Adultery Loyal wife degradation

[Deepakdenon]

Bro I do not know hindi and all please tell in English

 

[Deepakdenon]

Bro.. its a very small update after a long time. Please make a big update bro.

Bro want to build the story to make it more worth so i need time bro sure will give you upto today I had official work so only I was late

 

[abcturbine]

You are going great...
Take your time....
Take it slow....
Add as much as conversations between lead female and male characters....
Show introspection emotion of lead female character....
You are awesome...
Thanks for writing....

 

[Nightangle]

Bro want to build the story to make it more worth so i need time bro sure will give you upto today I had official work so only I was late

Bro, you are doing great but.. next time you can post a big update. may be in chapters. Put at least 3 chapters once at a time. The amount of update has been very less which affects the enthusiasm. So, take your time but not too much time.

 

[Deepakdenon]

Sure

 

[abcturbine]

Waiting dear

 

[Farheen]

Update please

 

[Depressed]

Good

 

[abcturbine]

Waiting for update....

 

[Maheshji]

Update please