Or guruji chale jate hain.


Ab dekte hain aage kya hota hain

 

[Stone cold]

Bro 1 baat kahna chahunga
Ki jo apne likha he vesa hum 3 ya 4 story me padh chuke he or jub hiro 6ota hota he tab uske mabaap use sbse dur kar dete he or jb hiro vapas ata he to pahle sabse gussa karta he or bad me sab se ghul mil jata he parivar me to app vesa dusri stori ki tarah mat karna bro app ku6 alg karna jese hiro ki apni mahnat se bada hona ya apne parivar se milke b na mlna ho age ap ki marji bro.....

Nice idea bro he should be like BRAND

 

[JigsRock]

Bahut badhiya update bro....

 

[John Cena]

O teri hero hell ka raja ha boht khoob yar mujhe lag raha ha hero galat rah par nikal jayega

 

[Raja thakur]

Fantastic updates

 

[Stone cold]

Update -4

Jaisa ki aap sab ne pichle update me pada ki pratap se suman rudra ke USA jane ki baat karti hain or pratap rudra ko bhejne ke liye tiyar ho jata hain..

Ab aage

Pratap rudra ke USA jane ki puri vyavastha kar deta hain. Vahi rudra in sab se bekabhar room me rote -rote so gaya tha.
Subah rudra ko uske naa chahte hue bhi USA bejh diya jata hain . ab rudra duniya se poori tarah se alag ho gaya tha ab vo din bhar apne me hi gum rahta Sare jaha me kya ho raha hain sab se bekhabar.
Pratap rudra ko Miami ke ek school me admission kara deta hain or vahi hostel me uske rehne ki poori vyavastha kar deta hain.
Ider jab India se USA rudra ko le jaya gaya to kahi Dooshre or ek sadhu baba ki eyes open ho jati hain jo dhayan me baite the.
Sadhu baba - (man me) ye tumne kya kiya pratap & suman tumne anjane me hi sahi par tumne vahi kiya jisse maine tum dono ko karne se roka tha.
( ji ha ye vahi gurujii hain jinhone hero ka naamkaran kiya tha)
Guruji turat uth kar kahi lupt ho jate hain or jab pratap hero ko USA chod kar vapas aata hain ussi ke dooshre din gurujii uske ghar aate hain...
In USA
Hero khoob rota hain or man me pratigya karta hain ki jis family ne usse sirf dukh diya hain wo kabhi uss family me lout ke nahi jayega
Or wo itna powerfull banega ki usske naam se hi duniya kaapne lage wo itna powerfull banega ki wo duniya ko dikha sake ki wo kya kar sakta hain. ( ye sab sochte samay uski eyes red ho chuki thi jiska pata bhi usse nahi tha)

In india
Guruji pratap ke ghar pahucte hain to unka swaagat kiya jata hain par wo iss sab ke liye mana kar dete hain or kahte hain.
Guruji -( gusse me) rudra kaha hain
Guruji kyo iss tarah gusse me dekh pratap & suman sakpaka jate hain.
Pratap - ( sambhalte hue) guruji usse to humne USA bhej diya hain padne ke liye.
Guruji- mujhe pata hain. Main ye poocha raha hu rudra kaha hain.
Pratap- guruji abhi to bataya usa me hain.
Guruji - (gusse me) phone karke pata kar ki vo kaha hain.
Suman - guruji aap ka kya matlab hain.
Guruji - matlab rudra vaha nahi hain.
!( guruji ne ye bolkar jaise un sab pe bomb phod diya)
Guruji ke bolne ke baad pratap phone lagakar poochta hain to usse bhi pata chal jata hain ki rudra la pata hain vo suman Or baki sab ko batata hain.
Suman Or kavita & komal ye shun ke rone lagti hain. Suman bhale hi rudra ko pasand nahi karti thi par thi to maa hi ab usse rudra ki yaad aane lagti hain.

Guruji - suman jiss karan tumne ye decision liya uski sacchai nahi janna chahogi.
Suman - kaise sacchai.......
Guruji - poocho apne bade bete se ki galti kiski thi. Tumahare bade bete ne pahle rudra ke haath pe bat mara tha jisse uske haath se blood niklne laga. Tab usne gusse me rohit ko mara or ek baat Maine pahle hi kaha tha jo usse chot pahuchayega uske liye accha nahi hoga...

Suman - (shock se) kya rohit ye sahi hain.
Rohit haa me gardan hila deta hain.
Guruji - Or tumne Suman ye bhi nahi dekha uske haath me chot hain tumne usse maara jiske chot uske sharir pe nahi uske aatma Or man par lagi.
( Suman rone lagti hain)
Guruji - yaad karo maine kya kaha tha tum dono se

Flaceback
Guruji - yaad rakhna tum dono isse kabhi apni betiyon Or iski bahno se alag mat karna kyoki isse abhi ye dono hi shant kar sakti hain.
Pratap - guruji essa kya hain mere bete me. Jo aap itne dare hue hain.
Guruji - samay aane pe sab pata chal jayega abhi bas itna jaan lo ki tumhare bete jaisa iss puri duniya me koi nahi hain. Ye krodh me mahakal ka shakchat roop hoga or bina krodh ke ye nirmal man ka hoga sab ki madat karega.

Back to story
Guruji - lagta hain sab batane ka sahi samay aaa gaya hain.
Pratap - kya gurujii????
Guruji - rudra tumahara beta bas issliye hain kyonki usne tumhaari patni ke garb se janam liya hain. Balki sacchai kuch or hain.
Suman & pratap - kya????
Guruji - rudra wo hain jiske adheen swayam mout hain . Jo uske charno me rahti hain. Wo lord of hell hain, wo lord Or devil hain . Wo vah hain jiske under duniya ki aseemit urja hain fir chahe vo kali ho ya white.
(Ye sunkar suman Or pratap bahut shock ho jate hain )
Guruji - vo shwam mahadev ka ansh hain wo mahadev ke roudra roop beerbadra ke saman Vidbhanskari , krodhi Or shaktishali hain.
( ye sunkar pratap Or suman ko lagbhag heart attack aaa gaya tha. Vahi baccho ki samajh me kuch nahi aaa raha tha ki ye sab kya ho raha hain )

Suman -(man me) me kitni papi hu jo mahdev ke ansh ka khyal bhi nahi rakh paayi Or na hi usse pyaar diya ek bete wala.

Pratap -( man me) ye maine kya kar diya maine itna bada paap kaise kar diya. Ab me kya karu.
Pratap - guruji ab hum kya kare.
Guruji - bas prathna karo baghwan se jo me soch raha hu vo na ho unaytha jo main soch rha hu wo hua to poore duniya me hahakar machega. Sab jagah khoon hi khoon hoga. Mout ka nanga naach hoga.
( ye sun ke prataap Or suman dar jate hain)
Pratap - guruji ab hum rudra ko kaise dhoode.
Guruji - koi kuch nahi kar sakta ab.
Pratap- to rudra milega kaise ab.?
Guruji - wo jarur lout kar aayega Or jab wo aayega sab se pehle tumhari betiyo ko hi milega tab tak kuch nahi kiya ja sakta .
Or guruji chale jate hain.


Ab dekte hain aage kya hota hain

Fantastic Update Bhai

Rudra hostel se bhaag Gaya magar Gaya to Gaya kaha?... Aur konsa urja ab uspe haavi Hoga white ya black

Ab age Dekhte hai Rudra Ke journey Mai kya hota hai

Eagerly waiting 4 next update