Kya baat hai bro maza hi aa gya padh kr mtlb ek master hai jiska ye ek student hai gulam hai Virgo Ya kya hai pta nhi, jo bhi hai Jabardast hai...
Virgo ko mission mila tha us coffine ka pichha Karo lekin kal raat huye ek gaanv me monster bunny ke dwara bhishan nar sanghar ke chalte kya mission mila, black Forrest jao or un monster bunny ko khatm kr do, sath me hidayat bhi di ki kisi ko bhi apni presence show mat karna, Virgo pahuch gya hai black Forrest me Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage...
Vo dono bhai jack and rocky us coffine ko CIA head quarter me rakhva kr 1 hafte ki chhutti lekr nikal gye...
Vahi dono org. ke CEO ko chief matthiev ne bulva liya hai yha hame thoda inke Bich masti majak dekhne mila bhale hi vo unke lahje me tha, master Lee ne master Xion ko coffine ki chain todne se Mna kr diya achanak se aakr, jarur vo kuchh jante honge...
America ke president ko us villege ki jankari ke CCTV cameras se mil gyi hai or unhone dono org. ko madad ke liye bulaya hai jiske chalte criminals pr najar rakhne vali org. ne madad karne aa gyi hai or pure Desh me nobalees suraksha ke liye lga diye hai, Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage...
Aisa kya hua tha 300 saal pahle Virgo se jiske chalte Use abhi sarminda hona pda, master ne dost ki sakal me dushman hote hai yha Ispr bhi kaha ki kisi pr bhi bharosha na karne ko or yah bhi btaya ki abhi yha ke log is kabil nhi huye hai ki Virgo ko dekh bhi sake, kya insab bato ka yah mtlb tha ki 300 saal pahle SS or SSS nobalees sare khatm ho gye usme is Virgo se koi galti Hui thi, kya isi liye Virgo ko 300 salo ke liye usi death island me kaid rahna pada...
Mai ye puchhna chah rha tha ki Aap Isme love imotion friend family etc ke conversations ye sab Rakhoge ya dark rahegi puri ki puri...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab amazing
Bhai me is ko novel pattern p likh raha hun Step by Step. sirf main character ko pakad k nhi nakho ga. Baki logo pe bhi focus karo ga .
jesy monsters world me monster keay rehty hain kia karty hain humans ko kesy marty hain or kis had tak successful rehty hain .jesa k bunny monsters us village k attack me successful rahy thay.
[Or wo coutry Germany thi or President bhi Germany ka hi tha...]
Bhai Ap khud socho agar me bhi har jagha Hero ko ghusaa k monsters ko hero se marwata raho wo bhi sirf hero ko sub strong dikhany k lea? to monsters ki value kia reh jay gi?
Hero ko strong dikhany k lea or bhi bohat se tareqqy hoty hain or my us ki treqqy pee kaam karo ga .
Hero strong asy nhi banta k apny se kamjoor loogo or montets ko mary. Strong or powerfull hero wo hota hy jo khud se bhi jyada strong enemy's ko face karta hy.
[Abhi story ki starting hy. Aagy chal k step by step world k Strong subhi Strong Noblesse loogo ka or Strong monsters ka introduction hoga ho ga

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har character ko welbuild karo ga .. Tabhi to maza ata hy jub heros k enemy ko bhi Screentime mily taky logo ko pata chal saky villain kitna powerfull hy ..
mera matlb step by step kahani aagy badhy gi ..ek dum se sub ka mixture nahi bana du ga.
k subha ghar sy nikly or porri dunya k heros ny akathy ho k dunya bhar k enemy se fight ki or sham ko ghar aakr soo gy . Ye to bacho waly cartoon k jesy hy .
Bhaly hi ye ek fantasy ho but agar meri age 30year hy to meri fantasy. 10sal waly bacho ki fantasy se alag hi ho gi na bhai?
is my sub kuuch hoga. is my Love hoga emotions hon gey .care about family's . Friendship. Batroyal. Sacrifice hon gy .
....BAS SEX WEX NHIN HO GA...
is lea me Soch raha hun shayad is type ki story kisi ko pasand na aay keu ky yaha to bs subhi sex addict nazar aty hain mujhy.
to un logo k lea ye ek boring or bakwas story hony wali hy na.?
is lia my Confucian me hun.
kia mujhe ye story yaha pe continue rakhni chahye??
Ap yaha zyada time se ho ap Suggest kro .me ye story continue rakhon.
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Virgo sharminda is lea tha k us ny
death island pe mr.jack or rocky ko apni presence khudu feeel krwai thi warna mr.jack or Rocky to us k samny bachy thy unko keay feel howa k koi unko daikh raha tha? Or master ny is lea usko warning di thi k phir se kbhi asa mat karna ... is bat se sharminda tha virgo keu k us ny mistake ki thi ye bat janta tha wo
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Bhai 300 sal pehly kia howa tha is ko itni jaldi revealed kar deny ka koi logic nhi banta .ye raaz kuch time baad khola jay ga..
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Ab ap btaen kia my is story ki continue rakhon? Keu k aisi story boring feel hogi readers ko keu k yaha to readers ka mindset hi asa maloom hota hy jesy wo har story ko sex story samajh k read krty hain
