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Bhai kuchh chuninda log hai is forum me jinhe story me content chahiye, pr unke comments har update pr nhi aate, vo kuchh update ka ek sath revo dete hai, Mai unhe yha ka pta btane ki Kosis karunga, Aapko bas haar nhi manni hai,Bhai me is ko novel pattern p likh raha hun Step by Step. sirf main character ko pakad k nhi nakho ga. Baki logo pe bhi focus karo ga .
jesy monsters world me monster keay rehty hain kia karty hain humans ko kesy marty hain or kis had tak successful rehty hain .jesa k bunny monsters us village k attack me successful rahy thay.
[Or wo coutry Germany thi or President bhi Germany ka hi tha...]
Bhai Ap khud socho agar me bhi har jagha Hero ko ghusaa k monsters ko hero se marwata raho wo bhi sirf hero ko sub strong dikhany k lea? to monsters ki value kia reh jay gi?
Hero ko strong dikhany k lea or bhi bohat se tareqqy hoty hain or my us ki treqqy pee kaam karo ga .
Hero strong asy nhi banta k apny se kamjoor loogo or montets ko mary. Strong or powerfull hero wo hota hy jo khud se bhi jyada strong enemy's ko face karta hy.
[Abhi story ki starting hy. Aagy chal k step by step world k Strong subhi Strong Noblesse loogo ka or Strong monsters ka introduction hoga ho ga.]
har character ko welbuild karo ga .. Tabhi to maza ata hy jub heros k enemy ko bhi Screentime mily taky logo ko pata chal saky villain kitna powerfull hy ..
mera matlb step by step kahani aagy badhy gi ..ek dum se sub ka mixture nahi bana du ga.
k subha ghar sy nikly or porri dunya k heros ny akathy ho k dunya bhar k enemy se fight ki or sham ko ghar aakr soo gy . Ye to bacho waly cartoon k jesy hy .
Bhaly hi ye ek fantasy ho but agar meri age 30year hy to meri fantasy. 10sal waly bacho ki fantasy se alag hi ho gi na bhai?
is my sub kuuch hoga. is my Love hoga emotions hon gey .care about family's . Friendship. Batroyal. Sacrifice hon gy .
....BAS SEX WEX NHIN HO GA...
is lea me Soch raha hun shayad is type ki story kisi ko pasand na aay keu ky yaha to bs subhi sex addict nazar aty hain mujhy.
to un logo k lea ye ek boring or bakwas story hony wali hy na.?
is lia my Confucian me hun.
kia mujhe ye story yaha pe continue rakhni chahye??
Ap yaha zyada time se ho ap Suggest kro .me ye story continue rakhon.
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Virgo sharminda is lea tha k us ny
death island pe mr.jack or rocky ko apni presence khudu feeel krwai thi warna mr.jack or Rocky to us k samny bachy thy unko keay feel howa k koi unko daikh raha tha? Or master ny is lea usko warning di thi k phir se kbhi asa mat karna ... is bat se sharminda tha virgo keu k us ny mistake ki thi ye bat janta tha wo
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Bhai 300 sal pehly kia howa tha is ko itni jaldi revealed kar deny ka koi logic nhi banta .ye raaz kuch time baad khola jay ga..
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Ab ap btaen kia my is story ki continue rakhon? Keu k aisi story boring feel hogi readers ko keu k yaha to readers ka mindset hi asa maloom hota hy jesy wo har story ko sex story samajh k read krty hain
Aap Chaho to reader ko ko apni taraf attract karne ka prayash kr sakte ho ya kuchh story ke reader or writer ke comment padh sakte ho aap, Jisse sayad Aapko kuchh madad mile...
Vj4u bhai ki- Attitude 1st and 2nd
Nain11ster bhai ki story- Aryamani, isqe risk 1st and 2nd, Bhanvar
Werewolf bhai ki Badshah: the debuarchy
Daksh the king (asadji) bhai ki- Samrat: the debuarchy
Valentine rider bhai ki- Solo Leveling
Sandy bhai ki- god and devil
Jay Sutar Bhai ki- Gods and Demons, rakshak
Sandeep Singh Nirwan bhai Ki- Raj the hero of the family
Dmahi bhai ki- Pariwar ka Angrakshak Mahi... etc. Ye story or writer best hai jo abhi active hai yha. Or bhi Bahut se behtreen writer hai...
Kuchh writer aise bhi hai jinke pass kuchh ginti ke 5-10 reader hi hai pr Unki story wonderful hai Jaise ek story hai Lucifer the fallen angel, Shivbhajan bhai ki singhasan... etc.
Yadi Aapki story me 10 reader bhi aakr rukte hai to aap samajh ligiyega unhe content se mtlb hai sex se nhi...
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Xabhi bhai me bas story ko agy badhany pe focus karo ga ... Mera matlb ye nhi hy k mujjhy bas readers chahye .
Me to to bs ap ka point of view le raha k ap ky experience ky hisaab se jo cheez story ko acha bnati hy .kia wo meri story my hy? meri story me koi jhool nazar aarha ho agar ap ko to us taraf meri wajahu dila sakty aap
Reader to atty rahy gy jesy jesy story aagy badhti jaay gi.
Xabhi
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Aap Jay Bhai ki gods and demons Ya rakshak dekh lo ek bhi sex nhi hai ya fir Valentine rider ki solo leveling me bhi Bilkul bhi nhi hai, millan bhai ki strange world 1st and 2nd padh lo unme bhi nhi milega Aapko sex... Or bhi Bahut si story hai Jnaab jinpr naam matra ka sex bhi nhi hai pr story awesome hai...Thanks .. Asal me sex story likhna boht easy hota hay ... .2 ..4 conversation k bad pory update bas sex karny orbsex planning pe hi likh di jati hy or zyada mehnat nhi lagti us my .
But me ny sex se hat kar likhny ka faisla is kia hy .k kuch acha likha jay ..
Keu har time sex material read karna mantel helth k lea bhi acha nhi hota hy .
Aap bas is pr dhyan do ki Aap Kaise or bhi instresting bna sakte ho apni story ko...
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Wao amazing bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab superb
Abhi Itni jaldi naam to yaad nhi honge pr bina naam ke likhte hu kuchh...
Virgo ke liye ye bunny or ye spacial wolf chutkiyo ka khel lage sath hi vo portal ko todna bhi...
300 varsho ka Samay Ho gya hai SS SSS ko khatm huye jiske sath hi unka gyan bhi simit rah gya hai, portal ko nast karna ab inke liye impossible lag rha hai...
Is battle ki Captan or apni love interest ko bchate huye ek banda khud ko wolf ke attack ke samne kr deta hai or mara jata hai bchate huye...
Us lady Captan ko jb samajh aata hai to use us bande ki purani bate yaad aati hai or vo ansu bahate huye Virgo ki taraf dekhte huye kuchh Samay Pahle aane ka saval puchhti hai or uske baad chamatkar hota hai Virgo us bande ko thik kr deta hai or jb Captan sukriya karti hai to uski pocket me ek golden moti milta hai, kya yah moti Virgo se baat karne ka jariya hai ya yah Uski bahan ko thik karne ke liye diya hai ya fir Captan ko shakti di hai or powerful hone ke liye sawal bahut hai pr Dekhte hai agle update me...
president base me sabkuchh record hua hai drone ke jariye, ab dekhna ye hai ki kya unhe un videos me kuchh aisa milega jo unke kaam ka ho ya us wolf or bunny Ki body se kuchh kaam ki chij mile...
Kya Captan ab us bande ke sath date pr jayegi ya ab bhi use ignor karegi...
Kya Virgo ko us bande ko bchane ka mission bhi mila tha ya Usne ye sab apni Marji se kiya...
Kya vo moti bhi apni Marji se Captan ki pocket me dala hai Ya Vo bhi uske master ke kahne pr kiya...
Superb bhai...
Abhi Itni jaldi naam to yaad nhi honge pr bina naam ke likhte hu kuchh...
Virgo ke liye ye bunny or ye spacial wolf chutkiyo ka khel lage sath hi vo portal ko todna bhi...
300 varsho ka Samay Ho gya hai SS SSS ko khatm huye jiske sath hi unka gyan bhi simit rah gya hai, portal ko nast karna ab inke liye impossible lag rha hai...
Is battle ki Captan or apni love interest ko bchate huye ek banda khud ko wolf ke attack ke samne kr deta hai or mara jata hai bchate huye...
Us lady Captan ko jb samajh aata hai to use us bande ki purani bate yaad aati hai or vo ansu bahate huye Virgo ki taraf dekhte huye kuchh Samay Pahle aane ka saval puchhti hai or uske baad chamatkar hota hai Virgo us bande ko thik kr deta hai or jb Captan sukriya karti hai to uski pocket me ek golden moti milta hai, kya yah moti Virgo se baat karne ka jariya hai ya yah Uski bahan ko thik karne ke liye diya hai ya fir Captan ko shakti di hai or powerful hone ke liye sawal bahut hai pr Dekhte hai agle update me...
president base me sabkuchh record hua hai drone ke jariye, ab dekhna ye hai ki kya unhe un videos me kuchh aisa milega jo unke kaam ka ho ya us wolf or bunny Ki body se kuchh kaam ki chij mile...
Us bande ke dobara jivit hone pr kya uska vyavhar ab bhi vaisa hi rahega ya pure energy ke uske andar pravesh karne pr uske kuchh change aayega...Ye thi Ichihara Academy ki war strategy.
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Or dosri Taraf tha Virgo 1man army with blessing of His LoRd.
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Ab Aagy .
Ep.No .4
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.Battle of Black Forest.
Black Forest ky andar jaha jany ka koi sooch bhi nahi sakta tha waha.
virgo ankhee band kar ky Yoga ky ek pose me betha howa meditation kar rha tha.
Wo zmeen se kuch oper tha asa lagta tha jesy wo hawa me betha howa tha ..
us ka ik hath us ki chest k samny tha or dosry hath me pakdi purple clour ki maala pe kuch padh raha tha jis se us k honth hil rhy thay ..
Black forest ki har jagha se golden clour ki energy ki Wave's nikal rahi thii jiss ko humen eyes nahi daikh sakti thii . wo energy ki Waves virgo ki body me enter ho rhi thi jis ki wajah se us ki body halki halki glow kar rhi thi.
Ye Virgo ka purana tareka tha jub bhi us k pas karny ko kuch nahin hota tha wo meditation karny lagta tha or ab bhe wo yehi kaam kar rha tha.
us ki senses ek S.Rank Nobless se bhi bohat tezz thi. Is wajha se abi raat k andheere my wo apny samny moujood us moutain pe kahdy howy logo ko cleary daikh sakta tha .or village k andar gharoon me bethy sub Noblesse ky dil ki dhadkan ki awaz
Dhaak Dhakkk dhaaK
bhe easily sun raha tha.
Phir us ko apny Lord ki awaz sunai deti hy .
Master:- Lag raha hy tum yaha time se pehly hi pohanch gy ho .
Virgo :- Yes master .abhi tak mujhy yaha pe kisi monster ki moujoodgi to feel nhi howi hy. But yaha kuch Nobless jaroor moujood hain.
Master :- ha me ny daikha unko . ab me tumhary mission me kuch changing karny ki soch raha hu.
Virgo :- kesi changing my lord..ek smile karty howy
Master :- Tum ab yahi baith k fight dekho gy unki .or wait karo gy Agar wo bunny monster un Noblesse se strong howy to tab tum un bunny monsters ko maar dena.or yad rahy koi tum ko daikhny na paay..
Virgo :- Command Accepted My Lord.
Or is k sath hi master ki awaz ana band hojati hy .......
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Hawwa me kuch Drone's bhii Udd rahy hoty hain jo Criminal Monitoring agency ky hoty hain.
Un logo ny President house ky hall room me hi apna setup laga lia tha jaha President khud bhi moujood thy.
or ye Drone's Noblesse ki har ik team ko samny lagi screen's pe dikhaa rahy thy .
Drone's use karny ke 3 wajha thi .
1 ..Us CC.Tv video me record hony waly bunny monsters 1st time human world my daikhy gy thy
2...criminal monitoring agency
Un Monsters se Germany ky noblesse ki fight daikhna chahti thi. or is type k monsters ka video data collect karna chahti thi jinn me un ki details ho like fighting style unki weakness etc .
3....Agar wo Portal kisi aasy aria my open hota jaha low rank k noblesse thy to waha high rank noblesse ko bheja jaay ... Agar un se handle na ho to phir last option ye mission AA. Ya fir S.rank Noblesse ko transfer kar dia jata.
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Out side of Black forest
Black forest k Sammny moujood us mountain pe ichihara Academy ky Noblesse ki team leader joo ek bohat hi beautiful ladki thi.
is waqat bohat ghussy se us mountain pe idhar udhar taheel rahi rhi thii.
Uska naam tha "Elina Ford" .
Elina" ky ghussy ki wajha ye thi ki aaj subha subha us ko ek notification receive howa tha. Jo ichihara academy ki taraf se tha.
1din pehly Usko jo 3 days ki leave milli thi aaj subha wo cancel kar di gie thii.or usko wapis academy bulaya gya tha ..
Keu k Elina ichihara acadmy ik bohat Brilliant student thi 21 sal ki age me hi wo A.Rank ko Achieve kar chuki thi jo ki ik bohat rare case tha .
keu k agr sub kuch aysa hi chalta raha to bohat jald wo S.Rank ko bhi achieve kar sakti thi jis baat ko ley kar aj kal germany ky Noblese my yehi discussion ho rhi thee...
is wajha se Germany ki Noblesse society me ELiNA ki Reputation bohat achi thi.
in sab baton ko daikhty howy ichihara Academy ky chief.head ny Elina Ka name As a team leader suggest kia tha "Black Forest" waly mission me or Elina 3days ki leave pe thi joo cancel karni padi thi jis wajha se elina ghussy my thi ki in bunny monster's ko pory world me bas yehi jagha mili thi?.
Elina ko ghussa ab un Bunny monsters pe arha tha jinki wajha se uski leave cancel hoi thi . aaj us ki choti sister "Reena ford" ki birthday thi..Elina ky mom dad ki 2 saal pehlay ek car accident me Death ho gye thi or us ki choti Sister "irena" ki jaan to bach gye thi but uski body ki right side paralyzed ho gye thi Ab Elina hi Apni choti sis ka dehan rakhti thi or aaj 1st time tha jub Elina Apni choti sis ki birthday nahi manaa pai thi .
Or baki ki kasar us ka ik teammate "Taylor" pori kar raha tha jo hmesha elina pe line marta rehta tha. wo is waqt apny noblesse teammates k sath betha howa tha or apni dragon slayer Sword ki tareef kar rha tha jis ka blade Red clour ka tha .
Taylor:- guys tum ko maloon hay aaj my ny weapon House se ye sword khareedi. .
Team'mates me se ik bolta hy ... woow ye to boht powerfull lag rhi hy ... Dosra kehta ye tum ny kitny me purchase ki ha ...
Taylor :- ary ye to ne ny siraf aaj waly mission k lea [5Million Blue Crystal coin] me purchase ki thi bss ajj k lea us k bad to mery lia bekar hy ye
Teammates Shocked....... phir wo ek sath bolty hain ....kia 5million blue crystal coins ???
Tum ny itny coins 1 din k lea use kar dea .
Taylor :- han bas asy hi aaj ye sword use karny ko dil kia to purchase kar li....
Elina ko uski baten sunnn kar or jyada ghusa arha tha. Wo apny maan me bolti hy ye taylor ka bacha itni badi badi pheeek raha hy is ny to kbhi 5millions blue crystal coin dorr se bhi nahi daikhy hain.. maan to karta hy is ka saar phood dalo my.
ise tarha wo ek dosry k dimagh chaat k time pas kar rhy hoty hain k Achank hi un se kuch dorri pe black forest ke kinary pe ik Bada sa blue clour ka Portal open hota hy ...
Portal open hoty hi Sub noblesse chounk jaaty hain..
Us Portal me se ek ek kar k Giant Bunny monster's nikalny lagty hain
Or us mountain pe baithy Noblesse team ky Attacker's fighting position my aajaty hy or attack k lea redy hony lagty hain ..
4 Attackers jo A.Rank. thy un me Elina or Taylor k hath me swords hoti hain . ek Nobless k pass 2 sided Axe hoti hy or dosry k pas ek bhaala hota hy jis ky end se ik chain contacted hoti jis ki dosry side us k hath k sath bandhi hoti hy ...
Or dono wizard bhi Spell cast karny k lea redy hoty hain
Or 2 defender jo dono A.Rank thy un dono k pas high class ki bohat heavy shields thi jo physicall attacks ko
neutralize kar deti thi.
Or 2medic jinn ka abbi koi kam nhi tha wo pechy khady hoty hain ..
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Inside of black forest .
iblock Forest k andar Meditation karty howy virgo apni ankhe kholta hy or bura sa monh bana kar un monsters ko daikhta hy or dhemi awaz me bolta hy .
Ye monsters kehlany k laiq hain bhala?
Wo phir se ankhee band kr ky meditation continue kr leta hy.
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in President House (Germany)
Screen pe baitha howa ik operator ouchi awaz me apny leader ko info karta hy .
Sir black forest ki outer side me abi abi ik Portal open ho gya hy ...
Leader:- to focus karo na us pe .
phir ek side pe lagi badi se screen pe black Forest ki live transmission start ho jati hy sub log bohat hi dehan se us screen ko daikh rahy hoty hain jaha ik portal se Giant bunny monsters nikal rahy thy .
Or German president apni life me asa kuch pehli bar daikh raha tha is lea wo boht hi tawajuu se screen pe nazar arahy un monsters ko daikh raha tha ...
Criminal monitoring agency ka head apny maan me kehta hy. Me apni life my is type k monsters 1st time daikh raha hun Bunny? Or monster's . ye ho kia raha hy . bunny to itny cute hoty hain na ?.
Ab se mery minde me Bunny ko daikh k ye khyal bhi aya kary ga k . Bunny to monsters bhi hoty hain what the fuckk....
Phir wo bolta hy jara daikhna waha Noblesse ki konsi team hy ...
Operator :- sir waha Germany ki one of thi best Noblesse academy ichihara .Ki best team hy 30 members ki .
Head :- that's good ....
itna bol k wo scrren p daikhny lagta jaha ab wo noblesse bhi un monsters ko daikh chuky thayy.
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Out side of black forest
idr sub Noblesse Apni Team leader Elina k order ka wait kar rhy hoty hain . jub k Elina khud wait kar rahi hoty hai k Wo bunny monsters Portal se kuch door nikal aayen us ky sath ye bhi pata chal jay k wo kitny monsters hain..
Kuch dair bad portal se sub Bunny monsters bahir aajaty hain or us village ki taraf jany lagty hain jaha Noblees ki team B hoti hy .or un k chalny se zmeen kaanp rhi thi jesy Earthquake aagya ho ...
ichihara academy ky Noblesse ny bhi aaj tak is type ky or itny gaint monster kabhi ni daikhy thay ....
Wo total 43 monster's thy or jesy hi wo portal se door pohnchty hain
Elina aagy badhty howy apna saar hila ky attack ka isharra deti hy .
Phir baqi ky 3 jobless bhi elina k sath agy badhty howy monster's pe attack karny chaly jaty hain....Or dono Defender bhi un k sath aagy badhty hain keu k defender bhi attack to kar sakty thy butt unki specialty defending thi...
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Team A ky Wizard me se jo C.Rank ka Wizard hota hy wo apny hath me pakdi green clour ki stick ko apny teammembers ki taraf karta hy or un ki Protection ky lea ek bohat hi acha but risky Spell cast kr deta .
Ye "Magical Barrier Spell:" is spell se ik wizard kisi pe bhi protection barrier laga sakta tha jo har type k physical , magical or poison gase..attack se protect karta tha.
Ab wo charoo attackers or dono defender ek green light ky protection barrier my thy ..
But is spell ky disadvantages bhi kafi thy ..is spell ki duration utni hi hoti thii jitna powerfull spell cast krny wala wizard hoga. or jub tak wo wizard enemy ki power ko face kar saky. agar enemy wizerad se zyada power full howa to protection barrier ko wo asani se tood daly ga jis se wo person to injured hoga hi jis ka protection barrier tooty ga .but wo wizard khud bhi injured ho sakta hy or maar bhi sakta tha..
Keu k wo ik C.Rank wizard tha bohat jyada strong ni tha ....
or ye bat wo apny teammates ko telepathy ki help se bata hy ke, wo protection my jaroor hain but attack sy bachny ki koshish karen jis se battlefield me kise k bhi injured hony k chances kam ho jayen gey .agar protection shield tooti ho samjh loo gayy kaam se ..
wo loog done ka sign bntaty howy un bunny monsters pe attack kar detty hain..
Elina teezi se ek monster k oper jump karti hy or wo monster usko hawa my pakady ki koshish karta hy ...but Elina Apni sword chala deti hy or us monster k hath ki sari fingers kaat kar nichy ghrr jatti hain . or us k hath se blood nikalny lagta hy wo pain ki wajha se zoor zoor se se Ghuraany lagta hy phir wo ghussy me apny dosry hath se elina ko ek punch marta hy but alina bohat furtii se us jagha se hath gyi hoti hy or us bunny monster ka hath zmeen ko phadty howy kafi nechy tak chala jata hy or Elina time waste na karty howy jump karti hy or us ki Bazoo pe aajati hy or tezzi se bhagty howy us k shoulder tak pohanchti hy.
is se pehly k wo Monster kuch samajhta Elina uk ki gardan my apni sword ghusaa deti hy or bhagty howy us ki gardan k charo taraf ghoom jati hy or us monster ko chilaaany ka time bhi nahi milta us ki gardan katt jati hy or wo nechy zammeen ki or girty howy ek dosry monster se takra jata hy
Uski wajha sy us monster ka balance bigad jata gy or wo DHAAAAAA MNM se zimeeen pe girta hy.
Wo bilkul Axe-Man k samny girta hy or Axe-man bhuchakaa reh jata hy or apny many my sochta hy agar ye mery oper gira hota to meri chatni bann gyi hoti
Phir bunny monster uthny ki koshish kar raha hota hy tabhi Elina us Axe-Man ko chila k awaz deti hy.
Elina :- Rustin tum zinda ho jaldi se usy finsh karo idiot..
Wo Axe-man jiska name Rustin tha hosh me ata hy or apna Axe hawa me uthata hy full power se Us bunny monster ki gardan pe de marta hy
KaAAccccChUUuuuKkkkkk
ki awaz ati hy or us bunny monster ki gardan kart ka ludhakti hoi dorr chal jati hy jo ek monster k pao k nechy aakar kuchli jati hy Rustin ankhee fadee ye scean daikhty hy or sochta hy agr wo apna paoun mery oper rakhta to
is tarha fight chal rhi hoti hy or wo Nobleese jis k pas bhala tha tha wo apna bhala ek bunny monster ki aankh me marta hy jo us ki aankh my ghussta hy or dosri taraf se nikal jata hy or wo bunny monster nichy gir kar tadapne lagta hy or bihat uchi uchi awaze nikal raha hota hy. Wo admi apna bhala nikalta hy phir us monster k heart pe vaar karny hi laga hota hy ke.
tabhi taylor jo kafi dorr se ye scean daikh leta hy bhagta howa is taraf arha tha or chulaty howy bolta hy
Taylor :- ouchi awaz me chalaty howy .... nahiiiin ruk jo Ozzy .
Wo bhaly wala admi jiska naam ozzy tha wo ruk jata hy or hairat se Taylors ko daikhta howy apny maan me sochta hy .
Ozzy:- (apny maan me kia Taylor ny mujhy roka is monster ko kill krny se kia ye taylor ka koi friend hy thank god me ny is ko kill nhi kia warna taylor naraaj ho jata )
itny my taylor Ozzy k pas ajata hy or us se bolta hy .
Taylor:- thanks buddy my ny tum ko sahi time pe daikh lia warna tum isko maar chuky hoty .
Wo bunny monster dard se tadap raha jota hy or chila rha hota hy .
Tabhi Taylor us ki gardan pe apni sword chala deta ...
KaccHhhUuKkk ki awaz se gardan katt jati hy. Or Taylor apny mathy se paseena saff krty howy bolta hy FFUUUUFffFFFFfFFf Thank god ye sword waqi me kaam ki nikli mery 5million blue coin waste nhi howy itna bolty hi wo apni Sword ko choom leta hy uUUUuuMmmhaaaaa
Or thodi dorr ek or injured ho chuky monster ki taraf bhag jata hy us pe attack karny or pechy mudy bina hath hilaty howy chila kr bolta hy thanks Ozzy buddy me ny sword test kar li hy ye hahahaha.
Ye monsters ki gardan kaat sakti haY
Or ozzy apna saar peet lita hy k wo kuch dair pehly kia soch raha tha .
Ye tylor gadha apni sword test krta phir rha hy jesy picnic pe aya howa hy .
Yaha jaaan pe bani hoi hy or wo apni 5million b.C.c ko pakad k baitha hy HunnnHhhhh .
is tarha wo ek ek kar k kafi monsters ko maar dalty hain butt abhi bhi 28 monster bachy howy thy jo un logo pe apny lamby lamby naakhuno waly pannjay se attack kar rhy hoty hain ya un ko apny paun k nechy kuchalny ki koshish kar rahy hoty hain .
But wo sub A.rank Noblesse thy unki Speed bohat teez thi or is fast movement ki wajha se wo un monsters k attack se easily bach jaty thy .
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Or dosri taraf B.Rank Wizard jiska naam "Brock" hota hy .wo ye sub kuch apni Observation eye se daikh raha hota hy Or apny maan my sochta hy ky kafi jyada monsters maary gey hain or abhi bhi bohat se monsters baqi hain ye monsters jyada power full to nahi hain but inki body ki skin bhi bohat hard hy.
Or hight me bhi boht jyada bady hain is lea in ko kill karny Ky lea sword-man ko unki gardan pe hi attack karna parta hy jo thoda risky hy .
Phir wo ik decision leta hy or apna plan share karta hy pori team se Or Team leader Elina se permission leta hy apny plan pe kaam karny ki ...
But Elina ko ye kuch theek nhi lagta or wo isko reject kar deti hy or jiss strategy se wo attack kar rhy thy us ko hi follow kiay rehny ka kehti hy.
but us ky baki teeno teammates Ozzy, Taylor, or Rustin .. Ko brock ka plan pasand ata hy or wo Elina se bohat ziid karty hain k wo Brock ki baat se agree ho jay . jis ki chalty Elina unki bat maan leti hy or Brock ko permission de deti hy ...
Phir brock in sub ko bolta hy k wo sub Bunny monsters pe charo alag alag direction se attack kren or un sab monsters ko ik jagha akatha kren un pe attack karty karty or phir wo un monsters se dorr ho jayen.
Wo log plan k mutabik monsters pe ik alag alag direction se ik joordar attack karty jis k wajha monsters back foot pe chaly jaty hain or ek circle me akathy ho jaty hain .. Plan ka 1st step complete ho gya tha.
Jis k chalty Brock un ko waha se dorr jany ko bolta hy or Bunny monsters canter me khady ik moty se monster pe aim kar ky ek power full Spell cast karta hy ..
Desutoroi Fō Eremento :: .Four Elements of Destruction... jo ik bohat dangrous Attack hota hy ..is attack my hawa,Pani, mitti Or aag. ek sath fused ho jaty hain or ek bohat hi powerful single attack ban jata hy . but Brock us Attack kا destruction lavel increase karny kay lea apni 30% soul power or 30% Sprite power bhi Add kar deta hy.
Or phir wo apni white clour ki stick ko us moty bunny monster ki taraf karta hy. stick k head pe bany howy moon se ik white Clour ki Strong energy generate ho kar boht jyada speed se sedha us bunny monster k chest Pe lagta hy Or .
BOoooOOOOmMmmmmm
BOooooOoooooooMmmm
ek bohat bada blast hota hy or aag ka ek bada se Gola uper ki taraf uthta hy or ahista ahista dhuwy my change ho jata hy har taraf dhowa hi dhowa phail jata hy kahin kahin aaag bhi lagi hoti hay.
A class noblesse ky mouh khuly k khuly reh jaty hain. ye sub kuch plan se hatt kar tha is lea Village my moujood sub Nobleese bhi waha aajaty hain or subhi aankhe faad kar samny ka scene daikh rhy hoty hain.
Phir jub waha se aag,dhuwaa or dhool mitti hatt'ti hy to jiss jagha wo bunny monster's thay us jagha pe bohat bada or gehra gadha ban chuka hota hy or us Four Elements ky energy blast se waha moujood sab monsters ki body tukdo me baat chuki hoti hy or wo gadha bas un monster's ky body parts or blood se bharr jata hy ...
Keu k ye ik B.Rank k wizard ka ye sub se strong attack tha or phir us ny is attack me apni 30%soul or 30%spirit power ko bhi jhoonk dia tha jis k chalty ye kisi A.Rank ky Wizard k attack k equal ho gya tha ....phir to un monster's k bachny ka koi chance hi ni tha.....
Or ye daikhty hi sub loog khusi se chilany lagty haain HuRRRRAAYyy HHhhhhurrrrayyyyy Or victory k sign bnaty hain .....
Brock ab bohat zyada thak chuka hota hy or ek pathar se tik kar baitha hota hy.. Tabhi subhi team member us k pass aty hain or usko appreciate karty hain ..
Taylor:- ary brock buddy tum ny kamal hi kar dia tum to bady chupy rustam nikly yar.
jub ky Brock koi jwaab nhi deta wo to bas fatti fatti aakhoo se us portal ko hi daikhy jaa raha tha .......
ab wo portal bohat jyada glow kar raha tha or bohat hi high lavel ki dark energy release karny laga tha...
Or phir Us portal me sy kisi janwar ka sir bahir niklta hy or brock ki roooh kaanp jati hy . or bs khamoshi se apni hath us portal ki taraf kr k ishara karta hy or ankhee band kr leta hay .
Kisi ka bhi dehan portal ki taraf nahi tha but jub wo sub brock ka ishara samjh k us portal ki taraf daikhty hain to Shock reh jaty hain.
Un subki jaan unky halaq my attak jati hy ...
phir Elina jo Brock k pass hi khadi hoi thi usy brock ki mari howi awaz sunai deti hy
Brock :- Y..yee yaha keu aya haa ye koi normal Wolf nahi hy ye to "Osag" wolf hy .jo ik mythical beast hy .. My to ab koi spell bhi cast nahi kar sakta ......
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in presidint house
Monster's k marty hi waha bethy sub log Bohat kush hoty hain or ichihara academy ki is performance se bohat kush hoty hain .
Tabhi ek operators ki dari dari awaaj us hall me goonjti hy....
Operator:- Ssss Ssiir sir idar dekhy yaha kuch gad-bad lag rhi ha
Head of criminal monitoring agency jis ka naam David tha..
David :- ary yar ab kia ho gya ...itna bolty hi wo screen ko daikhta hy or apni seat se uchal k khada ho jata hy wo portal bohat jyada dark energy release kar rha tha Us me se ik bada se WOLF nikal raha tha jo apna dosra pair portal k bahir nikal raha tha ...
jis Ki body sy blue clour ki ek dark evil energy nikal rahi thi .....
Or david Dhhhhaaaapppp se wapis apni chair pe gir jata hy or asy bolta hy jesy khud se baten kar raha ho..
David :- yyye ye nhii hoo saakta yee to "Osag" wolf hy ik mythical wolf BEAST... yaha kesy agya...Bunny monster k death k baad ye portal close ni howa tha kia?.....
Phir wo apny samny baithy president se bolta hy ...
David :- Mr.President humko waha jaldi se AA.rank Noblesse ki team ko bhejna hoga jaldi ..
German President jo David ky pas hi baitha howa tha or bs monh kholy us screen pe us wolf ko daikhy jaa rha tha..jis k lea ye sub kuch new tha keu ke wo abhi 2 month pely hi Elect ko kr president bana tha or ajj ye aaffat agye thi ..
david ki baat sunn kar wo jaldi se permission de deta hy .
German President :- yes Mr.david why not .ap ko jo bhi thek lagy wo karo bas is problem ko jaldi se solve karo .
Or david (W.N) Head quarter se contact kar k is emergency Situation ki Report unko detaa hy or AA.Rank nobleese ki ik team ko order issue karny ka bolta .. Dosri taraf se wait karny ka kaha jata hy .... Ye sun kar david phone ko zooor se table pe patakh deta hy idots nonsense situations ko samajhty hi nahi hain....
AA or S rank noblesse siraf (W.N) headqurter k Order Follow karty thy.
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"Oxag wolf " ik special type ki wolf species thi jis ky har ik wolf ko Oxag kaha jata tha .. kuch time pehly bhii ik Oxag wolf human world me Appear howa tha or us se fight karny k lea
A .or. AA.rank Noblesse ne mill kar fight ki thi or bohat mushkil se us Oxag ko maara gya tha .. Or aaj phir ik Osag wolf un k samny thy but thodi changing k sath.
keu k is barr Oxag k samny bas 14 A.rank Attack category ky or bas 12 A.rank denfender catagory ky Nobless thy .......koi A rank Madic ni tha . koi A.rank wizard ni tha .or AA.rank ka to koi nobless thaa hi ni ...... .
But Elina subki himmat bdhati hy or Sub hi A.Rank Attackers ko us wolf pe Attack or A.Rank defender's ko apny teammates ko defend karny ka bol deti hy or khud bhi aagy badh jati hy
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Out side of black Forest
"Osag" portal se bahar Aa chuka tha .wo ik normal wolf se kai gunaa bada tha .
us wolf ka clour Black tha . us ki Orange clour ki chaar eyes thi. Us ki tail pe hairs iron Nails k jesy thy jub wo apni tail jhatakta tha to wo nails kisi bullet ki tarha enemy ko lagti thi....
or us ki body Se nikal rahi Us blue clour ki Evil energy ka Aura feel kar k Taylor jo Elina ko impress karny ki koshish karta rehta tha us ki bhi hawa tight ho gie thi "Osag" ko daikh kar .. baki sub ka bhi kuch asa hi haal tha
1st of all . bat ye thi k ye unexpected situation thi ik earth realm k portal ke monsters ko kill karny k bad us hii portal se ik or monster nikal aaya ho
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ye us waqt hota hy jub kisi wajha se 2 different Dimension k path ek dosry se link ho jaty hain or kuch pata nhi chalta k portal se kia cheez nikaal aay kis type ka monster us portal se nikaly ..but ye bohat hi rarest case hota hy
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inside black Forest.
Jub us portal se wo "Osag wolf" bahir ata hy .black forest k andar meditation karta howa virgo bhi aankhe khoolta hy or "Osag Wolf" ko daikhta hy or ik Smile katy howy apny aap se kehta hy aaj ka din hi kharab hy ab ye daikho pehly bunny aay thay or ab ye Tommy(kutta) agya. is portal se koi achi chezz nhi nikal sakti kia?
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Out side of black forest .
itny me Osag Asman ki taraf daikh k ik HHooOoowLLL karta hy .
AooOooooooooooooooowhoo
Or phir un noblesse ko daikhta hy
Jo ab tak us pe attack karny aagy badh chuky thay..
Taylor's jo Elina k sath tha or wo log light ki speed se aagy badh rahy thay ....ek pal k lea uski pori life us ki aankho k samny ghoom jati hy.wo anaath tha, bachpan se uski life bohat khrab thi.phir wo kitni struggle kar k A.rank ban paya tha, or jub se wo Elina se mila tha wo usy chahny laga tha or Elina k ilawa us ka is dunya me koi nhi tha .
Life me wo jitna roya tha jitna pain feel kia tha us ny. Ab wo utna hi kush rehna chahta tha har waqt smile krty rehna chahta tha Elina k sath .
Phir wo us Wolf ki taraf daikhta hy or phir Elina ko daikhta hy jis ka dehan Us Wolf py hi tha jo apni jagha se bilkul bhi ni hila tha bss bas in sub ko hi daikh raha tha.....
Taylor sony maan me kehta hy Bekar hy sub Hum apni current position k hisab se uss wolf ko nhi hara sakty ..but me Elina ko kuch nhi hony du ga........ or is k sath hi wo apni Dragon Slyar sword ki Spirit power ko Summon karta hy jis k chalty us ki sword ka Red blade Glow karnny lagta hy us k ilawa baki sub bhi apny apny special attack Us wolf pe kar daithy hain ...........
But ye kia 14 A.rank Attacker Noblesse ky combined Attack se us wolf ko bs ik do khroch hi aay thy ....
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in president house
Davide jo sub kuch live daikh raha hota hy Attack faild hota daikh ky apny monh ko dono hatho se dhaak leta hy ..me janta tha yehi ho ga mujhy pehly hi AA.rank Nobless ki fight join karny ki permission ley leni chahye thi....... Ab wo bas bebasi se us screan pe chal rahi fight ko daikh raha hota hy .....
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phir wo Wolf apnny Clow se un pe attack karta hy jesy wo in loogo ko thapad maar raha ho usi waqt pechy se kuch defenders jup karky samny aajaty hain or Shields se apny teammates ko cover kar lety hain but ye Attack bohat powerful tha jis ki wajha se kuch defenders ki shield toot jati hain or un ko thodi mamoli se injuries bhi hoi hoti hain ....
Taylor's :- Elina is wolf ko many k bad mery sath dinner pe chalo gi na
Elins :- idiot kahi k fight pe focus karo
Wo phir se ek sath attack karty hain but tabhi wo WolF apni tail ko zoor se ghumata hy or wo nailis tezi se un noblesse ki taraf jati hain .....
Jinnn ko defenders apni shields k help se roknny ki koshish kar rahy hoty hain yaha ek problem hoti hy Defender 12 thay or attacker 14
Elina jo sab sy aagy thi wolf k is attack k lea redy nhi thi jesy hi wo nails elina ki taraf badhti hain elina apni ankhee band kar deti hy io last time us k ki aakho k samny us ki choti sis ka face aajata hy joo us ka wait kar rhi ho gi ye soch k us ki aakhoo se aaasoo nikal aaty hain..
Tabhi Taylor apny dono hath phaila ky Elina k samy aa khada hota jesy wo un Nails ko rook le ga... but wo nails uski body me ghussty howy dosri side se bhi nikal jati hain or Elina ki tarf badhti hain tabhi ik defender Elina ko apni shiled se cover kar leta hy or wo nail apni half length tak us shield me ghus ky ruk jati hain ....
Kuch seconds baad jub elina feel karti hy ky wo sahii salamat hy to wo darty darty apni aankhe kholti hy or samny daikhti hy to ussy ek shield nazar ati hy jis me wo nails ghusi padi hoti hain jin se khoon tapak raha hota hy ...
Phir wo baki subko teammate's ko daikhti hy jo faati hoi ankho se taylor ki body ko daikh rahy hoty hain jo k bilkul k black ho chuki thi taylor mar chuka tha keu k wo nails us k heart ko cheeerty how guzar gye thy....
Elina un sub ki nazro ko follow karti hy to usko taylor ki dead body nazaar ati hy or wo shocked ho jati hy ...
Kia taylor ny mery lia apni jaan de di wo ladkhadaty qadamoo k sath chalti hoi us k pass jati hy phir usy taylor k hath me wo sword nazar ati hy or us ki baten yad ati hain ye sword me ny 5million blue Cristal my purchase ki hy .... Ekina is wolf ko marny k bad mery sath dinner pe chalo gi
Elina whi zmeen pe girr jati hy or phoot phoot k rony lagti hy or taylor ka sar apni goud me rakh leti hy...
Ozzy ko yad ata hy Taylor ny jub usy bola tha :- thanks Ozzy buddy me ny sword test kar li hy hahahaha ye monsters ki gardan kaat sakti haY
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Achanak sy black forest k bady bady treee girny lagty hain wo sub ek line me gir rahy thay jesy koi cheez bohat tezzi se un ki taraf arhi thi..
Keu k bohat bady bady darakht kafi speed se toot rahy thay jis ki awaz bohat ochi thi or door door tak sunai day rahi rhi isi wajha se Wo sub Noblesa to kia wo Wolf or president House me bathy drone operator's ny bhi apna focus black forest p kar dia tha
David :- (apny maan my )ab ye nayi mubsibat kia hy .....
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Phir wo sub daikhty hain samny se ek purple light bohat tezi se ati hy or phir wo 2 part's me devide ho jati hy ek part jaa kar us portal ko lagta hy or dosra us wolf ko jo us portal my jump karny laga tha .....
Ye Virgo ki mala k purple mootii thy joo us portal ko jakad chuky tha or ab wo us portal k charo traf ik cross ki shape me bohat fast speed me ghoom rahy thay ..or wo portal jagha jagha se crack hony laga tha.
or us mala ka ik motii jiska size kafi jyada increase ho chuka tha tha wo kisi football k jesy bar bar us wolf ko akar lagta tha or wo wolf uudd kar dorr jaa girta tha kabi idhar to kabhi udhar....
Or kisi ko samjh nhi arhi thi akhir ye ho kia raha hy keu k un ko bs ik purple light nazar arhi thi or ye kia cheez thi kisi ko nahi malom tha but wo wolf achy se janta tha k ye purple clour ki light kia hy ise lea wo is power ko sense karty hi wapis portal me kood k bhagny laga tha but ab us ka bura waqat start ho chuka tha ..
Or phir booom ik blast k sath wo portal toot jata hy or waha sy gayab ho jata hy
Or phir virgo ki us purple mala ky wo sary mooti jo us portal ko tood chuky thy wo ab kisi bullet ki tarha us wolf ki body my ghuss jaaty hain or wo wolf boht jooor se chilany lagta hy or tadapny lagta hy....
Elina e subb bohat shock se daikh rhi thi or Us wolf ki ye halat daikh k us ko bohat sukoon mill raha hota hy ....
Kuch hi second me Wo mooti us wolf ki sari energy absorb kar lety hain.....or phir wo bady wala mooti us k sar pe joor se lagta hy or wo wolf wahi gir jata hy keu k us wolf k soul bhi ab us mala my capture ho chuki thi .......
phir wo purple light jis speed se yaha tak aii thi usi speed se wapis chali jati hy ...
Sub k monh khuly aankhi fati hoti hain ye abhi howa kia tha ye kia cheez thi bs 2 .3 minute me hi "Osag" wolf khatm kar gyi...or portal bhi tood gyi thi...
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in Prisedent house..
Life ka sub se bada Shock .
... David ko laga tha ......
David apny face pe thapad mar rha tha SLLAAAAAAPPPP slaapppp.
David :- kia me khwab daikh raha hu? Kia us ny Pehly portal toda or bad me monster ko mara tha ?
Portal ko toodna impossible hy Operator suno oyyy operator sun rahy ho na.. Kia tum ny ye sub record kia?
Waha jitny bhi Operator's khud shoccked thay ... wo subb professional log thay or janty thy k ik portal ko todna impossible hy ..
But aaajj ye baat galat sabit ho chuki thi portal bhi totaa tha or Osag wolf bs 2 Ya 3 minute my hi finish ho gya tha ..
David :- chilaty howy ary Bolty keu nhi ho tum loog
Operator :- yes sir every thing is recorded but wo kia cheez thi wo clear nazar ni i bs ik purple light hi lag rhi thi.
Everyone shock ...& slient...
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Out side of black forest..
Sub log shocked us purple light ki wapis jata daikh rahy thy
Or phir wo light black Forest me jaa kr gayab ho jati hy
Elina bhi usy hi daikh rhi hoti hy or or roty howy kehti hy
Elina:- tum jo koi bhi ho kia tum thodi dair pehly nahi aa sakty thay
itna bol kar wo usi taraf daikh rhi hoti hy us ka dil keh raha tha k wo jo koi bhi usy sunn pa rha hy wo jaroor jawab de ga ...
Or wo sub log ik baar phir se shocked keu ke is baar usi taraf se ik golden clour ki light aaarhi hoti hy jo sedha Taylor ki body my ghuss jati hy or Taylor ka clour joo black ho chuka tha or bohat tezi se normal hony lagta hy us ky ghauw bharny lagty hain ..ye vigo ki wohi purple maala thi .ab is ka clour golden tha jo taylor ko heal kar rhi thi.. kuch sec bad taylor ki body bilkul normal ho jati or phir wo light taylor ki body se nikal k wapis usi tarah chali jati hy .keu k ab taylor saans ley raha tha jo sub ko feel ho raha tha
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Brock jo k ek B.rank wizard tha wo bohat ghor se us light ko daikh raha tha jo taylor ko heal kar k wapis jaa rhi rhi ... Phir wo bolta hy ye light boundless hy ..me achy se janta hu asa koi magic or asa koi wizard nahin hy jo ik mar chuky insan ko phir se zinda kar dy . ye bat kisi ko btaon ga to kon many ga.......
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in president house ....
David aankhy fady us golden light ko daikh raha tha jo Taylor ki black body my ghusi thi or usko heal tonnahi balkynus ko dobara se jindaa kar k wapis chali gye thi .....
Or mara howa Noblesse taylor zinda ho chuka tha ...
Wo kafi dair tak chup chap betha raha tha jo kuch ajj un ny daikha tha ye ik sapny jesaaa tha...... Kia abi jo kuch howa ye sachy hy wo bar bar kud se sawal krta tha....
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Elina :- shock se kuch bol nhi paa rhi thi wo kabhi us taraf dekhti jaha wo golden light andhere me gum ho gye thi ... Or kabhi taylor ko dekhti jo kuch dair pehly mar gya tha wo ab zinda tha saans le rha tha....
Phir wo us taraf dekhty howy dhere se bolti hy.. jaha se wo light ai thi ...
Elina.. Thank you my Savior.
Or is k sath hi sub ko zmeen kampti hoi mehsos hoti hy or halka sa blast hota hy or andheri raat me ek golden light black forest se niklti hy or elina k pas se guzarty howy aasman me gumm ho jati hy
Tabhi Elina ko kuch mehsos hota hy wo apni jecket ki pocket me hath dalti hy to us k hath me ik golden clour ka mooti chamak raha hota hy ....... Wo sochti hy ye kia hy or ye yaha kesy aagya......but kuch soch kar wo khamoshi se usko wapis apny pas rakh leti hy ...
Baki Sub monh fady usy light ko daikhty reh jaty hain jo un ky bohat qarreb sy guzri thi or unnko pata nhi chaal paya tha ye kia cheez thii ...... .
ye kon tha Ye VirGo tha..
jo apna mission successfully complete kar k waha se chala gya thaa shayad apny kisi new mission ko complete karny k lia .....
To be continue ....
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