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Thriller LOVE or LUST
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Writing Update aaj raat tak.....
I am regular readerBhai I have heard ur request ..FOR my default of writing short updates ....Today I will post mega update
Hope u will stay connected through this thread...
Me 2....# regular reader(LOL)
LOOKING AT Hero power ....I am more eager to know about the villians....
This story is going really smoothly....Hats off for the writer
This story is going really smoothly....Hats off for the writer
Your writing skills are Superb and would surely bring out a marvelous story
Thanks for ur review dear friend...
And hope I can meet ur expectation!!
It is the right point raised.
It would help the author
It would help the author
LOOKING AT Hero power ....I am more eager to know about the villians....
This story is going really smoothly....Hats off for the writer
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Update 31
Av ACP vi sashank se bahut khus lag raha tha....Sashank ki immandari dekhke ACP av VIRUS ko pakad jane ke ummid tik chuki thi .....Av wo nischint ho raha tha aur Sashank ko dekhkar proud feel kar raha tha...
Aur ACP Ko dekhte huwe:SAMJO.... AV VIRUS TO GAYA KAAMSE....
Ab aage.....
Udhar Bikki apna business samhalne ke liye chala jata hai...
Ek bahut badi building jisme likha tha Sona Enterprizes yese lagta tha puri Building hi kaach ki hai....aur bahar se dekhne waale ek baar uss buildingko piche mudke naa dekhe yesa ho hi nahi sakta.....Haa yehi se Bikki apna real estate ka Business ko dekhta hai...
Bikki ka enter hote hi guards salam dene lagtey hai aur Uska personal secretery Bikki ke piche piche chalne lagti hai....Bikki vi apna pehna huwa coat utarkar usko pakadne ke liye deta hai aur wo vi haste huwe Bikki ke coat ko apne haatho me rakhkar thumka lagate huwe chal rahi thi....
Secretary kya sali pura ka pura model thi.....tight coat pant ...shirt ke do button khule huwe thye....black shoes black coat halka make up..... pataka lag rahi thi .....
Intro...
Name : khusbu Hirani...
Jaise naam waise hi thi.....Husan ki malika ....agar kisi room me vi chali jaye unke khusbu se room ki mehak hi kuch khas hojati thi....And bhai its complete natural thoda bahut perfune wagera to laga leti thi par Ye alag tha ....unke badan se aane wali mehak aur khusbu kuch alag hi thi....chehra bilkul gora baal vi thoda bahut curly aur kisi vi angle se Indian to nahi dikhti thi....Bas pichle saal hi to london se wapas aayi thi to ye to banta hai boss....
Aur sabse khas unka height tha jo lagbhag 5 8 hogi .....bahut lambi dikhti thi....Bikki se thodi xoti par dekhne me aisa nahi lagta tha ....Yesa lagta ki wo dono ki height barabar hi hai.....As girls always looks taller dont know why....
Khusbu koi aisi waisi ladki nahi thi.....She was the daughter of MR.RAJPUT HIRANI one of the billionaire in london....jo sayad Bikki vi nahi janta tha .....khusbu vi apne baap ki tarah khud ka ek Business kholna chahti thi .....karib ded sal pehle Kuch business proposal ke liye Rajput India aaye huwe thye Bikkise milne ke liye aur apne pita ke saath wo vi aayi thi...aur isi business ke silsile me usne pehli baar Bikki ko dekhi thi....
Jab wo log apna business propasal deal kar rahey thye to Bikki ka self confidence dekhke wo heran hogayi thi .....Itna young hone ke bawajud vi Bikki kisi professional ki tarah Proposalka anjaam deraha tha....jo kabiliyat taarif thi...
Bas 20 saal ki umar me hi Bikki ne apna empire khada kar liya tha....
Aur isi baat se khusbu Bikki ko apna role model maane lagi thi aur unke karib rehkar unse kuch sikhna chahti thi ...aur raat hote hi wo apne papa se permission lene chali jati hai...
Khusbu: Dad..I want to say something?
Hirani: ok....tell me sweetheart! Whats the matter?
Khusbu: I want to stay closer with Bikki!
Hirani: What?
Khusbu: arey baba.... I want to learn from him so...I want to stay closer with him as u know I want to do something on my own...
Hirani: Oh to ye baat hai....Ok wait mein Bikki se baat karta hu .
Khusbu: No papa I want to do something on my own ....please stay away from this...agar unko mein aapki beti hu pata chala to sayad wo mujhe specially treat karega jisse mein unka mind set ko kabhi nahi samaj paungi
Hirani: haha So? What'ya wanna do?
Khusbu:M planning for appointing for his personal secretary post...jisse mein unke karib rehkar unse kuch sik paungi...
Hirani: umm that's better idea .....So kabse start karogi
Khusbu: kalse hi....
Hirani: haha Why so hurry ..? I think u should just take some time before taking descision
Khusbu: No dad I have made up my mind ' so kal hi appointment fix karke ye job hasil kar lungi
Hirani: so what you think.....kya wo tumko apna secretary rakhne ke liye tayar hoga....
Jisko sunke khusbu hasne lagti hai....
Khusbu: Oh dad believe in me, I have all the requirements that's needed for this job
Hirani: Ok beta dhyaan rakhna .....
Fir kal hi khusbu Bikki se milke Bikki ke personal secretary ka job haasil karleti hai.....as she was highly qualified for this job
Yehi hai khusbu ki kahani now back in present....
Bikki sidha apne cabin me jaakar apna seat me beth jata hai aur jatey hi ek cigratte uthakar jala deta hai aur ek lambi kaash ke baad fuu karke khusbu ke taraf dekhne dekhne lagta hai...
BIKKI: so what's going on?
Khusbu: M fine sir...
Bikki: Haha Mein tumhari baat nahi kar raha hu..... whats going on here ....? Itna din nahi aa paya so Yehapar koi pblm to nahi hai na....
Khusbu: No sir ....everything's fine
Bikki: Yeah....tum ho to mujhe koi fikar hi nahi rehti hai....U said that u Wanna start ur own business now I think u r ready!!
Khusbu: abhi to bahut kuch sikhna hai aapse
Bikki: haha mein kuch nahi sikha sakta tumko ....U have already overtaken me in this race ...tumhara aatey hi hamara business ka flow kitna high hogaya tha waise meine to kuch nahi kiya tha saav tumne hi to kiya hai! U r too good and thanks for ur help
Khusbu apne taarif sunkar bahut khuss lag rahi thi....Bikki ne aaj pehli baar khusbuki taarif ki thi
Khusbuko hamesha bikki as a employer hi treat karta tha....unse jyada relation nahi banaya tha to khusbu se business ke siwa aur koi baate nahi karta tha....par aaj Bikki ka mood bahut fresh lag raha tha isiliye khusbu ke taarifo ka ful baandh raha tha...
Bikki: So khusbu For ur hardwork and determination I want to give u something? Plz request anything u like
Khusbu: Really?(Looking so happy rt now)
Bikki khusbu ko khus hote hue dekhkar khud muskurane lagta hai...
Bikki: Yup anything u like? But dont ask me to pick up the star
Aaj pehli baar Bikkiko majaak karte huwe dekhkar Khusbu vi shocked ho gayi thi....warna kaam ke time par Bikki majaak to dur ki baat hasta tak nahi tha ....He works making damn serious face.
Khusbu: Sir aap thik to ho naa....First time aaj aapko aise khulkar muskurate huwe dekh rahi hu
Bikki: haha aisa kya.....arey bhai mein to aisa hi hu ...to chalo aaj tum mujse kuch mang lo ?
Khusbu: Sir I need ur 30 minute?
Bikki(man me) sali benchod kitni fast hai ye ladki....ek bar muskura ke bola kya tha sidha hi Sex ke liye invite kardiya....
Bikki(shocked hone ka natak karke): what?
Khusbu: sir me aapke saath bethkar ek cup coffe pina chahti hu....
Bikki man me aapne aapko hi gaali dene lagta hai....
Bikki(man me): sala mein kya soch raha tha....fuck iss soniyaki bachi ne mujhe pura bigaad diya hai har baatko negatively sochne laga hu..
Aise hi chup betha dekhkar khusbu fir kehti hai....
Khusbu: sorry sir .....
Bikki(hos me aake): sorry kyui .....chalo avi chalte hai
Khusbu khus hoke Bikki ke piche piche chalne lagti hai....aur dono hi Bikki ke gaadime beth jati hai....
Bikki: So what about our destination?
Khusbu: jaha aap chaye sir....
Bikki fir sidha dreamland resort ki taraf aapna gaadi ghuma deta hai....
Dreamland resort Bikki ka favourite spot tha waha ke environment Bikki ko jyada achhi lagti thi.....
Fir waha pahuchkar Bikki apna gaadi park karke Khusbu ke saath andar chala jata hai....aur ek cabin me jaakar ek cigraate fir utha leta hai....cigratte pi hi raha tha ki waiter Bikki ko ghoor ghoorke dekh raha tha....arey yehi waiter hi to tha jab wo soniya ke saath yehapar aaya tha...
Waiter(man me): Bahut lucky hai....Sala fir ek aur ladki ko le aaya...wo bhi itni khoobsurat ....kismat me ho to kya ho nahi sakta kehkar aapne iss life ko kosne lagta hai
Par sayad usko nahi pata ki kismat yese hi kisike upar meherbaan nahi hoti.....iske liye bahut mehnat....ek biswaas aur dreedh sankalp hona chaiye
Aur wo waiter bikki ke saamne aakar...
Waiter: Sir can I get ur order?
Bikki: 1 Iced americano...aur tum kya lena pasand karogi
Khusbu:Just 1 normal coffe....I think I will go with latte(Coffe name)
Waiter order likhke waha se nikal jata hai....
Bikki fir khusbu kie taraf dekhkar...
Bikki: To aage ka kya irada hai....
Khusbu: soch rahi hu ki apna khud ka business start karu....
Bikki: to isme sochne wala kaunsi baat hai....u go on carry ur dream...agar koi paresani ho to mujhe jarror yaad karlena....
Khusbu: Thanks sir but I am not mentally prepared
Bikki: Okay take ur time...If u need any suggestion plz dont hesitate to ask me
Khusbu: thank you so much for ur kind words....
Bikki: Chodo iss baatko ....I want to be ur friend? MUJSE dosti karogi?
Khusbu: Why not sir? I would be more happy
Bikki: Dost bol raha hu aur tum sir keh rahi ho.....ye kaisi baat hogayi yar....Mujhe tum sirf Bikki kaho
Khusbu: Ye kaise ho sakta hai.....
Bikki: try to karo...
Khusbu fir sarmakar : Bikki kehkar apne najre jhuka leti hai.....jisko dekhkar av Bikkiko jor ki hasi aagayi thi....
Bikki: haha ....so funny ....plz dont make that face
Kehkar aur jor jor se hasne lagta hai. ...
Bikki ko haste huwe dekhkar usko thoda himmat aajati hai....aur relax feel karne lagti hai
Khusbu: mein aapse kuch puch sakti hu?
Bikki:Yeah...go on
Khusbu: Are u in relationship?
Bikki: what ? Hell no...av mere jaisa aadmi ke saath koun apna jindaagi barwaad karna chahegi
Khusbu: Aapke saath barwaad nahi jindagi sawar jayegi....U r goodlooking , handsome , intelligent , well established .....sabhi to hai
Bikki(serious hoke): U r looking just surfacely., U dont know me quite well thats y u r talking these nonsense
Bikki ko naaraz hote huwe dekhkar khusbu bahut upset hone lagi thi fir bikki situation ko samajkar....
Bikki: To kya tum meri Girlfriend banna chahogi?
Av upset wala face achanak shocked wala face ban gaya tha....Bomb fodna kise kehte hai av pata chal gaya tha khusbu ko....kuch bolne ke liye answer hi nahi bachi thi to wo aankhe jhukakar chup rehjati hai....
Bikki: Dekha na.... koi mere jaisa aadmi ke saath relation banane ko tayar nahi hoti hai....av tum samaj gayi hogi
Aur isike saath khusbu Bikki ki taraf dekhkar haa mein sar hila deti hai....
Bikkiko kuch samaj nahi aaraha tha ye haa kiske liye hai iska do meaning hosakta tha ek to wo relation me basne ke liye tayar hai or dusri Usne admit karliya ki Bikki ke saath koi relation rakhna nahi chahti.....Av aap hi soch lijiye ye haan kisliye thi)
Location: Police department
Sashank apne table pe bethke chaye pi raha tha ...usiwakt ACP waha aajata hai....jisko dekhke wo khada hokar salute karne lagta hai...
ACP: To Sashank tumhare chanbeen kaha tak pohuchi hai.....
Sashank: Mein kosish kar raha hu.....Meine ye pata kar liya hai..ki They r sleeper cells....
ACP: What? How do u know that?
Sashank: 1 saal pehle ki haadse ke baad fir wo log kya rahe thye kisiko pata nahi agar wo log itna powerful hai to koi na kand jarror karte honge par nahi Virus ka koi naam nahi aaya tha koi cases me vi virus ka naam nahi juda tha... av achanak Virus ne fir aapna dehsak fehlayi hai iska matlab wo log sleeper cells hai ...unko avi order mila gaya tha isiliye unnlogo ne yesa kuch kiya hai....
ACP: Agar aisa hai to humlog unka kuch nahi bigad saktey jab tak unka leader nahi pakad jayega av to ye case aur muskil hogaya hai sashank.....aasha karta hu yesa naa ho
Sashank: aap nischint rahiye sir mein unlogo ko pakad lunga
(Ye saab sasank isiliye kehraha tha jisse wo ACP ka bharosa jeet sake aur bakhubi usne ACP ka bharosa jeet liya tha)
ACP: I think Bikki aur Virus ka kuch samband hai.....unlogo ka lafda hogaya tha isiliye usne minister ko maar dala hoga....Bina sabut ke hum log kuch kar vi nahi sakte inn bade logo ko.... tum sabut ikatthe kar lo
Bikki par doubt aane wala hai ye sashank pehle hi janta tha ...to wo iske liye prepared tha....
Sashank: Nahi sir Bikki ka unse koi samband nahi ho sakta kyuiki mein Bikki ko bachpan se janta hu....Balki wo mera Bhai barabar hai par mein av Bikki par vi aapne nigrani rakh lunga......Agar unnlogo ka koi samband nikla to saabse pehle mein hi usko goli mardunga.....Ye inspector sashank ka waada hai(sareaam jhuth bol raha tha par ACP ko wo jhuth sunkar aapne aap par fakr ho raha tha
.....)
Fir ACP waha se nikal jata hai aur Sashank jor jor se hasne lagta hai.....
Sashank(man mein): KUTTA KARE WOOF WOOF....
ACP NIKLA bewakoof....
VIRUS KI NAAMPE GAADNA HAI JHANDA....
ISKI GAAND ME PEL DUNGA *** ....
koi 2 min ke baad sashank jor se chilla padta hai...
HATTT MADERCHOD.....
To be continue...........
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Brilliant Fantabulastic update.....
BIKKI ON FIRE
Yeah its true.....Padna bas shuru kiya aur khatam
Bhai take it as consideration no offend....
Try for longer one....
if u feel bad....
Nice update......waiting for next update.......
LOOKING AT Hero power ....I am more eager to know about the villians....
This story is going really smoothly....Hats off for the writer
Update posted....
Thanks for the love and support....