Adultery Loyal wife degradation

[Kiran kumar 83]

Please I need some comments then only I can know about my narration.

Nice going bro...carry on the story

 

[moledcock]

Bro nice going please update as per wish.....
(Wishing (&Waiting) for sameer and Zoya having 3some with pradeep)

 

[joyeity]

Please write with plain text like "times new roman" and why the name change of Sameer?

The other thing, Zoya and Sameer was Brother and Sister not Mom and Son.

Please check your spelling. Anyway, the theme is good. Please continue the story.

 

[Lonelyguy]

Nice writing bro.. there is some problem in grammar.. rest everything is good.. you can continue.. you hv good imagination..
Also please try to describe each scene more. So readers get more involved..

Anyway great writing. Please update regularly

 

[Deepakdenon]

Please write with plain text like "times new roman" and why the name change of Sameer?

The other thing, Zoya and Sameer was Brother and Sister not Mom and Son.

Please check your spelling. Anyway, the theme is good. Please continue the story.

Brother and sister only bro . I changed the font now

 

[Deepakdenon]

Nice writing bro.. there is some problem in grammar.. rest everything is good.. you can continue.. you hv good imagination..
Also please try to describe each scene more. So readers get more involved..

Anyway great writing. Please update regularly

Sorry bro I know that much . Sure I will update it

 

[Deepakdenon]

While standing Only in Panty and bra she can't control his fear what going to happen if someone seen her in this dress . She pressing calling bell continously her legs are Shaking in fear and sweating lot finally pradeep opened door and welcomed Zoya

Pradeep : Welcome Madam Welcome .

With red full eyes Zoya entered in to home and sat on chair and asked water from her brother. Sammer went to kitchen

Pradeep : cool buddy there is no one in this floor all went to vacation so do not worry about anything it's purly Nude dare exhibition that's all

Sammer: Here water take it .

Zoya liked this thrilling experience to stand in almost nude near to others home door .but only fear is due to her traditional image . pradeep and Sameer can able to see her heavy breathing and fast heart beat in sexy pink bra it takes 10 min to cool down .

Pradeep : ok mam Please give me some tea .today I won't going to take drinks I want to enjoy you in full aware mind and you also

Zoyo become more and more nervous because last time Sameer may think her sis was wild because of drinks only but this time without drinks how going to manage everything.

Pradeep : Hellow what happen what you thinking go and bring tea like married brid to her husband and I want to see new bride ‍♀ shyness in your eyes go .

Zoya with mixed mind she went to kitchen. While walking pradeep and Sameer got stunned buy her ass dancing . Before fucking Zoya itself pradeep use to watch Zoya ass dance inside saree but that way very less compare to now. He thought due to heavy real fucking it's dancing heavily and also he proudly feeling.

After 15 min Zoya came with tea in plate with gentle walk .pradeep feeling like he was new groom came to see bride for first time .

Pradeep : Can You sing a song for me

Zoya : what

Pradeep : Now you are bride so sing .

 

[Deepakdenon]

Thank you all for comments. Please ignore my Grammer mistakes .if anything bad please inform my main intention is not to spoil story so please correct me .

 

[Kiran kumar 83]

Thank you all for comments. Please ignore my Grammer mistakes .if anything bad please inform my main intention is not to spoil story so please correct me .

Go on n continue the story in ur style n imanigation..gud going

 

[joyeity]

Fabulous. You correction is good now except preposition. Like Joya, her not his.

Thank you.