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[amita]

Jitna zabardast update utna hi umda review

Superb update and wonderful revenge.
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Ye to kamal ho gya matlb police walo k saamne commissioner ko mar diya aur itne time tak na govt ne koi action liya na police force ne. Thoda over ho gya but story h koi nahi.
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Par ye police wale kaand se ek positive ye nikla ki virus k publicity sab jagah ho hi gye aur shera aur nargesh ki maut se jayada commissioner ki maut dangerous thi aur shayad issi liye ab police itni pareshan h present mai bikki ko marne aur virus ko khatam karne k liye jo unnhone sashank ko lagaya iss case par.
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Iss k alawa factory k malik ki sahi band bajayi aur jo uss ne dusro k liye kiya end mai khud ussi se mar gya superb.
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Ab dekhte h sona ka kya reaction hota h basti walo k liye air fir subah bikki ka samna kaise karti h wo.
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Bahut hi zabardast update hain hur Bikki ne Virus ka sikka jamwa diya hai aur logo me ab Virus ka khof hone laga hai.
Good going, keep it up

Jitna zabardast update utna hi umda review

Lambe samay ke baad aapko yehapar dekhkar bahut khusi mili...

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And thanks for ur review

 

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Update 47
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BIkki shera ko khichte huwe apne gaadi ke taraf le chalta hai aur shera ko dekte huwe...

BIkki: tujhe to mein jee varke pyar karunga..

Ab aage...

BBikki sherako apne saath basti ke taraf le chalta hai....aur unke admi Bikki ke piche piche horn bajate huwe aarahe thye....jiski awaaz sunkar basti wale sabhi ghar ke bahar nikalkar Gadiyon ki taraf dekhne lagte hai...

Bikki ne Basti ke bich chourahe par jaakar gaadi ko drift lagate huwe rok diya....aur gaadi se utar gaya....

Fir kuch der basti walo ki taraf ghusse se dekhte huwe gaadi ki dusri darwaza kholkar shera ko bahar khich ke nikalta hai....

Bikki(Basti walo ko dekhkar): kya isse darte ho tum log ...(Fatak ek punch Shera ke pet par)...iss kutte se darte ho(Fir ek fatak)...

Sabhi log waha par Tamasha dekh rahe thye ...jab vi Bikki shera ko maarta tha unke dil me ek thandak pahuchti thi...Chehre par ek khusi si jhalkne lagti thi...

BIkki(shera ke taraf dekhkar): Dekh be sale....Tu apne aap ko raja samajne laga tha...Hoga tu Inn namardo me sehensah par saale tune galat aadmi ke saath panga liya hai...Av tujhe koi nahi bacha sakta ...dekhle ye jindagi ki aakhri ghadi...

SHera avi vi rassi se bandha huwa tha ....Muh par patti lagi huwi thi aur kuch bol nahi paaraha tha ...par dard aur dar ka mishran uske chehre se saaf jhalak rahi thi....Rehem ke liye aankhe taras gaye thye par Kya usko rehem milna tha...Obviously not...coz its Bikki

Bikki(sashank ke taraf dekhke): bhai zara ek razor blade do...

Sashank Bikki ko ek dharila razor ka blade pakadwa deta hai....aur Bikki uss razor ko pakadke shera ke taraf dekhke ghusse se ek mukka jad deta hai...

Avi kuch second hi huwa tha ki Bikki shera ka pehna huwa kapda pura ka pura faad deta hai...Underwear ko xodke

Shera nam aankho ke saath Bikki ko dekh raha tha...Aage uske saath kya hone wala hai soch sochkar hi Underwearme pishav nikal chuka tha...

Bikki: saale mut raha hai .... teri maa ki(kehte huwe sherake muh par ek mukka jad deta hai jisse uski aage ki do daat jameen par gir gayi)

SHera dard se haanf raha tha .... par shaitan ke aage ye sab kaha chalne wali thi....jab unn nanhi se bacho ko jindaa jala diya tha tab kitna dard hua hoga....jab factory par laasho ki line lagayi thi tab unke bache par kaisa bita hoga...Shera sachme rehem ke layak vi to nahi tha

Bikki shera ko wahi jameen par gira deta hai aur uske sar ko majbuti se pakadkar jameen par ghisne lagta hai...jisse uske chehre se khaal noch gayi thi....khoon ka katra katra beh raha tha ....Basti walo jo avi tak Khus hokar shera ka tadapna dekh rahe thye ab Khusi to mano kayi gum ho gayi thi...shera ko yesi halatme dekhke unke insaniyat jag gayi thi par roke to rokega koun .... wo log chahte thye shera ko buri tarah se maarna par ye buri tarah iska meaning kya tha .... ye unnlogo ke samaj se pare thi...aur aaj itni behremi ko dekhke wo log khud ke sarir par vaari hone jaisa aavas hone lagta hai....Par ye to just suruwati khel hi tha aur aage kya hone wala hai ye to unlogo ne kabhi socha tak nahi tha.....

Bikki fir waha se nikalkar basti ke taraf chala jata hai aur Khiye lage huwe kil aur ek patthar ko lekar fir wapas chala aata hai...

Aate hi Shera ko apne muthi se pakadkar chehra upar ke taraf karke Uss kileko aankhe par gad deta hai....jisse uski aankhe fat gayi thi aur khoon aankho se hote huwe behkar jameen par tapak ke gir rahi thi....shera dard se xatpata raha tha aur udhar basti ke logo me vi ek cheekh nikal jati hai mano ki ye saav unke upar horaha ho....wo log dar ke maare kaampne lage thye ...shera ka haal dekhke kisike paas vi hilne ki sahas nahi jut rahi thi....shaitaniya khel jisko dekhke shaitan ka rooh vi kaamp jaye par yeha bikki ke chehre par ek vi bhaaw nahi dikh raha tha....Av khud hi socho ki murgi ko halal karte wakt unn murgi kaatne walo ko koi asar padta hai bas yesa hi haal Bikki par tha ....fark sirf itna tha ki wha par murgi nahi thi balki ek jinda aadmi tha....

BIkki ek ek karke sheraki dono aankhe afod deta hai....shera dard ke mare Per idhar udhar maar raha tha par iski jehen me itni sakti kaha thi ki wo waha se xut nikle....

Bikki uske upar koi rehm naa dikhate huwe usko ulta karke uske pith par razor se kaatte huwe kuch likhne lagta hai....

VIRUS

Aur shera ko wohi xodke Basti waalo ke taraf dekhke....

Bikki: Tum log mujhe Avi shaitan samaj rahe hoge....kaatil soch rahe hoge...

HAA MEIN SHAITAN HU...
RAKT KI NADI BAHAUNGA....
HAIWANIYAT KO DUSRE PIDIPAR PAHUCHAUNGA...
SAALO KO JINDA NAHI XODUNGA...
AUR ANTME..
RAJA KEHLAUNGA

BIKKI: aur sun be hijado agar kisine iski maddat karne ki koshish ki ya fir koi iska sahara bana to sach kehta hu ....isse vi buri mout dunga....rehn do ise isi halatme...Mout ke liye yamaraaj ko pukarega...vagwan se binti karega ...av se iski ek ek aakhri pal jinda laash banke rahega...Tadap tadapkar marega ...ek ek xen sadiyon ki lagegi ...keede vanvanayenge....makhi kaat khayegi....kutte noch dalenge....cheekhega har pal mout ki pratikshya karega ....rehen de ise yehipar saala harami Bache ko mardiya...ek budhi aaurat ko mar diya ...saale kutte mar wahi par ..

TO BE CONTINUE...

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[Sonika]

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Update 48(Mega update)
"The end of Long FLASHBACK"
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BIKKI: aur sun be hijado agar kisine iski maddat karne ki koshish ki ya fir koi iska sahara bana to sach kehta hu ....isse vi buri mout dunga....rehn do ise isi halatme...Mout ke liye yamaraaj ko pukarega...vagwan se binti karega ...av se iski ek ek aakhri pal jinda laash banke rahega...Tadap tadapkar marega ...ek ek xen sadiyon ki lagegi ...keede vanvanayenge....makhi kaat khayegi....kutte noch dalenge....cheekhega har pal mout ki pratikshya karega ....rehen de ise yehipar saala harami Bache ko mardiya...ek budhi aaurat ko mar diya ...saale kutte mar wahi par ..

Ab aage...


Shera av apni jindagi ka aakhri wakt gin raha tha....apni karmo ka paschatap karke khud jinda laash banke jameen par gira pada hua tha....Usko naa to koi ummid dikh rahii thi aur naa hi koi aas .... har ek sec mout ki ghanti bajate huwe guzr rahi thi....Fir wo pal vi aa hi gaya jab shera ne iss dharti se yamalog ka rasta chun liya...Shera av vagwan ka pyara ho chuka tha

Shera ki laash Jameen par kutte ki tarah sad raha tha...Waha par koi ek aadmi vi uss laash ko hatane nahi gaya tha....Jitni nafraat Bikki shera se karta tha unse kai guna nafrat basti wale karte thye....Wo log jaha par shera ki itni behremi se katal hone se dar rahe thye utni hi dil ko sukoon milta tha jab unke dimaag me shera ki kartuto ka khayal aata....

Shera aaj khud ki paap ki samundar me khud doub gaya tha....wo kehte hai na

"Jaisi karni waisi varni"

Aaj shera ko apne karam ka fal mil chuka tha.....unn choote massomo ki aasu aaj shera pe baras gayi thi...Unn sahido ki beerta aaj rang layi thi .... Uss bidhwa maa ki pukar aaj vagwan ne sun liya tha jiska natija aaj ye huwa ki shera kutte ki mout mara gaya ...

Udhar nargesh(factoryka maalik) ko jab khabar mili ki shera mar chuka hai to usko ek jhatka lag gaya ....usne ye kabhi socha tak nahi tha ki shera jo apni takaat ke rutwe se pure deshme apna khouf failaya hua tha apna khudka empire khada kiya hua tha wo aaj mara gaya...

Shera ki mout ki khabar sunke nargesh aag babula ho jata hai...Nargesh ghusse me commisioner ko cal karne lagta hai...

Commisner: Jee boliye Nargesh saab

Nargesh: sale randwa hai tu .... itna paisa kharch karke tujhe commisioner banaya tha par saaale tu to randwa nikla

COmmisner (ghusse me): apni jawaan samhalkar baat karo...

Nargesh: kya kaha rey tune? Tu merese ulti baat kar raha hai...Saale tujhe to main abhi dikhata hu

Commisner nargesh ki baate sunkar dar gaya tha ...aur fir narmi se pesh aane lagta hai

Commisner: Maaf karna nargesh saab...galti hogayi...aap mujhe batao to sahi baat kya hai

Nargesh: shera mar gaya hai....usko kisine maar diya hai

Commisner iss baat se anjaan tha aur jab use pata chala ki shera mar gaya to wo khud ek baar jhalla jata hai...

COmmisner: what? Kaise kisne kiya ye sab

NArgesh: sale tujhe maine ghas charne ke liye commisner nahi banaya ....jaldi se pata kar ye kisne kiya warna samaj le bikhari ki tarah tu road par bikh maangta ghumega

COmmisner: aap fikar mat karo mein avi puri police department ko laga deta hu....aap bas mujhe 2 ghante ki mohlat dijiye

Nargesh: chal thik hai ...kehte huwe cal rakh deta hai aur daaru peene beth jata hai ..

AVi karib karib 3 ghanta bit chuka tha ....commisner ne koi cal nahi kiya to khud nargesh fir commisner ko cal karne lagta hai par commisner phone recieve nahi kar raha tha to usko bahut ghussa chadne lagta hai par theek usiwakt nargesh ke mbl par uske aadmi ka fone aajata hai...

Nargesh: haa bol

Commisner mar gaya hai (fone par)

Nargesh: abey kya bol raha hai....Commisner hai wo koi raaha chalta bikhari nahi ki uski mout itni aashani se ho jaye

Sach kehta hu bhai...commisner mar chuka hai...suna hai ki kisi virus ne maar diya.(fone pe)

Nargesh(chounk kar): avi avi to isse baat huwi thi....ye Kaisi bimari aagayi ki bas ghante var me hi aadmi ko maar de

Nahi bhai...mein wo virus ki baat nahi kar raha ... ye virus kuch aur hai....Lagta hai ye bahut badi takat hai.. karib 200 police officerke saamne hi commisnerko unnlogone maar diya...lagta hai ye bahut badi sangathan hogi....Bhai aap apna khyal rakhna ....Wo aapko xodega nahi...av unka sikar aap ho

Nargesh jo avi nashe ki halatme aapne aapko bada takatwar samaj raha tha ....av uski nasha kahi gum ho gayi thi....Jab baat jaan par aati hai to ache acho ka bura haal kardeti hai...

Avi yehi haal nargesh par tha...usne to ye kabhi nahi socha tha ki ek din yesa vi aayega jab wo puri tarah se akela pad jayega....

NArgesh(fone par): Koun hai ye log? Kaise dikhte hai...

:mujhe nahi pata bhai....suna hai ki sabhi ne chehre par mask lagaya tha....Kaale rang ki coat aur pant lagaya hua tha aur unke coat ke piche likha gaya tha VIRUS...ye koun hai kaisa dikhte hai kisiko nahi malum bhai..

Nargesh: aur wo police officer kya dekh rahe thye jab wolog commisner ko mar raha tha...

: Bhai wo log bahut takatwar hai....Sabhi ke sabhi professional hai...unn police walo ko apne kabje me leliya tha ....karib 2000 log thye

Nargesh: 2000 .....kya bak raha hai

: Sach kehta hu bhai....Aap apna dhyan rakhna ....mein av fone rakh raha hu..mein nahi chahta ki mein vi khatre me pad jau

NArgesh: meri baat sun to sahi....Hello Hello
Par udhar se koi jawaab nahi mil raha tha iska matlab usne call kat diya tha....

NArgesh usko gaali dete huwe fone fek deta hai...aur Sochne lag jata hai ki av kya karna hai par usko koi samaj nahi aarahi thi to wo jaldi hi ghar se nikalkar underground hone ke liye jaise hi bahar nikla ....udhar bahar ka haal dekh ke wo fir ghar ke andar doud kar chala aata hai...

Jee haan....Bahar Bikki apne aadmiyon ke saath aachuka tha....Nargesh darke mare ghar me andar jaakr chup raha tha...

BIkki darwaza todke aandar chala aata hai...aur room by room check karne lagta hai...Bikki non stop dheemi aawaz me kuch badbada raha tha

BIkki(Dheemi aawazme): mein aagaya hu....
Teri mout tere liye tere ghar tak aa chuki hai...
Mein aagaya hu...Mein aagaya hu

Jab Bikki nargesh ke chupe huwe room tak pahucha to Nargesh ka haal bahut kharav hone laga ....wo almari ke piche chup kar Bikki ki awaaze sun raha tha ....Dar ke mare Haat pair kaamp rahe thye ....

Bikki jaise hi uss room se bahar nikalne hi wala tha ki almari se kuch saanse chalne ki jaisi aawaze sun leta hai aur ek baar chehre par muskaan le aata hai...

BIkki: mout ke aage kisiki vi bas chali hai kya aaj tak....Khamokha time waste kar diya chal nikal waha se....

NArgesh fir vi koi awaaz nahi nikal raha tha.....

Bikki: chal tujhe mein ek option deta hu...sayad tu bach nikle

Nargesh apni jaan bachne ki ummid se almari se bahar nikal jata hai...aur bikki ke taraf dekhkar...

NArgesh : Bolo tumhe kitna paisa chaiye....saare ke saare lelo plz mujhe jane do...

Bikki: Nahi nahi tu apna paisa aapne saath upar lejaa...mujhe nahi chaiye

NArgesh: par tumne hi to mujhe ek option dene ki baat kahi thi

BIkki: haa meine kaha tha ek option tere pass hoga ...mene ye nahi kaha tha ki mujhe paisa chahiye

NArgesh : kaisa option...

Bikki: chal tu mere saath !

NArgesh : kaha chalna hai?

BIkki: Av fir ek sawal kiya to samaj le tu to gaya

NArgesh darke mare Bikki ke piche piche chalne lagta hai....

BIkki Nargesh ko apne saath bithakar basti ke taraf le chalta hai...nargesh basti ko dekhke Fir ek baar darke kaampne lagta hai....aur jab basti par shera ki laash dekhi to av to dar ki sima nahi bachi thi...


Shera ke laash ke upar keede vanvana rahe thye....Dekh ke hi ghin aane lagti thi ...jav shera ki aisi durdasha dekhi to nargesh dar ke mare Bikki se gidgidakar maafi maagne lagta hai...par Bikki uska koi response nahi deraha tha

BIkki basti walo ko bulakar...

Bikki: Iske saath kya karna chaiye? Mujhe to isse koi len den hai nahi....par tum hijado ke liye meri taraf se thohfa laya hun ....mein nahi chahta ki tum hijado ke wajase firse kisi maasoom ki hatya ho....

Basti walo sar jhukakar beth rahe thye....Unke upar kiye huwe sabdoka prahar wo log ki aankhe bata raha tha jo sirf atmaglani si vari huwi thi...

Nargesh: maaf karna bhai....mein avi isiwakt uss factoryko band kardeta hu

BIkki: chal thik hai ....Factory band kar aur uske baad unnlogo ko jinda kar jisne tere factoryke wajase apni jaan gawai hai...

Nargesh: ye main kaise kar sakta hu.?

BIkki: chal agar ye nahi kar sakta to tu unse maafi maang le

NArgesh: par wo log to mar chuke hai ....mein kaise maafi maang sakta hu

BIkki: tu uski chinta mat kar ....mein tujhe avi unnlogo ke paas vejta hu ....waha jaakar tu aaram se maafi maang lena

NArgesh av rone laga tha....uska dar av haavi hone laga tha par Bikki par iska rona sayad hi koi farak padne wali thi...

BIkki: chal theek hai ....Tujhse meine option dene ka wada kiya tha chal tujhe ek option deta hu

NArgesh(khus hokar): kaisa option

Bikki: yujhe tairna aata hai?

NArgesh: haan aati hai

BIkki: ye to acha hua warna teri mout to pakki thi

NArgesh : karna kya hoga

BIkki: jis nadi me tune unn chemicals ko bahaya tha usme tumko pure ek ghante tak tairna hoga!

NArgesh(rote huwe): nahi mere saath ye mat karo

Bikki: av ye magarmach ke aashu kahi aur jaakar bahana ....Chal av jaldi kud jaa kehte huwe nadi me taraf ishara karta hai...

NArgesh: plz ....ye nahi ...mein tumhare pau parta hu mujhe jane do

Bikki: hat maderchod...kehte huwe usko uthakar uss nadi me fek deta hai...

Nadi me girte hi nargesh ko ek tej jalan hone lagi.... badan par Jalne ki jaisa dard hone laga ......Skin puri laal hogayi thi...ab wo dard se chillane laga tha..par tairna chalu tha warna agar usne wo paani piya to mout to pakka tha

Nargesh kisi vi haal me uss nadi se bahar nikalna chahta tha par uski naakam koshisho ke baad vi wo waha se nikal nahi paaraha tha...

Karib 20 min tak to usne ye saav jhel liya tha par av nargesh ke body av iss jalan ya fir kahu chemical se haar gayi thi aur av sehen sakti se bahar hochuki thi to wo wahi doub jata hai....Jab usne uss nadika paani piya to uske pet ke andar vi aisa hi haal hogaya aur kuch 3 min baad nargesh ki body nadi par behne lagta hai...

Ye paani bahut shocking element hai yar....jab jinda ho to isme tairne ke liye bahut muskil hota hai par jab mar gaye ho to bina koi mihenat apne aap body tairne lagti hai....

Nargesh ki mout ho chuki thi ...uske body ko wo nadika baahav kaha le gaya kisiko nahi maalum ....

Fir Bikki bastiwalo ke taraf dekhkar....

BIkki: Yaad rakhna tum log....Tumhare jaise dukh humne vi jhela hai....Tum kya aapne aapko badnasib samjte ho ...Nahi rey tumlog to vagyaman ho...Tum logo ko nahi pata ki hum sab ke saab ek anath hai...jab chote thye to hum road pe rehkar aapna jindagi guzar rahe thye...tumlog to vagyaman ho ....tumhare pass rehne ke liye xat hai khane ke liye roti par humare pass kuch nahi tha...Par vagwan ne hume kamjor nahi banaya....Iss duniya ke ranbhumi me jeene ke liye hume ye haat diya hai...Sochne ke liye ye dimaag....aur iske balbhute hum kuch vi kar sakte hai...aainda se yaad rakhna hizado ki tarah jeene se acha saan se marna jaati hoga...
Par mein ye saab kinko bata raha hu...Thu hizado

Kehte huwe Bikki apne aadmiyon ke saath apna rasta nikal lete hai....

Basti walo Bikki ke baate sunkar bhabuk hogaye thye....wo log Bikki ko Goonda mawali samaj rahe thye par jab asliyat malum pada to unnlogoko dil se bahut bura lagne laga tha....Haalat kya kuch nahi kar deti hai ye unnlogo se jyada sayad hi koi samaj pata ....Haalato ki aade unn nanhi bacho ko Bacha nahi paye thye....haalato ki majburan kaisi dukh jhelni padi thi...Aaj unke dil me Bikki ne ek jagah bana liya tha jo sayad ek vagwan ka darja tha....

Bikki to apne raaste par nikal gaya...par shera aur nargesh koi mamuli aadmi to tha nahi jo Bikkine nirdayise maardiya...idhar pure desh me tahalka mach gaya tha....VIRUS ke charche hi sunai de rahi thi...commisner ko Police department ke saamne maardiya...Ye koi chota kand nahi tha ....Jiske badle aaj ye tha ki sirf VIRUS ke naam se logo ki fat jati thi...

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TO BE CONTINUE...

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