Fantasy LORD - The Unbeatable

[Hardcock1]

Demon bhai bohat hi jyada acha update tha kamal kar dia.itna bada apdate koi ni deta bhai yaha k writer 2 ya 3k words ko bada update kehty hain . Ap na 6.5k words ka update de dia or wo bhi itna tabahi update aag laga di hy aap ne .
Mujhy thoda se be ashaa nhi hoa k story asa turn ley gi. Ye wali update read karty asa lag raha tha jesy aakho k samny koi movie chal rhi ho .kia achy se har scean ko creat kia hy ap ny or us scean ko detail se complete be kar dia .jo k yaha kisi writer k bas ki bat nhi hy wo bas 1500 2k word my pori update nikal dety hain keu k wo scean creat to karty hain par us ko detail se complet ni kar sakty .
Ap top class ka writer ho agar ap ny asa he ye story complete kar di to xfourm pa khud ko writer bolny waly bachy bhaag jyen gaa

 

[DEVILWANTED]

Brother bahut hi bahtreen story h
Gjb ka plot h story ka

Awesome

Gjb

 

[DEVILWANTED]

Waiting for next update

 

[DEMØN]

Demon bhai bohat hi jyada acha update tha kamal kar dia.itna bada apdate koi ni deta bhai yaha k writer 2 ya 3k words ko bada update kehty hain . Ap na 6.5k words ka update de dia or wo bhi itna tabahi update aag laga di hy aap ne .
Mujhy thoda se be ashaa nhi hoa k story asa turn ley gi. Ye wali update read karty asa lag raha tha jesy aakho k samny koi movie chal rhi ho .kia achy se har scean ko creat kia hy ap ny or us scean ko detail se complete be kar dia .jo k yaha kisi writer k bas ki bat nhi hy wo bas 1500 2k word my pori update nikal dety hain keu k wo scean creat to karty hain par us ko detail se complet ni kar sakty .
Ap top class ka writer ho agar ap ny asa he ye story complete kar di to xfourm pa khud ko writer bolny waly bachy bhaag jyen gaa

Ary nahi bro my ne pehly ik Dark Episode type ki thi ... But phir ye soch kar k abi to starting hy itni dark episode likhna theek nhi ha ..or phir se Re-typing ki to time jyada lag gya is lea bada update dena jaroori tha bro .
Or me ne pehla bhi kaha tha k subb ki
Way of thinking alag alag hoti hay .

Logic acha na lagy to logic ko hate karo us insan ko hate mat karo .
story achi ni lagi to story ko hate karo but writer ko hate mat kro .
Sub loog mehnat se likhty hain ..is lea agar writer's ki nhi to As a person hi subki respect karo.

 

[DEMØN]

Brother bahut hi bahtreen story h
Gjb ka plot h story ka

Awesome

Gjb

Thank you bro.

 

[DEMØN]

Waiting for next update

Bro Jald hi new update mily ga ... Abi to soch raha hun k soo jaon . pori rat jaag kar is update ko Re-type kia hy

 

[Hardcock1]

Bro Jald hi new update mily ga ... Abi to soch raha hun k soo jaon . pori rat jaag kar is update ko Re-type kia hy

Demon Bhai ap rest karo . Or agar next bhi asa hi tabahi update do ga tu jitna marji ha time le lo but update jaroor dena .story ko continue rakhna .ye ik bohat hi jayada intresting story hony wali ha. Love you

 

[K.k]

Badiya story hai bhai

 

[DEMØN]

Badiya story hai bhai

Thanks bro

 

[Bloody Reaper]

Ary nahi bro my ne pehly ik Dark Episode type ki thi ... But phir ye soch kar k abi to starting hy itni dark episode likhna theek nhi ha ..or phir se Re-typing ki to time jyada lag gya is lea bada update dena jaroori tha bro .
Or me ne pehla bhi kaha tha k subb ki
Way of thinking alag alag hoti hay .

Logic acha na lagy to logic ko hate karo us insan ko hate mat karo .
story achi ni lagi to story ko hate karo but writer ko hate mat kro .
Sub loog mehnat se likhty hain ..is lea agar writer's ki nhi to As a person hi subki respect karo.

Bilkul sahi kaha bhai apne