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update 5

ankit and prisha apne manzil par pahuch gye the dono waise padosi the
prisha jeep se utharti hai
ankit:prisha
prisha:haan bolo
ankit:ghabrana mat tumhara dost sath mai humesha rahega
prisha:hmm nhi ghabraungi
ankit prisha sath hi ja rahe the prisha ankit ke ghar mai bheed tha

ankit:kya hua idhar

harshal:prisha ka hath pakadte hue maa ise andar le jao

ankit ko kuch samaja nhi aa raha tha

ankit:chacha kya hua batao
chachi kya hua bolo kuch toh koi bolo

harshal:gusse mai sale nashedi meri behen par dore dalta hai teri himmat kaise hui use ek chammat mara

ankit:maine aisa kuch nhi kiya
chacha aap toh bharosa karo

ravi(ankit ka chota bhai):bharosa aur tuzpar paida hote hi maa baap ko kha gya usne bhi use chammat mara

prisha andar jati hai rashmi ko dekhti hai devil jaisa smile de rahi thi udhar uska bhai tha arvind woh bhi has raha tha

prisha:maa kya baat hai

maa:tu mujhse puch rahi hai sali itna acha ladka chorkar ankit jaise nashedi ke sath ghum rahi hai

prisha:woh nashedi nhi dost hai mera

maa:chup sali pata nhi tera jaisa aulad ko hi janam dena tha

prisha:bas kar maa kitna jalil karogi

maa:ab dekh tera kya haal karti bahut ghumne ka shok hai dekh tere ashique ka kya haal karti hun

prisha:gusse mai use kuch hua toh

rashmi:chamaat marte hue kya kar legi re tu teri jaisi aurton ki wajih se sara puri achi aurton ka naam kharab hua hai

arvind:devil smile dete hue pahile meri jindagi ke sath khela sara barbaad kar diya kya kami thi mere pyaar mai
dekh aj tere ashique ka kya anjaam hota hai

maa:prisha ka hath pakadkar bahar lati hai dekh idhar

arvind : ja maar sale ko

ankit:meri baat suniye maine aisa kuch nhi kiya jo aap samaj rahe ho

ravi:teri sune has raha tha

arvind:aisa nhi manega

arvind ravi harshal mar rahe the woh bas khada hote dekh raha tha kuch nhi kiya usne sirf mar kha raha tha
koi uska chunne wala nhi tha bebas ho gya tha bichara chacha prisha ke dad ravi harshal arvind teeno usko dho rahe the
pura sharir khun khun ho raha tha

prisha se yeah sab dekha nhi gya apni maa ka hath chudakar ja rahi thi use bachane

maa:agar ghar se bahar nikli hath tod dungi

prisha:gusse mai apni maa ka hath pakadte hue dhakka de diya us samay prisha bahut gusse mai thi gusse mai bahar nikli
ankit ke pass jakar khadi hui apne chote bhai harshal ko jor se chammat mara pura mohalla sun liya
harshal bhi shock tha

prisha:gusse mai tum log ko kya lagta hai yeah tum log ko nhi maar sakta usne hathiyar utha liya sabko kat dega gold medalist all over national level champion martial arts black belt hai yeah sunkar sab shock ho gye

prisha:arvind ko chammat marte hue tu meri fikar kar raha hai kal kya kar raha tha rashmi tu toh dost kehlane layak nhi tujhe toh chota bhai mana tha itna gir jayega socha nhi tha chacha chachi aap pahile lagta tha aap iski galti par chilate ho lekin aj malum pada aap kya hai
agar ab kisine hath lagaya mujhse bura nhi hoga

arvind:tujhse bura hai kaun tujhse shaadi kaun karega mere pass hi ana hoga

prisha:shaadi aur tujhse bahut fikar hai na ruko abhi tera ghamand todti hun ghar se sindoor le ati hai ankit ke samne deti hai

ankit:shock hote hue kya bol rahi ho hosh mai ho

prisha:tumne abhi agar mujhse shaadi nhi kiya mar jaungi

ankit:uski mang bhar deta hai

ankit prisha ne kabhi socha nhi hoga yeah mod bhi dekhna padega pahile dosti phir shaadi

ankit chal bhi nhi pa raha tha prisha use sahara dete hue chacha ka pair chute hue

chacha:teri jaise badchalan ka apne ghar mai koi jagha nhi

koi bhi use nhi apnaya nhi ankit ko

chacha:pahile se abhishap tha pahile apne maa ko mar diya phir baap ko aj ek ghar ujhad diya

ankit kuch nhi bola sab sunta raha bechare ka dil buri tarah se tut chuka tha hasta hua ladka apni taklif nhi chupa pa raha tha prisha sab dekh rahi thi use bhi dard ho raha tha

prisha ki mom:jis ladke ko lekar ja rahi hai na dekhna wahi tera nash karega barbaad kar dega tujhe phir nhi ana mere pass ghar ke sare darwaje band

prisha ke dad:tune apne barbaadi khud chuni hai

ankit sab sun raha tha kuch nhi bola wahi khada raha prisha ke ankhon mai anshu aa rahe use apne se jyada ankit ke liye bura lag raha tha

ankit:prisha ka hath pakadte hue chalo ab humara yahan koi nhi ankit lakhadate hue prisha use sahara de rahi thi apne jeep mai akar baith gye

arvind in mind aj nhi toh kal tujhe apna jarur manaunga teri ashique ki band na bajwaya mera naam arvind nhi bahut ghamand hai na prisha tujhe mera target tera woh ashique hoga barbaad kar dunga use .................................................................
 

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update 6

prisha ankit ko sahare dete hue jeep mai baith jati hai jeep chalane lagti hai ankit bas baitha tha bichara ghayal tha kuch nhi bol pa raha tha bas uski ankhon se anshu aa raha tha bahut dard ho raha tha use
prisha sirf use dekhe ja rahi kya se kya ho gya use bhi bahut dard ho raha tha ankit ko aise dekhte hue
ankit jab use dekhta hai uske ankhon mai bhi anshu hai apna anshu poch deta hai jor jor se hansne lagta hai.

ankit:haste hue so mrs balck belt kya hal chal hai.

prisha ek tuk use dekhti hai sochne lagti itna sab kuch hua phir bhi hans raha hai.

prisha:haan bolo tum sach mai pagal ho itna sabkuch hua phir bhi hans rahe ho.

ankit:hasi aa rahi hai toh has raha hun ladki thodi na hun rounga.

prisha:hey mai roti nhi hun samjhe.

ankit:haan roti nhi ho thodi der pahile durga maa bani thi uska kya mujhe lag raha aj sabka wadh hone wala hai hansne laga.

prisha:chidte hue tumhari jaan bacha rahi thi warna tumhara wadh ho jata tha aj.

ankit: kiski himmat jo mujhe mare mai mar nhi raha tha bichare nazuk hai mar jate haste hue bola.

prisha:haan woh toh mai dekh hi rahi thi kya se kya hone wala tha.

ankit:ab kahan jana hai?

prisha:pahile doctor ke pass tumhara ilaj karane.

ankit:doctor nhi nhi mai thik hun mujhe nhi jana, bache jaisi harkat karte hue.

prisha:mar khaoge agar nhi chaloge toh.

ankit:nhi mujhe nhi jana mai khud thik ho jaunga doctor ke pass nhi jaunga.

prisha:doctor ke pass jana toh padega hath tuta hai pair todwana chahte ho.

ankit:tumhare family ne kasam khayi hai bichare masoom bache ko chain se jeene nhi doge.

prisha:tumhari family kam hai kya chidte hue boli.

ankit:jaisi bhi hai best hai.

prisha:woh toh maine dekha kitne best hai tum chup chap chalo doctor ke pass warna,

ankit:jhuta sa muh banate hue tumse dosti karke phas gya hun jab dekho dhamki deti ho.

prisha:mai bola dosti karne ko tum hi aye the dosti karne ab dosti ki hai bhugto.

ankit:tab nhi malum tha itna bhari padega haste hue bol raha tha.

prisha:ab bhari pad raha hai na achi baat hai yeah dosti ab zindagi bhar rahega tujhe ab asani se jane nhi dungi.

ankit:matlan zindagi bhar massom bache ki jaan logi

prisha:wahi samaj lo.

ankit:thik hai le lo .

"ankit aur prisha dono hi muskura rahe the kya hi bol sakte hai dono ka chemistry ka jawab hi nhi itna sabkuch saha kya nhi suna dono ne phir bhi has rahe hai muskura rahe hai"

ankit aise hi muskurate muskurate behosh ho jata hai.

prisha:ghabrate hue jeep rokhkar ankit ankit lekin woh behosh ho chuka tha prisha bahut dar rahi thi
ankit ko apne godh par lethakar jeep chalane lag rahi thi.

ankit ko behosh dekhkar use bahut dar lag raha tha

jeep bahut tezi se chala rahi thi aise chalate chalate hospital ke pass pahuchi doctor doctor karke chila rahi thi.

hospital ke kuch log bhag kar aye use stretcher par lethakar lekar ja rahe the emergency ward mai.

prisha ghabra rahi thi emegency ward light on off ko dekhkar uska dil ghabra raha tha

achanak light off ho gya doctor bahar nikle

prisha:doctor kya hua ankit thik hai na boliye na doctor ro rahi thi

doctor:hausla dete hue ro mat kuch nhi hua hai use bilkul thik hai ,behoshi ki wajah yeah thi ki usko kisi chiz ka sadma laga tha woh bardasht nhi kar paya isliye behosh ho gya tha, injection de diya hai soya hai aap jakar mil sakte ho use.

prisha andar jati hai dekhti hai rona aa raha tha use ankit ko is halat mai dekhkar
ankit ka hath pakde thi use dekh rahi thi.

"prisha in mind sote hue kitna pyara lag raha hai kaun bol sakta hai itna masoom sa dikhne wala itna dard seh sakta hai woh soch rahi thi abhi thodi der pahile hasa raha tha mujhe achanak behosh ho gya ek admi kitna seh sakta hai apne dard ko kis tarah samne nhi lata sirf hasta rehta hai soch rahi thi khusnaseeb hun main mujhe itna pyara dost mila"

ankit:ankhen kholte hue so mrs black belt kya hua aise kya dekh rahi ho.

prisha:chidte hue ek din tum meri jaan le loge pata hai kya halat ho gyi thi meri.

ankit:muskurate hue chalo koi toh fikar kar raha hai meri.

prisha:gusse mai kyun nhi karun fikar mera itna pyara dost hai kuch ho jata toh.

ankit:kya hota ek dost kho deti .

prisha:uske muh par hath rakhe hue khabardar aisa kuch bola toh mera dost mujhe bahut pyara hai.

ankit muskura raha tha.

tabhi doctor ata hai,

doctor:aur bakurdar kaisi hai tabiyat ab tumhari .

ankit doctor ko dekhta hai ,

Ankit:shock hote hue abey sameer tu

sameerr: haan mai abey sale kya halat banayi hai tune mai tujhse bahut naraz hun .

ankit:kya yaar kuch nhi mai thik hun abhi .

sameerr:gusse main sale shaadi kar li mujhe bola bhi nhi apne dost ki yaad nhi ayi .

ankit:nhi yaar aisi baat nhi halat hi kuch aise the .

sameer:tu aise nhi sudharega nisha aa rahi hain tujhe barabar karegi .

ankit:shock hote hue kya nisha di aa rahi hai kyu bulaya unhe.

nisha:haan bhai ki aisi halat hogi toh dekhne bhi na aun

ankit:sorry di .

nisha: kya hal bana diya apna shaadi kar li didi ko bulaya bhi nhi kitna arman the mere .

ankit: sorry di halat hi kuch aise the

nisha:woh chod meri bhabi kahan hai dekhna chahti hun use ,ghumkar dekhti hai kitni pyari lag rahi hai, arey arey dekho ankhein kitna nam hai lagta hai bahut royi hai kitna rulayega use.

ankit:uski rone ki adat hai haste hue.

nisha:khabardar use kuch bola toh meri pyari bhabhi hai use rula raha hai ise apne ghar le ja rahi hun.

ankit: par didi,

nisha:par war kuch nhi le ja rahi hun use kab tak discharge hoga yeah.

sameerr:thodi der mai kar dunga discharge tum meri pyari gudiya ko le jao mai isse lekar ata hun.
 
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