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main itna bada writer toh nhi hun yeah meri pahili kahani jo likh raha hun umeed hai aap logon ko pasand ayegi
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Congratulations pleased start karomain itna bada writer toh nhi hun yeah meri pahili kahani jo likh raha hun umeed hai aap logon ko pasand ayegi
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Ek Ladka mast apne jeep mai ja raha tha gun guna kar haste gaate tabhi woh dekhta hain ek ladki suicide karne ja rahi thi
woh samundra par khudne ja rahi thi ladka use pehchan leta hain woh use janta tha
woh apna jeep rokha bhaga use rokhne ke liye
woh ladka chilata hain prisha prisha (ladki ka naam)karke lekin woh toh apne mai ghum thi jab ladka dekha woh sun nhi rahi toh
woh bahut tezi se bhag raha tha aur use pakad liya.
ladka:ladka bolta hai arey apne meri wat laga di yaar sun toh leti
prisha: prisha rote hue choro mujhe marne do
woh ladka sunte hi hasne laga jor jor se hasne laga
prisha:prisha gusse mai tum has rahe ho use yaad aya tum toh wahi pagal ankit(ladke ka naam) ho na
Ankit:ji haan mai wahi hun
excuse mai mai tumhe pagal lagta hun
prisha:aur nhi toh kya mai yahan marne ayi hun tum has rahe ho
woh phir has raha tha.
Prisha: gusse se lal ho gyi aur boli pahile tum mera hath choro mujhe jeena nhi hai
Ankit:arey maine hath isliye pakda samundra bichara ganda ho jayega tumhara girne se mai tumhe nhi samundra ko bacha raha hun haste hue bola
prisha:gusse tum mera hath kyu pakda samundra ko bachao mujhe nhi wahi baithkar rone lagi
Ankit:arey yaar mai tumhe relax kar raha tha yaar ro mat mujhe bata sakti ho hua kya waise bhi tum mere pados mai rehti itna jaan hi sakta hun
padosi hi padosi ke kaam ata hai
prisha:tum mere kya lagte ho jo mai tumhe bataun
Ankit:kuch toh nhi lagta lekin bata dogi man halka ho jayega dil ko sukoon milega mera bichara sundar sa samundar bach jayega haste hue.
prisha:tum pagal ho mai marna chahti hun tum phir mazak kar rahe ho use realize hua woh sukoon sa mehsoos kar rahi hai
Ankit:mujhe bata do muje dusre ki taklif sunna bahut pasand hai
prisha:gusse main kyu tumhe batau gusse mai wahan se jane lagi ankit muskurate hue uske piche chala gya.
Ankit:Arey Mat batao kuch khaogi muje lagta nhi kuch khaogi itni slim ho dieting kar rahi hogi haste hue
prisha:tumhari problem kya hai na marne de rahe ho nhi shanti se baithne de rahe ho tumhe pata hai kis
halat se guzar rahi hun zindagi jeena hi nhi hai please mujhe mere hal par chor do.
Ankit:Haste hue idhar samosa mast milta hai khogi
prisha:kya karun iska gusse mai tum jaate kyu nhi
ankit chala jata hai
prisha:chala gya ankhon se pani gir raha tha uske phir ek minute mai
Ankit:hello samosa mast hai yumm yumm khaogi mast mast thande thande mausam mai garam garam samosa
prisha:gusse mai tum phir aa gye jao yahan uski ankhen lal ho gyi.
Ankit:mummy,chudail bachao bachao
prisha:gusse mai tumhe mai chudail lag rahi ho nam ankhon se
Ankit:aur nhi toh kya ankhen lal lal baprey aise lag kha jaogi kisiko
prisha:yeah sunkar hasne lagi jaise pura gussa hat gya ho hasi aa gyi
Ankit:toh phir samosa khaogi
prisha:haste hue haan jarur khaogi use realize hota hai woh gusse mai nhi khanna
Ankit: ajib ladki ho phile bolti ho khana hai abhi nhi
prisha:tum kyu nhi samaj rahe mud nhi hai
Ankit:arey samosa ke liye kya mud woh toh kabhi bhi khao mud aa jata hai yumm yumm
prisha:tum bina khilaye nhi manoge
Ankit:ji nhi yumm yumm
prisha:haste hue lao do mai khati hun woh khane lagti hai usko sach mai bahut bhuk lagi thi
ankit yeah dekh kar muskura raha tha
prisha:kyu muskura rahe ho
Ankit:chudail ko khate dekh raha hun haste hue
prisha:muh banakar wapas bola woh hasne lagi
Ankit:tum haste hue bahut pyari lag rahi ho
prisha:flirting kar rahe ho
Ankit:ji nhi apse flirting mar thodi na khana mohalle ke ladko ki tarha mrs black belt.
prisha:yeh sunkar hasne lagi bach ke raho mrs black belt se.
Ankit:ji jarur mrs black belt aap mera samundar kyun ganda karna chah rahi thi
prisha: naraz hote hue ankhon mai nami sa ane laga
Ankit:nhi nhi ro mat ro mat na batana toh mat batao bas ro mat apko hasane ke chakkar main adha wajan kam ho gya haste hue
prisha:nam ankhon se kuch nhi bol rahi thi
Ankit:bata do hua kya dekho itna bura ladka nhi hun dekhiye gham batne se halka lagta hai thoda share kar lo uske baad mera samundar bhi toh ganda karna hai bichara mera pyara samundar ganda ho jayega muh banate hue
prisha:ankit ko muh banate dekhti hai hasti hai jaise usko thoda aram mila ho
ankit:mat bathaiye lekin aisi hasti rahiye kitna pyar mausam hai uspar yeah rona acha nhi lagta
prisha:phir se flirting malum hain na mai kaun hun gusse mai
ankit:haan mrs black belt tarif kar raha tha usko toh tum flirting samaj rahi ho bacho jaisi muh banane lag gaya
prisha uska muh dekhkar hasne lagi
Ankit:toh mrs black belt chalte hai
prisha:kidhar?
Ankit:tumhare ghar chor deta hun raat hone wali hai
prisha:nhi nhi kya muh lekar jaungi mai ghar nhi ja sakti
Ankit:jaise muh hai wahi lekar chalo
prisha:tum pagal ho tumhe kuch samaj ata hai kisi ki feeling ki kadar hai jabse dekh rahi hun pareshan kiye ja rahe ho
tumhari jaise log iss duniya ko barbaad kar rahe hai isliye mohalle mai teri koi izzat nhi hai khud ki koi value nhi hai
maa baap ke liye bhoj ban gye ho mujhe nhi pata sharabi,cigarette pite ho ladki dekhi nhi aa gye line marne samaj kar bichari ladki
hai hai mr tumhare jaise lakhon logon ko pairon ki jhuti samajti hun nikalta hai ki nhi useless fellow . gusse mai na jane kya bolti ja rahi thi.
Ankit:gusse sa muh banakar ok fine jata hun apni jeep mai bathkar chala gya.
thanksAwesome, nice story
Congratulations
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